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XD Vivaa, =D. Yeah I understand what you mean Noxious. Thankyou for the feedback.
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The first thing I have to say is that there are several things that could be fixed, but it still looks good even if you don't. This tag is very simple and that is what makes it so good, so changing it might disrupt that style but I will try to keep to 'simplicity'. First of all, nice smudging of use of cloud textures at the bottom. It draws the eyes up the meet the focal which is good. The vector circles are great as they cover the render, but not very much so it doesn't steal attention. Although I think that you could make some of the circles behind her and some in front so it looks like there is depth. Good old depth. :x I think that the colours in this tag are very flushed especially the render. Try using some gradient maps on different settings maybe just to perk up some more contrast, only the smallest amount! Lastly, I really don't like the border, sorry... I think the side lines might look better in a lighter colour, so it doesn't contrast so much from such a light tag. Nice work! |
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The tag is a lot better with the adding of basic depth, but there is another thing I picked up. A minor nitpick, but if you fix it, it could look a lot better. Around the render there is the black out line. You can delete this by selecting the layer with the render on it and going 'Layer >> Matting >> Remove black matte OR defringe (1/2px)' This will remove the back around the render. On a dark tag it doesn't need it, but when it is all white, it will look a lot better without it... I don't know if that border is any better, maybe just make it a bit thinner. |
"Layer >> Matting >> Remove black matte OR defringe"
Neither of those things work, both of them ruin the render. I'll edit the border though. |
Hello noxious. We'll i'm back now, my assignment might be up on Saturday or Sunday due to school stuff etc.. Thanks ^^
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No problems guys!
Just need a few more in but I most post up Assignment #4 for the people who have finished. Feel free to VM me any graphics you want rated. |
I should get mine soon.
If it's alright, I could possibly do it this weekend where I have more time? Thanks in advance~ |
Sure whenever you get it done that is fine, but I will post the next assignment then so the other members don't need to wait.
Just gotta think of an idea for one first... 8D |
No rush, but I was wondering how the next assignment was coming along.
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Assignment #4 is up.
Please try it without a tutorial, and if you really need one I can post a few here. |
Ok, heres assignment number 4. This is the first time I used a C4D as the main image, so it was something new. I didn't use a tutorial, as much as I wanted to xD. So, hopefully I didn't do too badly.
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff67/Craig_WM/assignment4sigcopy.png Don't ask about the text, it was just the first thing that came to mind when I looked at the sig. xD |
Noxious, i'm afraid have to drop out of graphics school. It's because of school work, etc... Well, thanks ^^.
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Awwh no problems Panda! You have been a great student and I was happy to teach you!
If you ever want back in and this thing is still alive feel free. Or just PM me graphics at anytime for rates! |
Again, SO sorry it's coming late! ;_;
I tried to do it, but PS crapped up. I SWEAR I'll do it this weekend. ;D |
Sorry about the assignments I've been busy.
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Okay. I apologize if this took too long, but here's my completed assignment (#4)
Lol, FAILURE http://i530.photobucket.com/albums/dd341/Tr0ubl3magn3t/Corrotioncopy.png |
hey can I join I need to learn from somebody
just pm me the assignments and ill get started asap |
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Yeah Blaster you need to sign up in the official Graphics School thread as Decypher posted.
Read through it and sign up using the correct form.. No worries about late assignments guys, but if you are going to be late, I am not going to wait for 1 or 2 students. We have half the class finished and ready and I will keep posting assignments. Quote:
The main focus was depth, and you were amazing at it. Good work! Quote:
So take it, blur and sharpen it, maybe use the 'Burn' tool to darken parts that you blur and post it again. |
Assignment 3:.
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff358/skyforme/catgirlthing.png Haha, yeah, um, it was a quickie. I'll start working on the next assignment. =) |
Thanks for the feedback, maybe its a good thing I did it without a tutorial after all. xD
Is this better? http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff67/Craig_WM/assignment4sig-2copy.png |
Yeah, I tried blurring and sharpening parts of it. Not noticeable enough then? Here's another go at it, with a bit more of an effort at depth, though the burn tool just made things redder. And thanks for catching the spelling mistake, spelling is not one of my strong points (though I'm pretty obsessive about it and tend to check every single word I don't know on some online dictionary.)
http://i530.photobucket.com/albums/dd341/Tr0ubl3magn3t/Corrotioncopy-1.png |
Here's my first assignment noxious:
http://i728.photobucket.com/albums/ww281/Kayouri/Signatures/1.png I'll be having to drop out for 2 days- 1 week due to school work. Sorry. |
Ok no worries!
Sorry for the lack of rates guys, school is kicking back up and musical stuff and blargh! I will try and have them done soon! |
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