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That Sudowoodo has almost no highlighting. It needs some right around to top of its head, where I believe the light is coming from. |
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/4825/20533830.png
Tried my hardest at editing the lines, but still doesn't appeal to me. D: |
The line under the second tail in seems to be just a little off. Like the tail has a bump in it, ya know? If you can fix that, it'll be good enough for me. ^^ |
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Just letting you know. I might try another one in a few. |
Kinda where I meant. All right, you can do whichever one hasn't been done. ^^ |
Eh, does that mean none of mine are accepted?
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Oops, sorry mangaroll, I missed yours. I'll go back to check on them in just a second, I'm currently working on a devamp for a different project. I'll get right back to you! ^^ |
Okay I did the fixing for croconaw
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/Gsccroconawrevamp.png |
Now it's a bit too fat. If you see here, Croconaw's first horn is very slim. As for you, mangaroll, I've accepted your .gif Ho-Oh and your .jpg Suicune. Entei needs sharper lines and I just don't seem to have a fancy for the Raikou you made. Thanks for contributing though, they're better than what I can do. XD |
Alright, and thanks. I think I'll redo entei, but raikou put me in 20 minutes of hell. It even has a grey collar-thing that isn't in any other sprite. >.>
*slaps the people who made the raikou GSC sprite* |
Lolz, that's fine. I can't wait to see your finished Entei sprite! ^^ (This makes me wanna take a crack at Raikou. . >.>) |
Working on entei and typhlosion+quilava right now.=p
Typhlosion=win |
Agreed, Typhlosion is awesome. X3 Good luck on it. It's back sprite was difficult. As for Quilava, though, that one was easy. (Quilava = win, too! =D) |
Bump??? o.o" well I'm not sure what you mean. Tried it anway.
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Accepted! ^^ It looks wonderful. Good job on it. =] |
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I claim Growlithe and Arcanine now. ;) |
No need to claim anymore. It's a relatively new rule. You can just do whatever hasn't been done yet. Just a future reference for everyone who decides to contribute. ^^ |
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Aaahhh...really??? :o YAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! |
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http://i41.*.com/28umhya.jpg http://i43.*.com/10ztu12.jpg GIF http://i42.*.com/ok5q0w.gif http://i42.*.com/n4gz2g.gif But where do you mean by thicker lines for entei? All of them? Or a specific part? |
I said "sharper". . Or did I? O.o *checks* Yes, I said sharper. Mostly the lines on Entei where its fur is should be sharper (right around the face and the back). As for your Typhlosion and Quilava: the fire on both Quilava sprites looks a little off (though the .jpg version looks a bit better). As for Typhlosion, I'll take the .gif one. It looks nice. ^^ |
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And I'll finish up Entei and edit my post.=p I won't redo quilava though, I'm getting tired and I need to eat my breakfast/lunch. (I've been on the computer since 5 AM) http://i41.*.com/uxzwh.gif-gif http://i41.*.com/11gpq9d.jpg-jpg Is this what you mean? |
No, I mean the lines look. . It's hard to explain it, but look at your sprite and then look at this. Do you see how the lines look slimmer and sharper on my example? Also, I've done Raikou, but I'm not sure if it's worthy enough to be posted, so I'm going to let my contributors decided. Should this be on the list? If not, what needs to be changed first? http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3136&pictureid=21998 |
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I think that's all that needs a bit of work. ^^ |
Which part of the back leg? The front of the back or the very back of the back? It kinda looks like the back of the back, but I could be wrong. Other than that, I get what you're saying and I've fixed up the knobs. However, the shading on the cheek isn't agreeing with me, so I think I'll get rid of it and start that over. EDIT: Well, contributors, I tried my best to fix-up the back leg and the shading on the cheek (the two knobs were easily fixed), and I think it turned out lovely. http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3136&pictureid=21998 |
OK this time i have 3 new varities-
Here is all of them so you can see the changes hope i got it this time 1. http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/Croconaw.png 2. http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/Gsccroconawrevamp.png 3. http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/Gsccroconawrevamp-1.png 4. http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/Croc.png 5. http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/ThinhornCroc.png sighhh... I just CANT fix the dragonite, but im gonna keep fixin it http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/dr.png Tododile!! http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Firepaw5325/todo.png |
Your Totodile is great! I like the 2nd Croconaw the best, but it still needs a bit of work. And yeah, you should probably start over on your Dragonite. |
It seems as if my Esp/Umbreon sprires got booted. I'm fine with it, but maybe place in the rules clearly for people to actually read the list and the thread before posting? My 133-136 sprites are in danger. :/
Haven't finished Zapdos yet, sorry... I've been chatting on MSN/Drawing pics of Marx (from KSSU)... Busy me. I'll get to work on it laterr OH EM GEE AN EDIT: I finished it.. I think. i added a tiny, almost impossible to see piece of shading near the spikes. I dunno, it looks a little more realistic to me that way. I also kept the G/S/C style eyes. I like them, personally, however, I will edit them if you want D/P/Pt style eyes. http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d107/tuna_fishy/revamps/zapdos-gold.png |
I really, really like that Zapdos and I will definitely be using it. |
Cool, because I made a Pichu.. I don't like the eyes though, or the head in general...
Notes you should take: a)The pink is the same on the shading as the base colour. The Platinum sprite is this way, too. b)Some official Pokemon sprites have coloured parts on the outline, as in the outline is the same colour as the part of the body you are outlining, the ears are this way. c) I kinda copied the tail on the official sprite... sorry. d) I made the mouth 1 pixel longer. e)I dont like the shading.. Your choice, however. http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d107/tuna_fishy/revamps/pichu-gold.png |
It seems like the anatomy, especially around the head, is way off. As I've said, Pokémon spriting isn't out changing outlines, shades, and colors. So if you could change around the anatomy and make the body and head smaller, that'd be great. Also, it doesn't seem like there's enough *darker* shading around the backside. |
Well, I fixed it the way you wanted, however, I no longer like it in any way. If I were you, i'd use the other :/
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d107/tuna_fishy/revamps/pichu-gold2.png EDIT: Whoops, forgot the second cheek: http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d107/tuna_fishy/revamps/pichu-gold3.png |
. . . O.o Err. . I don't think I'll use either of them. Sorry. . =( |
It's A OK. I'm completely fine with that, but im sorry to hear- oops, read that.
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That Zapdos has no eyes, I think you should add them.
The Raikou has shading and anatomy issues on the legs, it's also missing its fourth leg. The face is too dark and contrasts with the eye, either lighten the eye up or lighten the skintone up. |
As for the skin tone, that's the original colors from the Platinum sprite, be it on the body as a whole or right where it's eye is. Though, I agree with the legs. I really need to fix up the shading, mostly. |
weather or not it;s the official palette is irrelevant, it's up to you to use it effectively and efficiently. That's what revamping requires.
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I finished Moltres
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/628/moltres.png The uh fire looks a bit odd, I know. |
The fire shouldn't have a different colored outline, at least not one that thin. The lines should blend together, like with the flame on Charmander's tail. |
If you compare...
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/628/moltres.pnghttp://archives.bulbagarden.net/w/upload/b/b6/Spr_b_g4_146.png I'm editing right now anyways. xD EDIT: http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/628/moltres.pngIs this better? ^^; |
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Much, I like the way the flames blend in. It's up. ^^ |
I was soooooo bored.
I did an easy Electabuzz http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3263&pictureid=22123 |
That kinda looks like the back sprite from R/S/E. . Nice try. (As in, "ahahahah, no".) |
Darn, well what gave it away *chuckles*
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I have two, well one. :S
Basically, I revamed Espeon's backsprite, but since its tail is really thick, I made a version where it is slightly thinner. Original: http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/1772/espeonbackspriterevampt.png Thinner tail: http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6287/espeonbackspriterevampta.png |
That's a very nice revamp. I'll be using the one with the thinner tail. Good job. ^^ |
Can i ask, what will you do after all these are completed?
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Go through everything, take out ones that are relatively mediocre, fix up the list, and then keep the thread alive to see if anyone can improve existing ones. If not, then I'll just ask Amachi (or if they're not on, whatever Super Moderator is) to close it. That's pretty much all. |
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Ah, that's just intense pessimism. If we work at it, and considering I have nothing better to do, I think we may finish it. And I'm not one to be optimistic. |
I didn't mean it as a serious statement, i meant it in a "this film will never be over" type of way.
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Ah, I'm sorry then. I misread that. |
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Here, I have quite a few revamps done, but it looks like I'll only be able to post up a few (yet maybe a little more than I expected O.o;). Sorry if some have already been submitted by other members, accepted, and not yet posted up. Just judging by the first post.
Here's the list of the one's I have done, but due to lack of posts, I can't post the url codes from my Photobucket, so I have to upload five attachments per post.... I'll just wait for you to reply before I post up more, because even though I read the rules, I'm still unsure whether it's allowed to multi-post due to attachments. Sandshrew (Gold) Jynx (Gold) Electabuzz (Gold) Nidoran F (Gold) Nidorina (Gold) Nidoqueen (Gold) Nidoran M (Gold) Nidorino (Gold) Nidoking (Gold) Jigglypuff (Gold) Alakazam (Silver) Slowpoke (Gold) Farfetch'd (Gold) Seel (Gold) Dewgong (Gold) Rhyhorn (Gold) Rhydon (Gold) Magikarp (Gold) Dratini (Gold) Dragonair (Gold) Dragonite (Gold) Elekid (Gold) edit: Oh, wait, I'm retarted. *facepalm* I need to post the url codes so you can update the first post (if they're accepted)... duhr. >.<; |
Does anyone like my koffing that I did on Pg. 7?
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SpeedXaaa, you'll need to separate the shiny from the normal sprites. Tunaboy88, no. We didn't like it. |
Oh, whoops! Forgot the images were like that.
I'll see if I can upload them all when I get back. ^^; |
Sorry SpeedXaaa, haha. Here's my Jigglypuff I did a week ago I completely forgot to post. ^^; (No, I didn't claim it, ever.)
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d107/tuna_fishy/revamps/jigglypuff-gold.png I don't like the arms... |
The arms and feet need some work. Overall, I really like the way it looks. If you can fix up the arms and feet, it's up. |
Is this okay? I lifted up one of the legs a little and shortened the other, and lengthened the arms a little. Is that what you meant?
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d107/tuna_fishy/revamps/jigglypuff-gold-1.png |
That's looking better and, yes, that is what I meant. But it's feet seem like they're overloaded with black outline. |
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Nah, that was my fault. XD
Anyways, here's what I've uploaded so far.... http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/oo36/SpeedXaaa/Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiii2-5.png http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/oo36/SpeedXaaa/Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiii2_edited-2-2.png http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/oo36/SpeedXaaa/Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiii3-4.png http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/oo36/SpeedXaaa/Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiii4-5.png http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/oo36/SpeedXaaa/Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiii5-2.png http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/oo36/SpeedXaaa/Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiii6-2.png |
Jigglypuff, Sandshrew, Electabuzz, and Nidoqueen are all up. Jynx's fingers look. . Disfigured. A little bit of fixing can change that. The outline on Nidoran looks really, really dark, and Nidorina's right leg looks like it's bulging out of its socket. |
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The outlining on that is very dark. It needs to be thinned out a lot more. |
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hopefully no one reserved this one ^-^
i did fire red's pallete cuz i didnt kno which pallete u guys were using if that was alright :D |
Hey there,i just made one,here you go
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4778/cekansj.png Hope you like it. |
Sorry, Ekans has already been completed. However, you're welcome to do Arbok. |
I made Arbok and Feraligter
http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4508/carbok.pnghttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbg024.gif Now<---------- Before http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8366/cfera.pnghttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbg160.gif Now<-------------Before EDIT:Made some more. Magcargo: http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5926/cmagcargo.pnghttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbg219.gif Now<------------Before Fortress: http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7065/cfortress.pnghttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbg205.gif Now<-----------Before |
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http://i44.*.com/esorwp.png http://i40.*.com/e3am1.png These are all the ones of mine that got accepted, right? |
Shadowampharos, yours are just recolors, you have no new shading, or... any other changes :3
ANd mang, I believe the same goes for yours, but I dunno which sprites you used, but the shading looks like GSC shading. |
I have done a Sandslash remake because sandshrew was alone...
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/6703/goldremakesandslash.png And Blissey: http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/5573/remakegoldblissey.png |
I know you already have a revamped Feraligatr, but I think the Silver Sprites needed to be revamped, I mean its just an awsome pose, soo here it is, and with the shiny sprite.....
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee50/JollyRoger25/RevampedFeraligatr.png |
I've came across this thread a few times. Thought this time I'd finally contribute.
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7623/scizorgoldrevampp.png I've only ever done a few revamps, so hope this is of good enough quality. Edit: I decided to do Nidoran and Nidorino. http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/aabab48f79.png Nidorino's right leg needs editing, but honestly I can't be assed to do it. So I decided to just upload it so someone else could finish it off. Edit (Again): I started Nidoking about 10 minutes ago. But I can't be bothered to finish it off. So here it is for someone else to finish it. http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/7267/nidokinggoldrevamp.png |
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I wanted to contribute, so I made a Gastly. This is my, somewhat, FIRST "completed" revamp... Cuz all the others I made were merely recolours, so... Ehehe...
Azumi P.S. See you tomorrow! |
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Spherical Ice, your revamps are wonderful. I just have a problem with the shape of Houndour's face against that skull. But the other two are accepted. Azumi, your Gastly is excellent. It is also accepted. |
Heh, thanks. ^.^ I knew that my Houndour wasn't gonna be approved.
Anyway, I've just done a Hitmontop revamp, so, enjoy! http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff288/Sphericalice/Hitmontop.png |
Very nice. ^^ It's also up. =] |
Take Muk, too.
I made him a while back, before I'd joined the community. Anyway, enjoy! http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff288/Sphericalice/Mukvamp.png Edit: And I'll throw in Electrode, too: http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff288/Sphericalice/Electrode.png |
Shenjislover, is my Feraligatar excepted???
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Anyway, I didn't do Haunter because the sprite has issues with me, but I've done Gengar. I kinda had to modify the shading and the anatomy (especially the spike-things on its head), but I didn't do anything TOO major... Hope you like it! ^^ |
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Azumi, the outlining on your Gengar is pretty scratchy. You'll need to make some major modifications to the spikes especially. JollyRoger, because we already have a Feraligatr, I won't be using yours. However, you're free to make a Croconaw if you wish. |
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Okay. I got half an hour left. I'll see what I can do.
EDIT: I've redone the spikes. But what do you mean by "scratchy"? I also did Elekid. It's not that good, I think. Especially the claws. :( |
I agree; Elekid's claws need work. Also, the outline around Elekid's spark plugs are too black. I already explained to you what scratchy meant via VM, but I don't know whether I did a good job of it or not. . ^^" |
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So, I redid the stuff.
At first I didn't remember what the "spark plugs" were, then later I sparked a plug in my head when I looked at the "head"... XDDDDDD (Pun not intended.) |
Oh, I'm sorry Spherical Ice, I didn't see you. My bad. Anyway, your Electrode is accepted, but your Muk needs some work, especially around the fingers and general arm. It looks to be bulging out. Azumi, that Gengar still needs work around the head. Make those 'hairs' way more spiky. |
Okay, heres one that no one has done, Mewtwo from Sliver
Regular: http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee50/JollyRoger25/RevampedMewtwoUploadableBasic.png Shiny: http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee50/JollyRoger25/RevampedMewtwoUploadableShiny.png Hope there accepted...... |
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JollyRoger, your Mewtwo is excellent. Unfortunately, we're not doing shinies as of now. But the regular is accepted. Spherical Ice, no. The outlines are too scratchy. |
I'd like to reserve farfetch'd I'll do him tonight and you should have him tomorrow morning :)
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Whaoo, second Revamp, Ho-oh from Silver(I like the Silver sprites poses)
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee50/JollyRoger25/RevampedHo-ohBasic.png |
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Long story short: All accepted except for Croconaw. You'll need to fix the spike on Croconaw's head, KageX. |
Okay, umm, my Mewtwo is not coming up on the main page of sprites, and did I mess up with my Ho-oh?
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ok here you go http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/croconaw-1.png |
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