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obLonG August 29th, 2008 3:28 PM

Pokepark Sprite comic
 
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6421/banner3n.png

THE HIATUS IS OVER!
IMPORTANT:I am looking for an assistant with the comics.Pm me if you want to sign up.
This is my first sprite comic,whaddaya think?Isn't the banner awesome?And please comment if I need work done or just want to comment about my comic:
These comics are rated from G to pg-14

Title Page

1: Brendan and Handy.

2: Not Goodity

3: Hated Love

4: The hand, the bitxx and the axxhole

5:This is not a Plot Device

6:Stupid backpack,love is for kids

7:Rise of demon may

8:Beams and Pee

Filler: Point of view

9: He looked

10: They're shiny

11: Discussing, Disgusting

12:Suspense and Crossbreeding

Filler:Important Generation Rape

13: Slap of Bitxxiness[Pg-13]

14: The Anti-Heroes [NEW]

Gary, the Magic Fairy August 29th, 2008 3:42 PM

I... don't get it. He's on a truck... and that thing is Ping Pong? I'm confused. O___o;;

obLonG August 29th, 2008 3:46 PM

In pokemon Ruby you start out in a moving truck,so hes in a moving truck playing ping pong on the computer with a giant floating glove

FlameJuli August 29th, 2008 4:01 PM

-_- i dont get it either... although my 'comics' never made sense either but i like the hand.. but i dunno why.

obLonG August 29th, 2008 4:02 PM

He's just on the computer(The box thingy hes sitting in front of)playing ping pong with the hand.

dragonqueen0210 August 29th, 2008 8:01 PM

ohhhhhh...i get it now. He's riding in a truck playing ping pong on the computer and with it. So, why did you decide to put the computer as a hand?

obLonG August 29th, 2008 8:10 PM

The hands not really a computer.Its a living breathing hand(breathing not actual feature)just read comic 2

Soul.//Silver August 29th, 2008 9:39 PM

Is the hand meant to be master hand from Super Smash Bros/Melee/Brawl? lol I like the last scene in comic 2.

obLonG August 30th, 2008 2:43 AM

Thanks and no its just a normal hand.

dragonqueen0210 August 30th, 2008 6:30 PM

wow, alot of questions about a hand. lol. anyway, haha psycho mudkip. loved that bit.

FlameJuli August 30th, 2008 6:40 PM

i seriouslt still get it or find it funny... im sorry but i dont and bit with the title is way to messy

obLonG August 30th, 2008 7:04 PM

The titles are also written in normal text right above the Comic but I'll fix the titles in the next comic.I also got the Title page up

iEdster September 4th, 2008 11:11 AM

I actually love this :)
First I didn't understand, then I got it.

obLonG September 4th, 2008 1:45 PM

Thanks man.And i'm sorry that I took so long to get the 4th comic up.Its just that I had this play I had to perform.

agurcsik September 5th, 2008 11:42 AM

these are great, i love how its not a total cliche pkmn comic u gotta make more

the hand is the one from in your PC when u move pkmn and stuff

obLonG September 5th, 2008 12:48 PM

It was the originaly going to be the pc hand but I changed it to the Sinnoh trainer card hand cuz thats more manipulatable to show what its doing or how it feels.And comic 5 is up.Do you think I should make some supporter banners?

agurcsik September 8th, 2008 12:44 PM

i think that supporter banners would be cool

Gary, the Magic Fairy September 8th, 2008 1:12 PM

... I still don't really understand alot of this. Okay, so you have a hand as a character, I get that, but...

Okay, the 2nd makes sense for the most part, but then what's with the weird transition between 3 & 4? The mudkip chasing the person does nothing really funny or important, it's just kinda thrown in there. I assume it was just to set up for #4, but... it just seems like wasted potential, that could've been entertaining if it wasn't rushed through.

#5 confuses me also witth he masterball part, but... I'm not sure I want to know. XD

And, may I ask... what is going on with the backgrounds of random sprites? They're distracting from the actual comic, and look time-consuming. You could just use your time to make more comics, since I doubt anyone has a positive reaction to them. The first comic's layout looks nice, and the title doesn't distract from the comic. I suggest using that, it looks much nicer.

obLonG September 8th, 2008 9:24 PM

Thanks for the feedback and yes #3 was just a set up for #4.And you don't want to know the masterball meaning in #5.Trust me I didn't like it either.

poke-scooter-mon September 12th, 2008 11:19 PM

thats pretty cool. i suck at those thingies

Bludycomicsinc October 12th, 2008 3:04 PM

This is a pretty awesome comic. It's a good thing I posted before one month was up.

Gym-Badge October 13th, 2008 11:32 AM

lol this is well good when you Posting your next one?

Glitter Stain October 13th, 2008 11:56 AM

This is a mess. I can't tell what's going on at any point in time and the panels are spread out all over the place. Why not just put them side-by-side?

obLonG August 14th, 2009 8:08 PM

A note to say that this comic is now on hiatus(as if it wasn't while I was gone.Heh)until further notice.Read my sig for details.

obLonG August 18th, 2009 3:51 AM

For those of you think I'm just sitting there trying to fool you,well you're wrong!
To show you what I'm working on I'm going to upload a sneak peek from time to time to show you anything new underway.

So sneak peek #1 away!:
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7909/sneak.png


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