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22sa December 20th, 2004 12:11 PM

I wouldn't buy it or play it.

Sunflorazumarill December 20th, 2004 3:18 PM

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Originally Posted by 22sa
I wouldn't buy it or play it.

Why not? I thought you liked Erika. Are you telling me that you actually hate her? In fact, tell me the truth about what you really think of her since you went and said something like that.

22sa December 20th, 2004 3:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Sunflorazumarill
Why not? I thought you liked Erika. Are you telling me that you actually hate her? In fact, tell me the truth about what you really think of her since you went and said something like that.

lol, That's not what I meant. I just don't think it's a good idea to make an Erika game. Unless you mean... one of us do it just for fun. O.o I doubt an Erika game would sell without serious manipulation. Do you not think so?

Sunflorazumarill December 20th, 2004 3:33 PM

Um, did you ever say you would do a fic about Erika? If so, do you still plan on doing that fic?

22sa December 20th, 2004 3:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Sunflorazumarill
Um, did you ever say you would do a fic about Erika? If so, do you still plan on doing that fic?

I remember that, lol. I don't have ideas to write it on my own, only with this. Wanna start it off right now? Looks like a good time since we're both online and other people can participate once we get this story started.

Where should the setting be?

Sunflorazumarill December 20th, 2004 3:49 PM

I guess Celadon City. I don't know. I don't have any plan to do this fic. I once was good at them and did three of them. Now it's so hard for me to do any fics. I even started one a week ago, but I done very little on it.

22sa December 20th, 2004 3:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Sunflorazumarill
I guess Celadon City. I don't know. I don't have any plan to do this fic. I once was good at them and did three of them. Now it's so hard for me to do any fics. I even started one a week ago, but I done very little on it.

How about we do a fic that starts with a mysterious person or group of people that kidnaps Erika?

By the way, could you decide on the age of Erika in this fanfic? Because she can grow up and fall in love, or just remain the same age, relatively.

Sunflorazumarill December 20th, 2004 6:19 PM

I guess her age could be 25. Also, I still think she should be paired up with Brock. But if not him, then who?

22sa December 20th, 2004 6:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Sunflorazumarill
I guess her age could be 25. Also, I still think she should be paired up with Brock. But if not him, then who?

I dunno, I just think Brock should be elsewhere in the poke-world, even though he DID like the girls in Celedon. Let's make up another cool guy.

Also, don't you want to write about her falling in love? Also, let's not use the words "paired up" LOL. They're funny, but let's use real life terms.

Shana December 21st, 2004 2:41 PM

Wow, I haven't been here in a while...sorry. ^^;

22sa December 21st, 2004 2:59 PM

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Originally Posted by Star
Wow, I haven't been here in a while...sorry. ^^;

We're getting ready for an Erika Fanfic here, join in! *waves* ^_^

Shana December 22nd, 2004 5:57 PM

Oh gee, I'm not that good of a writer...

22sa December 22nd, 2004 6:09 PM

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Originally Posted by Star
Oh gee, I'm not that good of a writer...

You don't have to be. This isn't a writing contest, we just write one sentence after each other! Well, something like that.

pokejungle December 22nd, 2004 7:23 PM

I'd love to help! Sorry I haven't been here. Who's gonna start?

22sa December 22nd, 2004 7:33 PM

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Originally Posted by pokejungle
I'd love to help! Sorry I haven't been here. Who's gonna start?

You can, if you want. We were discussing the setting and main characters, but it doesn't really matter to me. I'm willing to write regardless of requirements.

pokejungle December 22nd, 2004 7:37 PM

Ok. Just one sentence? How 'bout a paragraph? xD

Here's my sentence: Erika wept, her tears ran down the black dress that she wore. A few feet awhile was the casket that held her grandmother's body.

That was two, but one wasn't enough. I LOVE morbid horror stories. You're forewarned!

*signing off though! g'night!*

22sa December 22nd, 2004 7:53 PM

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Originally Posted by pokejungle
Ok. Just one sentence? How 'bout a paragraph? xD

Here's my sentence: Erika wept, her tears ran down the black dress that she wore. A few feet awhile was the casket that held her grandmother's body.

That was two, but one wasn't enough. I LOVE morbid horror stories. You're forewarned!

*signing off though! g'night!*

Of course. I was trying to make it sound easy so more people would join, lol. PJ, lol, thanks bud!

Someone please decide on Erika's age. Don't let her be too old.... d= seeing as her authors are not.

Story Genre: Romance, horror (how about we add comedy, too?)

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Dry blood scars, plucked out eyes, missing body parts, and disfiguration characterized the old woman's body. Grandma's fingers, all ten of them, her toes, all ten of them, seeming sawed off or ripped a part off on their middle joints, layed on grandma's chest.

"Why?" Tears continued to roll down her black dress, as she let her head drop more. "What had grandma done wrong? What had I done wrong?"

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Meh, I need more info on Erika's personality, lol. Help? XD I totally forgot that Celedon City Episode. XD

Note: This is kind of my first time writing a fanfic... and I've only read a couple in my life. So don't expect me to guide much. I can offer originality in writing style (not that it's super good or anything), but nothing else.

pokejungle December 23rd, 2004 9:11 AM

Oooooooh! A gory-ness contest! hehehehehe

Age: 18 (Legal! (For Romance!))
Personality: Most of the time very happy. caring, typical blonde =P (Except she has blue hair @[email protected])

Anyway, my paragraph!:

There was a killer on the loose and Erika was ready to fight him. After mourning her grandmother, she had left and gone down below her gym. Before her stood 10 rows 8 ft tall with stacks of guns. It was her secret fetish. Her skinny appearce was deceptive, as she could easily carry a bazooka. She chose a smaller machine gun though.

Changing into an all black Ninja suit, she slung the gun on her back and started to scale the gym walls. From roof-to-roof she jumped, looking for anything that might signal to her that one of the citizens of Celedon might be the killer.

"When I catch him, there'll be nothing left of him." She grinned evilly at the thought of millions of bullets pounding through the murderer.

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I guess we're talking about the violent side of Erika now XD I don't think there's ever been a FanFic like this before XDDDDDDDD

22sa December 23rd, 2004 9:47 AM

lol, I was only following your guidelines. ;) What do you mean blonde? >=p Black hair!! Actually, whatever.

Personality: Happy, caring, and fatal/monsterous when pissed off!?!? :laugh:

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Blood squirtering out of the murderer in flashes of death. That is the only image in Erika's imagination as she intensifies her evil grin into almost a beast-like erring. Her idea of the murderer is not clear, but she imagines him or her to have been in ninja cloth like herself during assassination, not too different from herself.

Her evil grin fades. She jumps over on the entrance gates of a famous park on North side of Celedon City, then lands on a patch of grassland before a creek and keeps silent. She feels let down, and the thought of how winning many people's admiration back at the gym did not prevent the ruthless slaughter of her grandmother would give her heartache.

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Do what you want, but don't make Erika revengeful, okay? ;) I do not think she's a weakling.

pokejungle December 23rd, 2004 9:58 AM

If not for revenge, why is she doing this? Let's figure that out before I go on with the story... #_#

22sa December 23rd, 2004 10:03 AM

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Originally Posted by pokejungle
If not for revenge, why is she doing this? Let's figure that out before I go on with the story... #_#

lol, To find out about her grandmother and stop possible criminals. Does it not seem mindless to you to kill somebody just because that somebody killed one of your "loved" ones? No matter, though, make it how you want.

pokejungle December 23rd, 2004 10:10 AM

We don't we just start over and make a happy one? I'm getting depressed! XD

22sa December 23rd, 2004 10:13 AM

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Originally Posted by pokejungle
We don't we just start over and make a happy one? I'm getting depressed! XD

What's wrong with our current fanfic? lol :P Er, I like your fanfic writing, atleast you're actually writing unlike *cough*therestofthemembers*cough*. Keep going!! O.o Er, I wish I kept my mouth shut and let Erika have a nasty Character. I'm not saying to make her harmless or anything!! So keep going!

pokejungle December 23rd, 2004 12:04 PM

Ok. Lets keep going. But, now Erika is simply going to be evil, at night. w00t! She's like a werewolf xD

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A woman and young boy were heading away from the swings on the other side of the park. Erika only saw two moving targets. After a a hail of bullets, both targets were down. Blood was everywhere. She strode away from the corpses with an evil grin spreading across her face. 'Yes,' she though, 'Life is good. It'll be even better when I kill that dirty SOB who hurt my grandma... '

Finding that she was almost out of ammo, she quickly strode into the Celdedon City Gun Store. With a spurt of bullets, she got a 100% discount on her items. She didn't mind her bullets caked in blood when she got them from underneath the dead store manager.
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I can see this being moved into the TDome. We should do a fanfic together in there! XD

22sa December 23rd, 2004 12:47 PM

It's won't, and if it ever does, I'm leaving. :\

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An employee freezes in terror. He stares at the Ninja figure.

Erika turned to him, with an evil grin behind her Ninja mask. "Sorry." She gestured in a cute manner, and then machine guns him. He falls just like his manager.

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Ahem. d= Club leader is gonna kill us for this! It's your fault!! :laugh:


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