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There's not enough black outline on Vulpix's tail. There's not enough black outline on Meowth's paws. There's too much black outline on Ledyba. Aipom is accepted and, yes, you can do them. |
I have a few I've already done, so I suppose I'll contribute an Ariados.
http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/aria-1.png |
First of all, the anatomy is all wrong. Araidos needs to be much skinnier. Secondly, there's too much black out everywhere. |
I fixed Ariados' fatness; this one looks much better IMO. Not quite sure about the black outlines though.
http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/aria-2.png Also, I did a revamp of Remoraid, which was several times easier than Ariados. http://i517.photobucket.com/albums/u335/encas/remor.png |
Remoraid is accepted~ Ariados, however, has screwed up two left legs, and the appendages on its back as well. |
I did Teddiursa. But i'm not expecting it to be accepted.
I still think that something's wrong with it. Here it is: http://i26.*.com/30su2jl.png Oh yeh, I tried fixing it's fatness that Gold gave it. |
The anatomy definitely needs some work, especially around the head. The body still needs to retain most of the chubbiness, and the arms. . Are just. . O.o" Oi. . The right arm looks like it's coming out of Teddiursa's ribs. . |
Wow, this is hard. For me..Lol.
I'm not very well at spriting. http://i30.*.com/30cnho6.png Tried fixing it. .__. Doubt it'd be accepted though,Teddiursa's chubbiness is just too difficult for me to handle. Lmao. D: Not much has changed on the head too.I'm not sure what you want the head to look liek. sry. oo: |
Despite there being an Alakazam attempt (It doesn't look like it was completely edited to be accepted/added), I have an Alakazam revamped quite some time ago from Silver.
For that reason, I won't be surprised if this gets declined. http://i28.*.com/2enb09d.png I also saw that you were lacking a Dewgong, Rhyhorn, Rhydon, Jynx, Dratini, Dragonair, Mew, and Pichu, so here they are: http://i25.*.com/2rh7m8o.png http://i27.*.com/2yyci6q.png http://i30.*.com/whmalh.png http://i26.*.com/1zbfdk6.png http://i28.*.com/ix9kev.png http://i28.*.com/19nzmd.png http://i26.*.com/2qs3y38.png http://i27.*.com/10rintt.png http://i30.*.com/s67iwm.png I have both the Male and Female forms for Rhyhorn and Rhydon, if that's okay. If not, then here's just the male Rhyhorn and the female Rhydon: http://i25.*.com/xdbjie.png http://i27.*.com/1y47tk.png Oh, right. And maybe it was a mistake, but the Tangela is merely a rip from DPPt (in case no one's noticed). |
The following are not accepted. If it's not in the list, it has been accepted. Dragonair - The body is too skinny before the tail. Mew - The head is too long. Pichu - This head looks pretty deformed. Alakazam - The whiskers aren't defined enough. |
Like I said, they're pretty old and I've only decided to edit a few. Nonetheless...
1. Always thought there was something odd about that. Guess I was lazy when I did that. Hah, actually, thanks for pointing that out, because I found myself making quite a few more edits than I originally intended. http://i29.*.com/k3lrn7.png Here's the new one. Oh wow, it looks a ton much better now... just in general. O-o; 2. Fixed it. http://i26.*.com/161x5pf.png Just Imagine how much only a little editing can do. Though I need a little help: would Mew's farthest most eye still be slightly visible (too lazy to check any other reference besides the sprite)? It's head is angled at a 3/4 view. Anyone can answer this. Doesn't really matter if it's answered at all... 3. Some clarification on just how Pichu's head is deformed would be nice, unless the top left (our left) angle is what you were talking about: http://i27.*.com/24vs48m.png 4. Actually, the detail of the whiskers are fine if you compare them to the D/P one. If you need me to add a few more ends, though, that's fine. http://i32.*.com/33opdu1.png Anything else? =3 |
I'll do Miltank! Front + Back~ I'm Using the Gold Sprites, is that okay?
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1) It's good. 2) No, the ears are still too far apart. 3) It's hard to explain. . Perhaps just dropping Pichu would be a good idea. 4) Comparing them to the DPPt one doesn't matter. Anyway, accepted. orangejediman, please read the rules. They will answer all of your questions. And you may learn something. EDIT: I coulda swore I mentioned this in my last post: For God sakes, make your sprites 80x80. It's in the rules, which you people obviously haven't read. |
I did Horsea, and if walms doesn't fix his Vulpix I have this one from a while ago. ^^ I'm not sure if there's enough black in it, though.
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/GoldHorsea.pnghttp://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a10/Sakyathecat/SilverVulpix-1.png |
Vulpix needs more black outline around its tail. Horsea has too much black outline. . Everywhere. |
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I'm back! I'm going to be doing at most 5 back sprites a day starting today, but I need some sleep to sharpen my MS Paint skills. x3
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Have Hoppip, Skiploom and Jumpluff been taken?
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Vulpix is accepted. Horsea's neck shouldn't be outlined. Welcome back~ Pokemon League Champion, all of yours has too much black outline and your Mew looks simply recolored. Try again. Yoda, please check the list. You will have your answer there. |
My jumpluff
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Oh, I didn't see the list.... Anyway here's my Jumpluff, I kinda started from scratch actually^^. The feet look weird, right?
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I know Growlithe has been taken, but is this the kind of thing you're looking for? I revamped the Gold sprite instead of the Sliver sprite, as well.
http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk123/NikNaks93/GrowlitheRevampSolo.png Also, how up to date is the list? I see that a Remoraid got in a few posts above, but that's not marked in it. |
You are not allowed to do a sprite that's already been done, regardless of what game the sprite was from. Besides that, you have too much black outline on your Growlithe. And the list is updated frequently; look at the Last Edited part. As for Jumpluff, the feet do look weird. The right needs to be rounder. |
I merely posted Growlithe to see if it was the correct kind of idea, not to replace the existing one.
And where does there need to be less black? I'll take Swinub and Piloswine to work on, now. |
You should've read the front page, then you would've had a fine grasp on the idea. Obviously, considering I said 'outline', you need to change the outline. Again, you should've read the front page. Then you'd know you don't have to claim. |
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