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Crazy Packers Fan April 21st, 2009 9:26 AM

No, it must be 46 chapters! No more, no less! I'm very strict about that!

Interesting plot point... may I ask what type of accident? And wouldn't Diane be like 30+ as compared to Roxette's 18?

Psychic*Absol April 21st, 2009 9:59 AM

XD Well, in that case, make the chapters longer or shorter, just as you wish to make just 46 chapters.
Or use parts...*hides*.

No and yes. XD No, you may not know what kind of accident, and yes, she will be 30+.

Crazy Packers Fan April 21st, 2009 10:05 AM

Okay, time for some teasing over what's going to happen... in the anime!

Cyrus bows to Queen Cynthia
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/CyrusxCynthia.jpg

Psychic*Absol April 21st, 2009 10:17 AM

And he does in your fanfic, too.
Argh, CPF, stop, just two days until the first Galactic two parter airs here! I don't wanna be spoilered!
Okay, I have seen it anyway (SHIRONA!!!...*coughs*), so...XD

Crazy Packers Fan April 21st, 2009 10:23 AM

I only saw the first half. Actually I only saw half of the first half, fast-forwarding through any scenes that did not include Cynthia or Cyrus. And I cheered loudly when Brock's Pokemon nearly got killed. I always cheer against the twerps.

Psychic*Absol April 21st, 2009 10:41 AM

I 'saw' both episodes, but in such a bad quality that it can hardly be called watching. XD So I'm impatiently waiting for the episodes to air here. =3 Let's hope my recorder hangs in, because I'm at university when they air and I don't want to ditch school for them *hides*...what, I don't like Cynthia as much as I like Sabrina. =3.
>> That scene was violent. I liked it, but not in the sense that I would actually cheer for that Toxicroak (right name, right? XD).

Crazy Packers Fan April 21st, 2009 10:43 AM

You're still allowed to like Cynthia even if you're a Sabrina fan first, just as I'm still allowed to like Sabrina even though I've become a Cynthia fan foremost. Although one must wonder why I would make my favorite character such an evil, cruel villain...

Psychic*Absol April 22nd, 2009 9:07 AM

I will ALWAYS stay a Sabrina fan. Or I will at least remember her dearly. ^^ I have spend too much being a fan to just forget her.
Because Cynthia IS evil? Well, maybe because it gives her more character, more depth, more...something.
BTW...Cynthia's next episodes are airing tomorrow, did I mention this? B-) I'll probably be freaked out a bit tomorrow, and, if you're lucky, I'll have something for you...0=)

Crazy Packers Fan April 23rd, 2009 10:59 AM

I hope you saw the episodes today... I assume they're the Galactic two-parter, only in German.

Psychic*Absol April 23rd, 2009 11:16 AM

I'll be watching it in five...four...three...(and so on) minutes, as soon as my recorder has gone back to the beginning of the episode.
Yes, in German. Sorry, I would have loved to show you Cynthia's German voice, but the channel hasn't uploaded the episode yet and youtube is just as useless as usual regarding German episodes. >>

Crazy Packers Fan April 23rd, 2009 1:52 PM

That's okay, I wouldn't understand it anyway. Just please tell me it's better than her English voice, which is too high and nice-sounding.

Psychic*Absol April 24th, 2009 8:54 AM

Apparently, it takes them a few days to upload a video. Oo Maybe next Monday or so...
Ehehehe...no. Her German voice is high and friendly, too.^^ Maybe it sounds a bit more mature and older than the English one, but not by much.
Cynthia's grandma has a nice voice, though. I like her. ^.^

Crazy Packers Fan April 24th, 2009 11:06 AM

That's a shame. I wish for Cynthia to sound more like Lorelei/Prima, having a mature, mid-20's voice. She's just way too nice for me in the English episodes.

Psychic*Absol April 24th, 2009 12:08 PM

I don't know about Loreley's English voice, but I doubt hers and Cynthia's sound alike. Cynthia sounds way too young.
Ahm, review time.Title: I thought it would be obvious, yet, you surprised me there. You really did. Sabrina does not die. Yay?
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“Some queen you’ll be,” Diane muttered, as Lucian helped her up from the ground.
I find it interesting that it's Lucian who helps her up.
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“There was only one woman in this family chosen as royalty, and that was me,” Cynthia said. “You just were never cut out to be royalty.”
Hm, only one woman...what about the men?
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Diane simply sighed. “I wish you luck, Queen Sister,” she said.
Deep sarcasm, I suppose.
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Karen had managed to gather not only 100 or so Team Rocket members, but over a thousand Sinnoh citizens.
Oh, great team. Yet nothing against Cynthia. >>
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“I’m her sister, and I will defend her throne,” Diane stated. “You will all die!”
You know, she could turn against Cynthia and join forces with Karen, yet...
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The people began to be sucked inside as well, and they cried out in terror.
Death count rising and rising...
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“I’m the leader of this operation!” Karen yelled. “I give the orders!”
...just as usual...
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But you chose this ending, to kill your own people in death, so congratulations.
Even though she's wrong, I kinda like what Karen is saying here...
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“Cynthia, you’ll die!” Lucian screamed.

“That’s Queen Cynthia to you, boy,” Cynthia replied.
Even in such a scene, she's a queen-like as always.
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No person should be able to survive such an attack
...yet Cynthia survives. Yay....not. >>
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“Absolutely!” Karen exclaimed. “We have removed the biggest threat in the history of your land. Now you can all live in peace!”
Heheh, haven't we?
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“Though I believe new leadership for Sinnoh is in order…”
...why do I have the sudden feeling that the new queen will be a darkling as well?
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She then used every bit of power she had to swallow the giant beast right into the black hole that she had created.
...Cynthia, now killing legendaries...the very ones she loves in both the anime and the game..yep, great fic. XD!
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“I am now the most powerful woman in the world.”
...P*A not happy. Not happy at all.
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“You see, Lucian, I just swallowed the guardian of time into my body. I shall now never age, never grow old.
...I wouldn't mind this so much if it were just for her beauty to stay, yet, with all the powers that come with that...
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A girl opened her eyes, finding herself in an unknown place. She could not care less that she was completely lost. She was alive. And now she had an ability that she never knew she had before. Now she only hoped to use it, in a way that would be most satisfying.
Diane?
Other part of the review, the one with Sabrina, will be in the other club, as soon as I can post there again. ^^

Crazy Packers Fan April 24th, 2009 2:05 PM

So, what do you think? Cynthia now has the power of a legendary Pokemon. She has stopped time for herself, she has the ability to live forever (assuming no one kills her first). She will start making others do whatever she wants, more than ever before, as she will need to only wish for something to happen in order for it to come true. She has everything she wants now, right? Is there anyone or anything that could possibly stop her? Or is the rest of the fic simply going to be about Cynthia continuing to get her way?

Meanwhile, there's poor Lucian. The man's been through it all, and he's so humble by now that you wonder if he even cares about his own self anymore. What does Lucian truly want, and will he ever get it? Those questions are to be answered later. New chapter tomorrow, much Cynthia, no Sabrina.

Psychic*Absol April 24th, 2009 2:36 PM

Before you read this...beware, I may have been overcritical a bit here, I *love* your story, yet sometimes, I have to be a bit harsher. Please, don't think I hate your story or think you are a bad writer, no, I really don't.

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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4577782)
She has stopped time for herself, she has the ability to live forever.

Forever young comes to mind...at least this is something I like about her powers.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4577782)
(assuming no one kills her first).

Yes. Assuming no one kills her. Or nothing kills her.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4577782)
as she will need to only wish for something to happen in order for it to come true.

Now...first, if this is really what is happening right now, then you can nearly forget the story. >> In this case, there is nothing that can stop her anymore, really nothing, because she can simply make anything that displeases her disappear. I have never complained about Cynthia being overpowers before. Now I do.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4577782)
She has everything she wants now, right?

Assuming how you worded this... no.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4577782)
Or is the rest of the fic simply going to be about Cynthia continuing to get her way?

Hopefully, not, because then it is, allow me to be blunt. Boring. Nothing really new happening anymore, aside from Cynthia finding now ways to torture people and have fun. Nope, not what I call an amusing read.
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4577782)
What does Lucian truly want, and will he ever get it?

I guess he just wants Cynthia's love, and will he ever get it? I don't know, his wife lost her sanity chapters ago...
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Originally Posted by Crazy Packers Fan (Post 4577782)
New chapter tomorrow, much Cynthia, no Sabrina.

Me not likes, but okay, me it biased.

BTW...okay, now it feels selfish to ask this after all this criticism...can you spare the legendaries? (Darkrai and Giratina) I might been them for later. 0=)

Crazy Packers Fan April 25th, 2009 5:51 AM

From what you've written, it appears that you have no guess as to what's going to happen next, and that's better for me. You seem to believe the rest of the story's going to be about Cynthia getting whatever she wants. In other words, you have no idea where the plot's going next. (So the stuff that you're critical of just isn't going to happen.)

I will forewarn you... the story's going to start using some characters other than Sabrina/Will/Liza and Cynthia/Lucian (gasp!). There is one legendary I need, one which may surprise you. It is the key to the rest of the plot.

Psychic*Absol April 25th, 2009 9:24 AM

Yes, you're right, I have no idea about what is going to happen, but that shouldn't stop me from naming the things I don't want to see, now, should it? Of course I did not try to critize your actual future plot, because I don't know anything about it, but there are things I don't want to see, and I named these. Happy now? XD
(I said 'If this is the case', not 'when this is the case', or how you would word it...)
And one thing still stays: Cynthia *is* overpowered now, no matter what way your plot takes. >> Except if you strip her of all her powers, but knowing you...
Ajech, now I have complained so much and not even started to read the next chapter. XD Next post, okay? 0=)

Crazy Packers Fan April 25th, 2009 2:16 PM

Hey, you have to imagine that I'm writing for more than one person here, right? I give you lots of fanservice to try to please you, so try not to be too upset when I cater to my second-favorite character (behind Giselle of course). I've even kept Sabrina alive. Cynthia may be very powerful, but unless the story ends with her conquering the world, I don't think she's too powerful.

Psychic*Absol April 26th, 2009 9:58 AM

XD Okay, okay, I'm sorry for complaining so much. ^^;;; I should remember that I'm not your only reader, but sometimes, I tend to forget, sorry. ^^;;;
You sure have changed your opinion about this, ehehe...
Anway, review time. ^^
Title: The obvious, eh? XD
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who firmly believed that Cynthia had killed herself as well as hundreds of Sinnoh trainers who came to attack her.
Idiot
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“I don’t think there was anything wrong with a queen running the show, it was the woman who made herself the queen who was the problem.”
The queen is dead, long live the queen! ...heck, this is a great sentence, should remember it for my future fic, hm? B-)
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Lucian would probably consider her both,
XD! And not only Lucian!
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“Come on, what can she do to us from here?” Silver asked.
Alas, a lot.
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“Don’t worry, your pain will subside in about an hour,” she stated. “That’s for all of you who refused to bow to your queen.”

“Is she speaking only to us, or to everyone?” Gold wondered.
I think to all, but that doesn't make it any less creepier. o,o
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There the finest builders of this land will go to work on building me a new castle, one where I can rule over all of you. Bring gold – as much as there is in this land. Your queen deserves everything you have, all your effort, all your gold, all your respect.
...insanity? Check. Power-hunger? Check. Weirdness? Check. Villain-ness? Check. There's nothing that your Cynthia doesn't have...
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“I will bring in Lucian to demonstrate how a citizen must treat his queen,”
Great, he gets the honour of being the try out puppet. >>
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“And remember, Lucian is my husband,” Cynthia stated. “I expect no less respect from him than I do from all of you.”

Lucian began to get up, but Cynthia pointed to the ground, so he remained with his head facing the floor.

“I did not tell you that you may rise, boy,” Cynthia said. “You need to show more respect for your queen.”
Any normal human being would say that these two things contradict each other, yet, no ones claims that your Cynthia is a normal human being anymore...
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“Any human being in the land of Sinnoh that does not reach the top of the mountain in one week shall die, no matter what the circumstances. I warn you since I am a merciful queen.”
....merciful....'okay'....you forgot insane.
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“You used to be a respectable woman,
When? >>
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“The only difference between you and me is our power… oh, and I guess my extraordinary beauty.”
*giggles* I guess this is kinda true.
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“I will never kill my friend,” Cynthia stated.
Sabrina should try to become her friend...*hides quickly*
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I wish for all of you to live, though, so that I may have as many people as possible bow down before me.
I wonder...what would happen if no one came, and all of Sinnoh's citizins would die? Wouldn't Cynthia get a bit...ehm, angry then? XD
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“That’s impossible,” Giselle stated. “No human being is that powerful.”
Cynthia =/= human being 0=)
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“Well, it’s worked, I’m scared,” Joe said.
Little grammar mistake..."it worked".
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he scolded her like a father would scold his daughter.
Hm, will Joe have a daughter? 0=)
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“Our theory is that she used your battle with Palkia to judge how she would have to go about gaining the powers of another such powerful Pokémon… such as Dialga.”
o,o Whoah, you use the battle with Palkia as another plot devise...clever boy you are. XD!
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“I don’t care if I die, I shall never bow my head or knee before anyone!” Giselle shouted.
Well, it's a way of dealing with this...
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“There aren’t many Pokémon that could possibly stand up against Dialga or do a thing against that sort of power.”
*mumbles something about one two that surely could, but doesn't name them*
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“Then we’re doomed,” Giselle said in a joking manner. “Oh, well, I’m still the champion, so who cares?”
...ehm, everyone else?
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The Elite Four will bring in a different expert to gather information about what we should do.”
A different expert...hm...
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“What this will all come down to is me beating this woman with my Pokémon, which I most certainly will,”
*sweatdrops*

Crazy Packers Fan April 26th, 2009 3:42 PM

Okay, notes on the next two chapters, since this one was merely a bridge to "SHIRONA!!!"

Chapter 28 was really fun to write. Cynthia finally gets what she wants, and then the "expert" is brought in, creating a fun love triangle. Not only that, but you'll be shocked to see who the expert thinks is going to be the big hero.

Chapter 29 was a necessity to write after I started feeling really bad for a certain character. So lots of fanservice, basically, but after a moment that you most certainly won't like...

I never thought about the possibility of everyone refusing to show up, and thus Cynthia killing them all. But the people value their lives too much to try to spite Cynthia, so they do whatever they can to please her. Of course, as Lucian knows, when you please Cynthia she only just wants more from you.

Psychic*Absol April 27th, 2009 11:37 AM

First, today no review, as I have to get to bed in half an hour and had twelve hours of school today...x.x

*raises eyebrow* Love triangle? WTF?...and a big hero being not one I expect him/her/it to be? Hm, very interesting indeed...

....I so hope it's not the one character I fear again...>> If it's Lucian, it's okay, the poor guy got enough torture in both of our fics. I suppose the moment I won't like will have something to do with Sabrina, because otherwise, it wouldn't be something I don't like.

Heheh, it just occured to me that this could be a very bad outcome for Cynthia, as she would have no one to bow to her anymore. XD

And...most important thing today. =3 I got something for you again. Not much, but well...
http://www.pokito.de/pvp/pokemon/ --> click link, then either episode 564 or 565 and tata, after fasting forward a bit (only first episode), you have Cynthia's German voice. =3

Crazy Packers Fan April 27th, 2009 11:45 AM

I'm so disappointed, but then again, I got like 12 hours of sleep, so I can't complain...

Just tell me the character you fear, it's too late for me to change it now. I can pretty much guarantee it isn't that character, whoever he/she is.

Chapter 30 should have something to do with freeing Sabrina from the ball she's been stuck in for a while now.

Psychic*Absol April 27th, 2009 12:04 PM

...I got five hours of sleep, so, yeah, no complaining here either, just yawning.

Well, either Lucian, Sabrina and/or Will. Doubt it's anything else. Especially not Cynthia.

Like Cynthia finding her and killing her? Well, if Will frees Sabrina, and he said he would do that only in a 'peaceful' world, then I suppose something had been done about Cynthia...

Crazy Packers Fan April 27th, 2009 12:24 PM

Time for a fun video...

Cynthia Caramelldansen

If you don't know this song, then you obviously have never been to an anime con before... where every five minutes suddenly people start flapping their hands and singing to this song. It's sort of ridiculous but even I have caught on to it. Especially after I saw Cynthia doing it...


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