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= GPR = March 30th, 2009 10:52 PM

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Originally Posted by pokemon xd (Post 4485652)
Okay then and i also see why you u gave me a lot of crit on my thread your's are awesome what program do you use and i have a request could you try torn world tiles.

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Originally Posted by gp_arts39 (Post 4485569)
Remember, ask for permission, don't request me on this thread, and DO NOT STEAL!!!

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Originally Posted by Kinarii (Post 4485644)
Excellent job on these! The sense of depth is really nice and the shading is smooth as butter. Yellow had one of the coolest Gyarados poses, and you really made it pop! Only crit I have is that the little white bits at the very end of the tail could use some sort of outline. Also, the eyelids kinda make Gyara look sleepy, or like he's gonna sneeze. XD

I browsed through this thread, and my goodness, you've been hard at work with improvements! No wonder you gave me such a nice crit on my thread. Awesome work! :3


<Achoo!> ^_^

Anyhow, thankyou! I appreciate you thoughts! I have been looking at my recolor and have also come to the conclusion that he looks sleppy... but since that is how the original sprite looked...i really couldn't change it too much...

as for the white, i am also now noticing that, since you said it... i will go back and fix that!

Again, thanks for the crit, and i'm glad to have helped you... if i did...

OMG! This took me forever to sprite! I haven't even shaded it yet (so dont start screaming at me...i know i know...)

1969 Chevy El Camino (my dream car)
http://f.imagehost.org/0942/El_Camino_1969_Custom_SHORT.png

Cobalt_Jolteon March 31st, 2009 2:14 PM

wow these are cool, i like them alot

= GPR = April 3rd, 2009 9:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Cobalt_Jolteon (Post 4487458)
wow these are cool, i like them alot

Which ones do you like?
What do you like about them?

Please give me a bit more info...

Anyhow... Something newish...it's really just a different color... which one do you guys think is better, blue or yellow?
http://f.imagehost.org/0796/yellow_el_camino.png

And even newer:

Lance Layer Jammin' Sprite animation!
http://f.imagehost.org/0657/Jammin_1_t.gif http://f.imagehost.org/0389/Jammin_2_t.gif http://g.imagehost.org/0587/Jammin_3_t.gif http://g.imagehost.org/0644/Jammin_4_t.gif http://g.imagehost.org/0291/Jammin_5_t.gif http://f.imagehost.org/0102/Jammin_6_t.gif http://www.pokecommunity.com/customavatars/avatar100651_17.gif

BurstX April 3rd, 2009 11:19 AM

ok the animation looks really bad, but only on the arm. it looks like his arms strecch, give it shoulder motion also dont just extend the arm.

= GPR = April 6th, 2009 3:00 PM

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Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4498391)
ok the animation looks really bad, but only on the arm. it looks like his arms strecch, give it shoulder motion also dont just extend the arm.

yeah, i know... i am currently fixing that little problem... i did not realize that it looked so funny until after the animation was complete and running...

thanks though! i appreciate the feedback! Does anyone know of a free online animation creator that takes png's and turns them into an animation? the one i used only takes gif's and it distorts my pictures...a bit unfortunate...

BurstX April 6th, 2009 4:32 PM

if you want i can take the frames and animate them for you, theyll come out fine.

mangaroll April 6th, 2009 5:29 PM

Wow.0_0

These are amazing!!! If I ever make a hack, I'm consulting with you.=p

These are beautiful..and I love the original pokemon.=p

= GPR = April 8th, 2009 4:38 PM

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Originally Posted by KageX (Post 4510426)
if you want i can take the frames and animate them for you, theyll come out fine.

Please! (Still, a free online gif maker would be nice to know, since i'm sure you don't want to put together every little animation i make...)

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Originally Posted by mangaroll (Post 4510638)
Wow.0_0

These are amazing!!! If I ever make a hack, I'm consulting with you.=p

These are beautiful..and I love the original pokemon.=p

<sigh> i could use a bit more helpful crit then that... what do like about them? which ones specifically? why do like them?

... i appreciate the post, and that you hold my work in such high regard, don't get me wrong... but i would appreciate a bit more helpful feedback.


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Originally Posted by Kenji~ (Post 4496348)


This is quite detailed for a small piece, but the detail isn't all that apparent unless you zoom in. The shading seems a little too subtle, especially on the grass and trees. The grass just looks like a solid color unless you zoom in and pay close attention.

Also, the swamp or whatever that yellow-green stuff is seems.. oddly shaded. It's a bunch of random dots that don't seem to make any sense. Still, it's a good piece of pixel art.

Thanks Kenji! I also realized that, which was why i mentioned the detail at small size quote...

as for the shading, i understand completely what you mean. i wanted a "flat" look though, to contrast with the swamp and the muk... maybe it was to flat...

as for the swamp, it was supposed to be that mossy stuff... like duckweed... but still, even the duck weed has a shade variation...
Thanks everyone! Until next time...

Keep Spriting!

(DARN DOUBLEPOST... IT WAS AN ENTIRELY NEW TOPIC...GRRR!)

Introducing my newest fakemon!!!!! Laplit!

http://g.imagehost.org/0163/Laplit.png
Laplit (Shy Shell Pokemon)
Height: 2'11"
Weight: 145 lbs

Laplit, the prevolutionary form of Lapras, is quite a shy pokemon.
These water bound pokemon stick close to their mothers for comfort
since they are still young and are easily startled.

= GPR = April 9th, 2009 1:45 PM

I've redone shading on some of them.
http://www.iaza.com/work/090410C/Avelect91266.bmp
http://www.iaza.com/work/090410C/Spinum98724.bmp
http://g.imagehost.org/0019/Chickadee.png

☆Patched☆ April 9th, 2009 2:56 PM

there's one like iaza.com or something like that (never tried it out before though)

i could animate for you if you would like (i don't mind) ^^

EDIT: hope you don't mind (got bored) and animated for you
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/9132/28484215.gif
it's a bit slow, i could speed it up if you like. :)

= GPR = April 9th, 2009 4:19 PM

I didn't know that iaza can do animations!

That's what i have been using lately for transparencies! Hmm... that is a helpful site!
Thanks for animating it for me! It looks great, and not all jpegy with the divets...

I'm still working on my edited frames... so his arm doesnt look like it's just being pulled from it's elbow...

Thanks!

(p.s. a bit faster would do better...i'll get it though! Thanks!)

tbone1094 April 9th, 2009 5:31 PM

nice job your art is fairly nice

= GPR = April 10th, 2009 11:10 AM

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Originally Posted by tbone1094 (Post 4520875)
nice job your art is fairly nice

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Originally Posted by gp_arts39 (Post 4517083)
<sigh> i could use a bit more helpful crit then that... what do like about them? which ones specifically? why do like them?

... i appreciate the post, and that you hold my work in such high regard, don't get me wrong... but i would appreciate a bit more helpful feedback.

Yeah, that about sums it up... again...

Yume Tsuki April 10th, 2009 10:34 PM

http://g.imagehost.org/0019/Chickadee.png
^

The back of it's head and the spot i point at those are very straight..

= GPR = April 11th, 2009 1:36 PM

Hmm... you're right frosslass... he's almost kinda jelly bean shaped isn't he? well, that's alright though, i think it looks good like that... unless others agree with you...then i might change it.

mangaroll April 11th, 2009 7:58 PM

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Originally Posted by gp_arts39 (Post 4517083)
<sigh> i could use a bit more helpful crit then that... what do like about them? which ones specifically? why do like them?

... i appreciate the post, and that you hold my work in such high regard, don't get me wrong... but i would appreciate a bit more helpful feedback.


Well, slowqueen is a bit unusual... You should have recolored the shell using the palette of the actual rock on slowking/slowbro.

Also your RP character's guitar looks like it has no shading and outline.

Laplit's shell (The part with the light shining on it) Should have a lighter color. It sticks out.Also humsaw's wings looks... uneven...


But I like the shading on all of your re-edited fakemon, and your gyarados sprites are beautiful.=p

= GPR = April 14th, 2009 6:31 AM

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Originally Posted by mangaroll (Post 4529981)
Well, slowqueen is a bit unusual... You should have recolored the shell using the palette of the actual rock on slowking/slowbro.

Also your RP character's guitar looks like it has no shading and outline.

Laplit's shell (The part with the light shining on it) Should have a lighter color. It sticks out.Also humsaw's wings looks... uneven...


But I like the shading on all of your re-edited fakemon, and your gyarados sprites are beautiful.=p

Thankyou so much mangaroll! This is great crit actually! Hm... where to start?

slowqueen... definitely not my best, but i think your right. the clamperl blue isn't cutting it, it seems to detract. I will go back recolor it...

As for Lance's guitar... i really don't know what to do about it... i tried to make it look "wooden"... instead it is just a tanned up mess... i might just entirely redo it, or take it out, or something... i don't know...

as for laplit, i will not be changing that one... i actually used the pallette directly off Lapras, and as that was the color used on the light spot of lapras, i transfered that tone to laplit.

As for humsaw, forget about it. it is LONG GONE! i gave up on it a long time ago! the anatomy is messy, the pose is awkward, the coloration is lacking, and just in general, it is an ugly sprite... wait a minute... i made that one didn't i...

But really, THANKS! I appreciate your ideas, and your crit! The slowqueen coloration never came to my head, so thanks on that!

Take care everyone!

Keep Spriting!

= GPR = April 15th, 2009 5:08 PM

http://f.imagehost.org/0136/milodos_wip_wings.png
My newest and most probably best sprite ever!!!

It is the new milodos! I LUV IT!!!

My only concern with it is the shading and the back fin (technically milodos' right). I need crit on that please!

= GPR = April 18th, 2009 8:29 AM

A little something old i dug up! a secret base i had made...

It's called the fissured shrine.
http://g.imagehost.org/0694/fissured_shrine.png

= GPR = April 19th, 2009 9:10 PM

Some wiked cody pop art i made... there's actually some spriting techniques here... among them recoloring and editing...

= GPR = April 20th, 2009 5:42 PM

I was just playing around when i made this one...

It's a snorlax pokedoll under the possesion of a banette!
http://g.imagehost.org/0238/banlax.png
<shiver>

gosh that's creepy...

Nina April 20th, 2009 5:45 PM

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Originally Posted by gp_arts39 (Post 4566409)
I was just playing around when i made this one...

It's a snorlax pokedoll under the possesion of a banette!
http://g.imagehost.org/0238/banlax.png
<shiver>

gosh that's creepy...

It's very creepy! But in a good way! The stitches make it look very interesting.

= GPR = April 20th, 2009 5:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Lornami (Post 4566419)
It's very creepy! But in a good way! The stitches make it look very interesting.

yeah... not my best work...

the actual fusion editing is pretty good looking...then i kinda ruined it with the stitching...

Gary, the Magic Fairy April 20th, 2009 6:35 PM

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Originally Posted by gp_arts39 (Post 4545247)
http://f.imagehost.org/0136/milodos_wip_wings.png
My newest and most probably best sprite ever!!!

It is the new milodos! I LUV IT!!!

My only concern with it is the shading and the back fin (technically milodos' right). I need crit on that please!

Spoiler:
http://i44.*.com/2u4nh9w.png

Sorry if it's hard to tell Pink & Red apart. The red is pointing to the outline near the top; the pink is the shading inside.


My criticisms in the spoiler.

I do like the head & tail, though. XD

= GPR = April 21st, 2009 4:56 PM

(a half an hour after fainting and having Cody peck me awake...)

Kenji, there are NO words to describe how i feel right now! Wow, i am gonna pass out (...again...)

Truly, you define good critism! From now on, when ever some one spams up my thread with lame crit or comments, i'm just gonna refer them to post #174!

(One minute while i take a breather!)

Now down to buisness!

1. My sprite has to be 64x64 and 16 bit... which leaves me a little less room and coloration than i would have liked. i can, and will, definitely darken the medium navy tone, or lighten the lightest.

2. Outline shading: i thought it looked a bit weird in some parts, but i guess you really pointed them out. (Thanks, thanks thanks!!!) For the tan and the navy, since i only have three tones of those colors, i can really only outline in those color's darkest tones... it's actually very frustrating! i'm very limited in the outline shading on the crest, which is probably the worst looking outlining anyways... i only have three colors to use for shading and outlining, not including black... same applies with the fins/wings... i'm not sure what to do about that...

3. the shading in the center of the body was also super hard. that has been my problem with milodos. i can't seem to get the tubular shading down. someone (i'm sorry to whom it was, but i dont remember) showed me how to shade tubes, or rather they modeled it, but i still have trouble on that shapes shaddowing.

4. the far right side of the pixel was actually a choice of the lesser evil. it was originally one large line, but it looked WAY to flat. so i gave it a bit more curve, where it did seem to step out a bit to far. But then i think the "Pointyness" comes from that one notch on the left of the segment. maybe by smoothing that out, it will loose the point, sharp look... and become more round.

5. as for the curviture of the body, i'll try it right off your model and see how it looks!

It may take me a day or two to redo this one, since i'm also making some other stuff at the moment, but mark my words, it will be redone!!!

Thankyou so much Kenji!!! I appreciate it soooooooooooooooo much! Your a great help, a great spriter, and a great friend!!!


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