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May I join~~~?
Cynthia rocks! :D |
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To give you at least a short impression of what my reaction was like... well, I was seconds away from changing my MSN usertitle to "Someone bombed my fic! ;.;" because that's kinda the truth. XD Quote:
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Hm, July 4 + nine months = April. 4. A few days earlier and it would be again March! 8D I now demand April 1st as the birthday for the fun of it! 8D (Yes, P*A has lost her mind. XD) Quote:
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Yeah, sorry to bomb your fic, but I figured a plot twist was the best way to go at this point. So what does this all mean?
First of all, do not make any sudden judgments or changes to your fic. You just have to wait and see what happens. It's a fun little storyline to take us up to the final battle. I shouldn't say little, though, for Lucian it's life and death. I already know what the gender of the child will be, and I stupidly gave it away. And if I give Sabrina more children, the twists and possibilities are endless. As fun as it was to write, it was a little depressing given that I think of myself as Lucian. After all, Lucian and I are both feminists who think that women should be treated as queens.Yet even though Lucian was willing to turn himself into a permanent footstool, Cynthia even refused that! Where he ends up from here, who knows... (well, besides me). Nice job on guessing that Lucian wasn't the father, I guess it wasn't a total surprise, but I tried building up to it. And also, Cynthia will live forever. No one's inheriting her title! |
May I join?
Cynthia, my favourite character in the 4th gen games, (If only she was a usable character) I also love her battle theme song, I downloaded it into my MP3 ;) She's an amazing trainer. |
Welcome to the club, Zero-the hero of light (cool name, I might add ^.~)! Have fun here!
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Plus, I don't even want to think about the twists you could pull there...>> Quote:
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Once my fic is finished, I'll probably write up a nice guide for you to help you with all the little things that I want to be in the story (example: Cynthia still calling those who anger her "boy" or "girl" instead of by name). |
....I wonder if Cynthia is actually MY mother....
aw, well, what's done is done... I still love my mommy! (Yeah, I'm a momma's boy, whatcha gonna do 'bout it, twerp?) |
i love cynthia she is the best in the pokemon games
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LOTS of people wants to join! I can see why! Who in his/her rightful mind WOULDN'T like Cynthia? (Well, it's obivous why guys would like Cynthia, but the girls would be prone to jealously...) |
@God Trainer Heh, welcome to the club! ^.^ And obviously she's the best. =3
@Blaesiken XD! That depends. Are you blonde and have grey eyes? If yes, I wouldn't count you out yet. ;- ) Quote:
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Don't worry, you can name the boy. ^^ I have my own ideas, but heh, these are for my own fic. ;-) Quote:
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It's been a long week without you around. I got so bored I went off and wrote a one-shot that has nothing to do with my fanfics. Please check it out in the Fanfic forum so I can get at least one review!
Plus I wrote a new chapter last night. Cynthia has become absolutely merciless and cruel, just the way I like her. This one focuses more on Lucian than her, though. I'm curious as to which characters you plan on using. Is the future fic going to only be about Sabrina and Cynthia's families, or will it include some of the other characters who have been important in my past fics (Giselle, Silver, Gold, Melody, etc.)? Nevertheless I'll probably give you information on all my characters, all the ones I care about. |
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And yes, I still would like information on these characters. ^^ And now, to give you the review you pleaded for. ;- ) Title: Heck, I know psychology and I know there's a Stockholm Syndrome, but I forgot what it's about. ;.; Quote:
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(One of my temporary chapter titles is: 'Fathers and son' Can ya guess who the fathers are?) Quote:
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(Maybe because I watched Pokemon: The movie too many times. Turning into stone, anyone? *lols*) Quote:
Either that or my fic has been bombed twice. Yay.... |
Professor Ivy is considered to be in her thirties, some put her at 35. So I pushed her up a few years, maybe to 40, and Lorelei at 25. It was inspired by another fic that had Lorelei as her daughter. There may be more from these two in the future...
Lucian's bad situation here mirrors one that Sabrina went through earlier in the story. You'll see how it works out very soon. Plus of course next chapter Cynthia has to go tell Cyrus that he's her new man... not like he'd mind much. |
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Here it is... Inner Peace, an excellent story. Professor Ivy is a Cynthia-type in this one, meaning she's beautiful and evil at the same time.
I consider Lorelei to be in her 20s, not 30s, which is why that relationship works between the two. And it certainly explains Lorelei's body shape! No, it was something else with Sabrina, not suicidal thoughts. You'll see what I mean next chapter. |
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I should write, too. *hides* |
And now I'm hoping to write a story featuring Ivy to follow this one, a story that would take Cynthia and Sabrina out of the spotlight and focus on some other characters. You can only guess what her role might be in that possible story...
I also used to pair Lorelei with Bruno... until I saw no name for that shipping, and then saw that Lance x Lorelei was more popular. Plus Bruno looks a little barbaric, while Lance seems to be more deserving of what Lorelei has to offer. |
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Sorry, P*A, it was a rotten week and I didn't get around to writing a chapter before your post... but maybe I'll have one up before the end of the weekend.
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^^ That's no problem. Sorry about your week, though. Mine wasn't so bad. =3 I finally started writing again. (Cynthia did not appear yet, though.)
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So what about founding a club for person with bad weeks? I would join it at once. =_=
Honestly, P*A... I eventually want to read the next chapter! So push your betareader to work and finish your story, please. I guess CPF thinks the same way - we have waited long enough now. |
*snickers* You two can found the club, I gladly stay out of it (holidays 0=) ).
*hides* I know, I know. >.< I'll remind Zammy nicely, kay? But I cannot do more. >> I *am* writing again, remind you. And *that* is a good sign. XD On topic of Cynthia...I *know* she is in the Arceus movie, but anyone, any place where I can find her scenes? ;.; |
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