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The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 7:16 AM

My drawings I wouldn't call art
 
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=28107
ROSELIA IS EVIL =O


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=28191
this was a crawing for graceful as she made me a banner see in sig


http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=27978
shaymin sleeping although scanner was ruining colours





http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=28100

yummy munchlax



http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=28313
love this evil pic



http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=29233
I am pleased with this *smiles* TOXIC,DEADLY BUT CUTE XD

I am 11 and only started proper drawing really so take that into account ^^

please comment ^^

name a pokemon for me to draw

Cheesymitten July 10th, 2009 7:27 AM

The munchlax one is the more cutest out of all of them then Glaceon then Shyamin,
The scanner kind of ruined the green,
However this is a much better attemp at drawing than my attempts :D
Good work, and are you going to draw some more?

The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 7:30 AM

yes I am anything you would like as I think I will only get better if I take requests aswell as get commented ^^
thank you for the comments =)

KingofAnime July 10th, 2009 7:36 AM

This is pretty good for eleven. My brother's twelve and he can't even draw a squiggle.

You already moved on to drawing pokemon in custom poses and have a feel for their anatomy somewhat. At this rate, your skills will only get better.
I would stick with the more simple pokemon for now like pikachu and nidoran.

The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 7:40 AM

^^ ok thanks for that
well I drew an evil pikachu in a pose using the charcoal I will post but its in a different pose =/ but I will stich to easier pokemon for now ^^ thank you for the comment

seeker July 10th, 2009 7:50 AM

Glad you got them up man!
I think you are very good for your age! Every thing is a bit round though.
Full Feedback will come later

The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 7:55 AM

^^ Sorry but I know what you mean by round =)
thanks for the comments everrone so far but maybe a bit more critic like animeking guys ^^

MLU July 10th, 2009 7:58 AM

This is pretty good for a beginner's turnout. Nice work. ;)

Giraffe July 10th, 2009 8:01 AM

Shaymin is so cute!! Well done!

The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 8:03 AM

why thank you for the comments MLU and Girfaffe

Rebecca Roserade July 10th, 2009 8:04 AM

Of course they're art! :P

seeker July 10th, 2009 8:13 AM

Critic in spoilers
Roselia
Spoiler:
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=28107
For this one i think its pretty well done. The first thing that jumped out at me was the couloring. Don't get lazy make sure all the white patches are filled in to give it a nice clea,clear look. There is too much white as it is. The left Leg is a lot bigger than the right so watch out for that. Anatomy is hard to draw.
The left eye is a little small as is the left rose. Everything else seems to be well done though! Good attempt!

Glaceon
Spoiler:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=28191
The upper left earis a little smll in contrast with the right. And again colouring. Be more percistant. The head might be slightly round too but nothing to worry about. And lastly the text is a little all over the place. Try to keep the lettes a simalir size and shade them a little. Everything else is perfect


Shaymin
Spoiler:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=27978
This is definately the best. Only thing a little off is the paws due to the one on the right being a good bit smaller than the others. Again work on text and coulouring but it contrast to the others this is very well done


Munchlax
Spoiler:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=2942&pictureid=28100

Here not too much wrong just coulor it in a small bit ( This could be the scanners fault). The arms are a little off. they look like they come from different parts of the body on either side. Not too bad though. And the only other thing is the pokeball (lollipop?) in his hand. It doesn't look like he's holding it right and the pokeball isn't very well put on the stick. Looks like its falling. Good concept though and a good Munchlax


Okay for your age you are doing very well! Just work on colouring, Symettry ( making arms and legs equal etc.) And text could be a small bit neater. But all in all you're very good! I certainly couldn't do this when i was 11!

So taking that into account i will have to say 8.5/10

Good job!

The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 8:14 AM

really think so well how do i change my title >_< I don't know how lol

gavz I might add some colouring patches which white are because of the scanner but yes there is
I agree with the lettering
roselia's ee s meant to be smaller lol

Zero° July 10th, 2009 8:17 AM

Nice Drawings, I really like the sleeping Shaymin
and to answer your other Question, I think only a mod can change the title, ask one nicely and they should help :)

The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 8:18 AM

oh thanks for answering my question

seeker July 10th, 2009 8:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dark aron (Post 4841050)
really think so well how do i change my title >_< I don't know how lol

gavz I might add some colouring patches which white are because of the scanner but yes there is
I agree with the lettering
roselia's ee s meant to be smaller lol

Well Roselia's eyes just look like diffrent sizes in general ^_^
I see what you tried to do but don't resize the whole eye just make it look like it's eyelid is closing instead :)

The Darkest Gale July 10th, 2009 8:35 AM

ok then thanks for that ^^ I now know what you mean

new picture I drew up ^^ I am very pleased with it

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ July 14th, 2009 10:13 AM

I think for the coloring you could've used more colors to make a shade or to blend colors, it will look really nice. I really like the eyes on that Glaceon a lot, its so cute. But you might want to lighten up on the out line, but other than that, its good


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mew² July 14th, 2009 9:18 PM

Very nice drawings. The Shaymin drawing is cute. :D Not only that, this art work is great for an eleven year old. Start drawing young and you will soon be drawing like a god. ;)

Mormo July 15th, 2009 5:52 PM

These drawings are great for a beginner, I remember when I was drawing Pokemon at the age of 7. Not very pretty, compared to yours. I advise you to practice the simpler Pokemon and the basic shapes before going into the really detailed ones, such as Palkia. Whenever you have some free time, scribble on a notebook or something and draw circles and squares and arms and legs and eyes. It actually helps.

Momoko July 18th, 2009 2:45 AM

Awwwe, how can you not call this art? They are beautiful, I love them :]
For a beginner, MUCH MUCH MUCH better than me! Keep up the good work.

The Darkest Gale July 18th, 2009 10:16 AM

sorry I was absent =) yes I will try in the future to colour better

sanny the hedgehog July 22nd, 2009 12:19 PM

beats the hell outta what i used to draw when i was your age!!
lol!! good job man!!

Samme! July 22nd, 2009 12:38 PM

The Munchlax and Shaymin are awesome!!!
Great Job!
I could see you doing really nice stuff in the future!

NeonFire July 22nd, 2009 4:08 PM

If you don't think this is art, you clearly don't know what art is. This is great stuff!


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