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Fanfic idea
Okay, so some time last year I began writing (actually WRITING- PEN TO PAPER AND ALL) a fan fic. And I am on a mission to show people the darker side of Pokemon, the video games and anime (after season 2) is just to light hearted. But I want to know if you all would be interested in reading a fan fic like this. Heres the basic plot.
A young boy is left a mysterious Pokemon Egg, his inheritance from his deaceased grandfather. He waits for it to hatch...and waits....and waits.... Four years later, the egg has yet to hatch. It is a normal day. The boy is woke up by his alarm clock, which as a result is thrown across the room and breaks. But what really gets the boy to awaken is that the egg, which has sat on a desk in the corner of his room has begun to shake.... The egg hatches, and the boy is soon forved to go on an adventure that will change his life forever...and maybe yours. Hows that? I want to know before I share it...just to hear your thoughts. |
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Anyhoo... I do have a question: Is the egg inheriting part going to be in the main body of the fic, or in the prologue? EDIT: I see that one of the tags of this thread was "riolu." Does that mean that the Pokemon in the egg is said Pokemon, or what that someone else? |
I think it's a good idea. Even if I didn't think so, I would say go ahead and write it as long as it didn't start with the overused "trainer wakes up late and recieves pikachu :D" idea or a variant of such. I am already curious, and I've only seen a snippet! So, by all means, write it :D
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Interesting. New trainer story where the trainer starts off with an egg instead of a Pokemon in a Poke Ball. Already a new spin, so that looks promising.
How dark are we talking about here? Death and destruction? Prophecies? |
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And...well I suppose the Meowths out of the bag (xD stupid Pokemon puns), yes it will be a rIolu. Only I have come up with quite an interesting concept for Riolu, so rest assured this will not be your average Riolu...the same goes for all others that will appear. Quote:
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Wait, was that a yes to prophecies? If so, you need to be careful how you develop that. Make sure you add a twist in somehow to the prophecy and try to be as anti-generic as you can without being completely obvious.
A Riolu, eh? I don't remember if I have read too many fics with Riolu in them, especially since I haven't played D/P yet and have no idea what a Riolu is. I'm interested in seeing how this turns out, especially now with the promise of death and destruction ^^ |
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I think that enough people here are like me and would like to see, uh read a nice dark fic where a poor innocent Pokemon gets dismembered. Quote:
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I'd suggest reading some OTs on Fanfiction.net and around here to get to know what other people have done. That should give you an idea of what kinds of things people have seen before, so you can brainstorm for ideas on how to make yours stick out. Of course, I really don't know what you already have planned; perhaps you've already taken that into consideration. So, I'll keep an eye on what you're doing to see where you're going specifically. Besides, I'm of the school that death and destruction really never hurt a fandom. *thumbs up* |
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Do you have any idea how long it will before you post a chapter. I also suggest hiring a beta reader. Check out the thread titled "Beat Place" |
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Dark Original Trainer stories... I think they're brilliant, usually the hardest to write but they're very interesting for everyone. I like them so much in fact I wrote one.
Go ahead, death and destruction aren't actually bad in OT fics. I might have a look at yours when it's up. Oh by the way, use Shaymin as a messanger of death and I'll kill you. That's my idea. |
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It may have been a dark Fic but it was quite silly.
Probably actually a good idea not using main legendaries, less chance of cliches I guess. |
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