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No, it must be 46 chapters! No more, no less! I'm very strict about that!
Interesting plot point... may I ask what type of accident? And wouldn't Diane be like 30+ as compared to Roxette's 18? |
XD Well, in that case, make the chapters longer or shorter, just as you wish to make just 46 chapters.
Or use parts...*hides*. No and yes. XD No, you may not know what kind of accident, and yes, she will be 30+. |
Okay, time for some teasing over what's going to happen... in the anime!
Cyrus bows to Queen Cynthia http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a198/crazypackersfan/CyrusxCynthia.jpg |
And he does in your fanfic, too.
Argh, CPF, stop, just two days until the first Galactic two parter airs here! I don't wanna be spoilered! Okay, I have seen it anyway (SHIRONA!!!...*coughs*), so...XD |
I only saw the first half. Actually I only saw half of the first half, fast-forwarding through any scenes that did not include Cynthia or Cyrus. And I cheered loudly when Brock's Pokemon nearly got killed. I always cheer against the twerps.
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I 'saw' both episodes, but in such a bad quality that it can hardly be called watching. XD So I'm impatiently waiting for the episodes to air here. =3 Let's hope my recorder hangs in, because I'm at university when they air and I don't want to ditch school for them *hides*...what, I don't like Cynthia as much as I like Sabrina. =3.
>> That scene was violent. I liked it, but not in the sense that I would actually cheer for that Toxicroak (right name, right? XD). |
You're still allowed to like Cynthia even if you're a Sabrina fan first, just as I'm still allowed to like Sabrina even though I've become a Cynthia fan foremost. Although one must wonder why I would make my favorite character such an evil, cruel villain...
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I will ALWAYS stay a Sabrina fan. Or I will at least remember her dearly. ^^ I have spend too much being a fan to just forget her.
Because Cynthia IS evil? Well, maybe because it gives her more character, more depth, more...something. BTW...Cynthia's next episodes are airing tomorrow, did I mention this? B-) I'll probably be freaked out a bit tomorrow, and, if you're lucky, I'll have something for you...0=) |
I hope you saw the episodes today... I assume they're the Galactic two-parter, only in German.
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I'll be watching it in five...four...three...(and so on) minutes, as soon as my recorder has gone back to the beginning of the episode.
Yes, in German. Sorry, I would have loved to show you Cynthia's German voice, but the channel hasn't uploaded the episode yet and youtube is just as useless as usual regarding German episodes. >> |
That's okay, I wouldn't understand it anyway. Just please tell me it's better than her English voice, which is too high and nice-sounding.
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Apparently, it takes them a few days to upload a video. Oo Maybe next Monday or so...
Ehehehe...no. Her German voice is high and friendly, too.^^ Maybe it sounds a bit more mature and older than the English one, but not by much. Cynthia's grandma has a nice voice, though. I like her. ^.^ |
That's a shame. I wish for Cynthia to sound more like Lorelei/Prima, having a mature, mid-20's voice. She's just way too nice for me in the English episodes.
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I don't know about Loreley's English voice, but I doubt hers and Cynthia's sound alike. Cynthia sounds way too young.
Ahm, review time.Title: I thought it would be obvious, yet, you surprised me there. You really did. Sabrina does not die. Yay? Quote:
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Other part of the review, the one with Sabrina, will be in the other club, as soon as I can post there again. ^^ |
So, what do you think? Cynthia now has the power of a legendary Pokemon. She has stopped time for herself, she has the ability to live forever (assuming no one kills her first). She will start making others do whatever she wants, more than ever before, as she will need to only wish for something to happen in order for it to come true. She has everything she wants now, right? Is there anyone or anything that could possibly stop her? Or is the rest of the fic simply going to be about Cynthia continuing to get her way?
Meanwhile, there's poor Lucian. The man's been through it all, and he's so humble by now that you wonder if he even cares about his own self anymore. What does Lucian truly want, and will he ever get it? Those questions are to be answered later. New chapter tomorrow, much Cynthia, no Sabrina. |
Before you read this...beware, I may have been overcritical a bit here, I *love* your story, yet sometimes, I have to be a bit harsher. Please, don't think I hate your story or think you are a bad writer, no, I really don't.
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BTW...okay, now it feels selfish to ask this after all this criticism...can you spare the legendaries? (Darkrai and Giratina) I might been them for later. 0=) |
From what you've written, it appears that you have no guess as to what's going to happen next, and that's better for me. You seem to believe the rest of the story's going to be about Cynthia getting whatever she wants. In other words, you have no idea where the plot's going next. (So the stuff that you're critical of just isn't going to happen.)
I will forewarn you... the story's going to start using some characters other than Sabrina/Will/Liza and Cynthia/Lucian (gasp!). There is one legendary I need, one which may surprise you. It is the key to the rest of the plot. |
Yes, you're right, I have no idea about what is going to happen, but that shouldn't stop me from naming the things I don't want to see, now, should it? Of course I did not try to critize your actual future plot, because I don't know anything about it, but there are things I don't want to see, and I named these. Happy now? XD
(I said 'If this is the case', not 'when this is the case', or how you would word it...) And one thing still stays: Cynthia *is* overpowered now, no matter what way your plot takes. >> Except if you strip her of all her powers, but knowing you... Ajech, now I have complained so much and not even started to read the next chapter. XD Next post, okay? 0=) |
Hey, you have to imagine that I'm writing for more than one person here, right? I give you lots of fanservice to try to please you, so try not to be too upset when I cater to my second-favorite character (behind Giselle of course). I've even kept Sabrina alive. Cynthia may be very powerful, but unless the story ends with her conquering the world, I don't think she's too powerful.
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XD Okay, okay, I'm sorry for complaining so much. ^^;;; I should remember that I'm not your only reader, but sometimes, I tend to forget, sorry. ^^;;;
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Okay, notes on the next two chapters, since this one was merely a bridge to "SHIRONA!!!"
Chapter 28 was really fun to write. Cynthia finally gets what she wants, and then the "expert" is brought in, creating a fun love triangle. Not only that, but you'll be shocked to see who the expert thinks is going to be the big hero. Chapter 29 was a necessity to write after I started feeling really bad for a certain character. So lots of fanservice, basically, but after a moment that you most certainly won't like... I never thought about the possibility of everyone refusing to show up, and thus Cynthia killing them all. But the people value their lives too much to try to spite Cynthia, so they do whatever they can to please her. Of course, as Lucian knows, when you please Cynthia she only just wants more from you. |
First, today no review, as I have to get to bed in half an hour and had twelve hours of school today...x.x
*raises eyebrow* Love triangle? WTF?...and a big hero being not one I expect him/her/it to be? Hm, very interesting indeed... ....I so hope it's not the one character I fear again...>> If it's Lucian, it's okay, the poor guy got enough torture in both of our fics. I suppose the moment I won't like will have something to do with Sabrina, because otherwise, it wouldn't be something I don't like. Heheh, it just occured to me that this could be a very bad outcome for Cynthia, as she would have no one to bow to her anymore. XD And...most important thing today. =3 I got something for you again. Not much, but well... http://www.pokito.de/pvp/pokemon/ --> click link, then either episode 564 or 565 and tata, after fasting forward a bit (only first episode), you have Cynthia's German voice. =3 |
I'm so disappointed, but then again, I got like 12 hours of sleep, so I can't complain...
Just tell me the character you fear, it's too late for me to change it now. I can pretty much guarantee it isn't that character, whoever he/she is. Chapter 30 should have something to do with freeing Sabrina from the ball she's been stuck in for a while now. |
...I got five hours of sleep, so, yeah, no complaining here either, just yawning.
Well, either Lucian, Sabrina and/or Will. Doubt it's anything else. Especially not Cynthia. Like Cynthia finding her and killing her? Well, if Will frees Sabrina, and he said he would do that only in a 'peaceful' world, then I suppose something had been done about Cynthia... |
Time for a fun video...
Cynthia Caramelldansen If you don't know this song, then you obviously have never been to an anime con before... where every five minutes suddenly people start flapping their hands and singing to this song. It's sort of ridiculous but even I have caught on to it. Especially after I saw Cynthia doing it... |
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