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moments. January 19th, 2009 2:52 PM

http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee207/mattimogalli/pirateSWORDcopy.png
Here is mine, I dunno, I haven't used an image like that in a long time!

Aizuke January 21st, 2009 2:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by t w e n t y - t w o . (Post 4295163)

It's better, it has good depth, text is kind of hard to read, and I don't think there's a light source anywhere? But much better.

t w e n t y - t w o's Grade; A

Quote:

Originally Posted by noxious. (Post 4295219)
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee207/mattimogalli/pirateSWORDcopy.png
Here is mine, I dunno, I haven't used an image like that in a long time!

Looks better. :3 Love the effects, left side is empty though, but the text has good placement, though the background word is hard to read. Still messing a sense of depth though. :x

.noxious's Grade; A

Everyone else has around a week to complete the assignment, I think Jess and Gunner's are the last one's left?

moments. January 21st, 2009 2:29 AM

Are we allowed to post tags for you to rate? I noticed you said that to another student earlier, just confirming.

Aizuke January 21st, 2009 2:31 AM

Of course.

I suppose it's something you can do while I get another assignment up and wait for the others to get theirs done.

moments. January 21st, 2009 2:32 AM

Well I have a banner that I made yesterday I think that I posted in the Rating Thread to no success..

http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee207/mattimogalli/revengecopy.png

Aizuke January 21st, 2009 2:38 AM

Well the effects are really nice, but the render doesn't really match with the purple background and sticks out a lot. Light source is good and it has some sense of depth but not much; with a bit of blurring and sharpening you could give it better depth. The white square at the bottom is rather distracting, since it's really bright and stands out a lot, I'm not sure if that's part of the light textures you've used or you did that on purpose. The text has good placement, but the E at the end is hard to read since it's near the render's shirt, so maybe a smaller size text would look better.

Eh, hoped this helped. XD; When it comes to rating, I'm not really good at it. :x

moments. January 21st, 2009 2:39 AM

Yeah the white box was part of the buildings stock used in the background so I might fix that up, same with the text and some more depth.
Can I repost it when I am finished for a secondary rate?

Aizuke January 21st, 2009 2:41 AM

Sure, though I'm not sure what else I could say about it. XD;;

moments. January 21st, 2009 2:43 AM

Oh I would just touch up on the points you made so you can tell me if I did what you were expecting.

Aizuke January 21st, 2009 2:46 AM

Oh well, okay, that I can do. XD;

Gunners January 21st, 2009 10:03 AM

http://i41.*.com/2w6bi4w.jpg

meh the render is quite bad. Its got sum white lines that i only just realsies under his right armpit lol poorly rendered but oh well

Unforgettable January 21st, 2009 10:27 AM

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h179/YunaDances/sotw.png

This is my entry for the first sotw. It's horrible. It's a render, with water texture, and lightened. There is no depth, and nothing interesting to it. Quality is horrible. :x

To fix it, I could add some gradient maps, a way better background, more than like 2 layers, depth, flow, take out the text, or at least blend it more. And leave the quality. The blurry look doesn't work to well. XD;

Gunners January 21st, 2009 11:03 AM

http://i39.*.com/2viktq9.jpg

could you rate this please

Dukey January 29th, 2009 2:07 AM

I think we are nearly due for another assignment.
If this place is still alive :/

Sweet Speed January 29th, 2009 8:42 AM

Hey, Aizuke can I please join this home room? I'll try and get the first assignment in today.

Gunners January 29th, 2009 11:54 AM

Can anyone in the homeroom rate this:

http://i41.*.com/rrv24k.jpg

Aizuke January 30th, 2009 3:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sweet Speed (Post 4318682)
Hey, Aizuke can I please join this home room? I'll try and get the first assignment in today.

I'm not sure if you can just join or you have to request from the graphic's school thread, so once you post there, I can add you to the list.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gunners (Post 4299861)
http://i41.*.com/2w6bi4w.jpg

meh the render is quite bad. Its got sum white lines that i only just realsies under his right armpit lol poorly rendered but oh well

I don't really how it's better than your other one. All it seems to be is just it's been tidied up and with the monochrome colours, it makes the render blend to the background better. Text is hard to read, I didn't realised it was there until I starred long enough. :x Right side is rather empy, though lighting source is good, still, it's a big plain, to be honest.

Gunner's Grade; B

Quote:

Originally Posted by Unforgettable (Post 4299886)
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h179/YunaDances/sotw.png

This is my entry for the first sotw. It's horrible. It's a render, with water texture, and lightened. There is no depth, and nothing interesting to it. Quality is horrible. :x

To fix it, I could add some gradient maps, a way better background, more than like 2 layers, depth, flow, take out the text, or at least blend it more. And leave the quality. The blurry look doesn't work to well. XD;

First rule of making tags, never filter your render. :x Or make the opacity lower. Making the render unclear kind of ruins the banner. It's rather spacious too, and empty wise. I'm sure it didn't take you long to make, no offense. XD;; Maybe to make it seem more watery, try to find some good watery looking textures or C4D's. But either than that, try all the things you've mentioned and see how it goes. :3

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Eh, my computer is crap so I can't see images. XD;; So I'll rate your recent banner, Gunners.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gunners (Post 4318944)
Can anyone in the homeroom rate this:

http://i41.*.com/rrv24k.jpg

In my opinion.. I don't like the render. XD;; And I don't know if you've erased the right little white part of her head or it's like that. One side of the banner seems more plainer than the other, and I've seen that most of your work are monochrome. :x Trying using other colours to lighten up your banners. And also, a white light background makes it awfully bright too. D:

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Okay, I know it's been a while, sorry. I've been busy with work and life. XD;

I have a new assignment though!
Assignment #2

This one is pretty easy, all you have to do is make a tag, but you can only use shapes. But! You can only use one sort of shape. If you've picked a circle, then you have to keep using circles. This is just a way to experiment with vectoring and the pen tool. You can use C4D's and textures, only if they match the shape you have chosen. Don't forget to add lighting, depth etc. Then once you've done, you must rate each others banners.

Assignments are due 9th of Febuary~

Dukey January 30th, 2009 1:26 PM

Assigment Two.
Okay, first time I've done something without a render/stock in quite a while.
Anyways, went for soe smudging stuff & Circles. Just to be safe I smudged circles XD
Anyways, it's alright. Here we go.
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn184/McDukey/CirclesSmudges.png

Aizuke January 30th, 2009 2:37 PM

That's pretty awesome. XD The blank space on the side fits well, though it's blankness.

Next person to complete the assignment must rate Dukey's banner.

Dukey January 30th, 2009 2:44 PM

Can we rate the other people's banners anyway? Like just because I've rated once doesn't me I can't again for example.
I assume we can, so I'll be rating everyone's :P

Aizuke January 30th, 2009 2:53 PM

Of course.

But this is like the graphics rating thread now, next poster must rate the above graphics.

Harsh criticism is wanted, since you won't improve if you don't know what you're doing wrong.

This is to help improve your criticing and being able to take harsh criticism. Since not everyone will be a fan of your work.

Extra credit points if you rate more than one banner. :DDD

Dukey January 30th, 2009 4:00 PM

Lol Extra Credit. That'll do a whole bunch :P
Anyways. I'll try to rate everybody's and I agree with what you said Mayka.
Harsh Critiscm is the only way I got better :/

Unforgettable February 3rd, 2009 9:50 AM

Well, I made a vertical banner, and had to use a different render. That one what that bad. But I stuck with the same subject. And I was brain dead while doing this but...
Assignment #1 (yay being late):
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h179/YunaDances/sotwredo2.png


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