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Pokemon Peridot Version
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Some constructive criticism:
The first thing I wondered was "what's going to be unique about this game?" But I didn't really see too much in the way of uniqueness. Remember that making your game different from the pack is what's going to attract people to play it. The second thing is more something I noticed. Your dad gave you a Swinub. If you aren't changing it's types, that's a ground/ice Pokemon. So I'm a little curious why the official starters contain another ice Pokemon. Again though, I'm just trying to help. |
I agree with Kaylee, you need a special twist to set your game aside from the rest! We've got the official games to give us the same old story line ;) Try maybe getting rid of the Pokemon League and thinking up something to replace it.
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Yeah, I was going to have something more important than the gyms, but I haven't really planned that out... And, no, I didn't notice the Swinub...
The region, BTW, is based off of Canada and Russia, being really far north, and having a Taiga and Tundra. Thanks for the advice!!! |
Glad to help. Just don't get too discouraged if you don't get a lot of views yet. And as soon as you have a good idea, put it on here so people can see it. Good luck with this.
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i like your story sean and you need 15 posts to put up images... anyways good luck and i hope you stick with it;)
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