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IloveRaichu October 30th, 2008 7:32 PM

my Spirites
 
Here they are contrustive critisisume please =)

My recolours http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo136/IloveFusions/recolour7.png http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo136/IloveFusions/recolour9.png

My Fusions http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo136/IloveFusions/Blazellade.png http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo136/IloveFusions/phanwig2.png

My Pokemon eggs http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo136/IloveFusions/darkriaeggs.png

My Devamps
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo136/IloveFusions/ekansdevamp.png

My Revamps http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo136/IloveFusions/pikachurevamp.png

=)

~Night October 30th, 2008 8:10 PM

Your first fusion doesn't look to great. . .Its body is facing two different directions
Your devamp is just an Ekans recolored white. . .
The Pikachu revamp just looks like it's been outlined, if you look a sprite {take Mew for examplehttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dpmfa/dpmfa151.png},Not all of the outline is black. Some of it is a darker shade of the main color.

~Night

atoms2ashes October 30th, 2008 8:25 PM

The sprites look great, but here's a tip.

When revamping sprites, for best effect, use this guide:
http://www.spriters-resource.com/resources/tut/revamppage.png

GFA October 31st, 2008 6:40 AM

The revamp isn't a revamp unless it's like yellow to gold ...

IloveRaichu October 31st, 2008 10:46 PM

Oh okay Thanks guys for your help!

Balaczter November 1st, 2008 12:59 AM

Hey, some of these are nice. :D

The eggs look ever so slightly messy to me, maybe size Darkrai's parts down?

You could also fix the shading on the revamped Pikachu. Dragonfree has a great guide...

http://www.dragonflycave.com/recoloring.aspx#revamping

Actually, she has a great guide on everything. I'd check it out if you haven't already. :D

Ouvern November 1st, 2008 1:07 AM

As a good sprite rater, here goes the rates.
The recolors are nto that bad, it's just that it needs more flexibility and more interesting parts on it like that Kakuna, you can make a change on it. It's base color is 1 but you can make 2 color schemes out of it. And work on the shading a bit.
Fusions, leave some black outlines. Don't recolor the whole thing, that's a tip to make your fusion sprite more of an official sprite. And re-shade the Turtwig, Phanphy fusion.
The eggs need more "OOZE" on it. Like add more parts to make it look Darkrai-ish..
Devamping is re-shading it to Gold/Silver/Crystal and has to have Black outlines. As for yours it doesn't look like one, it looks like the official one except different shades.
For the revamp, re-shade it to look like the D/P/P Sprite of Pikachu. RE-SHADE!

Well those are the rates, you are one heck of a spriter i say! Keep on trying till your the best ever!

IloveRaichu November 1st, 2008 5:07 PM

thanks alot everybody for your advice!


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