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Ninja Caterpie November 18th, 2008 12:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lazy Girl (Post 4127997)
as I do apreciate honesty, I must ask that if you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all. well review anyway please

That doesn't work. That means that we can only say good stuff. And good stuff doesn't help you get better.

It's not bad, although the grammar is a little dodgy, and it doesn't feel like a linked story to me. It does reach something now and then, but...well...it loses it too fast. Alright, I admit it, I'm just rambling on about jargon I don't understand really well. xD

8th Wonder™ November 22nd, 2008 12:17 PM

"We settle down as we begin to think,
What you remind us of,
You make the whole world bright,
Sunrise equals love!"
Beatiful part, 'nuff said.


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