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Tell me what you think
My first story well its more of a story-line
_ _ _ This place was once a haven.. A new region just sprang up out of no where just of the coast of the Kanto region. It seemed so nice. The climates were perfect all the time. Everyone especially the Pokémon noticed it they flocked from all corners of the world to see this. Where the berries and fruit were succulent and sweet. Where they could laugh and play. But then pokemon started to disappear HUNDREDS OF them WHOLE SPECIES were wiped out! Then... new ones emerged they looked as if they were dead. Deceased, decrepit moldy forms of what they used to be... Now all of the pokemon world is at risk the weather climates have changed rapidly and still are changing they came from the sea... from.... Ethos... |
It's a start, but you'll need a lot more than that to make a story. For example, okay, so a new region suddenly appeared. Pokémon are becoming zombies. Okay, so... now what?
I'll give you credit in that it's an interesting idea (because, hey, zombies), but you seem to need to flesh out the story a bit more. Who's the story told by? A Pokémon who hasn't yet disappeared/changed? A researcher looking into this phenomenon? A trainer who was trying to start a journey in this place? What are the motives? Personal survival? Scientific interest? Zombiehood turns out to be contagious? Point is, you've got a bare-bones concept, and it has a lot of potential. You just need to flesh it out a bit more. Good luck. |
...no offense but isn't this supposed to go in the Pokemon Lounge?
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... Oh wait. I'm going to move this over to the Writer's Lounge for now, because this really doesn't seem like much of an actual story. More like a base for an idea. So I'll move it over to the Lounge for you. |
To add what Xathine asked, a few other things you should ask yourself that could flesh out the story more:
-What causes the Pokemon to disappear and why they turned to zombies? -What's the importance of the weather change? Are the zombie Pokemon causing it or the weather change is what causing the Pokemon to become zombies? -What kind of conflict and situation is going on? Who are the main characters in the story? Like Xathine said, that could go either by a scientist researching this new region, a trainer starting his journey there and trying to survive, or anything else. I too would say good luck on this story and I'll read it once you post it! :) |
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