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1 tip: Try not to use default white.
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...Default white is good when used with a light grey or blue shade. But anyways...
The trainers are awesome. A few outlining and shading errors (the one with the white t-shirt needs a slightly darker outline), but, overall good. On the pokemon, shading and outline errors again. I know you should use not just black for outline, but only on the lighter areas, or use a darker outline for the dark places. Light comes from the top left, not just left, but that's not that bad. On the metal man, shading has too much contrast, and it's outline is weird. Look at pictures of humans and animals to find out there anatomy, then use that in your spriting. the Horsea developed line has pillow shading, like I said the light needs to come from the top left. Shellos are nice, I like the cat eared one. Sorry if it's a lot of criticism, but I'm just trying to point out your errors to make you better. Overall, you show potential and I think you can get much better. |
The Shellos are very nicely done! I commend you on the color choice, as well as the shading.
The trainers are also very nicely done... Froslass Maniac & Riceeman stole all my thunder though... As for the fakemon, they need work in the shading, outlining and definition areas. The top brown guys with the Flygon looking tails, as well as the brown and purple guys under them are very "lignt" in coloring, and in the shading, making them look 2D. As for the mutant alien ant thing and the whispy grey guy... are they supposed to be pokemon? I dont mean to sound rude...sorry. They are just different. I'll wait for your reply to ask a couple more questions about those... Anyhow keep up the great work! You do great trainer sprites... so don't stop! Hope to see more! |
http://i37.*.com/14m98go.png
My newest work, it don't look very good (Cause i made this in 20 minutes^^), but it looks don't like an accident :P. http://i34.*.com/vpgepk.png My second newest work, the Teacher from GSC, good, or? With icons if you wanna use it^^. @gp_arts39 They aren't supposed to be Pokémon, the black thing called "Heartless" and the grey thing called ... I don't know in english^^. But they're from a Game called Kingdom Hearts, I though it were funny if I make them in Pokémon-style^^. Thanks for the comments and critic. @all sorry, but the outlines aren't my best works^^. I can't do them good. |
Hi, thanks for posting in my thread!
I REALLY like the Shellos/Gastrodon-type Pokemon, especially the orange one! It's cute! The witch trainer is AWESOME too! |
These are really cool! I escepially like the Fakemon, the Kingdom hearts guys and the trainers.BTW the grey things are called Nobodies. Anyway, keep it up.
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New Day, New Sprites... http://i34.*.com/670e3b.png Kirby :3 So Cute ^-^ http://i33.*.com/2wmexpi.png Butch'n'Cassidy http://i36.*.com/2lus004.pnghttp://i36.*.com/bfnl6o.pnghttp://i33.*.com/xaxf8n.png Three little devils: Koba, Kobaku and Kobakeru ^_^ http://i35.*.com/2d7h2kp.jpg ONLY the color and the Fire is from me, rest from a good friend. |
I love the flying fluffy things.
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New Day, New sprites again...^^ http://i38.*.com/2jchn5c.jpg A Herobag! http://i34.*.com/10hrp8l.png A....Herobag! http://i33.*.com/2mh7fh4.png A...Herobag...Again! http://i37.*.com/35lyhph.jpg Gosh how many things i've got from that o_0 http://i35.*.com/dxi63t.png A Girl-Hero!^^ http://i38.*.com/ezoa4x.png At last this cranky dance from her xD (you can animate it if u want^^) |
hmmmm....the pokemon could use some work...but your trainers and bags are really nice ^^ keep up the good work!
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the bags are very nice. as for the new trainers, the overworlds are great, while the sprites arent to bad for being made in 20 minutes. theres just some inconsistancies with shading.
great job! |
pretty good! Keep it up! I really like the bags!
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Update ^^
New Day, new sprites again... http://i36.*.com/t0q0ix.png Second Dancer^^. She looks better than the other one I think http://i36.*.com/11aemtv.png could be a hero...looks nice and Strong, not?^^ http://i38.*.com/2mq2r2x.png A school-Girl, I think http://i34.*.com/jkho9y.png Volkner as a Baby in Pichu-clothes, I call him "Voly"xD |
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It was good but it lacks shading, and proper design... Some looks distorted...
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So, before I post the sprite I want say that i'm really sorry KageX, I thought it were free to use and in the future i'll ask you (if you make more of this). So, and now i want say that u can use this Heroine I made for a Game, she isn't ready now but tomorrow she will. Here she comes - My Cowgirl!^^ http://i35.*.com/2dig65e.png PS: If theres anything to critism, plz tell me i'll make it better^^ |
er.. i see a heroine fishing from fire red/leaf green :x back sprite of the riding rapidash is a bit bad :X try to put the legs at the sides of rapidash because it now loos like it stands on rapidash (poor pokémon)
if i look at the pose of the trainer i see it's really the heroine of fire red/leaf green |
lawl sorry I er I made her yesterday midnight^^. Looks she better now?
http://i35.*.com/2009u0h.png Update I've got good news - I make Tilesets what look like the Wild West^^. Because of that i made the Heroine, but i don't make a hack, so you can use it for a Game or Hack if you give Credits. http://i35.*.com/24q01gp.png And here are some Maps with the tiles... http://i36.*.com/xpddme.png testmap 1 http://i33.*.com/wl4tbm.png testmap 2 http://i36.*.com/spugpt.png testmap 3 |
Heroine
The only thing I see wrong here is...the backpic...her arm looks like it isn't connected to the body, her hat looks odd, and that one out stuck hair just looks like its in thje wring place... Test Map This is better then what I could do...but there needs to be more shading and the doors look kinda weird... |
Stay away from pillow shading :]
I would recommend recoloring existing tiles, THEN doing minor edits to existing tiles, THEN doing major edits to tiles, THEN scratching your own. |
I LOVE the rapidash rider! that's so cool! i have tried repeatedly to make my ow riding a gyarados ow, like in my avitar, but alas... i am no good! anyhow the tile set is nice, not very "pokemonish" if that is what it was supposed to be. Then again, ive been wrong before! ANYHOW, keep up the great work!
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Nice fluffy flying things, not so crazy about the Butch and Cassidy, and is that Male hero with Green Hair supposed to be Wally from R/S/E?
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@gp_arts39
thanx. Was very difficult to do this with rapidash^^. @[NovaPirate] Ok, i'll try^^ @Bubblewrap Nope, all Trainer with icons are just CPU's for a game. That means all without icons are already used by a user, hope I didn't confused you^^. |
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ever tried to take a PMD sprite gyarados? those PMD sprite really help with OW's |
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