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Crimson Stardust June 15th, 2009 11:00 PM

Ace Phantom Custom Tiles
 
Hei everyone,i am making custom tiles for my hack but some of them are for public...


Here goes...This is a few tiles i come up with..btw,i make them from scratch..

*Tileset 1*
*Tileset 2*
Some revamping tile,edit version from tileset 1 and new tiles








They are not that good..but along the way,i will pick up more skills and my skill will improve and i can come up with much more better tiles..
So stay tune for more updtes...XD:);)

Your pc buddy,
Ace Phantom

Ray Maverick June 15th, 2009 11:19 PM

These are nice tiles!I like them, Ace.Keep up, and fix some dimension mistakes, k?

gummybarz June 15th, 2009 11:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ray Maverick (Post 4751734)
These are nice tiles!I like them,Ace.Keep up,and fix some dimension mistakes,k?


Could you be more elaborate next time. You didn't crit him at all or tell him what you think he should improve. Your not helping by saying "These are very nice tiles!" Some of them do need work...

My review is in the spolier...


Spoiler:

http://i43.*.com/2d0gvb8.jpg
The first house i think you need to re do, the first thing i noticed
is the top, both the left and right side are not connected right.


The second house very well done, the shading is good and the shape.
The only thing i would say to change is he door, but that's just me.

For the 5th house i do not like the left corner, it doesn't match the rest
i think you should fix it.. But it's up to you.


http://i44.*.com/11u8by1.jpg
Very well done, i think these are the best out of all of them. The only
thing i'm going to say is, about the small one. I don't like the shape of the top.


http://i42.*.com/2gwuff8.jpg

This one i think is your worst, The first thing is the roof needs changing.
The right side overlaps the top and it's not equal with the left. Then the next section
i don't like the colors you used for it maybe a lighter brown next time. The rest is fine just fix these little mistakes and you will be good

Crimson Stardust June 15th, 2009 11:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemon xd (Post 4751774)
Could you be more elaborate next time. You didn't crit him at all or tell him what you think he should improve. Your not helping by saying "These are very nice tiles!" Some of them do need work...

My review is in the spolier...


Spoiler:

http://i43.*.com/2d0gvb8.jpg
The first house i think you need to re do, the first thing i noticed
is the top, both the left and right side are not connected right.


The second house very well done, the shading is good and the shape.
The only thing i would say to change is he door, but that's just me.

For the 5th house i do not like the left corner, it doesn't match the rest
i think you should fix it.. But it's up to you.


http://i44.*.com/11u8by1.jpg
Very well done, i think these are the best out of all of them. The only
thing i'm going to say is, about the small one. I don't like the shape of the top.


http://i42.*.com/2gwuff8.jpg

This one i think is your worst, The first thing is the roof needs changing.
The right side overlaps the top and it's not equal with the left. Then the next section
i don't like the colors you used for it maybe a lighter brown next time. The rest is fine just fix these little mistakes and you will be good

owhkae..cool...i will fix them up and post the fixed tiles after i finish them....XD

Kindo June 16th, 2009 12:13 AM

Well since I don't know much about spriting but these have nothing bad in them except maybe you could fix the top left corner(Already mentioned)And the last one of them all by making the roof on the right side equal to the left side and then they will be almost perfect.

Good Job!

-Mr. Hack

Logan June 16th, 2009 8:10 AM

Some reviewage below xD Not too much, but meh!

Spoiler:


Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4751700)

http://i43.*.com/2d0gvb8.jpg

Well, some of the lines on these are way too scratchy. You really need to either, make them straight or learn to make them rather more rounded. Here you have used not very much shading, and what you have is actually rather bad. Okay, I can't say much more other than keep spriting.

http://i41.*.com/k0t2fn.jpg

These are again the lines are way to scratchy and not normal. Again, you don't seen to have learned the concept of shading. I suggest checking Chesu's stickied tutorials as he has a very good one on shading.
http://i44.*.com/11u8by1.jpg

Hmm.. The interior of it isn't too bad. But it is way too repetitive, maybe try making a new pattern of maybe, checking the actually tiles from Platinum and adjusting or using that design. But then again Platinum's design wasn't too good. You could improve on that. On to the side and top outline. Again it's way too repetitive and they are just little dips then squares and really badly done tbh. Onto the bottom, these too are badly done, the curves? Are really badly outline and more square and straight then the curves they should be. Sorry, but just trying to help.

http://i42.*.com/2gwuff8.jpg

This one isn't too bad. But, it's way too similar to other houses of it's nature. This time the lines aren't half bad. But again, it's the shading that's letting you down, just work on it ;)




Sorry about that, but I'm only trying to help ;)

Crimson Stardust June 16th, 2009 6:21 PM

hey
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Alice. (Post 4752379)
Some reviewage below xD Not too much, but meh!

Spoiler:






Sorry about that, but I'm only trying to help ;)

hey..its okae..i did say i accep advice and critism..it can help me improve on my tiles..
btw,i knw about the shading as i am not sure to do the shading and the palletes stff..lol...but i will check chesu tut

Tunaboy88 June 17th, 2009 12:18 AM

http://i43.*.com/2d0gvb8.jpg
The First 3 tiles are great but it is just the last two tha are weird in a way, I meant who lives in a triangle house itz cool but weird and the other just seems odd at the top corner anyways good luck in the futrue.

Crimson Stardust June 17th, 2009 1:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tunaboy88 (Post 4754465)
http://i43.*.com/2d0gvb8.jpg
The First 3 tiles are great but it is just the last two tha are weird in a way, I meant who lives in a triangle house itz cool but weird and the other just seems odd at the top corner anyways good luck in the futrue.

owhyeah..i notice that..i will not be editing them though..i will fix the others...

Crimson Stardust June 19th, 2009 8:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hanhyejinaddikt (Post 4764140)
I think it's really nice.!!!

hey tanx..XD
i am making a sheet of tiles..

Vannah☆ June 20th, 2009 5:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4751700)



Everything here except for the second does not look like its from a birds eye view like how buildings look in the games. To fix this you should add a bit more of the roof ... I think. Shorten the view of the bottom of the building a tad and add to the top a bit more. Especially on the third one.
[/QUOTE]


This is nice, but please oh please! xD I don't know if you meant to or not to prevent steeling, but please don't save on paint. xD It ruins the sprite. Save on paint.net or photoshop. ;)

Keep up the great work! These are wonderful for your first few tiles!


Quote:

Originally Posted by Tunaboy88 (Post 4754465)
The First 3 tiles are great but it is just the last two tha are weird in a way, I meant who lives in a triangle house itz cool but weird and the other just seems odd at the top corner anyways good luck in the futrue.

Played DP? That triangle house sorta reminds me of this: http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a62/nightpaw/triangle.png I think its a cool idea. xD

Crimson Stardust June 21st, 2009 12:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vannah☆ (Post 4765981)

Everything here except for the second does not look like its from a birds eye view like how buildings look in the games. To fix this you should add a bit more of the roof ... I think. Shorten the view of the bottom of the building a tad and add to the top a bit more. Especially on the third one.


Tanx for the advice..i have problem doing the roof or making it look like the tiles in-game...but i am trying hard to make it look nice...


Vannah:This is nice, but please oh please! xD I don't know if you meant to or not to prevent steeling, but please don't save on paint. xD It ruins the sprite. Save on paint.net or photoshop. ;)
Keep up the great work! These are wonderful for your first few tiles!

Tanx..XD






Vannah:Played DP? That triangle house sorta reminds me of this: http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a62/nightpaw/triangle.png I think its a cool idea. xD[/QUOTE]
I know..that is why i try to do it triangular but it does not look pleasing{my tile}but i will improve on it...

Here is a tiles i make...{the pallete still need a little bit work i think or the roof or anything}
comment on it...{critism accepted as if there are none,i will not know my mistake...}

Practice makes perfect...

http://i40.*.com/6oftzm.jpg

Vannah☆ June 23rd, 2009 8:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4769201)

That first building is off to a great start. :o But it looks almost G/S/C -ish. Give the spheres some shading. The roof is lacking some sort of new mechanic that was used in FR/LG, R/S/E, and D/P/P but I can't quite place my finger on it. You made the base part of the house look very nice. Just do that with the roof. Maybe some different shading with dithering pixels.

Second one: I like the idea for the roof and stuff. xD The door needs some work and the roof needs some more shading in my opinion.

Third: Very nice. Clearly R/S/E style -ish. I'm no expert though. ^_^;;

Fourth: Odd, but I like it. Could use another window. Maybe use that striped lining roof style for the first building?

Fifth: I love the bottom part of the house except for the fact that the door could use some shading. I see what you were going for with the overall look combined with the roof and all, but you need to do it better. The roof looks like a bunch of brown play-doh snakes drooping off the center piece. I think it calls for more of that vertical lining.

Sixth: Nice little cabin, just like the third, though the door could use a light brown color striping instead of the black.

Seventh: It's alright, but I don't like the overall idea very much. It reminds me of the munchkins from the wizard of oz. Something that they would live in. Door could be...bigger?

Eighth(final): Looks like a little lego house. I guess it could be sort of a little beachside run down PC, but it needs some more hightech kinda stuff for the big city. Larger size, more roof detail, and some high class shading and extra windows.


Keep it up!


Crimson Stardust June 24th, 2009 3:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vannah☆ (Post 4777894)
That first building is off to a great start. :o But it looks almost G/S/C -ish. Give the spheres some shading. The roof is lacking some sort of new mechanic that was used in FR/LG, R/S/E, and D/P/P but I can't quite place my finger on it. You made the base part of the house look very nice. Just do that with the roof. Maybe some different shading with dithering pixels.

Second one: I like the idea for the roof and stuff. xD The door needs some work and the roof needs some more shading in my opinion.

Third: Very nice. Clearly R/S/E style -ish. I'm no expert though. ^_^;;

Fourth: Odd, but I like it. Could use another window. Maybe use that striped lining roof style for the first building?

Fifth: I love the bottom part of the house except for the fact that the door could use some shading. I see what you were going for with the overall look combined with the roof and all, but you need to do it better. The roof looks like a bunch of brown play-doh snakes drooping off the center piece. I think it calls for more of that vertical lining.

Sixth: Nice little cabin, just like the third, though the door could use a light brown color striping instead of the black.

Seventh: It's alright, but I don't like the overall idea very much. It reminds me of the munchkins from the wizard of oz. Something that they would live in. Door could be...bigger?

Eighth(final): Looks like a little lego house. I guess it could be sort of a little beachside run down PC, but it needs some more hightech kinda stuff for the big city. Larger size, more roof detail, and some high class shading and extra windows.


Keep it up!


okae..tanx...i will fix up them to make them more perfect..lol..XD
btw,i forgot to add in this tile too...
http://i41.*.com/1531ro1.jpg

Hey guys..i want more comment on all my current tiles..please drop a comment/critism here to make me make tiles better..:p

Crimson Stardust June 24th, 2009 4:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dark aron (Post 4781777)
they are very good better than what I could do any day XD like the oneyuo just added in your post its nice

hey tanx..is there any problems with it you can point out..?

Naruto Uzumaki The Nine Tailed Fox June 25th, 2009 11:24 AM

http://i44.*.com/11u8by1.jpg
I love this one, you did a great job on it.

edit:
http://i40.*.com/6oftzm.jpg
These are also very well done.

Nyu~♥! June 25th, 2009 4:27 PM

Those are awesome! I can't do any better anyway, your doing great! I've never done tiles before, just fakemon sprites.

Crimson Stardust June 25th, 2009 7:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Naruto Uzumaki The Nine Tailed Fox (Post 4787145)
http://i44.*.com/11u8by1.jpg
I love this one, you did a great job on it.

edit:
http://i40.*.com/6oftzm.jpg
These are also very well done.

Quote:

Originally Posted by gary_productions (Post 4787683)
i like the tom world tiles!
Great job dude!

Quote:

Originally Posted by kitsukitty (Post 4788231)
Those are awesome! I can't do any better anyway, your doing great! I've never done tiles before, just fakemon sprites.

tanx you guys..
btw,is there any problems you can point out??

gary_productions June 25th, 2009 9:29 PM

its a verry nice Tree :)
Can il use some tiles in our hacks?you get credit of course

Crimson Stardust June 25th, 2009 10:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gary_productions (Post 4789040)
its a verry nice Tree :)
Can il use some tiles in our hacks?you get credit of course

yeah..sure..
you can use them...XD

Crimson Stardust June 27th, 2009 2:30 AM

Improved tiles
 
After i get all the comments,i try to improved my tiles..
here it is..
some are the same while some i make amendments...
so comment on them guys..XD
http://i42.*.com/a48zy9.jpg
Here the tiles i improved on..{not all of them}
http://i44.*.com/2nhq0pi.jpg
here is more torn world tiles i added..I will add more of them in time to come..XD

Crimson Stardust June 30th, 2009 5:28 AM

a new tile
 
since i was send home from school and has to stay at home for two days,i decided to make a tile...
here it is...
see if there is any improvements i can implement...{for now,this tile is not for public but those tile before this post is for public...

Comment/Critism i can accept,no matter how harsh it is..XD


Robert Conley June 30th, 2009 2:31 PM

Spoiler:


http://i43.*.com/2d0gvb8.jpg
The first and last seem awkwardly shaped and the pokeball on the third could be lower, so it isnt touching the top beam, also the roof shape near the back of the second one seems extremely awkward compared to the rest of the roof.other than that i like them.

http://i41.*.com/k0t2fn.jpg
These just seem far too bland and on the second one the base is all one color making it look flat but then the pillar has the look of being rounded.

http://i44.*.com/11u8by1.jpg
Good work on these theyre the best torn world tiles ive seen. I'll have to remember these if I ever decide to resume my hack.

http://i42.*.com/2gwuff8.jpg
first off the symmetry is terrible. I can understand not having the bottom symmetrical but the roof should definitely be symmetrical. The roof colors also hurt my eyes.


Reck June 30th, 2009 4:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4793369)
After i get all the comments,i try to improved my tiles..
here it is..
some are the same while some i make amendments...
so comment on them guys..XD
http://i42.*.com/a48zy9.jpg
Here the tiles i improved on..{not all of them}
http://i44.*.com/2nhq0pi.jpg
here is more torn world tiles i added..I will add more of them in time to come..XD

White building: I'll go from the top. White in my opinion Isn't very good a good color for a building. Also In you other sprites the light is coming from the left in this one it's coming from the right. Make it so the light comes from the same direction in all your sprites.

Blue checker roofed house: Not really any complaints.

Yellow house: No complaints.

Brick house: work on shading the white part.

Red house: No complaints.

Blue house: Hmmm... this house bugs me for some reason. maybe make the building part shorter by say 5 pixels?

Blue house with brown roof: the roof is weird. prehaps you should make the building part Skinnier? and shade the roof.

Short brick house: again shade the white part.

green house: make the roof shorter.(just what I think though)

PC: shade the roof.

Overall your not all that bad. You just need to hone your skills when it comes to shading. Good luck.

Crimson Stardust June 30th, 2009 7:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Misty Sama (Post 4808150)
Spoiler:



http://i43.*.com/2d0gvb8.jpg
The first and last seem awkwardly shaped and the pokeball on the third could be lower, so it isnt touching the top beam, also the roof shape near the back of the second one seems extremely awkward compared to the rest of the roof.other than that i like them.

http://i41.*.com/k0t2fn.jpg
These just seem far too bland and on the second one the base is all one color making it look flat but then the pillar has the look of being rounded.

http://i44.*.com/11u8by1.jpg
Good work on these theyre the best torn world tiles ive seen. I'll have to remember these if I ever decide to resume my hack.

http://i42.*.com/2gwuff8.jpg
first off the symmetry is terrible. I can understand not having the bottom symmetrical but the roof should definitely be symmetrical. The roof colors also hurt my eyes.



Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4808491)
White building: I'll go from the top. White in my opinion Isn't very good a good color for a building. Also In you other sprites the light is coming from the left in this one it's coming from the right. Make it so the light comes from the same direction in all your sprites.

Blue checker roofed house: Not really any complaints.

Yellow house: No complaints.

Brick house: work on shading the white part.

Red house: No complaints.

Blue house: Hmmm... this house bugs me for some reason. maybe make the building part shorter by say 5 pixels?

Blue house with brown roof: the roof is weird. prehaps you should make the building part Skinnier? and shade the roof.

Short brick house: again shade the white part.

green house: make the roof shorter.(just what I think though)

PC: shade the roof.

Overall your not all that bad. You just need to hone your skills when it comes to shading. Good luck.

Owhokae..tnax for the comments..I am fixing them though...
I have trouble choosing the palletes to make the tiles look nice and i have problem with the shading part..xD
btw,what is your opinion on this tile...:
http://i40.*.com/zxs46p.jpg

-Smash June 30th, 2009 11:03 PM

The latest one is your best so far, no doubt.



Your older tiles in general had horribly saturated colors, that would make one think you used Ms Paint's default colors. That blue house tops the list, followed by the yellow roofed one and the green one.
Do a favor to our eyes and lower the saturation on the bright colors, please.


Then we have our black outline problems. Black outlines can be used correctly around dark colors, and shadowy places on buildings.. (Your most recent one the best example)
But then take a good hard look at that white building with the four spheres on top. The triangle on the roof with the pokeball, specifically. See how hideous it looks? White inside, with a black outline of sh it around it.. A slightly dark gray would look alot better on it.

Other houses have this problem as well, like the one with the long yellowy roof. Instead of black, a dark brown would look ten times better on it. Just remember that for light colors, a black outline is not the way to go.


You should also fix the jagged lines all over your tiles. I'd recommend to search for an 'anti-aliasing' spriting tutorial to help you out with it.




EDIT: F yeah, 15 POSTS!!!

Crimson Stardust July 1st, 2009 12:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -Smash (Post 4809757)
The latest one is your best so far, no doubt.



Your older tiles in general had horribly saturated colors, that would make one think you used Ms Paint's default colors. That blue house tops the list, followed by the yellow roofed one and the green one.
Do a favor to our eyes and lower the saturation on the bright colors, please.


Then we have our black outline problems. Black outlines can be used correctly around dark colors, and shadowy places on buildings.. (Your most recent one the best example)
But then take a good hard look at that white building with the four spheres on top. The triangle on the roof with the pokeball, specifically. See how hideous it looks? White inside, with a black outline of sh it around it.. A slightly dark gray would look alot better on it.

Other houses have this problem as well, like the one with the long yellowy roof. Instead of black, a dark brown would look ten times better on it. Just remember that for light colors, a black outline is not the way to go.


You should also fix the jagged lines all over your tiles. I'd recommend to search for an 'anti-aliasing' spriting tutorial to help you out with it.




EDIT: F yeah, 15 POSTS!!!

Owhokae..i am going to fix them though..btw what is 'anti-aliasing'???
i am constantly improving...Xd
just need more advice an suggestion/critism to let me know my mistake

Edit:Btw here another tile i make using a source from a game{not pokemon}
http://i44.*.com/2r23w28.jpg

Reck July 1st, 2009 5:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4809222)
Owhokae..tnax for the comments..I am fixing them though...
I have trouble choosing the palletes to make the tiles look nice and i have problem with the shading part..xD
btw,what is your opinion on this tile...:
http://i40.*.com/zxs46p.jpg

Hmmm... you do have trouble with shading...but you'll get the hang of it. If you want me to i can edit this one and show you what i mean by light coming from the same direction in all your tiles...it appears in this one...the light is coming from the right and left. Where as most of the time it comes from the upper left hand corner. If you want i can show you what i mean. Anyway i wish you the best of luck.

Crimson Stardust July 1st, 2009 5:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4810330)
Hmmm... you do have trouble with shading...but you'll get the hang of it. If you want me to i can edit this one and show you what i mean by light coming from the same direction in all your tiles...it appears in this one...the light is coming from the right and left. Where as most of the time it comes from the upper left hand corner. If you want i can show you what i mean.

Sure thing..xD
i want to know how to shade my tiles..xD

Reck July 1st, 2009 5:25 AM

Alright i took a minute and edited this tile for you. You don't have to use it if you don't want to. This is for future reference.
http://i43.*.com/egww06.png

Which looks better to you. The one on the right is the one I edited.

Crimson Stardust July 1st, 2009 5:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4810347)
Alright i took a minute and edited this tile for you. You don't have to use it if you don't want to. This is for future reference.
http://i43.*.com/egww06.png

Which looks better to you. The one on the right is the one I edited.

You are a one heck of a spriter..i like the edited one better..xD

Reck July 1st, 2009 6:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4810351)
You are a one heck of a spriter..i like the edited one better..xD

Haha thanks. If you ever need help just let me know I'll try and help ya. By the way you new house is pretty good.

Crimson Stardust July 1st, 2009 7:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4810443)
Haha thanks. If you ever need help just let me know I'll try and help ya. By the way you new house is pretty good.

Tanx..it is for a tiles on the beach/near the beach..xD

Btw..here is an edit tiles of the first one i post quite some time ago..
tell me how it has improved...
http://i40.*.com/ohvjmx.jpg

negative July 1st, 2009 7:39 AM

Nice tiles!
You are using Megaman Star force tiles/graphics.
Hope to see some more!

Crimson Stardust July 1st, 2009 7:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~Arcade Star~ (Post 4810639)
Nice tiles!
You are using Megaman Star force tiles/graphics.
Hope to see some more!

Tanx...so you know where i get them..xD
yeah i see it from the megaman games an tried to make tiles like the game style..XD

Reck July 2nd, 2009 5:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4810541)
Tanx..it is for a tiles on the beach/near the beach..xD

Btw..here is an edit tiles of the first one i post quite some time ago..
tell me how it has improved...
http://i40.*.com/ohvjmx.jpg

Hey it looks better! But which way do you want the light to come from? Your tiles have light coming from every which-a-way. This one has light from the right so it seems. Just match up which direction the light comes from on all your tiles. It will look a lot better in my opinion.

Crimson Stardust July 2nd, 2009 6:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4814036)
Hey it looks better! But which way do you want the light to come from? Your tiles have light coming from every which-a-way. This one has light from the right so it seems. Just match up which direction the light comes from on all your tiles. It will look a lot better in my opinion.

Owhkae tanx...this is tanxs to you man...you teach me quite a thing..xD...
but i still need improving to be good like you..xD

Kyouya July 17th, 2009 12:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ageangel (Post 4809848)
Owhokae..i am going to fix them though..btw what is 'anti-aliasing'???
i am constantly improving...Xd
just need more advice an suggestion/critism to let me know my mistake

Edit:Btw here another tile i make using a source from a game{not pokemon}
http://i44.*.com/2r23w28.jpg

isnt that the card shop from megaman starforce

Crimson Stardust July 17th, 2009 3:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by yuuichi (Post 4867523)
isnt that the card shop from megaman starforce

yeah t is..i make it using the megaman game houses as the source

Domin-8 July 17th, 2009 4:30 PM

I have some advice, some of your tiles are saved as JPEG and/or BMP, both are very bad to save your artwork as. I did notice some of them are PNG. PNG is what you want to go with all the time, it does not distort your artwork like JPEG will

Crimson Stardust July 17th, 2009 4:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Domin-8 (Post 4868246)
I have some advice, some of your tiles are saved as JPEG and/or BMP, both are very bad to save your artwork as. I did notice some of them are PNG. PNG is what you want to go with all the time, it does not distort your artwork like JPEG will

yeah..i know..some of them i save them wrongly..my bet..xD...
but i am gonna change my atyle of making the tiles so just wait for new tiles..xD

Crimson Stardust July 25th, 2009 9:05 PM

A new improved tileset
C n C
Here is the tile i have make and are constantly improving them as my skills in spriting increased..xD..rate them kae??...
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Tileset.jpg
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Tornworldtiles.jpg
I make all the tiles from scratch

Edit:My newest tile
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/capsolcorp.png



Sorry for double posting but i neeed to have my tile to be view by people and receive comment and critism..

Reck August 1st, 2009 8:06 AM

I'd suggest using something like this for a base...
http://i28.*.com/2mnp4r7.png
Notice each tile is 16x16...
Another thing...the doors on the building should be 16x16 and have an outline like this...
http://i32.*.com/23udllk.png
And should go directly on on one of the tiles in the base.
With that in mind try making a house with that info and I'll give you C+C on it...and so on... look at this as a spriting lesson i suppose... I wish you luck!

Ghost August 1st, 2009 9:40 AM

These are really good keep up the good, work and i think you could make some better :P also try making trainer sprites im positve that you can :D

Crimson Stardust August 2nd, 2009 12:17 AM

Here is the newest tile i make.I use the base which reck gave and his advice,so from this on,i will make the tiles following the way he tell me...xD

tell me what do you think:
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/fff.png
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/XD.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/SinnohPallete-2.png

Crimson Stardust August 6th, 2009 7:11 AM

The edit version of the tile i recently posted...XD
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/SinnohPallete-3.png
OR
this:http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/SinnohPallete-4.png
Credits:Reck for pallete{maybe need to give credit..LoL}
Please do tell me your opinions..

Crimson Stardust August 8th, 2009 5:46 AM

Tileset
 
i don't know why no one has been posted at my threads..i cannot get to improved if my tiles has error if no one posted..
anyway here is another tileset...
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Tileset-1.png
Btw,this tiles are not for public
Give comments you guys

Reck August 8th, 2009 5:36 PM

Sorry it took me so long to comment, eh? Well your tiles are looking better... why did you go against what i said? I said the door tile must be put right on top of the 16x16 pixel tile... so now next thing the houses must be centered on the tile so it will work In-game. like so...
http://i27.*.com/30lgqrt.png
Try using this base to make a tile... then make a triangle roofed house house... with the same basic idea... then I'll be back, eh?

Crimson Stardust August 8th, 2009 9:27 PM

Did you mean this way reck??
another thing is why not many people giving me comments on my tiles??
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Tileset-1.png

Reck August 9th, 2009 11:48 AM

Better but, not quite. Your gonna have to rearrange a few things shown in the pic below...
http://i28.*.com/2dv0c51.png
notice i moved the door a bit so that the house is centered inside the squares.

Next on your triangle roofs extend them back a bit more say 5-7 pixels?

Crimson Stardust August 9th, 2009 4:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4964050)
Better but, not quite. Your gonna have to rearrange a few things shown in the pic below...
http://i28.*.com/2dv0c51.png
notice i moved the door a bit so that the house is centered inside the squares.

Next on your triangle roofs extend them back a bit more say 5-7 pixels?

kae,tanx dude..i will keep this in mind when making a new tile

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ August 10th, 2009 8:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4964050)
Better but, not quite. Your gonna have to rearrange a few things shown in the pic below...
http://i28.*.com/2dv0c51.png
notice i moved the door a bit so that the house is centered inside the squares.

Next on your triangle roofs extend them back a bit more say 5-7 pixels?

I really don't see the difference in these pics =/
But as for your lamp post, I think it could use a bit more shading


:t354:TG

Crimson Stardust August 11th, 2009 2:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 4969608)
I really don't see the difference in these pics =/
But as for your lamp post, I think it could use a bit more shading


:t354:TG

Actually there is,if you focused on the door,it is move a pixel to the side..xD..
anyway for the lampost,it was a ripped but i will edit it..xD

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ August 11th, 2009 7:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ♠ΛςΣ ρπΔητΦΩ♠ (Post 4970256)
Actually there is,if you focused on the door,it is move a pixel to the side..xD..
anyway for the lampost,it was a ripped but i will edit it..xD

But either way they both look amazing, and looking forward to that lamp post edit


:t354:TG

Crimson Stardust August 11th, 2009 7:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 4970904)
But either way they both look amazing, and looking forward to that lamp post edit


:t354:TG

Really??tanx..a comliment for my tiles finally...xD...
anyway,what do you think of my other tiles??

Reck August 11th, 2009 8:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 4969608)
I really don't see the difference in these pics =/
But as for your lamp post, I think it could use a bit more shading


:t354:TG

Really? look closely in the first one the house is not centered in the second one it is... the smallest things are the most important things in tiles/all sprites...

Anyway any new tiles to look forward to? Perhaps a skyscraper?

Crimson Stardust August 11th, 2009 9:02 AM

i cannot make a scysrapper now as it will probably looks similar to you as i will be looking at it for ideas...xD

Reck August 11th, 2009 9:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ♠ΛςΣ ρπΔητΦΩ♠ (Post 4971331)
i cannot make a scysrapper now as it will probably looks similar to you as i will be looking at it for ideas...xD

No! don't look at mine cause its looks horrible... look at the one in one of my vm's to Hall of Famer for ideas... k?

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ August 11th, 2009 2:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ♠ΛςΣ ρπΔητΦΩ♠ (Post 4970917)
Really??tanx..a comliment for my tiles finally...xD...
anyway,what do you think of my other tiles??

I really love them (not kidding here) I just had a problem with the lamp post thats all, but you said it wasn't yours


:t354:TG

Crimson Stardust August 11th, 2009 2:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Reck (Post 4971346)
No! don't look at mine cause its looks horrible... look at the one in one of my vm's to Hall of Famer for ideas... k?

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 4972666)
I really love them (not kidding here) I just had a problem with the lamp post thats all, but you said it wasn't yours


:t354:TG

Yeah sure thing dude...{reffering to Reck}...xdI will have a look at them

abd tanx for the compliment..the lamopst was a ripped from another game,it looks great that is why i posted it too...xD

Crimson Stardust August 13th, 2009 12:55 AM

new tile..http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Hotel-1.png

.Tactic. August 13th, 2009 12:56 AM

Woah you are getting even better at this man!
good luck - i really love that new one - it seems a bit DP-ish - thats good!

Crimson Stardust August 13th, 2009 1:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 07harris (Post 4978707)
Woah you are getting even better at this man!
good luck - i really love that new one - it seems a bit DP-ish - thats good!

Tnx..i will make more and my skill will be improving and improving everytime

Crimson Stardust August 14th, 2009 6:51 AM

A new tile,don't know what to call it or what it is for,maybe a gym,a shopping centre,a evil team base a pokemon league...xD
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/unknown.png

Crimson Stardust August 18th, 2009 8:40 PM

new tiles!!!!new tiles!!!!....
I have not update the main post...xD
http://i31.*.com/6r4l83.png
Come on guys,rate/comment on them..i don't know whether they look good or not if you guys don't tell me anything about them....:(

Crimson Stardust August 31st, 2009 12:00 AM

my lates random tile spriting..xD
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/RandomxD.png

.Tactic. August 31st, 2009 10:51 AM

I am not so sure about the pink roofed one but the other two are awesome!
On thhe pink roofed one it seems way too bright

Crimson Stardust August 31st, 2009 7:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Codec (Post 5060847)
I am not so sure about the pink roofed one but the other two are awesome!
On thhe pink roofed one it seems way too bright

haha..xD..yeah maybe it is too bright and thanks for saying the other two are awesome..

Here the newest tile..
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Pinkhouse.png
I also don't know why i am using pink again for this...
haha..i will be updating the first post then..

.Tactic. September 1st, 2009 1:57 AM

For some reason - this new one looks ok with pink....
It is the best of your I have seen! Simply amasing!
I might use that in my hack if it is ok with you!

Kyouya September 1st, 2009 3:59 PM

http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Pinkhouse.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/SinnohPallete-4.png
these two are your best so far

ShuppetShopper September 2nd, 2009 7:47 AM

Ace phantom, your tiles a pretty good, keep up the good work :)

Crimson Stardust September 2nd, 2009 10:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Codec (Post 5063554)
For some reason - this new one looks ok with pink....

Quote:

Originally Posted by Codec (Post 5063554)
It is the best of your I have seen! Simply amasing!
I might use that in my hack if it is ok with you!

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShuppetShopper (Post 5068087)
Ace phantom, your tiles a pretty good, keep up the good work :)

Tanx for the comments guys...i will still improve my skills and post more tiles to be commented on...
Here is a changed of tiles i edit from my old tiles...
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Changed.png

Edit:Here us a new tile:I am not sure what to call it...
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/AntiquedPokemonGym.png
The pokeball thingi since off to me..

Novus September 4th, 2009 11:47 PM

Hey man, first just wanted to say I love the lastest building, it's looking great.

Ok, onto my C&C, how about adding some shading to the pokeball's on top, to make them more 3d unless of course they're meant to be flat lol.
Also, how bout adding a bit of shading to the roof to accomdate the shadow of the bit on top.

Hope this helps
-Novus-

mindfreak September 6th, 2009 4:00 AM

Hey your tiles aren't bad but I personally think some of the palettes are to bright.
Do you also make trees and other stuff.

Crimson Stardust September 6th, 2009 4:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mindfreak (Post 5082995)
Hey your tiles aren't bad but I personally think some of the palettes are to bright.
Do you also make trees and other stuff.

Thanks for the comments guys..anyway,i am trying to make trees..I also make other stuff but have not post it here..
anyway,new tiles[improved] updates
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Hotel-3.png
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/AntiquedPokemonGym-1.png

Just change some things...i change the palletes and remove a ew things

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ September 6th, 2009 1:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ♠ΛςΣ ρπΔητΦΩ♠ (Post 5083067)

Thanks for the comments guys..anyway,i am trying to make trees..I also make other stuff but have not post it here..
anyway,new tiles[improved] updates
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Hotel-3.png
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/AntiquedPokemonGym-1.png

Just change some things...i change the palletes and remove a ew things

Can't see anything bad about these 2 buildings because the shading and coloring is really done well in my eyes. But for the 1st building it would of been cooler if you put a 2nd window on the 2nd floor


:t354:TG

Crimson Stardust September 8th, 2009 5:05 AM

I do not know why i cannot see the most recent post..LoL..anyway,come on people,i want more comments..how can i improve without anyone commenting on them..
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/RevampFireRedProfLab.png
You can say this is a revamp of the fire red prof lab or a upgrade version...xD
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/RandomxD-1.png
I don't know why,but there seems to be a problem with this

Kam the Narwhal September 8th, 2009 2:47 PM

The main problem I have with the sprite is the windows. See, if you were to look at a regular window, you'd notice that the shine on the window looks a lot different. It's a lot wider, and with less lines. It currently looks like you're using a sheet of gray paper with white lines on it. I did a quick edit in Paint to show you what I mean.

[IMG]http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8739/brgve.png[/IMG]

Also, windows aren't normally such a bright blue. These are still looking nice, though. (:

Crimson Stardust September 8th, 2009 8:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam the Narwhal (Post 5094740)
The main problem I have with the sprite is the windows. See, if you were to look at a regular window, you'd notice that the shine on the window looks a lot different. It's a lot wider, and with less lines. It currently looks like you're using a sheet of gray paper with white lines on it. I did a quick edit in Paint to show you what I mean.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kam the Narwhal (Post 5094740)

[IMG]http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/8739/brgve.png[/IMG]

Also, windows aren't normally such a bright blue. These are still looking nice, though. (:

Tanx for the tips dude..but i prefer the windows to be this way...LoL...as i want all my windows to have the same look..xD

Edit:..just abit improvements to the lab..check it out..xD
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/RevampFireRedProfLab-1.png

Crimson Stardust September 11th, 2009 8:33 PM

Here a update..it is one in the hgss rom..i use codec ripped tile as a review..so i don't know if it is really form hgss as i cannot play the rom..xD
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/thsace.png
Codec ripped tile
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/HgSshouse.png
This is my version of the tile
The roof need to be work on..kinda hard to do the roof[for me that is..]
I am gonna work on the roof after i know what to do

.Tactic. September 11th, 2009 11:59 PM

It is awesome!
Nice work using mine as a base!
But I think you might have either rushed or just fell asleep with the roof!

Crimson Stardust September 12th, 2009 9:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Codec (Post 5106397)
It is awesome!
Nice work using mine as a base!
But I think you might have either rushed or just fell asleep with the roof!

I have Soul Silver on Rom!
If you want it - msn me :)

xD..yeah,,i get what you mean..i will redo the roof when i am more focused..xD

Mystery September 12th, 2009 11:02 AM

I like that Lab but only the roof is so made i think its standing and the rest of the building normal possed.

i try it again
it's looks like the roof stand right up

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ September 12th, 2009 7:12 PM

I love the coloring and shading of the roof but like you said you did mess up. The roof looks like an open book in my opinion


:t354:TG

Crimson Stardust September 13th, 2009 6:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 5110390)
I love the coloring and shading of the roof but like you said you did mess up. The roof looks like an open book in my opinion


:t354:TG

hmm..i think i will be doing the roof to my style not following the hgss tile...xD

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ September 13th, 2009 4:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ♠ΛςΣ ρπΔητΦΩ♠ (Post 5112302)

hmm..i think i will be doing the roof to my style not following the hgss tile...xD

I know its your version, I'm just simply saying IMO it looks like an open book, but still great ;)


:t354:TG

Crimson Stardust September 13th, 2009 5:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 5114576)

I know its your version, I'm just simply saying IMO it looks like an open book, but still great ;)


:t354:TG

Yeah..i know...i still working on it as the roof is kinda hard to do for me that is..anyway here another tile i finish..it is from hgss too the one from the first village/town and also the cherry grove[just started playing the game..tell me what you think
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/oldbrakhousetile.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/cHERRYgROVE.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/2ndCherryGrovecity.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Postbox.png
only the door and the style of the rendering does not follow exactly the original tile..xD..The post box is kinda weird.

Ray Maverick September 14th, 2009 2:55 AM

The new tiles seem cool, but you need to work on your shading. ;)
And if you're making these tiles for hacks, and not only to showcase them, make sure that the door tile of a building is only one tile, because there will be a problem with the tile behaviour (the doors must use a bit of data, the animation of the doors).
There is something else that bugs me when i'm trying to insert your tiles into a rom. The pallets. You can't just go to paints pallet and chose whatever colour you like, there are some colour restrictions in the rom, its a little hard to explain.

~

PS: I'll use your torn world tileset for my hack. =P

Crimson Stardust September 14th, 2009 8:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ray Marverick (Post 5115770)
The new tiles seem cool, but you need to work on your shading. ;)
And if you're making these tiles for hacks, and not only to showcase them, make sure that the door tile of a building is only one tile, because there will be a problem with the tile behaviour (the doors must use a bit of data, the animation of the doors).
There is something else that bugs me when i'm trying to insert your tiles into a rom. The pallets. You can't just go to paints pallet and chose whatever colour you like, there are some colour restrictions in the rom, its a little hard to explain.

~

PS: I'll use your torn world tileset for my hack. =P

the door of the building for all my house tiles is using only one tile..i can be sure of that..xD..and for the pallete,i use the same pallete on the original tiles...
anyway thanks for the critisissm,i will work on the problems you post and hope my torn world tiles is good...

Novus September 14th, 2009 9:16 AM

Very nice houses Ace, your definately improving. But I think what Ray is trying to say is even though you used the colours off the original houses ingame, it doesn't really look like it as you've altered the shading and colour placement a bit. Like for instance, if you have used all the same colours than the HGSS Cherrygrove houses, then yours and mine will have the same palette but you'll notice my house looks alot brighter because I've optimised the colours I had to look more like the originals.

Hope this helps, keep making good tiles mate :)

-Novus-

Crimson Stardust September 14th, 2009 4:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Novus (Post 5116370)
Very nice houses Ace, your definately improving. But I think what Ray is trying to say is even though you used the colours off the original houses ingame, it doesn't really look like it as you've altered the shading and colour placement a bit. Like for instance, if you have used all the same colours than the HGSS Cherrygrove houses, then yours and mine will have the same palette but you'll notice my house looks alot brighter because I've optimised the colours I had to look more like the originals.

Hope this helps, keep making good tiles mate :)

-Novus-

Yeah..that is what i oice from your houses..i was wondering why your pallete is different..but,the pallete i choose cannot be inserted??i don't know why all the palletes i picked are all drakcoloured...xD..anyway,i am proud of my recent tiles.They look great then my other tiles..xD

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ September 14th, 2009 6:12 PM

I really love the way you did these houses but I think the roofs can use a bit more shading, but other than that great job =)


:t354:TG

Crimson Stardust September 16th, 2009 2:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 5118272)
I really love the way you did these houses but I think the roofs can use a bit more shading, but other than that great job =)


:t354:TG

Thanks for the comment dude..appreciate that..i will work on the roof but not on the meantime since i am busy with my exams..but probably after 12 oct..and what all other members think about them???comment comment..xD

GiantGroudon September 16th, 2009 4:19 AM

I really like your tiles. they are well made. I especially like the first house on the first sheet. What I don't like are the pink houses (that's just my opinion, cause pink doesn't fit in my hack) but you've still done great work. I voted for they are okay, still can improve because they are good, but even in the best tiles, there is still room for improvement.
Keep up making tilescause I like your work.

Crimson Stardust September 16th, 2009 6:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GiantGroudon (Post 5122585)
I really like your tiles. they are well made. I especially like the first house on the first sheet. What I don't like are the pink houses (that's just my opinion, cause pink doesn't fit in my hack) but you've still done great work. I voted for they are okay, still can improve because they are good, but even in the best tiles, there is still room for improvement.
Keep up making tilescause I like your work.

Thanks for the comment..for the pink coloured house,i tried to change my choice of palletes too a much brighter colour so that was the result..xD..anyway,it will be a while before this thread will be updated..anyay,the tiles are for for public[if no one knowa]..

Crimson Stardust September 17th, 2009 7:47 PM

since my hack is on hold for quite a while,i think i gonna make some of the tiles for my hack for public..[maybe all of them]...
so here is one,it is the pc for ma hack..and a gym
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/PC-1.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Gym-2.png
The gym is a bit plain but i will be making a new one for my hack and maybe i will edit this gym..xD
Comment guys..

Ray Maverick September 18th, 2009 6:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ♠ΛςΣ ρπΔητΦΩ♠ (Post 5127806)
since my hack is on hold for quite a while,i think i gonna make some of the tiles for my hack for public..[maybe all of them]...
so here is one,it is the pc for ma hack..and a gym
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/PC-1.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Gym-2.png
The gym is a bit plain but i will be making a new one for my hack and maybe i will edit this gym..xD
Comment guys..

The PC is very good, a little small, but good. The gym building is weird, the roof looks plain (at least you realise it).
It could use something more like a window on the roof or something.

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ September 20th, 2009 3:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ♠ΛςΣ ρπΔητΦΩ♠ (Post 5127806)
since my hack is on hold for quite a while,i think i gonna make some of the tiles for my hack for public..[maybe all of them]...
so here is one,it is the pc for ma hack..and a gym
http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/PC-1.pnghttp://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt253/ageangel_pc/Gym-2.png
The gym is a bit plain but i will be making a new one for my hack and maybe i will edit this gym..xD
Comment guys..

I think for the gym you should thin out the lines that are on the building, but you did realized what you needed to do with the roof, but other than that great job


:t354:TG


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