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ShinjisLover August 8th, 2009 7:39 AM

There's not enough black outline on Vulpix's tail. There's not enough black outline on Meowth's paws.

There's too much black outline on Ledyba.

Aipom is accepted and, yes, you can do them.

encas August 11th, 2009 12:59 PM

I have a few I've already done, so I suppose I'll contribute an Ariados.

http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/aria-1.png

ShinjisLover August 11th, 2009 3:28 PM

First of all, the anatomy is all wrong. Araidos needs to be much skinnier. Secondly, there's too much black out everywhere.

encas August 11th, 2009 4:03 PM

I fixed Ariados' fatness; this one looks much better IMO. Not quite sure about the black outlines though.
http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/aria-2.png

Also, I did a revamp of Remoraid, which was several times easier than Ariados.
http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/remor.png

ShinjisLover August 12th, 2009 7:47 PM

Remoraid is accepted~

Ariados, however, has screwed up two left legs, and the appendages on its back as well.

Logiedan August 12th, 2009 9:10 PM

I did Teddiursa. But i'm not expecting it to be accepted.
I still think that something's wrong with it.
Here it is:
http://i26.*.com/30su2jl.png
Oh yeh, I tried fixing it's fatness that Gold gave it.

ShinjisLover August 12th, 2009 9:32 PM

The anatomy definitely needs some work, especially around the head. The body still needs to retain most of the chubbiness, and the arms. . Are just. . O.o" Oi. . The right arm looks like it's coming out of Teddiursa's ribs. .

Logiedan August 12th, 2009 10:56 PM

Wow, this is hard. For me..Lol.
I'm not very well at spriting.
http://i30.*.com/30cnho6.png
Tried fixing it. .__.
Doubt it'd be accepted though,Teddiursa's chubbiness is just too difficult for me to handle. Lmao. D:
Not much has changed on the head too.I'm not sure what you want the head to look liek. sry. oo:

SpeedXaaa August 13th, 2009 9:58 AM

Despite there being an Alakazam attempt (It doesn't look like it was completely edited to be accepted/added), I have an Alakazam revamped quite some time ago from Silver.

For that reason, I won't be surprised if this gets declined.
http://i28.*.com/2enb09d.png
I also saw that you were lacking a Dewgong, Rhyhorn, Rhydon, Jynx, Dratini, Dragonair, Mew, and Pichu, so here they are:
http://i25.*.com/2rh7m8o.png
http://i27.*.com/2yyci6q.png
http://i30.*.com/whmalh.png
http://i26.*.com/1zbfdk6.png
http://i28.*.com/ix9kev.png
http://i28.*.com/19nzmd.png
http://i26.*.com/2qs3y38.png
http://i27.*.com/10rintt.png
http://i30.*.com/s67iwm.png

I have both the Male and Female forms for Rhyhorn and Rhydon, if that's okay. If not, then here's just the male Rhyhorn and the female Rhydon:
http://i25.*.com/xdbjie.png
http://i27.*.com/1y47tk.png

Oh, right. And maybe it was a mistake, but the Tangela is merely a rip from DPPt (in case no one's noticed).

ShinjisLover August 13th, 2009 10:40 AM

The following are not accepted. If it's not in the list, it has been accepted.

Dragonair - The body is too skinny before the tail.
Mew - The head is too long.
Pichu - This head looks pretty deformed.
Alakazam - The whiskers aren't defined enough.

SpeedXaaa August 13th, 2009 4:48 PM

Like I said, they're pretty old and I've only decided to edit a few. Nonetheless...

1. Always thought there was something odd about that. Guess I was lazy when I did that. Hah, actually, thanks for pointing that out, because I found myself making quite a few more edits than I originally intended.
http://i29.*.com/k3lrn7.png
Here's the new one. Oh wow, it looks a ton much better now... just in general. O-o;

2. Fixed it.
http://i26.*.com/161x5pf.png
Just Imagine how much only a little editing can do. Though I need a little help: would Mew's farthest most eye still be slightly visible (too lazy to check any other reference besides the sprite)? It's head is angled at a 3/4 view. Anyone can answer this. Doesn't really matter if it's answered at all...

3. Some clarification on just how Pichu's head is deformed would be nice, unless the top left (our left) angle is what you were talking about:
http://i27.*.com/24vs48m.png

4. Actually, the detail of the whiskers are fine if you compare them to the D/P one. If you need me to add a few more ends, though, that's fine.
http://i32.*.com/33opdu1.png

Anything else? =3

orangejediman August 14th, 2009 11:08 AM

I'll do Miltank! Front + Back~ I'm Using the Gold Sprites, is that okay?

ShinjisLover August 14th, 2009 11:27 AM

1) It's good.
2) No, the ears are still too far apart.
3) It's hard to explain. . Perhaps just dropping Pichu would be a good idea.
4) Comparing them to the DPPt one doesn't matter. Anyway, accepted.

orangejediman, please read the rules. They will answer all of your questions. And you may learn something.

EDIT: I coulda swore I mentioned this in my last post:
For God sakes, make your sprites 80x80. It's in the rules, which you people obviously haven't read.

Camyre August 14th, 2009 12:25 PM

I did Horsea, and if walms doesn't fix his Vulpix I have this one from a while ago. ^^ I'm not sure if there's enough black in it, though.

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/GoldHorsea.pnghttp://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/SilverVulpix-1.png

ShinjisLover August 14th, 2009 12:27 PM

Vulpix needs more black outline around its tail.

Horsea has too much black outline. . Everywhere.

Camyre August 14th, 2009 1:26 PM

Okay, are these any better?

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/th_GoldHorsea-2.pnghttp://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/SilverVulpix-2.png

Pkmn-Master August 16th, 2009 12:08 AM

I'm back! I'm going to be doing at most 5 back sprites a day starting today, but I need some sleep to sharpen my MS Paint skills. x3

Mew~ August 16th, 2009 5:00 AM

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/2361/alazazam.png
Here is my alakazam! hope you like it!

Here are some more i made:
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6087/ghmjgh.png Grimer
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/132/hjnhjgh.pngDrowse
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/7207/tiug.pngduduo
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6775/ghbtujuy.pngvulpix

Heres another one ive done with golds mew sprite:
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3052/trwehgrh.png

Okay ive updated the mew sprite and put its ears closer:
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/3052/trwehgrh.png

sorry i forgot to make them 80x80 here are the links to the 80x80
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/7751/47525279.png
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2361/alazazam.png
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/6775/ghbtujuy.png
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/132/hjnhjgh.png
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/6087/ghmjgh.png
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/7207/tiug.png

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/9226/tutyijtyi.png
Heres miltank i think this has too much black but thats for you to decide!

Celebi backsprite:
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/9146/yherteryh.png

:=:Yoda:=: August 17th, 2009 5:01 AM

Have Hoppip, Skiploom and Jumpluff been taken?

ShinjisLover August 17th, 2009 5:12 AM

Vulpix is accepted. Horsea's neck shouldn't be outlined.

Welcome back~

Pokemon League Champion, all of yours has too much black outline and your Mew looks simply recolored. Try again.

Yoda, please check the list. You will have your answer there.

:=:Yoda:=: August 17th, 2009 6:40 AM

My jumpluff
 
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Oh, I didn't see the list.... Anyway here's my Jumpluff, I kinda started from scratch actually^^. The feet look weird, right?

NikNaks August 18th, 2009 2:39 AM

I know Growlithe has been taken, but is this the kind of thing you're looking for? I revamped the Gold sprite instead of the Sliver sprite, as well.

http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/GrowlitheRevampSolo.png

Also, how up to date is the list? I see that a Remoraid got in a few posts above, but that's not marked in it.

ShinjisLover August 18th, 2009 2:49 AM

You are not allowed to do a sprite that's already been done, regardless of what game the sprite was from. Besides that, you have too much black outline on your Growlithe. And the list is updated frequently; look at the Last Edited part.

As for Jumpluff, the feet do look weird. The right needs to be rounder.

NikNaks August 18th, 2009 2:59 AM

I merely posted Growlithe to see if it was the correct kind of idea, not to replace the existing one.

And where does there need to be less black?

I'll take Swinub and Piloswine to work on, now.

ShinjisLover August 18th, 2009 3:59 AM

You should've read the front page, then you would've had a fine grasp on the idea.

Obviously, considering I said 'outline', you need to change the outline.

Again, you should've read the front page. Then you'd know you don't have to claim.

NikNaks August 18th, 2009 5:05 AM

Sorry for wanting to get it right.

Yes, but where on the outline exactly?

And I did read that, but I think it's better to try to avoid duplication of work where possible.

Here's my attempt at Swinub:
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/SwinubRevampSolo.png

ShinjisLover August 18th, 2009 5:23 AM

If I didn't specify, everywhere.

You obviously didn't, or you worded that wrong, for I am against duplications.

Again, you obviously didn't read the rules. Then you'd know that your sprite must be 80x80 pixels.

NikNaks August 18th, 2009 6:20 AM

Look, I'm sorry if I did something horribly wrong. I apologise. Can we move on? Please?

Swinub and Piloswine, both at 80 square:
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/SwinubRevampSolo-1.png
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/PiloswineRevampSolo.png

Do I still have too much black on the outlines?

ShinjisLover August 18th, 2009 7:14 AM

I'm simply stating you either 1) misread the rules, or 2) overlooked that particular rule.

And both sprites are fine. Accepted.

NikNaks August 18th, 2009 7:35 AM

It was probably a little of both :) Thank-you.

To complete the three together, here's Corsola.

http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/CorsolaRevampSolo.png

Moving on to Octillery. This might take me a bit longer.

EDIT: Octillery and Delibird:

http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/OctilleryRevampSolol.pnghttp://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/DelibirdRevampSolo.png

EDIT2: I'm too tired to finish Houndour, so I'm done for the night. Will do some more tomorrow/Thursday.

ShinjisLover August 18th, 2009 2:54 PM

Corsola is accepted.

The outline around the back of Octillery's head looks a bit. . Weird. I think the parts that aren't black should be a bit darker than they currently are.

Delibird's face fathers look stuck to its head and should come up and out more like in its DPPt sprite.

NikNaks August 19th, 2009 12:41 PM

I think I missed a few pixels on Octillery, so I can fix that pretty easily. As for Delibird, you want me to move towards the newer designs for the feathers, right? If so, I'll see what I can do with it tomorrow.

PikaFreak August 19th, 2009 1:09 PM

What programs can I use to save besides Paint? (DON'T WANT JPEG!)

Missingno.7-4468 August 19th, 2009 2:45 PM

You can save as other things in Paint. When you are asked to save, there is a little drop-down menu, click on it, and you'll get a few different save types, click on PNG.

I don't have anything this time, I'll try to get something done though...

NikNaks August 20th, 2009 12:10 PM

Hopefully fixed Octillery's head:
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/OctilleryRevamp-1.png

And Delibird's feathers:
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/DelibirdRevamp-2.png

How's that?

ShinjisLover August 20th, 2009 12:14 PM

Octillery is accepted.

Delibird's head feathers now need to be larger. They are much too thin.

rednano12 August 22nd, 2009 5:53 PM

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8963/mantinegsc.png
Gold Mantine Revamp. Overall, I think it needs a bit more black outline, but I thought I'd let you be the judge of that.

Also, I noticed that my sprites aren't in the front post, so I'll be uploading them to Imageshack and posting them in this post for the next 15 min. or so.

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/5496/aipomgsc.png
Aipom
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/3053/blisseygsc.png
Blissey
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9150/krabbygsc.png
Krabby

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/15/porygongsc.png
Porygon

Only 4?! I thought I did more... Ah well. I need to sprite more often.

ShinjisLover August 23rd, 2009 12:45 AM

You've already submitted Porygon, Krabby, and Aipom.

And Mantine's already been finished.

Blissey was done by someone I think. . I can't remember if I accepted it. I'll go have a look.

Mew~ August 23rd, 2009 4:07 AM

Here is my revamp of mew:

http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8310/eray.png
There isnt that much black is there and it isnt just simple recolored ive resized and head and the ears are closer

Jad August 23rd, 2009 4:13 AM

nice mew dude not bad
i like it

ShinjisLover August 23rd, 2009 4:19 AM

That is an excellent Mew. Great job on it. ^^ It's accepted. =]

Mew~ August 23rd, 2009 5:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShinjisLover (Post 5025867)
That is an excellent Mew. Great job on it. ^^ It's accepted. =]

Thanks man! It itsnt on the list?
Ill see if i can make some more!

rednano12 August 23rd, 2009 5:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShinjisLover (Post 5025514)
You've already submitted Porygon, Krabby, and Aipom.

And Mantine's already been finished.

Blissey was done by someone I think. . I can't remember if I accepted it. I'll go have a look.

I know, but they weren't on the front post so I upped them to Imageshack.

Mantine was done by you, but all of your sprites have been wiped. You said we can do those a couple pages before, but looks like you fixed all of the broken links while I was updating. ^^"

I was the one who did Blissey, but you never put it up, I thought I wouldn't bring it up until I re-upped it.

Mew~ August 23rd, 2009 5:33 AM

i forgot to do mew 80x80 here:
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8310/eray.png

ShinjisLover August 23rd, 2009 5:39 AM

I really didn't even notice. Damn you, sleepiness! >< Thanks for catching that. =]

As for the Blissey, sorry. I must've missed it last time I updated the list.

rednano12 August 23rd, 2009 7:56 AM

Bom-bada-bam! Bum-bum-bum-bam-bam!

Heracross is done. This guy was challenging.

http://img5.imagebanana.com/img/6qvekm/heracrossgsc.png

ShinjisLover August 23rd, 2009 8:02 AM

You'll need to make Heracross's body longer.

rednano12 August 23rd, 2009 11:51 AM

I'll do my best, but I don't think I have the skill. Here goes something!

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2320/heracrossgsc.png

Meh.

ShinjisLover August 23rd, 2009 12:07 PM

[center]Little bit longer, please. It currently looks like Midget-Heracross. XDD{/center]

rednano12 August 23rd, 2009 12:49 PM

Now I think he looks a bit ridiculously tall, but you started the project.

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2973/heracrossgscy.png

ShinjisLover August 24th, 2009 12:03 AM

Yeah, I think I went just a bit crazy with the 'tall' concept. XD *is shot multiple times*

I'll take the previous. Sorry. *shot again*

NikNaks August 25th, 2009 12:05 AM

Sorry to pull this slightly OT, but if anyone recognises any of their work from this thread on the PSP forum (you'll need to register, but please do, even if it's just for this), then contact me. My Growlithe from a couple of pages back is there, as well as the Electabuzz that was accepted. Anyone else see anything belonging to them? I need all the proof I can get.

Now, back on topic, I'll edit my post with a couple of new revamps when I finish them this morning. In my opinion, Heracross' eyes look odd. I know that's how they looked in GSC, but it looks quite off once it's revamped. Just my $0.02.

ShinjisLover August 25th, 2009 12:47 AM

Thank you for your warning. I'll register there~

And I look forward to your newest revamps.

NikNaks August 25th, 2009 3:48 AM

Well, he's owned up to the theft of those, but I'm still wary of more thefts. Check this thread to see if there are any you recognise:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=192269

I won't post more about it here. Let's get back to work :)

rednano12 August 26th, 2009 6:20 PM

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Wow, I forgot to post Bayleef!

I actually made a vid and once I find a good video editing program I like, I'll post it on Youtube (leaning towards KDEnLive).

ShinjisLover August 27th, 2009 3:47 AM

Bayleef's neck needs to be longer and its head needs to be smaller.

NikNaks August 27th, 2009 4:45 AM

Whoops, I forgot to post here as well. Delibird and Houndour:

http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/DelibirdRevampSolo-1.png
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/HoundourRevampSolo.png

Something seems wrong with Houndour, but I'm not sure what.

ShinjisLover August 27th, 2009 5:17 AM

I can't quite put my finger on it, but Delibird still doesn't look quite right. Maybe it'd be easier to spot if I put them side-by-side. .
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/DelibirdRevampSolo-1.pnghttp://veekun.com/dex-images/platinum/frame2/225.png

As for your Houndour, its body needs to be just a bit slimmer, its legs need to be longer, and its snout needs to be smaller.

rednano12 August 28th, 2009 1:48 PM

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Redid Bayleef.

I also did Gyarados (Yes, I know you don't want shiny yet, but I'm posting it for an anatomy check. It's for a separate project of mine.)

ShinjisLover August 28th, 2009 1:53 PM

Perhaps making Bayleef's face longer would make it look better.

As for the Gyarados, its eyes need to be more prominent. And I think getting rid of some of the black outline around its mouth would work.

rednano12 August 28th, 2009 1:59 PM

Longer in which way? Towards the screen (redo shading); the left of the screen? Make the head taller?

ShinjisLover August 28th, 2009 2:07 PM

Toward the left, please. ^^

rednano12 August 28th, 2009 2:26 PM

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Ugh.
Still not happy with it. You might be better off with the original as my anatomy changes suck.

Also, not to sound rude or anything, but Heracross and Blissey still aren't on the first post.

ShinjisLover August 28th, 2009 2:28 PM

It's okay. . No worries~

Mew~ August 29th, 2009 10:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NikNaks (Post 5041562)
Whoops, I forgot to post here as well. Delibird and Houndour:

http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/DelibirdRevampSolo-1.png
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/HoundourRevampSolo.png

Something seems wrong with Houndour, but I'm not sure what.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShinjisLover (Post 5041687)
I can't quite put my finger on it, but Delibird still doesn't look quite right. Maybe it'd be easier to spot if I put them side-by-side. .
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/DelibirdRevampSolo-1.pnghttp://veekun.com/dex-images/platinum/frame2/225.png

As for your Houndour, its body needs to be just a bit slimmer, its legs need to be longer, and its snout needs to be smaller.

The arms need to be thiner, the beak needs to be smaller, the feathers at the top of its head need to look a little sharper with some shading, you need the make the eyes smaller and more black around the eye

ShinjisLover September 12th, 2009 11:44 AM

Bad news, guys. We just lost a lot of the sprites because of the jankness of Photobucket.com. If you don't mind, can you guys use a more reliable site?

Also, since better sprites are available thanks to HeartGold/SoulSilver, please try to revamp the GSC sprites to that. Thank you.

rednano12 September 13th, 2009 7:57 AM

Ugh...

I think most of my sprites that you accepted were re-upped to imageshack a page or two ago.

ShinjisLover September 14th, 2009 7:26 AM

I think all of your sprites were kept intact. Mannequin's sprites seemed to be the only ones that were lost.

rednano12 September 20th, 2009 9:55 AM

My Browsers say otherwise.

All of your sprites are gone. And you put mine on your photobucket. But I put them on my imageshack a few pages back. So could you re-up them? Please?

ShinjisLover September 20th, 2009 10:08 AM

My sprites are still there. . What browser are you using?

And I'll try to upload them all to my Photobucket. Some people have troubles seeing my sprites until I upload them to Photobucket.

Mew~ September 30th, 2009 9:07 AM

Ive done this for blastoise:
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7527/jlhkl.png
I douth this will get it but still....:)

ShinjisLover September 30th, 2009 9:27 AM

I can't see the claws on Blastoise's right arm and there too much black outline around the top of its head.

darkraitoon November 15th, 2009 7:03 PM

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How are my skiploom and jumpluff revamps?

Negative-Zero November 27th, 2009 10:25 AM

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i call ditto and magikarp(if there not taken..)
EDIT: here they ares:

Logiedan November 30th, 2009 3:56 PM

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=5026&pictureid=36261
Drowzee. Tell me what places it needs work on,if it does need work.

mustafa505 May 24th, 2011 6:22 AM

i've taken igglypuff (the cutest and kirbiest XD)
EDIT:
http://i56.*.com/qrmbzr.jpg
This is version one i will Minimize it a little (Make it smaller sorry my english screws)
EDIT:
http://i55.*.com/23shmdf.jpg
Version 2 Shortened
EDIT:
Oops i just saw this is really old thread i am sorry :(.


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