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There's not enough black outline on Vulpix's tail. There's not enough black outline on Meowth's paws. There's too much black outline on Ledyba. Aipom is accepted and, yes, you can do them. |
I have a few I've already done, so I suppose I'll contribute an Ariados.
http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/aria-1.png |
First of all, the anatomy is all wrong. Araidos needs to be much skinnier. Secondly, there's too much black out everywhere. |
I fixed Ariados' fatness; this one looks much better IMO. Not quite sure about the black outlines though.
http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/aria-2.png Also, I did a revamp of Remoraid, which was several times easier than Ariados. http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/remor.png |
Remoraid is accepted~ Ariados, however, has screwed up two left legs, and the appendages on its back as well. |
I did Teddiursa. But i'm not expecting it to be accepted.
I still think that something's wrong with it. Here it is: http://i26.*.com/30su2jl.png Oh yeh, I tried fixing it's fatness that Gold gave it. |
The anatomy definitely needs some work, especially around the head. The body still needs to retain most of the chubbiness, and the arms. . Are just. . O.o" Oi. . The right arm looks like it's coming out of Teddiursa's ribs. . |
Wow, this is hard. For me..Lol.
I'm not very well at spriting. http://i30.*.com/30cnho6.png Tried fixing it. .__. Doubt it'd be accepted though,Teddiursa's chubbiness is just too difficult for me to handle. Lmao. D: Not much has changed on the head too.I'm not sure what you want the head to look liek. sry. oo: |
Despite there being an Alakazam attempt (It doesn't look like it was completely edited to be accepted/added), I have an Alakazam revamped quite some time ago from Silver.
For that reason, I won't be surprised if this gets declined. http://i28.*.com/2enb09d.png I also saw that you were lacking a Dewgong, Rhyhorn, Rhydon, Jynx, Dratini, Dragonair, Mew, and Pichu, so here they are: http://i25.*.com/2rh7m8o.png http://i27.*.com/2yyci6q.png http://i30.*.com/whmalh.png http://i26.*.com/1zbfdk6.png http://i28.*.com/ix9kev.png http://i28.*.com/19nzmd.png http://i26.*.com/2qs3y38.png http://i27.*.com/10rintt.png http://i30.*.com/s67iwm.png I have both the Male and Female forms for Rhyhorn and Rhydon, if that's okay. If not, then here's just the male Rhyhorn and the female Rhydon: http://i25.*.com/xdbjie.png http://i27.*.com/1y47tk.png Oh, right. And maybe it was a mistake, but the Tangela is merely a rip from DPPt (in case no one's noticed). |
The following are not accepted. If it's not in the list, it has been accepted. Dragonair - The body is too skinny before the tail. Mew - The head is too long. Pichu - This head looks pretty deformed. Alakazam - The whiskers aren't defined enough. |
Like I said, they're pretty old and I've only decided to edit a few. Nonetheless...
1. Always thought there was something odd about that. Guess I was lazy when I did that. Hah, actually, thanks for pointing that out, because I found myself making quite a few more edits than I originally intended. http://i29.*.com/k3lrn7.png Here's the new one. Oh wow, it looks a ton much better now... just in general. O-o; 2. Fixed it. http://i26.*.com/161x5pf.png Just Imagine how much only a little editing can do. Though I need a little help: would Mew's farthest most eye still be slightly visible (too lazy to check any other reference besides the sprite)? It's head is angled at a 3/4 view. Anyone can answer this. Doesn't really matter if it's answered at all... 3. Some clarification on just how Pichu's head is deformed would be nice, unless the top left (our left) angle is what you were talking about: http://i27.*.com/24vs48m.png 4. Actually, the detail of the whiskers are fine if you compare them to the D/P one. If you need me to add a few more ends, though, that's fine. http://i32.*.com/33opdu1.png Anything else? =3 |
I'll do Miltank! Front + Back~ I'm Using the Gold Sprites, is that okay?
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1) It's good. 2) No, the ears are still too far apart. 3) It's hard to explain. . Perhaps just dropping Pichu would be a good idea. 4) Comparing them to the DPPt one doesn't matter. Anyway, accepted. orangejediman, please read the rules. They will answer all of your questions. And you may learn something. EDIT: I coulda swore I mentioned this in my last post: For God sakes, make your sprites 80x80. It's in the rules, which you people obviously haven't read. |
I did Horsea, and if walms doesn't fix his Vulpix I have this one from a while ago. ^^ I'm not sure if there's enough black in it, though.
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/GoldHorsea.pnghttp://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/SilverVulpix-1.png |
Vulpix needs more black outline around its tail. Horsea has too much black outline. . Everywhere. |
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I'm back! I'm going to be doing at most 5 back sprites a day starting today, but I need some sleep to sharpen my MS Paint skills. x3
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Have Hoppip, Skiploom and Jumpluff been taken?
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Vulpix is accepted. Horsea's neck shouldn't be outlined. Welcome back~ Pokemon League Champion, all of yours has too much black outline and your Mew looks simply recolored. Try again. Yoda, please check the list. You will have your answer there. |
My jumpluff
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Oh, I didn't see the list.... Anyway here's my Jumpluff, I kinda started from scratch actually^^. The feet look weird, right?
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I know Growlithe has been taken, but is this the kind of thing you're looking for? I revamped the Gold sprite instead of the Sliver sprite, as well.
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/GrowlitheRevampSolo.png Also, how up to date is the list? I see that a Remoraid got in a few posts above, but that's not marked in it. |
You are not allowed to do a sprite that's already been done, regardless of what game the sprite was from. Besides that, you have too much black outline on your Growlithe. And the list is updated frequently; look at the Last Edited part. As for Jumpluff, the feet do look weird. The right needs to be rounder. |
I merely posted Growlithe to see if it was the correct kind of idea, not to replace the existing one.
And where does there need to be less black? I'll take Swinub and Piloswine to work on, now. |
You should've read the front page, then you would've had a fine grasp on the idea. Obviously, considering I said 'outline', you need to change the outline. Again, you should've read the front page. Then you'd know you don't have to claim. |
Sorry for wanting to get it right.
Yes, but where on the outline exactly? And I did read that, but I think it's better to try to avoid duplication of work where possible. Here's my attempt at Swinub: http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/SwinubRevampSolo.png |
If I didn't specify, everywhere. You obviously didn't, or you worded that wrong, for I am against duplications. Again, you obviously didn't read the rules. Then you'd know that your sprite must be 80x80 pixels. |
Look, I'm sorry if I did something horribly wrong. I apologise. Can we move on? Please?
Swinub and Piloswine, both at 80 square: http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/SwinubRevampSolo-1.png http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/PiloswineRevampSolo.png Do I still have too much black on the outlines? |
I'm simply stating you either 1) misread the rules, or 2) overlooked that particular rule. And both sprites are fine. Accepted. |
It was probably a little of both :) Thank-you.
To complete the three together, here's Corsola. http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/CorsolaRevampSolo.png Moving on to Octillery. This might take me a bit longer. EDIT: Octillery and Delibird: http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/OctilleryRevampSolol.pnghttp://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/DelibirdRevampSolo.png EDIT2: I'm too tired to finish Houndour, so I'm done for the night. Will do some more tomorrow/Thursday. |
Corsola is accepted. The outline around the back of Octillery's head looks a bit. . Weird. I think the parts that aren't black should be a bit darker than they currently are. Delibird's face fathers look stuck to its head and should come up and out more like in its DPPt sprite. |
I think I missed a few pixels on Octillery, so I can fix that pretty easily. As for Delibird, you want me to move towards the newer designs for the feathers, right? If so, I'll see what I can do with it tomorrow.
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What programs can I use to save besides Paint? (DON'T WANT JPEG!)
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You can save as other things in Paint. When you are asked to save, there is a little drop-down menu, click on it, and you'll get a few different save types, click on PNG.
I don't have anything this time, I'll try to get something done though... |
Hopefully fixed Octillery's head:
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/OctilleryRevamp-1.png And Delibird's feathers: http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/DelibirdRevamp-2.png How's that? |
Octillery is accepted. Delibird's head feathers now need to be larger. They are much too thin. |
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8963/mantinegsc.png
Gold Mantine Revamp. Overall, I think it needs a bit more black outline, but I thought I'd let you be the judge of that. Also, I noticed that my sprites aren't in the front post, so I'll be uploading them to Imageshack and posting them in this post for the next 15 min. or so. http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/5496/aipomgsc.png Aipom http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/3053/blisseygsc.png Blissey http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9150/krabbygsc.png Krabby http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/15/porygongsc.png Porygon Only 4?! I thought I did more... Ah well. I need to sprite more often. |
You've already submitted Porygon, Krabby, and Aipom. And Mantine's already been finished. Blissey was done by someone I think. . I can't remember if I accepted it. I'll go have a look. |
Here is my revamp of mew:
http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8310/eray.png There isnt that much black is there and it isnt just simple recolored ive resized and head and the ears are closer |
nice mew dude not bad
i like it |
That is an excellent Mew. Great job on it. ^^ It's accepted. =] |
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Ill see if i can make some more! |
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Mantine was done by you, but all of your sprites have been wiped. You said we can do those a couple pages before, but looks like you fixed all of the broken links while I was updating. ^^" I was the one who did Blissey, but you never put it up, I thought I wouldn't bring it up until I re-upped it. |
i forgot to do mew 80x80 here:
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8310/eray.png |
I really didn't even notice. Damn you, sleepiness! >< Thanks for catching that. =] As for the Blissey, sorry. I must've missed it last time I updated the list. |
Bom-bada-bam! Bum-bum-bum-bam-bam!
Heracross is done. This guy was challenging. http://img5.imagebanana.com/img/6qvekm/heracrossgsc.png |
You'll need to make Heracross's body longer. |
I'll do my best, but I don't think I have the skill. Here goes something!
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2320/heracrossgsc.png Meh. |
[center]Little bit longer, please. It currently looks like Midget-Heracross. XDD{/center]
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Now I think he looks a bit ridiculously tall, but you started the project.
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2973/heracrossgscy.png |
Yeah, I think I went just a bit crazy with the 'tall' concept. XD *is shot multiple times* I'll take the previous. Sorry. *shot again* |
Sorry to pull this slightly OT, but if anyone recognises any of their work from this thread on the PSP forum (you'll need to register, but please do, even if it's just for this), then contact me. My Growlithe from a couple of pages back is there, as well as the Electabuzz that was accepted. Anyone else see anything belonging to them? I need all the proof I can get.
Now, back on topic, I'll edit my post with a couple of new revamps when I finish them this morning. In my opinion, Heracross' eyes look odd. I know that's how they looked in GSC, but it looks quite off once it's revamped. Just my $0.02. |
Thank you for your warning. I'll register there~ And I look forward to your newest revamps. |
Well, he's owned up to the theft of those, but I'm still wary of more thefts. Check this thread to see if there are any you recognise:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=192269 I won't post more about it here. Let's get back to work :) |
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Wow, I forgot to post Bayleef!
I actually made a vid and once I find a good video editing program I like, I'll post it on Youtube (leaning towards KDEnLive). |
Bayleef's neck needs to be longer and its head needs to be smaller. |
Whoops, I forgot to post here as well. Delibird and Houndour:
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/DelibirdRevampSolo-1.png http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/HoundourRevampSolo.png Something seems wrong with Houndour, but I'm not sure what. |
I can't quite put my finger on it, but Delibird still doesn't look quite right. Maybe it'd be easier to spot if I put them side-by-side. . http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/Sprites/DelibirdRevampSolo-1.png → http://veekun.com/dex-images/platinum/frame2/225.png As for your Houndour, its body needs to be just a bit slimmer, its legs need to be longer, and its snout needs to be smaller. |
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Redid Bayleef.
I also did Gyarados (Yes, I know you don't want shiny yet, but I'm posting it for an anatomy check. It's for a separate project of mine.) |
Perhaps making Bayleef's face longer would make it look better. As for the Gyarados, its eyes need to be more prominent. And I think getting rid of some of the black outline around its mouth would work. |
Longer in which way? Towards the screen (redo shading); the left of the screen? Make the head taller?
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Toward the left, please. ^^ |
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Ugh.
Still not happy with it. You might be better off with the original as my anatomy changes suck. Also, not to sound rude or anything, but Heracross and Blissey still aren't on the first post. |
It's okay. . No worries~ |
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Bad news, guys. We just lost a lot of the sprites because of the jankness of Photobucket.com. If you don't mind, can you guys use a more reliable site? Also, since better sprites are available thanks to HeartGold/SoulSilver, please try to revamp the GSC sprites to that. Thank you. |
Ugh...
I think most of my sprites that you accepted were re-upped to imageshack a page or two ago. |
I think all of your sprites were kept intact. Mannequin's sprites seemed to be the only ones that were lost. |
My Browsers say otherwise.
All of your sprites are gone. And you put mine on your photobucket. But I put them on my imageshack a few pages back. So could you re-up them? Please? |
My sprites are still there. . What browser are you using? And I'll try to upload them all to my Photobucket. Some people have troubles seeing my sprites until I upload them to Photobucket. |
Ive done this for blastoise:
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7527/jlhkl.png I douth this will get it but still....:) |
I can't see the claws on Blastoise's right arm and there too much black outline around the top of its head. |
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How are my skiploom and jumpluff revamps?
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i call ditto and magikarp(if there not taken..)
EDIT: here they ares: |
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=5026&pictureid=36261
Drowzee. Tell me what places it needs work on,if it does need work. |
i've taken igglypuff (the cutest and kirbiest XD)
EDIT: http://i56.*.com/qrmbzr.jpg This is version one i will Minimize it a little (Make it smaller sorry my english screws) EDIT: http://i55.*.com/23shmdf.jpg Version 2 Shortened EDIT: Oops i just saw this is really old thread i am sorry :(. |
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