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Nyu~♥! July 12th, 2009 8:44 AM

Kitsukitty's Fakemon/Other Sprites
 
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs51/f/2009/317/e/7/e730ae41d5f98bdbc089797c9a7a438b.gif
Kitsukitty's Sprites!
Or, I guess you could say "Nyu~♥!'s sprites" now...
But, feel free to call me kitty! XD


Hey peoples! As few of you know, I'm making a fakemon game, Pokemon Opal.
Here I will be posting some sprites that will be used in the game! I know I'm not a proffesional, duh, but I want some advice so that I may get better. Please use criticism but try not to be rude. Someone's said "It looks terrible..." once, and I didn't really appreciate that, so
please use a nice criticism.

STEAL AND YOU'LL EXPLODE IN YOUR SLEEP!

:3

Well, here are a couple of sprites to start with.
http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3899&pictureid=35434http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3899&pictureid=35432http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3899&pictureid=31475http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4441&pictureid=31526http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3899&pictureid=35283
http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/hiatudex/images/f/fb/Kerosprite.pnghttp://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/hiatudex/images/c/c4/Keroback.pnghttp://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=3899&pictureid=35444

I needed to replace these ones because it seems that some people still wanted to rate the old ones!

A big one:

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=4441&pictureid=32112


I think that's all I have.
Please rate some, all if you wish. Hehe!
Thank you for looking. As I keep going I'll post more.

Links

My deviantart
HiatuWiki, Fakemondex
Official Pokemon Opal Thread

G'day!

Domin-8 July 12th, 2009 8:55 AM

Your fakemon need better shading, you can barely tell the difference between shades. But otherwise I like your stuff.

Nyu~♥! July 12th, 2009 8:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Domin-8 (Post 4849189)
Your fakemon need better shading, you can barely tell the difference between shades. But otherwise I like your stuff.

Someone's said so before. I know, I'll work on it. Thank you.

Domin-8 July 12th, 2009 9:42 AM

You have great outlines, but its just the shading.

Check out this tutorial by skeddles it helped me make the newest sprite (check it out) in my thread(shading wise)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=144629

Vannah☆ July 12th, 2009 1:57 PM

These are pretty. <3 -visits DA-

FireTears July 12th, 2009 6:16 PM

They are cute ^^

The shading is almost unnoticeable, it is best to use darker shades and lighter highlights. The second sprite is lacking in black, use black whenever the area is darkest or has shading. If black shows too much, your shading is too light. Otherwise, use a darker shade of your current outline color instead of the black.

Nyu~♥! July 13th, 2009 10:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FireTears (Post 4850950)
They are cute ^^

The shading is almost unnoticeable, it is best to use darker shades and lighter highlights. The second sprite is lacking in black, use black whenever the area is darkest or has shading. If black shows too much, your shading is too light. Otherwise, use a darker shade of your current outline color instead of the black.

Oh, thank you! I'll certainly keep this in mind.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Domin-8 (Post 4849298)
You have great outlines, but its just the shading.

Check out this tutorial by skeddles it helped me make the newest sprite (check it out) in my thread(shading wise)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=144629

Alright, your sprites are great.
I'll use that tutorial, now I understand that my shading is the real problem.

Nyu~♥! July 15th, 2009 9:30 AM

More sprites. This is another fakemon for my game. They were made by driedzone.
You can see the fakemon here:
http://driedzone.deviantart.com/art/Fakemons-for-kitsukitty-128271462

And here are the sprites.
http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/hiatudex/images/7/79/Pokestarter2.png

Is that shading dark enough? And, any advice?

Domin-8 July 15th, 2009 1:16 PM

The hump behind the horns throws the head off. Shading is well done though. Great job.

Nyu~♥! July 15th, 2009 1:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Domin-8 (Post 4861131)
The hump behind the horns throws the head off. Shading is well done though. Great job.

Ok, so the horns and the feet were the real problem. I've gotten the horns and feet from another comment. Thanks you!

Nyu~♥! July 24th, 2009 11:13 AM

http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/hiatudex/images/d/d8/Gato.png

Here's another!
This is Gattomier, designed by Kitsunez, for my game!
Please critique nicely. ^^

And I know it's really dark, I should've made it lighter?

Kitsunez July 24th, 2009 11:48 AM

Oh~ It's very nice kitsu. Or at least me-the one who can't sprite worth a crap right now- thinks so. I <3 it!

Nyu~♥! July 24th, 2009 4:23 PM

hehe, well I guess I can't get any feedback from you since you're really sucky at it... at least that's what you think.

Kitsunez July 24th, 2009 5:51 PM

I do suck at spriting! It would be difficult for me to draw up something and then make it looked pixalized. And I can't just work on a clean canfas, I'm not good at completely digital art~

Nyu~♥! July 27th, 2009 2:18 PM

hehe, here's Gattomier's back sprite.
http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/hiatudex/images/c/c0/Gatoback.png
I don't know why HiatuWiki's being a jerk.. o_0 makin the image smaller...

Nyu~♥! August 2nd, 2009 2:16 PM

*pant* here's... *pant*... another... *pant* sprite!.. *pant*

Apparently dA doesn't want me to post it anywhere, so here:
http://kitsukitty.deviantart.com/art/Apprentice-Pixeled-131874374


uugggh. Too much work.

Nyu~♥! August 9th, 2009 1:24 PM

Here's another.

http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/hiatudex/images/e/e0/Tigersprite1.png

Gah! Everyone's gone. :'(

skeddles August 9th, 2009 2:47 PM

Hello!

My suggestion for the now is use more contrast between the colors on your sprites: Lighter highlights, darker shadows.

Also, you may want to tone down the dithering a bit, you don't need it that much.

You may want expiriment with more detailed shading, like more shading on the yellows head , showing fur and stuff.

On the yellow one: I'd make the highlight on the head slightly bigger.


Hope some of that helps ^^

~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ August 10th, 2009 8:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kitsukitty (Post 4964393)

How come its so big (I'm new to this so I don't know, if you did this on purpose or not). I think for the head, it could use a bit more shading at the top


:t354:TG

Nyu~♥! August 11th, 2009 8:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 4969690)
How come its so big (I'm new to this so I don't know, if you did this on purpose or not). I think for the head, it could use a bit more shading at the top


:t354:TG

Suposed to be that big. Shading at the head, not really. You do know where the light's coming from, right? :/

Nyu~♥! August 13th, 2009 9:43 AM

Here's another:
http://www.deviantart.com/download/133229358/Cumufeli__s_Sprites_by_Kitsukitty.png

Curt_09 August 13th, 2009 12:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kitsukitty (Post 4980083)

Those are looking pretty good. I'm assuming that it has some kind of neck fluff, which hides its other arm. Is it... Psychic type?

Nyu~♥! August 13th, 2009 5:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Curt_09 (Post 4980754)
Those are looking pretty good. I'm assuming that it has some kind of neck fluff, which hides its other arm. Is it... Psychic type?

It has neck fluff made of cumulus clouds.
Not psychic, flying, since it's clouds. Just floats in the air! ^^
Doesn't hide it's other arm. Thank you. I see you're looking for spriters, though.

Curt_09 August 13th, 2009 6:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kitsukitty (Post 4981906)
It has neck fluff made of cumulus clouds.
Not psychic, flying, since it's clouds. Just floats in the air! ^^
Doesn't hide it's other arm. Thank you. I see you're looking for spriters, though.

Ah, I was thinking of guessing flying but I decided to be generic and guess by the colors.
Okay... So it's a one eyed one armed flying purple people eater? :P J/K
Yeah, I've got to get some new trainers, a new hero/heroine, and a bunch of fakemon sprited, so I'm looking for help. Teh Squidly is doing an excellent job so far, but I don't want to overwork him.

Nyu~♥! August 13th, 2009 6:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Curt_09 (Post 4982234)
Ah, I was thinking of guessing flying but I decided to be generic and guess by the colors.
Okay... So it's a one eyed one armed flying purple people eater? :P J/K
Yeah, I've got to get some new trainers, a new hero/heroine, and a bunch of fakemon sprited, so I'm looking for help. Teh Squidly is doing an excellent job so far, but I don't want to overwork him.

Gah. Sorry for sking, though, I'm not up for any jobs. Too busy.
It's normal color is the blue one, not the pink one. Sorry for putting it first!


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