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Psychic*Absol October 1st, 2009 8:13 AM

*coughs* *checks microphone* Attention, please! Test, test test...yes, that thing works. XD

Big announcement!
According to bulbagarden's dogasu (you can check there), SHIRONA!!! alias Cynthia will make an appearence in the Ginga-Dan (Team Galactic) showdown, which will start in November.
Start celebrating. NOW.

Wyyrlokk October 1st, 2009 8:29 AM

A Team Galactic Showdown? What is that?

(Anyway, as long as Cynthia is in it, it has to be wonderful... xD)

Psychic*Absol October 1st, 2009 9:13 AM

An arc in the anime. =3 Like I said, check bulbagarden, or serebii, or, I think there should be a thread here, too. Just watched the preview myself. Not too many shots of Cynthia (>.<), but I saw her driving a car (just like in the previous Galactic episodes), and her Garchomp attacking...in the torn world? Dunno, kinda looked liked it. o,o

SmashBrony October 1st, 2009 2:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 5174631)
An arc in the anime. =3 Like I said, check bulbagarden, or serebii, or, I think there should be a thread here, too. Just watched the preview myself. Not too many shots of Cynthia (>.<), but I saw her driving a car (just like in the previous Galactic episodes), and her Garchomp attacking...in the torn world? Dunno, kinda looked liked it. o,o

Too bad I don't watch the anime, huh?
I guess I'll have to miss out... Phooey.

Psychic*Absol October 2nd, 2009 9:14 AM

^_^ I don't watch the anime much on TV anymore, too, but heh, *whistles*, there's youtube and stuff. XD I have the German Galactic-Two parter with Cynthia on video, too, but when it first aired, I watched it online. ;- ) And I'll do the same with the next episodes with Cynthia, so I'll keep you updated on her.

Crazy Packers Fan October 3rd, 2009 10:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Blaesiken (Post 5175380)
Too bad I don't watch the anime, huh?

Don't worry, I haven't watched it regularly in a long time either. You're better off missing dozens of stupid episodes even if it means missing rare Cynthia appearances. I'll make the effort to try to find Cynthia's episodes on YouTube once they are up, though.

Oh, and thanks for the review, P*A. I'll probably finish the next chapter soon, which was started but hasn't been finished yet. Probably no Will x Sabrina until the final two chapters, because we're reaching the point of no return.

SmashBrony October 5th, 2009 5:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5182839)
Don't worry, I haven't watched it regularly in a long time either. You're better off missing dozens of stupid episodes even if it means missing rare Cynthia appearances. I'll make the effort to try to find Cynthia's episodes on YouTube once they are up, though.

So... Ash Ketchup IS that bad, huh?
(I like calling him "Ketchup" instead of "Ketchum" because Ketchup is all he'd be after fighting me!)

Psychic*Absol October 8th, 2009 8:11 AM

*g* He's getting better, though. After all, without him, we wouldn't have any Cynthia episodes, eh? ;-)

On other news...I did some research on the Pokemon Manga (you know, Pokemon Adventures), and *gasp* Cynthia appeared there already, too! If anyone wants the links, I will post them, but in generel, check serebii's manga forum.

Also in generel...currently, Cynthia and Cyrus are fighting in the manga. And it appears as if Cyrus is winning.

Crazy Packers Fan October 8th, 2009 9:04 AM

The manga is actually very hard to predict... I mean, it's surprisingly violent. So as much as I'd love to see Cynthia win, I wouldn't be surprised if the bad guy wins. Though I think a better choice would be for Cynthia to turn evil, then everything would be perfect.

Also, I'll be waiting on a review of the next chapter... it's a bridge to what should be a 3-part big battle.

Psychic*Absol October 9th, 2009 9:06 AM

Yeah, I agree, the manga is very hard to predict and it is violant...but then, for the plot, it would be more interesting to see Cyrus win (against the friggin champion of a region!!!) but I doubt they'll make that happen. >< There will be some kind of DEM win for Cynthia...or she turns the side and fights along with Cyrus. ;-)

*bows* Your review, sir.
Titel: Question and Answer. Or...Queen Cynthia and...uhm...something with 'a'...apples? LOL
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“Well, I didn’t think too much of him, but wasn’t he the father of your unborn child?”
His genes will live on. *nods*
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She wondered if killing Cyrus was the right move – all over Cyrus’s arrogance and his failure to please her for one night.
XD I would blame it on the mood swings.
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The pawns had begun their march, calling for the one who they thought would save them.
Random guess....Arceus? lol
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The queen was all set for that attack; all that was necessary was to regain the king.
´Why do I suddenly have to think of Chess?
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Roxanne, Joe and Gary stared at Melody in stunned silence. After a few moments, Roxanne finally spoke up.

“I told you so!” she snapped.
XD! Way to end a scene in an anti-climatic way, boy!
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“No, it’s not!” Roxanne snapped back. “The problem was you! You may have cursed it with your unchosen lips!”
*raises eyebrow* O~kay...
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“And that’s the key,” Roxanne replied. “The pearl, the pearl! The pearl is the proof given to us by Arceus of his existence. You just must believe in the pearl!”
*raises eyeborw again* You think you're going a bit overboard, Roxanne?
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Joe was somewhat surprised that Roxanne spoke to Arceus instead of to the one standing next to her.
Maybe Arceus *is* standing next to her...lol.
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Lucian lay in his hospital bed, with no one else in the room. He sensed something had happened to change his luck, but he could not figure exactly what it was. However, it was only a matter of minutes until he found out that his feelings were right.
And I was wondering where the poor guy was...
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Lucian almost shuddered at the thought. This can’t end well, he figured.
It can, dear Lucian, it can. =3
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Cynthia turned back towards him and smiled. “Oh, just teasing you!” she said.
Nice way of 'teasing' him...then again, she's done worse, way worse...
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Hunter J met with the three commanders of Team Galactic to tell them the grim news.
I had wondered where she went to, too.
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“No,” J responded. “Why would I do something like that?”
Plenty of reasons...
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“Hated? I think that’s a pretty strong word,” J stated.
Yep, for someone you slept with, 'hate' is a strong word.
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“Trust a psychic’s instincts,” J said. “He’s dead, and I didn’t kill him.”
Trst a psychic's instincts, but never trust a psychic. 0=)
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“Cynthia wanted to marry him!” Saturn shouted. “There’s no way she would have killed him!”
Cynthia can do whatever she wants, and if that means killing the man the wants to marry...
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“How about we pay you to find Cyrus’s killer – and take revenge on him or her for us?” Mars suggested.
Not such a good idea...
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She teleported away in a fury.
I guess she still likes him...0=)
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“Yes, I think Cynthia paid him a visit,” Volkner finished. “And I have a bad feeling what she did to him.”
No need to worry! =3
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For Lucian, life was perfect again.
Awwww...=3
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As much as she hated to admit it, her life was not complete without Lucian.
*nods and approves* My Cynthia feels in a similiar way. ^.~
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And then, she saw the most frightening thing she had ever seen in her life.
Cynthia? Herself at 2 am in the morning on a bad hair day? Agatha nak...no way, that would be *too* frightening. >.< I randomly guess..Arceus? (It *has* to get into the story at some point or another...)

Crazy Packers Fan October 9th, 2009 11:01 AM

Thanks for the review... probably the last time you'll see any of the "nice" side of Cynthia. Now it's time for her to try to accomplish her ultimate goal. Unfortunately it's already obvious whether she will or won't, because of the fact that we've planned out a future fic.

There was actually some significance behind the pearl and it turning a certain color when around certain people... perhaps that will be explained next chapter.

SmashBrony October 9th, 2009 3:12 PM

The manga is violent? Odd, considering it's from Nintendo...
(Nope, don't read the manga either...)
& I feel that there WOULD be Cynthia esipodes without Ash, for then I think Red (who's on SSBB, by the way) would be the star... although, in a way, Ash IS Red...

Psychic*Absol October 10th, 2009 8:34 AM

@CPF XD I never expected much of Cynthia's nice side to be shown, so that does not surprise me.

Shhh, not so loud. ;-) While I do know how the fic ends (obviously), your other readers don't and we don't want to spoiler them, do we?

Must not have paid attention to it...besides, the pearl only started to interest me after I read the summary of the Arceus movie...

@Blaesiken Dunno if you've read the manga, but yes, it is violent. For example, an Arbok got cut in half, we have zombie Pokemon, we have characters nearly getting eaten by Pokemon...and that is only the first three volumes...

SmashBrony October 10th, 2009 3:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 5203214)
@CPF XD I never expected much of Cynthia's nice side to be shown, so that does not surprise me.

Shhh, not so loud. ;-) While I do know how the fic ends (obviously), your other readers don't and we don't want to spoiler them, do we?

Must not have paid attention to it...besides, the pearl only started to interest me after I read the summary of the Arceus movie...

@Blaesiken Dunno if you've read the manga, but yes, it is violent. For example, an Arbok got cut in half, we have zombie Pokemon, we have characters nearly getting eaten by Pokemon...and that is only the first three volumes...

YIEEEEE!!!!! Obiviously, I didn't....
It sounds as bad as Inuyasha...(I've read a little in a bookstore, & if I even got it, I think my grandma would not be nice at all... Horrific demons, partial nudity, Etc. Eek!)
Hmm... I don't know much on CPF's version of Cynthia, so I don't know what to say to keep on the topic....

Crazy Packers Fan October 10th, 2009 11:26 PM

InuYasha is awesome. The violence totally is worth it.
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Shhh, not so loud. ;-) While I do know how the fic ends (obviously), your other readers don't and we don't want to spoiler them, do we?
Since you know how it ends, why not tell me? Because I don't think you know exactly. You know maybe one thing - that
Spoiler:
Cynthia goes to Orre.
But I can't think of anything else you know besides that - but I'd be glad to hear your guesses.

Oh, and "other readers"? Like who? (I do have at least one, who doesn't post here, but none who post here.)

Wait a minute, it's seriously called "Arceus and the Jewel of Life"? Meaning, there's a pearl in the movie, too? I can assure you, that was total coincidence.

Psychic*Absol October 11th, 2009 8:26 AM

@Blaesiken Afraid I can't say too much about InuYasha, didn't read the manga and only saw a few episodes, and it didn't interest me so much. ^^;;;

Gotta read his fanfic(s) then. Totally worth it. *nods*

@CPF What I meant was that I know if she will accomplish her ultimate goal or not, not that I exactly know how the fic will end up in detail. XD
Though, random guesses from me...
Spoiler:
Arceus appearing in front of Giselle, Cynthia *visiting* them because she wants Arceus power and Arceus&Giselle somehow defeating Cynthia. Though I suspect J to play some role there, too...that talk in the last chapter was highly suspicious imo. And, of course, I want my favourite couple to appear there inbetween, though I have absolutely no idea how they could be worked in. XD


I know from experience that a writer may have readers he doesn't even know about. ^^They're lurking around but never showing themselves. I've forgotten the numbers, but I've certainly got more page views on my fanfic than I have readers, minus the double-triple, etc., views of course.

*nods* It is. ^^ And from reading the synopsis, a jewel plays a big role in it. Jewel is similiar enough to pearl, I think. =3 *pats CPF* Good psychic!

SmashBrony October 11th, 2009 4:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5206315)
InuYasha is awesome. The violence totally is worth it.

That may be so, but if I ever gotten & my Grandma got a glimpe of what's inside the books, she'd.....................................................
............................................................
............................................................
Yeah, that's what she'd do.... *shivers*

Psychic*Absol October 18th, 2009 8:54 AM

I come back and I bring you...nearly no news. >> In some very hard to find trailer that's so hard to find that even I have not spotted it yet...ehm, well, said trailer is of the November episodes where Cynthia appears. No glimpse of her, sadly, but it looks as if her Garchomp is about to cut off ...decapitate...kill?...do some nasty stuff to Jupiter. And her eyes looks weird. Very weird. So weird I couldn't stop laughing for minutes. As if she knows that Garchomp is about to murder...hold her down. Or something. XD
Anyway, that Garchomp looks evil there. Much like the one your Cynthia would have, CPF. =3 *hint, hint*

Nikorasu October 19th, 2009 11:06 AM

She looks better on the game than the TV show.

Crazy Packers Fan October 29th, 2009 6:56 PM

I forgot all about this group... anyway...

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Arceus appearing in front of Giselle, Cynthia *visiting* them because she wants Arceus power and Arceus&Giselle somehow defeating Cynthia. Though I suspect J to play some role there, too...that talk in the last chapter was highly suspicious imo. And, of course, I want my favourite couple to appear there inbetween, though I have absolutely no idea how they could be worked in.
Only one of those things you mention actually happens. More to come when I actually get around to writing it.

Psychic*Absol November 1st, 2009 9:46 AM

*was hoping for someone to revive the club and is now frustrated at no one caring for the Sabrina Fanclub...

Hm...in that case...I'll just stop guessing things, otherwise, my psychic powers may get doubted. XD!

And for all of you, a *great* picture from Pokemon Sunday. I wonder if I should put a warning here or something...
http://pocketmonsters.net/epguide.php?action=viewep&epid=1040

My eyes! They burn, they burn! >.< Two of my favourite ladies, destroyed, demolished...argh. >.< Better cosplayers, PLEASE! >.<

Crazy Packers Fan November 2nd, 2009 11:40 AM

Ouch... not exactly the best cosplayers I've ever seen.

SmashBrony November 2nd, 2009 5:36 PM

Wait a durn minute...
IS THAT A GUY IN A CYNTHIA COSTUME!?!?
...Why her.... WHY DOES POOR CYNTHIA HAVE TO PUT UP WITH THIS!?!?
YAAAARRRRGGGHHH!!!!
Oh, by the way, I found out that the name "Cynthia" means "The moon".

Psychic*Absol November 3rd, 2009 10:29 AM

Yes, that *is* a guy. Which makes it even worse. But it's not the only fact that makes this picture...ehm...let's don't talk about this. I found a few more pics of the same cosplayers (there's Hunter J, Saturn and Mars, I think...and Handsome, though I'm really not sure about him) and I'm *very* close to calling some of them sexually abusive. >.< And no, I'm not going to share them with you.

Yep, Cynthia's name comes from a moon goddess *snickers*, just don't ask me if it was the Greek or the Roman. >.<

Crazy Packers Fan November 3rd, 2009 1:18 PM

Yeah, let's not share these pictures... wow, I didn't even notice it was a guy in that costume, I just thought it was an ugly girl. Very ugly, in this case.

SmashBrony November 3rd, 2009 5:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 5287296)
Yes, that *is* a guy. Which makes it even worse. But it's not the only fact that makes this picture...ehm...let's don't talk about this. I found a few more pics of the same cosplayers (there's Hunter J, Saturn and Mars, I think...and Handsome, though I'm really not sure about him) and I'm *very* close to calling some of them sexually abusive. >.< And no, I'm not going to share them with you.

Yep, Cynthia's name comes from a moon goddess *snickers*, just don't ask me if it was the Greek or the Roman. >.<

Then I'd say that Cynthia is Roman, for I belive the Geek moon goddess is Artimis AKA Diana. Uh... Did I just call them "Geek" instead of "Greek"?
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5287604)
Yeah, let's not share these pictures... wow, I didn't even notice it was a guy in that costume, I just thought it was an ugly girl. Very ugly, in this case.

......How could you not notice the masculine traits?
Whatever. How do you guys like my new self?

Psychic*Absol November 4th, 2009 10:55 AM

@CPF If ANYBODY is insane enough to ask me to share them....they're somewhere on the site, too. Dunno where exactly. But I'll warn anybody daring to do this...tis scary. Really scary. And involves Twister (the game). Which should be scary enough. But isn't, in this case. >.<

And yes, that is a guy crossdressing as Cynthia. Which in itself should be a reason to be scared. (Nevermind that the cosplayer for Hunter J seems to be a guy, too...goodbye, sweet ArtemisShipping, I loved you when you were yuri...)

@Stoney (lol, I like your name =3) Now you confused me. >< Artemis (;-) ) is another name for her, yes, but is it really for the Roman one aka Diana? ...I really have to look this up, it bothers me. >> I'm usually very good at mythology.

SmashBrony November 4th, 2009 4:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 5290217)
@CPF If ANYBODY is insane enough to ask me to share them....they're somewhere on the site, too. Dunno where exactly. But I'll warn anybody daring to do this...tis scary. Really scary. And involves Twister (the game). Which should be scary enough. But isn't, in this case. >.<

And yes, that is a guy crossdressing as Cynthia. Which in itself should be a reason to be scared. (Nevermind that the cosplayer for Hunter J seems to be a guy, too...goodbye, sweet ArtemisShipping, I loved you when you were yuri...)

@Stoney (lol, I like your name =3) Now you confused me. >< Artemis (;-) ) is another name for her, yes, but is it really for the Roman one aka Diana? ...I really have to look this up, it bothers me. >> I'm usually very good at mythology.

OH!!! I so happen to have a interest in mythology!(mainly mytological creatures, such as the Japanense foxes & the Greek Hydra) I'll have to PM you later on this... & I looked up the "Name your baby" book (In my case, it's the "Name your POKEMON" book, for the reason that I use it for) & Cynthia is of Geek origins... Uh.... I just called them Geeks again, didn't I?
Uh... I think it's Greek, anyways.... I'MMA CONFUSED!!!

Psychic*Absol November 5th, 2009 11:25 AM

Heheh, if you like mythology, you should know that Sabrina is a Roman name, too...but that's something for the other fanclub. Or MSN. I have many books on Roman&Greek mythology, so yeah, I would like to talk with you about it. ^^

In the end, you made me search for the meaning on behindthename.com. It's the best site about names I know, and it's mostly accurate. So, here's the link for Cynthia (haven't looked if they have Shirona, but I know I've known the meaning of her Japanese name once...)
http://www.behindthename.com/name/cynthia
Cynthia IS Greek and so is Artemis. ^^

Crazy Packers Fan November 5th, 2009 11:53 AM

As long as you're using her full name Cynthia and not shortening it to a horrible nickname, it's a great name. Of course I'd probably think the same over whatever name they gave to the Sinnoh champion, after seeing the way she looks.

Psychic*Absol November 5th, 2009 12:12 PM

*shudders* I guess I'm not the only one who has heard 'Cindy' as a nickname for Cynthia (and not necessarily Pokemon's Cynthia) and who absolutely hates it. >.< Even worse if it would actually *be* Pokemon's Cynthia.

I liked Shirona when the Japanese name was announced, but Cynthia doesn't sound any worse.

SmashBrony November 5th, 2009 4:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 5293551)
*shudders* I guess I'm not the only one who has heard 'Cindy' as a nickname for Cynthia (and not necessarily Pokemon's Cynthia) and who absolutely hates it. >.< Even worse if it would actually *be* Pokemon's Cynthia.

I liked Shirona when the Japanese name was announced, but Cynthia doesn't sound any worse.

I dislike "Cindy" as well... I'll ALWAYS refer to her as "Cynthia" & nothing else, expect maybe Shirona.
& what was her team on Platinium?
I think it was:
Spoiler:
Togekiss
Spiritomb
Lucario
Garchomp
Milotic
Roserade (this was in random order.)

Psychic*Absol November 13th, 2009 11:57 AM

^ does she have any other name besides Cynthia/Shirona? o,o

Anyway, I watched the Galactic episodes yesterday. Not much that Cynthia did, sadly, and of course, since the episode was in Japanese, I did not understand anything she said, either. Again, she was driving a car of some sorts (although I still wonder, she was sitting on the right side of the car, is that usual in Japan? o,o) and her Garchomp was fighting, but otherwise, she felt pretty much squirmed in as a place-holder. >>

Crazy Packers Fan November 13th, 2009 12:25 PM

That's a shame. Of course I'd only ultimately be satisfied if I knew that she was pulling the strings behind Team Galactic or something else sinister.

Oh, and I was going to write/finish the next chapter today, but it's now being put off until next week. I just can't seem to get motivated. I think once I start writing, I'll find a way to finish this story.

Psychic*Absol November 13th, 2009 12:38 PM

Too bad I did not take notice of how she reacted to Cyrus being TG boss. That would have been interesting. Maybe I can re-watch the video and look at it..

Hm, I suppose you should better see the video for yourself, since there are hints that could be of consequences to both of our fics...
Spoiler:
Hints that BOTH Cyrus and J are dead. Yes, I am not kidding. Death in Pokemon.

Crazy Packers Fan November 13th, 2009 2:10 PM

Sorry, P*A, but you forgot the number one rule of anime: No one ever dies in anime. Especially Bleach. For people to die in Pokemon would be even more unbelievable. From what I read about J, her "whereabouts are unknown." Meaning she's no more dead than Darth Vader was after A New Hope. Right now SABRINA is just as dead as J and Cyrus, after all, she hasn't been seen in 10 years. So don't panic, they're still alive.

Oh wait... is Cyrus dead or alive in my fic?

SmashBrony November 13th, 2009 5:31 PM

I've gotten 3 Arceuses! would dis mean that I can do the Cynthia event in HeartGold/SoulSilver 3 times to get the Lv.1 Dialga, Palkia & Giratina?
I'd think so.... Heh heh...
Oh, yes, to see her beautiful face 3 times in HG/SS....
..... But I wonder....
.................................................Hmm.................

Crazy Packers Fan November 14th, 2009 1:15 AM

Okay, so Cynthia returns in the 42nd chapter of my story, which I decided to write tonight, not being able to sleep. Please enjoy, P*A, with a little bit of Sabrina and Liza fun added in.

Psychic*Absol November 15th, 2009 9:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5316757)
Sorry, P*A, but you forgot the number one rule of anime: No one ever dies in anime. Especially Bleach. For people to die in Pokemon would be even more unbelievable. From what I read about J, her "whereabouts are unknown." Meaning she's no more dead than Darth Vader was after A New Hope. Right now SABRINA is just as dead as J and Cyrus, after all, she hasn't been seen in 10 years. So don't panic, they're still alive.

Oh wait... is Cyrus dead or alive in my fic?

No one ever dies in anime? The scientists of the first Pokemon movie, Latios and Sir Aaron would like to say hello to you, then. XD Fact is, people DO die in anime (and in manga- was just reading Fushigi Yuugi today) and for the moment being, I will think of J (and Cyrus) as dead. Thus forcing me to place my fic before the events in DP. Oh, well. At least it makes up for a new short-fic plot. 0=)

Unlike J, there are absolutely NO hints that Sabrina is dead. See, we've seen J's ship being hit by Future Sight (apparently), the ship sinking AND exploding. And her glasses or whatever floating up. Strong hints for me that she is indead meant to be dead. Of course, if J appear again, I'll bow in shame before Cynthia (LOL, trying to get back on topic), but for the moment, J's dead for me.

As far as I know, Cyrus is dead in your fic. =3

Read the chapter yesterday, I hope I can start the review tonight so you'll have it tommorow. Just one note. This chapter definitely contains the MOST EPIC SCENE EVER. As in...Arceus and Cynthia. Oh, my, god...and yes, I see the irony. XD

Crazy Packers Fan November 15th, 2009 9:42 AM

I'll make a bet that J is indeed alive and that she will appear again in the anime - maybe not for a while, but certainly sometime.

So you liked that scene between Arceus and Cynthia? If you think that was epic, just wait until you see what happens next between the two. I can't wait to read your review.

SmashBrony November 16th, 2009 8:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5322904)
I'll make a bet that J is indeed alive and that she will appear again in the anime - maybe not for a while, but certainly sometime.

So you liked that scene between Arceus and Cynthia? If you think that was epic, just wait until you see what happens next between the two. I can't wait to read your review.

I'd like to read your story, but I don't think I could handle it...
Heck, the pokemon movies were almost too much for me...
Epicness is my weakness...

Crazy Packers Fan November 17th, 2009 1:05 AM

Oh, just wait for the next chapter. It's about as epic as it gets. I want to post it now, but I have to wait for this review first.

SmashBrony November 17th, 2009 8:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5328210)
Oh, just wait for the next chapter. It's about as epic as it gets. I want to post it now, but I have to wait for this review first.

.............................Ok.
& hopefully I can start writing soon...

Psychic*Absol November 18th, 2009 10:47 AM

@CPF Nah, as I hopelessly hope that the anime might get darker one day, I'll think of her as dead for now. I would be positively surprised if she came back, but for now. And it fits into my story. 0=)

*coughs* Better post that review now, eh?
Title: --> Isn't that a song of Michael Jackson? (Or was it 'Heal the World'? Nice chapter title that would be, too. )

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and little girl whose name I don’t know,
LOL Poor Liza, almost being forgotten...
I'll randomly guess some girls, even though I already know it's Liza... Dawn, Misty, May, eh...any more little girls? Roxy? Eh, wait...
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“It’s Liza.”

“Liza, what are you doing here?” Sabrina asked, seeing Liza step in front of her.
LIZA!!! I missed ya! And she's probably there to save your butts again. 0=)
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“So you’ve been reading my mind the whole time, knowing exactly what I’ve been planning on doing?” Sabrina asked, with a sigh.
As usual.
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That’s right!” Liza responded.
Meowth! XD
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Karen sighed. “Fine, then, you’re in, girl, just don’t screw things up!” she shouted.

“Oh, don’t worry, that’s Sabrina’s job,” Liza replied, with Sabrina placing her face in her palm.
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!! ...wait, did she ever screw things up?XD

Funny that of ALL the people, it's GISELLE who sees Arceus. But oh well, why not? XD At least it makes up for nice comedy opportunities.
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“How – how – who – what are you?” Giselle stammered.
*snickers* First who, than what. Appears not even Giselle knows God's Arceus' gender. (It's female! XD!!!!)
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“Well, I guess that means I’m important,” Giselle told Arceus, getting up from off the ground.
*bangs head against floor* No, you were randomly chosen. It could have been Michael Jackson, too. (Now, why I am mentioning him so often today? o,o)
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“So, may I ask, who are you, and why do you think you can just walk into my apartment like this?”
*mouth hangs open* Um,Giselle? You *know* who you are talking to, right? (Well, silly me, obviously not...)
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“For underneath your exterior appearance and abilities, you deep down inside have a heart made of gold.”

“Oh, yeah, that too,” Giselle said.
*burts out with laughter*
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“Well, it’s hard to keep track of everything I’m the best at, but you know, that’s just the way it is.”
*can't ...stop....laughing*
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“I was only joking!” Giselle exclaimed. “Go take Cynthia out of power, I know she has caused great harm to a lot of people.”

“Why wasn’t that what you asked for in the first place?” Arceus asked.

“I was playing mind games with you,” Giselle stated. “I was wondering if I could play a practical joke on a legendary Pokémon. And I succeeded! Go ahead, Pokémon, take care of Cynthia for us.”
Of ALL the people in the fic, Giselle is seriously the only one I could see pulling a prank on a legendary Pokemon. And see what happens...XD!!!!
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“The next time you see me, I will have acquired all the power I could ever imagine.”
O RLY? *snickers*
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“If she does that, she will have the ability to control everyone’s wills – in essence, the people of the Pokémon world will be no more than her wind-up dolls.”

“Oh, Lucian, that’s what you are to her anyway,” Diane said.
Yup, pretty true. Except that he's no doll. Hm...
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“You mean I really don’t have a free will?” Lucian asked.
We discussed in lectures if people in general have a free will...pretty interesting topic and, there's evidence that we DON't have a free will. =3
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Cynthia’s purposely kept her alive for some reason, a reason I haven’t been able to figure out.
Well, *I* know why. Because one of the author's friends wished so.
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Everyone will think about her in only positive ways – they won’t even have the ability to resist her. She won’t need to kill anyone anymore, since everyone will want to do whatever she says.
That...actually doesn't sound so bad.
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“We’re under Cynthia’s control too, just as you are,” Cynthia’s grandfather added.
How nice of you to admit it...
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“Lucian, you’re going to love the new world that Cynthia creates, at least for the few years that you’re still alive, before she kills you for no longer being useful to her as her love object,” Diane said. “Enjoy it while it lasts.”
...hm, Lucian isn't so old, so i think he could last quite a while. And men...well, they *can* always. 0=)
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The two stared at each other for about half a minute, before Cynthia finally spoke.

“Welcome, Arceus. Bow down before me.”
I'll repeat myself, but. MOST. EPIC. SCENE. E.V.E.R.
o,o Man, I need this to be drawn. Right now. Too cool for words. Very much too cool. o,o

SmashBrony November 18th, 2009 6:19 PM

That shows just how weak-minded everyone is in CPF's story...
(No offense towards my buddy, CPF.)
I'd like to see Cynthia try to control me!
It'll be funny to see the almighty Cynthia fail so badly...
NONE WILL EVER CONTROL ME, FOR I AM WHO I AM!!!
& I DECIDE FOR ME SELF WHO I AM!!!
GWA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!

Psychic*Absol November 22nd, 2009 9:32 AM

@Stoney Keep it a bit quieter, will ya? XD We don't need font 12 or whatever, except if we're *really* mad at each other. XD
And, yes, everyone except Cynthia herself AND SABRINA *shot* is weak-minded in the fic. 0=) And I bet she would be able to control you. 0=)

*nods* Review time, isn't it?
Title: ...today on your home channel: How to scare off your friendly neighbour psychic Absol with only a chapter title...

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“This can end peacefully, or it can end badly,” Arceus stated. “If I use Judgment on you, it will be the most painful experience a human being can possibly go through. You will wish for your own death upon feeling Judgment. I kindly suggest that you relinquish your powers, and abdicate your throne.”
Arceus is way too, hm, what's the word? Nice to her...
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“No human being would ever want to feel Judgment,” Arceus said.

“I know,” Cynthia responded.

“So why do you request it?” Arceus asked.

“It’s all part of my plan,” Cynthia said.
*glares*
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“This must be a surprise attack,” Karen stated.
O RLY?!?!
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“But this is Cynthia we’re dealing with here!” Sabrina cautioned. “She has to know we’re coming!”
Agreed.
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“So we surprise her by sending in only one person against her,” Karen added. “Once she thinks only one person is attacking her, the rest of us barge in and go after her.”
Doubt that works.
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If you don’t believe in yourself, you’ll never win,” Karen said.
I don't think this is a case of believing in yourself, but being suicidal...
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“I’ll go in first, but promise me that you won’t get scared and run away. There’s no way I can beat her by myself.”
Bad idea, very bad idea.
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“Sabrina, I just knocked out cold all of your friends, in case you were wondering.”
Not killed them? >>
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“No matter what, I refuse to bow down to you,” she said.
*claps hands*
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“I have the power to transfer any pain to any other human being I wish.
*suspicious* She didn't have before...
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The reason you have come here is to take me out of power, but in reality your purpose is to give me the ultimate power.
Who says so?
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“You are the very personification of evil,” Arceus stated. “You must be stopped.”
...hm...
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“But you can’t stop me,” Cynthia replied. “Is that your only attack?”

Arceus did not answer.

“I suppose it is,” Cynthia stated.
Technically, no. *looks up on bulbapedia*Seismic Toss, Cosmic Power, Natural Gift, Punishment, Gravity, Earth Power, Hyper Voice, Extreme Speed, Refresh, Future Sight, Recover (!!!), Hyper Beam and Perishment. So, no, Judgement is not its only attack.
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“What are you crying for?”
I hope this is sarcasm...
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They continued shooting their powers at each other, but neither was able to connect with the other.
*shakes head* It's funny and crazy at the same time.
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“You can stop time… you have the powers of Dialga!” Arceus exclaimed.
--> Yet Arceus is not affected by them. And there's still Celebi, who can travel through time.
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“Is that so?” Cynthia asked. “Then how come it seems to be that I am beating you?”
Beating?!?! Ehm, the match seems to very even right now.
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“At what expense?” Cynthia asked. “Would you destroy the world if that was necessary?”
...hm...I wouldn't mind...0=)
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“I wouldn’t let you kill anyone who I don’t want to die
Doubt that she can keep Arceus from killing people, just as Arceus can't keep her from killing.
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“No way!” Lorelei shouted. “We can’t let Sabrina die!”
You go, girl! Sorta...
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She reached out to Sabrina, before noticing that Sabrina had lost both of her hands. This caused her to shriek.
Would be my reaction, too. Only that I might faint.
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“Don’t worry, I’ll kill her later,”
As if.
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Because if Arceus could not defeat Cynthia, no one could.
Don't worry, fifth generation legendaries will take care of her.

Crazy Packers Fan November 22nd, 2009 4:36 PM

So, what did you think of what happened to Sabrina? You kind of skipped over that part. Surely you have something to say about that. I mean, it's not every chapter that someone loses their hands. It's a permanent problem for her.

And of course Cynthia's never shown her ability to transfer pain to others, because she's never had an attack successfully hit her. She decided to save it until now, and enact the ultimate punishment on her rival.

I was actually planning even worse for Sabrina... I spared her a little.

SmashBrony November 22nd, 2009 5:03 PM

BAH!!!
Have ya not noticed my name?
I'M THE ROCK THAT OTHERS BUILD THEIR FAITH UPON!!!(This is the meaning of the name Stoney, I belive...)
Of course Cynthia ain't gonna control me, for I'll NEVER let my friends down!
SO BRING IT, YA GODDESS WANNA-BE!!! (Referring to Cynthia)
You can break my bones, rend my flesh, & even kill me, but you cannot defeat me!
(How is this? Well, to defeat me, I must submit to them... But I won't!
Therefore, they can kill me, but they cannot defeat me!)
Oh, & good job, CPF!
Even fights are the best ones!

Psychic*Absol November 23rd, 2009 9:30 AM

@CPF I skipped over that part for a reason. My stomach wouldn't take a more detailed review....
Nevermind that I have deep trouble imagening her without hands....

...I'll buy that explanation for now, but I'm still suspicious. >> Your Cynthia is way too overpowered for my taste.

...gee, thanks a lot. >> What were you going to to, cut off her legs, too? *hopes she isn't giving him ideas*

@Stoney XD!!! Hey, read the fic first before you say anything! You haven't even *seen* the power of CPF's Cynthia. And my reviews do not reflect that properly.
And when you've read it, you can review it. =3

SmashBrony November 23rd, 2009 5:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Psychic*Absol (Post 5344202)
@CPF I skipped over that part for a reason. My stomach wouldn't take a more detailed review....
Nevermind that I have deep trouble imagening her without hands....

...I'll buy that explanation for now, but I'm still suspicious. >> Your Cynthia is way too overpowered for my taste.

...gee, thanks a lot. >> What were you going to to, cut off her legs, too? *hopes she isn't giving him ideas*

@Stoney XD!!! Hey, read the fic first before you say anything! You haven't even *seen* the power of CPF's Cynthia. And my reviews do not reflect that properly.
And when you've read it, you can review it. =3

True, I don't know her powers...
But I know the strength of my spirit & soul!
Especially if I'm trying to defend the ones I care about!

Crazy Packers Fan December 1st, 2009 8:51 AM

Sorry I haven't gotten around to writing the next chapter yet, I know you're just dying to see what happens to Sabrina... and for that matter, Cynthia & Arceus, which will be resolved in the next chapter, while Sabrina has to wait a while.

Psychic*Absol December 3rd, 2009 11:23 AM

I'm dieing to know what friggin happened to Sabrina in PokeWars. >< Is she dead? Is she alive? ARGH!!!

Hm, remind me, how many chapters are left? If Arceus&Cynthia is already resolved, it can't be so many anymore...

And I friggin still need to finish my fanfic. << I've been working on that final chapter for weeks now...

Crazy Packers Fan December 5th, 2009 10:49 AM

3 chapters to go, and the Cynthia vs. Arceus battle ends in the next chapter. If I ever get around to writing it... just joking, I will, but my life's been kind of crazy the last couple weeks. You can rest assured that Sabrina will survive, and I'll find a way to "fix" her.

Psychic*Absol December 9th, 2009 12:03 PM

*sniffs* Someone...anyone...comfort me. ;_; It's semi-official now, Sabrina's dead in PokeWars. ....NOOOOOOOOO!!! ;_____________________; *doesn't want to read fic anymore*...hurry with your chapter, I need something to cheer me up. Though I dunno if Arceus vs. Cynthia will do that, but I'm desperate right now.

*sniffs* It's just not fair...such a great fic and then...he has to kill my favourite...argh. >.<

On the bright site..I'm as good as finished with my fic. Only ~1 page, I think, and that's a beautiful romantic farewell scene and then the epilogue.
On the not the bright site...Zammy apparently hasn't finished beta-reading yet. >>

Crazy Packers Fan December 9th, 2009 8:13 PM

I don't even know what PokeWars is, so I can't comfort you. I thought my fic was the one most important to you! And because it is, I can't kill Sabrina. Although I've tortured her beyond belief...

I can't wait to see your fic. Plus I'm really hoping to finish up my fic very soon. And then, you'll have the rest of your life to work on the future fic. That has to be written sometime in our lifetimes, to make everything complete.

Oh, and some new LEGO pics for you:
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/Cynthia003.jpg
Queen Cynthia on her throne
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/Cynthia001.jpg
The hand-less Sabrina bowing down before Queen Cynthia
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/Cynthia005.jpg
Another angle of the same scene
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/Cynthia006.jpg
My favorite; Queen Cynthia with a lightsaber, ready to kill Sabrina once and for all

SmashBrony December 10th, 2009 5:29 PM

GWA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!
Lego makes EVERYTHING funny!
HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!
& I've not yet started to write...
I've been busy having my butt shot full of holes on Halo 3...
Ouch... anyways...
all hail the queen, Cynthia...
not that I'm going to...

Psychic*Absol December 13th, 2009 10:46 AM

PokeWars is a very good fanfic on fanfiction.net (and Cynthia hasn't even appeared there yet!) and sorry to be blunt, your fanfic isn't the most important one. At least for me. >> Can't be, because you've tortured Sabrina way too many times by now. What you've admitted by now. Good boy.

Still writing the final chapter, which will most likely be the final chapter for a while, unless I can be bothered to write the epilogue. XD The final chapter should be a romantic one, heh. =3

*raises eyebrow at Cynthia's throne* Okay, it's lego, yet, still...looks a bit weird to me. Sabrina rather looks as if she's kissing the floor than bowing. XD I didn't even see at first that her hands were missing, didn't know this was possible for lego. XD And Cynthia with a lightsaber, wtf? Even a red one! XD!!!

Crazy Packers Fan December 13th, 2009 6:59 PM

I'm sure that's exactly where Cynthia wants Sabrina, flat on her face. Either there or in a grave. And slicing off her head with a lightsaber would be a way to do just that! (Notice it's a red lightsaber - of course Cynthia would have the evil color!)

Cynthia's throne was put together in about 5 minutes with whatever pieces I had lying around. It could have been much better, I just didn't feel like putting in the effort. It's two bricks, two yellow chairs and one black chair. That's it. There are pieces that make good thrones, I know back from the days when Sabrina used to sit on one.

Oh, haven't you ever heard of those days? Have I ever told you about Queen Sabrina and Princess Erika, Queen Jasmine and Princess Whitney? And have you ever heard of Sabrina's sisters? If you haven't, there's a lot you still don't know about my Pokemon fandom - this stuff I talk about is almost 10 years old now.

SmashBrony December 16th, 2009 7:10 PM

& to think I still have not begun to write my fan-fic...
I wonder if I will...

Psychic*Absol December 18th, 2009 9:49 AM

@CPF Yeah, yeah, yeah, yada, yada...>> I know what your Cynthia wants. At least kinda. And it starts to bore me. She doesn't really have a lot of goals in her life, now, has she? >> And I *did* notice the colour of the light saber. I always wanted a violet one for myself. =3

Ts, ts, ts, bad boy, not putting any effort in Queen Cynthia's throne. She could have you executed for that, don't you know?

XD Nope, you haven't. Interesting idea, though I can't see Sabrina with any siblings. Ten years ago, I just started to get into the pokemon fandom, never even *thinking* about the internet back then.

Ah, well, the review.
I *know* the title from somewhere, just don't ask me from where. o,o
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Ultimately there is no human who can compete with me.
Human, yeah. Is she human anymore?
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“I cannot understand a human like you, Cynthia,” Arceus stated.
Ya're not the only one...
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Good and evil, that’s all relative. Once I triumph and become the queen of the Pokémon world, I shall decide what is good and evil, right and wrong. Evil will be anything that is against my will, good will be anything that is in my favor.
Mh, in all that madness, there is some philosophy behind this.
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I am the only human who matters;
Who says so? God?*laughs*
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“I already have eternal youth,” Cynthia stated. “No one can kill me.”
Eternal youth =/= eternal life. Important. She'll die young. *LOL*
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“It is not my place to kill any human,” Arceus stated.
O rly?
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putting on a show people could watch from miles away.
*wants popcorn*
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“What is your fascination with this Sabrina?” Arceus asked. “I don’t understand – how can you be so obsessed with the downfall of one human being?”
Hehehe...as a blackvelvetshipper, I interprete fascination and obsession a tad bit differently than you.
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My goal was never to kill anyone, but it was Sabrina’s fault that others have had to die for my cause.
Uhm, your argumentation fails. Sabrina didn't have any *choice*, free will, as you may say it, too kill your parents- she was being controlled. While you weren't controleld at any point and you had the free choice to kill or not to kill. Or to put Sabrina in prison.
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In essence, it is her fault for anything I do that others may consider wrong. All the guilt belongs on her shoulders. All the blood is on her head. She, not me, is ultimately at fault.”
Dito. That's bs. It's like saying not the murderer is at fault, but his parents, or the people that produce weapons- they MADE him shoot people, he had no choice! He would have never killed anyone if there were no weapons! Ban scissors, they kill people! XD
Really, CPF, you make Cynthia look like someone who's WAY too afraid to admit her own crimes and, to quote Arceus, wants to put the blame on someone else. >>;;;;
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The blood of my parents is a permanent stain that lives on her and any of her descendants forever. That daughter of hers – she bears the guilt for my parents’ deaths as well. As will any children that she has.
...I know you're Christian, but bringing (indirectly) Original Sin into this is....ehm, not such a good idea. It makes Cynthia look even stupider.
*hides* I did say I'm agnostic, right?
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Why could you not have been the better woman?
Which would have changed what? *snickers* And who's the better woman, Sabrina?
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I have spared her family countless times. I have had the opportunity to kill her husband, kill her parents – but I have chosen to allow them to live.
Your Cynthia doesn't make much sense here. First she curses Sabrina's whole family, then she praises herself for not killing them. Ehm, what? Any idea what you DO want, girl? >>
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“Your idea of revenge is bizarre,” Arceus stated. “You have taken revenge on hundreds of innocent people, yet spared the family of the one you hate so badly. I can never understand a human being like you.”
Arceus, I agree with you. o,o
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“Then we bow down before her majesty,” Karen replied.
And pray that we live to see the next day.
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“You’ll have defeated your greatest foe yet,” Arceus said. “Surely that is of some achievement to you.”

“Absolutely not!” Cynthia yelled.
*raises eyebrow* What?
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“Cyrus?” Cynthia asked.

“Giratina?” Arceus asked.
O,O *mouth hangs open wide* And I wondered why Giratina hadn't appeared yet! (Had it?)
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Cynthia’s smile disappeared, realizing that she would now have to fight two legendary Pokémon.
Arceus's as good as defeated, so, it's at most 1 1/2...
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The only thing that remained was her eternal youth – as neither Arceus nor Giratina had the power to change time.
Mh, Dialga has...and Arceus *created* Dialga....Nevermind that there's also Celebi...
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“The queen is dead! The queen is dead!” Karen shouted.
Ding dong, the witch is dead...*snickers*
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Finally, the reign of Cynthia is over.
*mysterious voice* For now...

Crazy Packers Fan December 18th, 2009 11:52 AM

Okay, so a few points on this:

-I don't know what "original sin" is, nor do I know what that has to do with Christianity. Obviously Cynthia is pure evil, so what she says does not reflect what I think.

-Cynthia's not stupid, she's just so twisted that she completely ignores any facts and changes anything to make herself look good. Remember near the beginning of the story when she still felt bad for killing people? She's completely different now... and she's rationalized that it's Sabrina's fault for everything. She just hates Sabrina that much.

-Okay, I'll admit it, even though I'm not really a BlackVelvetShipper... I really like the whole idea of Cynthia being in control of Sabrina. That's probably why my story obsesses over it and why I spend so much time on it. If I were a shipper, you know which one of the two I'd have as the dominant one. It's been fun writing an entire story about Cynthia just destroying Sabrina. And it makes you wonder why Cynthia hasn't killed Sabrina...

-Fun stuff upcoming in the next chapter, including a love triangle (even though again, I don't condone threesomes) and someone finds out about two relatives that they never knew they had. A certain guy is going to have three women permanently attached to him (not physically!). Yet again, Cynthia will get the better of Sabrina, and show Sabrina the ultimate disrespect. Sabrina will get use of some parts of her body back but lose something else. Oh, and I sort of need your summary before I can write it.

SmashBrony December 18th, 2009 7:17 PM

CPF, Dude, you're christian?
SO AM I, BROTHER!!!
Anyways... do either of you want me to write my fan-fic?
If not, I had other ideas...

Psychic*Absol December 20th, 2009 11:38 AM

@Stoney Yeah, he is. Seems as if I'm the only agnostic here...oh, well. XD And I've said it several times now, I'm going to take a break from fanfiction soon, so don't expect me to write anything soon.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5401667)
-I don't know what "original sin" is, nor do I know what that has to do with Christianity. Obviously Cynthia is pure evil, so what she says does not reflect what I think.

Well, since that has been explained...I agree. ^^;;; I'm sorry, I made a mistake I tried to avoid myself- confusing the characters with the author. Sorry.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5401667)
-Cynthia's not stupid, she's just so twisted that she completely ignores any facts and changes anything to make herself look good. Remember near the beginning of the story when she still felt bad for killing people? She's completely different now... and she's rationalized that it's Sabrina's fault for everything. She just hates Sabrina that much.

Well, okay, she's not *stupid*, but she still has a very twisted sense of morality. >> One that doesn't make sense for any rational people. Hate doesn't help there much, in the end, she makes herself look stupid again. She is not stupid, but she makes look herself like that.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5401667)
-Okay, I'll admit it, even though I'm not really a BlackVelvetShipper... I really like the whole idea of Cynthia being in control of Sabrina. That's probably why my story obsesses over it and why I spend so much time on it. If I were a shipper, you know which one of the two I'd have as the dominant one.

*g* Well, the way I picture BlackVelvetShipping is similiarly *rough*, but I don't see any of them as the dominant one. For me, both are equally strong. I originally planned a sense for them to meet and fight verbally in Spring's Revenge, but this scene was cut in favour of being used in the sequel. >.<
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5401667)
It's been fun writing an entire story about Cynthia just destroying Sabrina. And it makes you wonder why Cynthia hasn't killed Sabrina...

Because you would loose one of your readers, then?
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5401667)
--Fun stuff upcoming in the next chapter, including a love triangle (even though again, I don't condone threesomes) and someone finds out about two relatives that they never knew they had.

Well...obviously Will here. >>
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5401667)
A certain guy is going to have three women permanently attached to him (not physically!).

Again...ehm, Will? But who are the three women? o,O There are the twins, then Roxy, Sabrina and Karen, so...eh, at least four? Or what?
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5401667)
Sabrina will get use of some parts of her body back but lose something else.

Loose what? She didn't completely lose Will, but then, I noticed that together with her hands, she might have lost her wedding band...

Crazy Packers Fan December 20th, 2009 9:47 PM

The third woman - not really a threat to Will's love but one who formerly tried to steal him - will be revealed in the final chapter, and you can probably guess who that is. Plus we'll assume that Sabrina took off her wedding band before going into battle - maybe I'll include that in the final chapter. Of course as I've written in other places, you seem to have hated that last chapter and I feel all the worse because of it.

Psychic*Absol December 21st, 2009 10:50 AM

I won't make any more guesses until my lawyer comes back- I was wrong with my assumptions of who has the kids (well, semi-wrong, it seems), so I won't make any wrong guesses again. XD
I wonder why she should do that...I doubt she expected her hands to be cut off. Either way, the wedding band would be lost now..side story, maybe? ^.~
And again, I did not hate the last chapter. Cynthia's cruelty was just a bit too much for me to take.

Crazy Packers Fan December 21st, 2009 11:33 AM

I thought about stealing your title of "Getting Away With Murder" for this chapter, but I decided against it, plus I like the song "Rehab." Not even Cynthia thought she'd get away with it - and certainly not her poor sister, who signed her life away.

I have to be honest, I had been looking forward to writing Cynthia's spit for a while - of all the things I planned, that had been set in stone for a while. It was so Cynthia.

Psychic*Absol December 22nd, 2009 10:08 AM

Oh, oh, this was another thing I noticed (and would probably have mentioned did I have the time to review yet). That last (?) sentence. Oh, yes, I noticed it, pretty obviously for me. =3 And I liked it.
Mh, I kinda have the feeling Cynthia didn't believe in herself being spared, so to say, because she *was* kind of drugged. Though I got that only later. You should have explained it a bit earlier or shown more details, dunno. It wasn't as obvious for the reader as it should have been, imo.

....hm, I wonder if I should add something to Spring's Revenge now...though that wouldn't just fit in now. And it wouldn't fit *my* Cynthia. Like you said, it's so Cynthia. Your Cynthia.

Crazy Packers Fan December 22nd, 2009 10:28 AM

So, I'll ask again: a review coming anytime soon?

Well, I don't like to make things completely obvious to the reader, I'm the type of writer who likes things to be suspenseful, and here you had to pay attention to what Lucian was thinking to know that Cynthia had been drugged.

What are you planning on adding to your fic?

Psychic*Absol December 25th, 2009 11:42 AM

=3 Today.
I'm incredibly sorry that it took so long, but before Christmas, I had no time, and over Christmas, well, I had no time again. XD

=3 You surely manage to surprise the reader. There were many things I did not expect, but more of that in the review. XD
Yet, since it was only Lucian *thinking* that she was drugged, we don't have definitive proof.

I was thinking about adding that spitting scene in some way or another. But since Sabrina and Cynthia don't meet directly again (hehehe *evil grin*) that will have to be postponed until the sequel.

Crazy Packers Fan December 25th, 2009 9:21 PM

We have proof through me, the author. Now since you know the author personally you have inside information that others don't get, but since no one outside Saint Kitts & Nevis reads my story, that's okay. (Seriously, according to ff.net, I get a bunch of readers from Saint Kitts & Nevis, wherever that is.)

The spitting scene is only allowed if Sabrina or one of her family members is getting spit on. After all, Sabrina's the "good" one; she wouldn't be spitting on anyone.

Psychic*Absol December 26th, 2009 11:37 AM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5422676)
We have proof through me, the author. Now since you know the author personally you have inside information that others don't get, but since no one outside Saint Kitts & Nevis reads my story, that's okay. (Seriously, according to ff.net, I get a bunch of readers from Saint Kitts & Nevis, wherever that is.)

Mh, well, okay, proof through the author is well enough, I guess. Ehm...so Cynthia was really drugged then. And how? XD With what? LOL!!!!

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5422676)
The spitting scene is only allowed if Sabrina or one of her family members is getting spit on. After all, Sabrina's the "good" one; she wouldn't be spitting on anyone.

My fic. My decision. Not yours. *I* decide who gets spitted on by whom. 0=) (Did I every say my Sabrina's the good one? I didn't. 0=) )

Crazy Packers Fan December 27th, 2009 6:20 AM

That will remain a mystery.

Honestly, it seems out of character for Sabrina to spit on anyone. Evil Cynthia, however, definitely in character.

Psychic*Absol December 27th, 2009 10:33 AM

Okay. =3

Again, we're not talking about your Sabrina and your Cynthia, but mine. And you don't even know what *my* Sabrina has done so far (never mind that you don't know what my Cynthia has done, either). Poor Karen, I just say, poor Karen...0=)
My Cynthia has more style in huminilating her enemies, I think. 0=)

Crazy Packers Fan December 27th, 2009 1:35 PM

What do you mean, "style in humiliating her enemies"? So far I haven't seen Sabrina even get humiliated, and she is Cynthia's enemy, right? My Cynthia has humiliated the living daylights out of Sabrina, and she's all the more awesome for it.

By the way, the epilogue is coming soon, and of course the final review of the story will be required out of you. You'll find out Giselle's daughter's name (starts with a "S"), how Sabrina will get by in life in her state, and the bizarre, bizarre, BIZARRE lifestyle of Roxanne.

Psychic*Absol December 28th, 2009 11:02 AM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5426251)
What do you mean, "style in humiliating her enemies"?

You'll see. =3 You know, physical pain is nothing against psychical pain and that's something my Cynthia knows very well.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5426251)
So far I haven't seen Sabrina even get humiliated, and she is Cynthia's enemy, right?

MAJOR misunderstanding here, major misunderstanding, but I get why you see it that way, you're biased. 0=) Right now, the main 'enemy' of my Cynthia in my fic (Spring's Revenge) is Lance/the Indigo League and partly Lucian. Sabrina is only one toy in that game, and right now, Sabrina isn't her main enemy.
(And she will never be directly...rather the opposite...*coughs* ;-) )
And it's Lance and Lucian Cynthia has been huminilating. Psychical. She doesn't get her hands dirty with blood, even though she could.
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My Cynthia has humiliated the living daylights out of Sabrina, and she's all the more awesome for it.

Well, can't disagree here.
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By the way, the epilogue is coming soon, and of course the final review of the story will be required out of you.

...required of me? >> What am I, your personal review pet?!?
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5426251)
You'll find out Giselle's daughter's name (starts with a "S"),

Ehm, was it Swedish oder Norwegian? ...forgot...never mind.
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how Sabrina will get by in life in her state,

I hope she does well. >> And by *well* I do not mean getting even more trouble.
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and the bizarre, bizarre, BIZARRE lifestyle of Roxanne.

*imagines Roxanne sitting in a cave all by her own, praying to Arceus*...when you say bizarre, it has to be bizarre.

Crazy Packers Fan December 28th, 2009 11:52 AM

Oh, I see. Your Cynthia and Lucian aren't married, though, are they? But I bet Lucian's so desperate for her that he takes the torture and humiliation anyway... that's what I like to see out of Lucian.

Trust me when I say that I couldn't go on writing without your reviews... you mean a lot to me, P*A.

It's Norwegian... a very cute name.

Roxanne is bizarre... even more so that you imagine.

Psychic*Absol December 28th, 2009 1:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5428377)
Oh, I see. Your Cynthia and Lucian aren't married, though, are they?

Nope, as of right now, they aren't. And no, there's no hint hidden in this statement.
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But I bet Lucian's so desperate for her that he takes the torture and humiliation anyway... that's what I like to see out of Lucian.

*Your* Lucian. Ever thought of mine? He still lives, despite Cynthia cheating on him with Lance AND attacking him while drunk. And there will be...ah, not telling. 0=)
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5428377)
Trust me when I say that I couldn't go on writing without your reviews... you mean a lot to me, P*A.

^.^ Thanks. I guess I'll review again for the epilogue. =3 Can't say that I'll post it so soon after it's published, though.
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It's Norwegian... a very cute name.

If it's not on behindthename, it's not a name!XDWill judge it when I see it, kay? ^^
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Roxanne is bizarre... even more so that you imagine.

...well, she *was* already bizarre now with her cult around Arceus, I guess that can only get worse.

Crazy Packers Fan December 28th, 2009 1:24 PM

Ooh, I like the hint! They have to be married. Of course, Cynthia cheated on him much worse in my story and even forced a divorce and brought him to near-suicide. And she tramples on him as a footstool.

I can't wait for you to see what Roxanne's like now... it would be interesting to see her end up in The Golden Prince in this new lifestyle.

Psychic*Absol December 28th, 2009 2:24 PM

0=) Hint? Which hint? Hehehe...wait until the epilogue, you'll see what I meant. XD
My Lucian has to forgive my Cynthia for what has happened to let the marriage happen, and for all we you know, Cynthia *could* stay with Lance. WikiErrorShipping is too much of a great name not to use it.

New lifestyle? oO Now you got me interested...

Crazy Packers Fan December 28th, 2009 2:36 PM

WikiErrorShipping is an error. Lucian x Cynthia is the OTP for Cynthia (sorry, Cyrus).

This new lifestyle is totally out there, so to speak. She and her boyfriend/fiance/husband will be quite possibly more insane than you think Cynthia is.

Important links for the final chapter:
2010 Pokemon League Tournament bracket
Synneva's appearance

SmashBrony January 3rd, 2010 4:01 PM

I've not been here in a while...
What'd I miss?
(not that I was ever up to speed...)

Psychic*Absol January 15th, 2010 9:53 AM

Heheh, no need to worry, Stoney, I was away for some time, too. CPF's Avatar scared me away. I doubt you missed anything aside from CPF finishing his fanfic and me finishign my fanfic as well (only in theory, no chapters posted yet). Mh, no, nothing I can remember. Just wanted to greet anyone here. =3 *flies off to other club*

Crazy Packers Fan January 15th, 2010 12:55 PM

I screamed out a "YES!" when I saw you finally posted here. No review, but at least you posted. Now just get to work on that review so I can know what your final thoughts are of my story!

Wyyrlokk January 18th, 2010 8:41 AM

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I screamed out a "YES!" when I saw you finally posted here.

Mh, I doubt you will do this for me too... xD Anyway. I just fixed my internet problems, and hopefully they don't return. Now there's only the lack of time that is still remaining...

Psychic*Absol January 19th, 2010 11:06 AM

*screams a YES when she sees Wyrrlokk returning* XD Hey, I'm happy to see you again. ^^ You missed...um, nothing? o,O There were a few new episodes with Cynthia, yet she didn't do much. Team Galactic plot and stuff.
Ah, talking about plot...you missed some chapters of my fanfic, too. XD I finished it, yet Zammy is still beta-reading the seventh chapter part dunnowhatone, so there are at least three chapters left. Plus the epilogue. ^^

Crazy Packers Fan January 21st, 2010 1:16 AM

Sorry, Wyyrlokk, I meant no offense to anyone else in the club when I got excited to see P*A return. I was hoping for P*A to review the final chapter of my fanfic, which was why I was so excited. I think I'm going to stop from posting until she does review that final chapter.

Wyyrlokk January 21st, 2010 8:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 5489364)
Sorry, Wyyrlokk, I meant no offense to anyone else in the club when I got excited to see P*A return.

No, I haven't seen it as a offense. My comment was just a joke. I'm just happy to be back with you all. Don't be so serious... ^^"

Psychic*Absol January 21st, 2010 10:50 AM

*shakes head* You guys...0=)

Anyway, I couldn't do much today, as it's my birthday...*waits for anyone to notice*....*no one does* ....T.T
*hides away*
To stay on topic: It's CPF's Cynthia's birthday, too. What a coincidence... (and it's the birthday of my OC...that is NOT a coincidence, though XD)

Crazy Packers Fan January 21st, 2010 4:43 PM

Happy birthday Cynthia... anyone else?

Just joking, happy birthday P*A, I totally forgot, that's my fault. I'll try to get you an autograph from Sabrina's VA for your birthday.

And now I'm going to stop posting until P*A posts that review.

SmashBrony January 23rd, 2010 5:06 PM

Welcome back, Wyyrlokk!
& I MUST write my fan-fic...
Hope I'm good...

Crazy Packers Fan January 29th, 2010 7:27 PM

Okay, so I'm back to posting. Not much to say on Cynthia here except for a couple projects. Since I'm stuck on my novel, I'm planning on starting that Survivor fic AND -maybe- writing a sixth story to my series... Something like "Sabrina strikes back."

Psychic*Absol January 31st, 2010 10:40 AM

Like I said in the other thread, I took a short break from studying to post. XD As expected, I didn't write much in the meantime (except for Math formulas, but that doesn't count as writing, meh...) I did start, though, a short story featuring Cynthia and Hunter J and LOTS of ArtemisShipping hints, but it's nowhere near posting worth length and quality. ><

@CPF...Mewtwo strikes back was my favourite movie. 0=) And still is.

Crazy Packers Fan February 5th, 2010 4:29 AM

Speaking of writing, when are you going to post the rest of your story? I've been waiting a while now.

Psychic*Absol February 8th, 2010 10:54 AM

Finished the story is (has been actually for quite a while now), but beta-read it is not. >.< Ask my beta-reader you must. *Yoda-ish mood*

I hope I can contact Zammy soon (he's online right now...I hope...o,o) and ask him if he has it ready or not. And if not, I'll see if I'll just post it un-beta-readed (lol, is that a word? XD) to finally end this misery. XD!!!

Crazy Packers Fan February 9th, 2010 8:42 PM

Oh, forgot to put this up, a piece of fanart I got:
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/QueenCynthiaandSabrina.jpg
Cynthia and Sabrina in their rightful places.

Psychic*Absol February 10th, 2010 12:37 PM

*prints out, cuts out Sabrina and throws away part that has Cynthia on it* Sorry, but that's the only way it works for me. 0=)

Besides, Cynthia looks way too happy and Sabrina in HG/SS clothes has not appeared in my your fic yet.

Crazy Packers Fan February 11th, 2010 10:39 AM

Hey, don't insult the artist. She's a long-time friend of mine. I personally like the fact that Cynthia seems to be getting lots of enjoyment out of Sabrina kneeling before her. Although personally I was hoping the pic would have Sabrina on both knees with her head bowed low. Maybe another artist will be able to get that for me.

And that's where both Cynthia and Sabrina belong, and you know it very well!

Psychic*Absol February 11th, 2010 11:21 AM

I'm not insulting the artist. If it's anything, I'm insulting the one who thought up this stuff. XD!!! If we go by canon, ANY canon, this is never going to happen. No version of Cynthia is evil, no version of her is power-hungry, no version of her wants to be queen. No official version at least. >> *is getting sick of this discussion* If we go by anything *canon*, Sabrina could beat Cynthia 'cause she's psychic and Pokemon-wise, Cynthia could beat Sabrina since she's the champion.
Nevermind again, you're not listening, I know.

Crazy Packers Fan February 11th, 2010 11:30 AM

Who cares about canon? Canon's no fun. If we go by canon... ugh. Ash Ketchum has to be taken seriously in that case. Fanon is where it's at! And the only person to ever write stories featuring both Cynthia and Sabrina on fanfiction.net says that Cynthia's the queen and Sabrina's there to be tortured by her. (That's my only claim to fame.)

Psychic*Absol February 12th, 2010 10:50 AM

Sure, canon is often no fun (canon denied me the possibility of Sabrina appearing again during Kanto BF >>), yet canon is something the fans can agree on without letting their weirdest fantasies take over. And just because the only story on ff.net says so...yeah, right. In that case, read the only fic with Sabrina&Will. ;-) If that were the truth, Sabrina&Will would never be a pair.
(Or the few fics that center around Will.)

Besides, without canon, we would never get to see animated Cynthia *going back on-topic, snicker*.


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