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Laidjon's tiles and whatsoever!
First a mix:
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Bohemot.png Legendary trios mixed with eachother. http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Ulticat.png http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Ultibird.png http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Ultimass.png http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Ultipixie.png A pixel-over: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Espeonpixel-over.png Chaos: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/TeddiursaChao.png http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Charmanderchao.png http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/EmpoleonChao-1.png. Trainers: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Trainer.png http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Zeke.png (Don't mind the box around him, made that for fun xd) And here's my Outdoor tileset: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/RegiStatue-6.png Up, from left to right: Regisrock statue, Registeel statue, unfinished Regice statue, a Pokemon dog house, A tree, Flowerbed, Mole thing, High grass, Grass tile, Rock overflowing in grass, Side steps. Middle, from left to right: Moltres statue, Zapdos statue, Articuno statue, Pokemon dog house with a Growlithe, A comet/meteor for a Deoxys, A well, Street tiles. Down, from left to right: Latios statue, Latias statue, A trainer battle field. These tiles are for my hack, so don't use them. If you want to use some of the tiles, pm me with an explenation why you deserve these tiles xD. Rate it =) |
Those are the ones you use in your hack, right?
The trainer's pose is off. I'm not usre what's wrong, you might ask someone more experienced than I am. The sprites seem okay, I hope you continue with your work! |
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And the trainers are not the best, I know that. They are my first 2 and last 2 xD. Thanks for your comment. |
All of them are awesome. I really like them especially the Trio new Sprite.
But here is some suggestions on some of the sprites that i don't like: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Espeonpixel-over.png Look at it's feet. Doesn't it have a shape ore something? It's feet is the only problem. =/ http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Trainer.png It's face shape is ugly. No offense. Just a suggestion for you to improve better. It's hand is okay. But couldn't you add something like he's holding a pokeball? - That's all. The rest are perfect and beautiful. Hope my suggestions helped. I hope that would improve better. |
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And yes, the trainer is ugly, but it was my very first attempt at it. Thanks for your rate and comment though =) |
Espeon pixel over:
Outlines are black, are jagged and look like sh it, shading is off, the legs are scrambled onto an unidentifiable mess, proportions are wrong, whiskers are too long and have an incorrect shape, tail division boosts up the confusion on the legs, very slight symptoms of pillowshading.. ect. My advice? Start by fixing up the lines. Any general spriting tut can help with this. You just need to smooth them out. Then, remake the shading, or imitate it from your ref, but with a set lightsource this time. Get a better pallete, one with depth. Once you overcome these 3 steps, you can start fixing up the minor details. For the trainer ones: Same as the above. Ugly and jagged black lines, bad shading, hair looks like crap.. Heh. Using references would help you alot. Tileset: These at least look decent, if you did actually scratch them. Edit: Getting somewhat annoyed at this 15 post bullshi t restriction.. |
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/RegiStatue-6.png
I really like this one, in perticular the Statues. |
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Espeonpixel-over.png
(I don't really know which is the leg and which is the tail... Oh wait, I see it. Sorry.) Anyhow, the back legs look strange. Maybe you could, kinda, change the direction of both legs? http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Trainer.png The trainer's face is off. I suggest making the face longer. |
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Shading may be off but the light source is just like all pokemon sprites. I didn't shade it like the original ofcourse, 'cause that would be wrong. And yes, the tiles are scratch, except for the pokemon on the statue. They are from pokemon md and are recoloured. The things they stand on are scratch. Quote:
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And yes, like I said before, the trainer is ugly as it was my first one. |
The tilesets are very good, except for some oddities, like the Deoxys meteor's grey parts & the growlithe house, where the head doesn't actually resemle a growlithe. However, it's an overally good job. As for how to improve your trainer-spriting skills, I suggest spriting some FR-LG-styled trainers first.
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And I won't make some new trainers for a while, as I know that I suck at them xD. Thanks for your comment. |
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You need darker shades to work with sprites of that size, a pallete with more contrast and an actual significant difference between colors. You could either change the lightsource to something better, or make your pixel over smaller to fit the lightsource and pallete of D/P. Smaller, and thereby rounder too. |
A total new thing! MSN Art!
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/nidoranm.png Because it's made in MSN, it lacks a lot of colour since MSN hasn't got a wide variety of colours. RATE? |
That is a very creative and interesting
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Bump?
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Fuc[.]kingawesometile.png A tree in Kiledove style. Free to be used, atleast if you give credits =). Rates? (Delete the "[.]". A direct img doesn't work as the title has the F word in it :P) |
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Rates? |
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I think the coloring is good but you can work a bit more on the shading and the tree trunk is a bit too fat :t354:TG |
Something new. Trainers! They are for my hack, so nobody has permission to use them whatsoever.
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/HeroandHeroineNieuw.png From left to right: My new Hero and my new Heroine. Down: The new Rival. I'm currently working on the OWs. Rates? |
Really good Laidjon but I think the heroine looks to young. overall a 8.
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And here is one finished ow sheet. The Rival ows =). Also a minor edit on the trainer sprite itself.
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Rival.png No has permission to use this. =) Rates? |
Tadaa! My very first building. A poke-school, like in Pokemon Ranger xD. It's made for my hack, so nobody has the permission to use these tiles!
I've made 2 versions. V1: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/School.png V2: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/SchoolV2.png Rates? Also, please rate the ows. =D |
It's really nice:) But maybe a little to big:P
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Two worldmaps. Both are for my hack. The top map is Johto and the bottom map is my own region. I've done it in HG/SS Style with a bit of my own style.
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/NieuweIrotsuya.png Rate? And don't steal :P Also, please rate my other works from October 27 till now :) |
Ugh...
Part 2 of the ow's. The hero ow's: http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Hero.png It's not finished. I still have to do the running frames. Rate all of my work plox? |
I like the designs of your trainer sprites, but the sprites themselves need a bit of work. The outlines on the girl's arms are kind of patchy, and her hands... Well, they don't really look like hands. It also seems kind of inappropriate for the dress being flipped up so much on a girl that age.
The male protagonist's arms are even worse; they're too thick, too short, and the left arm has a crazy-long diagonal line. The arms should be long enough to reach four or five inches below the pelvis. Another problem is the bottom of the shirt. The shape and color of the line makes it seem more like the top of the pants than the bottom of the shirt, which in turn makes it look like the torso and legs are from two different people. The long straight line going up from his right hip doesn't help. I like the rival's design, but his head looks kind of flat. You can easily fix this by making his hair a pixel taller, and maybe making the topmost horizontal line a pixel or two shorter. Just a heads-up, but you should stop asking people to rate your sprites; it gives a bad impression. |
Thanks Chesu. (Late reaction :P)
I made a Fakemon :O http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii179/laidjon/Scratch.png A split-evo from Haunter. This Fakemon can travel through dimensions. Sorta like Palkia. I just need to know which of these four is better. Or some tips on how to improve them =) |
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