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When is assignment 3 due?
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Well I am not putting a due date on them as people will always be running late anyways, so as soon as possible would be good. Try not to dawdle as well, we need to keep moving.
Also I will be away for 2 days so I cannot rate while I am away but when I come back I am happy to. |
I'll be away till the 21st just so you guys know.
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Er... .noxious, is it too late to join this class?
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-Paws absently at Noxious- I didn't get any critique... |
http://i530.photobucket.com/albums/dd341/Tr0ubl3magn3t/Autumncopy-1.png
Erm, yes, this is my take on the assignment. I don't really have any opinions on it, except for that its somewhat bright, and that I messed up the flow. But yeah, anyways. |
Here's something I whipped up in a few minutes.
(I know it might not be that good...) http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii233/shinypkmnfan13/signatureassignment.png |
Got bored of waiting for noxious. to reply to my PM so I did Assignment 3.
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ZOMG HUMONGOUS CATCHUP RATE
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The effect to his right, what exactly is it? It looks ok, but I can't make out what it is and what it is doing there but it does make it look a little less empty. The text is quite ew. First of all, it should be several sizes smaller. Next it should be a dark brown color stolen from the gun on the render. Finally, it should follow the path of flow instead of staying right in the middle of it without contributing. I don't really like the border, but if you made it a px thicker and made it white it may look cool. Quote:
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Again Signor Pichu-Kun, brushing over the focal is a no go! Erase some brushing over he face and maybe some on her hair, it is distracting. The background is lacking I'm afraid. Putting a brown canvas and bushing randomly over the top really never looked good I'm afraid. Try erasing all the brushing and toying around with some smudging and C4D's if you are feeling brave. Quote:
I see you are the only one who played around using brightness and contrast so props, but you went a tad overboard. Make her a little less bright. :x Ok everybody good work on your assignments, I am adding a new rule... Yes another one.. When you post your completed assignment or even a remake/ revamp after my rating, please, PLEASE post which assignment you are posting. If it is an update, put like "Assignment #3 Update 2" or something... When the assignments get indistuinguishable between each other, I don't want to have to go asking and sorting through stuff to find which one you completed. |
I'll be done with my assignment soon. xD
I hate the render though, I experimented a lot, and all my outcomes fail. Haha, I'll have it done though. Sorry for the wait. :X |
No problems, we are still waiting on a few more people so you are not the last person or anything..
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Ok, I found a tutorial on clipping masks after all.
So, heres assignment number 2: http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff67/Craig_WM/assignment2sigcopy.png Its not my best sig, but it is using a technique I've never used before. Hopefully I didn't do too badly. xD |
Heres my try at Assignment #3, I used Aizuke's most recent tutorial to create it.
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww116/pttsr/Assignment3.png |
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The maing concern in thi stag are the colours. They seem flushed and a bit cloudy especially over the render, and the background is looking very dark and not very sharp. I think what it needs is a bit more contrast. An easy way to do this which looks good is to 'Apply Image' then go to Filter >> Other >> High Pass. Put it on 10px and the tag should go all icky and grey. Then put that layer on layer setting 'Soft Light' and it should make some nice contrast. |
Hmmm, ok, I purposely added the black section to the right, but you're the teacher so, I'll make the changes now.
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It doesn't need a lot, just a bit of smudging as it goes from Focal to pitch black with little of anything. SO after the eyes see the focal they see emptiness right near it.
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I know it isn't as good as everyone else's. Plus, it didn't take long. Maybe another tutorial would help. :3 |
What would you like a tutorial on Pichu-Kun?
Actually there is a good one in the Tutorials Thread here by Aizuke which should be on the last page or the one before. It is the tutorial Pikachu Trainer~ used so if you like that banner you could try one for yourself. |
That is a nice tutorial, and the outcome is great, but I would like to learn about C4D's.
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C4D's can be tricky to use but have very nice outcomes if done correctly.
I know Evilcheese made a tutorial, lemme go find it! Here it is. Use it wisely.. :) |
Ok, are either of these better?
If theres to much of a change let me know. http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff67/Craig_WM/assignment2sig-2copy-1.png http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff67/Craig_WM/assignment2sig-22copy.png |
Much better Decypher! I like the one where the splatters are all blue instead of black. Now it doesn't look all too blank and has some flow now.
I think another thing you could do would be to add some depth, simply sharpen the focal points and blur the rest. Don't blur or sharpen too much, just a bit. |
Ok, heres assignment number 3:
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff67/Craig_WM/assignment3copy.png (Best viewed not on a white background) How'd I go? |
Oh noxious, just butting in, that style that PT used in the Aizuke tut is meant to have borders like that.
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ROFL Vivaa, Get out of my classroom! I think it would look better with a different border, no offense to Aizuke's tutorial or anything but I don't like it on that tag.
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