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Sarcastic Prince October 29th, 2009 6:22 AM

Rainy Beach and Rainy Lake are a bit empty.
The rest of the maps are okay.

-Omega- October 29th, 2009 8:18 AM

I personally hate the tiles, but do as you wish.

Nikkie. October 29th, 2009 8:30 AM

eh?
 
I couldn't help but notice you're sign post for that town in your screenshots. Looks awfully familliar.. `Veridian city, the eternally green paradice' Even if I never spelt it right, it's just to point out, I don't think you can script.. (Or whoever made that script)

Glitch. October 29th, 2009 1:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nikkie. (Post 5272231)
I couldn't help but notice you're sign post for that town in your screenshots. Looks awfully familliar.. `Veridian city, the eternally green paradice' Even if I never spelt it right, it's just to point out, I don't think you can script.. (Or whoever made that script)

oh yeah lol i forgot about that.
@I don't think you can script.. (Or whoever made that script)
sorry that was a test script and it cam out bad :(
but i will be sure to change it.

also i think i will change the tiles.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruka Prince (Post 5271868)
Rainy Beach and Rainy Lake are a bit empty.
The rest of the maps are okay.

i will fill those maps out a bit, as they were just a first attempt (all of them)

mahamaniac3 October 31st, 2009 6:52 AM

I love that ROM base patch! I got it from PHO once. Good luck with the hack!

Glitch. October 31st, 2009 7:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mahamaniac3 (Post 5277522)
I love that ROM base patch! I got it from PHO once. Good luck with the hack!

thanks for the luck good luck with yours!

Gary, the Magic Fairy November 5th, 2009 9:40 AM

Well, the first thing I notice is that you didn't even bother to capitalize your thread title, which is off-putting and makes you look lazy to start with.

The top banner... I don't really like it. The text clashes with the background, and the Lugia images have rough edges.

Why does the "hack of" part need to be in a spoiler? That just seems like a waste of time, especially since it's in the title.

The storyline... this is full of grammatical errors, isn't very original, and once again you don't capitalize proper nouns. I'm assuming Ash is a person, so his name needs a capital A.

Quote:

After ash [Capital A] wins all of the pokemon leagues, he decieds ["decides". Use spell check.] to settle down in a new region called triono [Proper noun. Capitalize.] (called triono since there is three main islands. [There is three? No. There are three.]). He becomes the strongest gym leader in the whole region. You play as a 14 year old boy who lives in rainy beach [I'm assuming Rainy Beach is the towns name, and this isn't just a nameless rainy beach. Again, capitalize proper nouns.]. one [Really? Beginning of a sentence. Capitalize.] day you fall down the stairs to your room and you wake up to see your dad (who is Ash). He starts to ask you questions to make sure you don't have amnesia. when [When] he finds out you don't, he reminds you to go see him in his gym. When you go upstairs, your mom says bye and gives you a pokephone for your journey. When you arrive at the gym you see your sister and your dad standing there. He tells you to treat your pokemon with love and care (choices = totodile, charmander, and treeko)[Do you really need to add this here? Just throw it in the features, it's not relevant to the story.]. You start to make your way to the next town and you stop when you see a blue pokemon flying over you. Suddenly, a person comes running in asking you a lot of questions. You answer them and he starts to tell you about himself. He turns out to be a legendary pokemon tracker (he tracks pokemon and takes pictures for his collection) [This could just be added to the story, you don't really need to have parentheses after every other sentence.]. It turns out that the weather has been off lately and he is trying to see if it has anything to do with legendary pokemon. He then tells you something that has been bugging him lately,[I would omit this. It's just repetitive.] he tells you that he has seen a red and black lugia flying around the region lately (not shadow lugia). He starts to tell you that he has to follow it and runs. You go to the next town and start your journey through the Triono league to become the greatest trainer in all of Triono. You come across troubles on your journey such as...

-Team Inferno(evil team)[Yeah, we get that. We aren't idiots.]
-Legendary pokemon making the weather go crazy.
-Rivals (one sister one is your best friend)
...and much more.
As for features...

First off, CAPITALIZE THINGS.
-have a girlfriend [Yay? What does she do?]
-new gyms [Obviously, if it's set in a new region.]
-new o/w sprites
-rival is you sister [Your sister.]
-your dad is ash who is a gym leader [How original.]
-new cities/towns/routes/gyms/houses [You just said gyms.]
-new world
-new Pokemon
-all new evil team (team inferno) [Yeah, you just told us that.]
-you have two choices between looks(always a guy) (possible? you tell me)[Huh? Tell you what's possible? This doesn't really make sense.]
-Two count em two rivals! (ones your sister another is my secret) [How is one your secret? You just said that one is your sister and the other is your best friend.]

The maps are... eh. Nothing spectacular.

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac294/mrhaxmaster/hiddenmisttown.jpg
This one bothers me. Wtf is with this weird pathway? It looks like one of those ledges you jump down and can't get back up.

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac294/mrhaxmaster/pokecenter.jpg
Oh my god, please tell me this is a joke. This is hideous. The palettes... just no. I'd rather let my pokemon die than go in there.

Really, this gives a bad impression like you don't care enough to make your thread look decent. Why should I care enough to play your hack when you can't even bother to take an extra 5 minutes to spell check and use correct grammar?

Glitch. November 5th, 2009 8:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kenji~ (Post 5293242)
Well, the first thing I notice is that you didn't even bother to capitalize your thread title, which is off-putting and makes you look lazy to start with.

The top banner... I don't really like it. The text clashes with the background, and the Lugia images have rough edges.

Why does the "hack of" part need to be in a spoiler? That just seems like a waste of time, especially since it's in the title.

The storyline... this is full of grammatical errors, isn't very original, and once again you don't capitalize proper nouns. I'm assuming Ash is a person, so his name needs a capital A.



As for features...

First off, CAPITALIZE THINGS.
-have a girlfriend [Yay? What does she do?]
-new gyms [Obviously, if it's set in a new region.]
-new o/w sprites
-rival is you sister [Your sister.]
-your dad is ash who is a gym leader [How original.]
-new cities/towns/routes/gyms/houses [You just said gyms.]
-new world
-new Pokemon
-all new evil team (team inferno) [Yeah, you just told us that.]
-you have two choices between looks(always a guy) (possible? you tell me)[Huh? Tell you what's possible? This doesn't really make sense.]
-Two count em two rivals! (ones your sister another is my secret) [How is one your secret? You just said that one is your sister and the other is your best friend.]

The maps are... eh. Nothing spectacular.

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac294/mrhaxmaster/hiddenmisttown.jpg
This one bothers me. Wtf is with this weird pathway? It looks like one of those ledges you jump down and can't get back up.

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac294/mrhaxmaster/pokecenter.jpg
Oh my god, please tell me this is a joke. This is hideous. The palettes... just no. I'd rather let my pokemon die than go in there.

Really, this gives a bad impression like you don't care enough to make your thread look decent. Why should I care enough to play your hack when you can't even bother to take an extra 5 minutes to spell check and use correct grammar?

thanks for telling me this ( even if you were a jerk about it.) ill get right on fixing these things. as for the features and story thing that was a quick update that i forgot to change a few things. as for the pokemon center... i already put in a new pallete but never got around to putting it up.

as for the title i will ask a moderator to change it.

thanks Kenji,
for what it's worth...

Glitch. November 7th, 2009 11:00 AM

@Kenji~
Did you not read the thread I posted before yours.
the maps were first attempts and will most definitely be edited.

miksy91 November 7th, 2009 11:32 PM

Okay the maps look definetely better now and I like the tiles as well :)
But make sure to add something to that beach area since it's completely empty.

Glitch. November 8th, 2009 2:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by miksy91 (Post 5301889)
Okay the maps look definetely better now and I like the tiles as well :)
But make sure to add something to that beach area since it's completely empty.

thanks for the compliment and critisism.
i already added a beach house and alot of fishermen to the map.
Spoiler:
You will get your first rod from one of them.

-Omega- November 9th, 2009 10:16 AM

It doesn't look very natural when the houses in Sand Stone Desert are surrounded with rock wall.

Glitch. November 9th, 2009 2:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -Omega- (Post 5305782)
It doesn't look very natural when the houses in Sand Stone Desert are surrounded with rock wall.

The reason they are surrounded in a rock wall is because the people who live there need protection against the constant, brutal sandstorm. So they build around their houses.
P.S. though i may change it so the houses are in the ground. not above.

PEPITO1O1O November 9th, 2009 4:43 PM

The Map Critics
 
1 is map one 2 is map two and so on.
1) Looks good
2) I think on the sand area you should have some beach chairs, and umbrelas with 3 or 4 trainers, and on those spots in the middle of the water, you should put trees on them
3) Seems kind of long (just make sure that there are trainers along the way then its good)
4) I think you should put pokeballs(items) were there are deadends.
5) Looks really complex and going to be fun to go through(but try puting items in the deadends, but only in 2 of them)
6) Not sure whats going to be on the big rock.... The opening on the top left looks point less(unless there is going to be something happening there) And what is that little dirty green looking shrub on the bottom?
7) Seems good.
8) Kind of weird, the sudden change. But if your going to have it, you should make it so that there is a sandstorm, and you need the goggles(or whatever you want to put so you can enter a sandstorm). And you get the goggles from the house in route 3.

Glitch. November 9th, 2009 5:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PEPITO1O1O (Post 5306985)
1 is map one 2 is map two and so on.
1) Looks good
2) I think on the sand area you should have some beach chairs, and umbrelas with 3 or 4 trainers, and on those spots in the middle of the water, you should put trees on them
3) Seems kind of long (just make sure that there are trainers along the way then its good)
4) I think you should put pokeballs(items) were there are deadends.
5) Looks really complex and going to be fun to go through(but try puting items in the deadends, but only in 2 of them)
6) Not sure whats going to be on the big rock.... The opening on the top left looks point less(unless there is going to be something happening there) And what is that little dirty green looking shrub on the bottom?
7) Seems good.
8) Kind of weird, the sudden change. But if your going to have it, you should make it so that there is a sandstorm, and you need the goggles(or whatever you want to put so you can enter a sandstorm). And you get the goggles from the house in route 3.

thanks for the critique.
as for all the pokeballs and trainers, they are there but i save map picture not the event picture. for the desert there is a sandstorm and the route 3 thing, thats why i put the house there. the beach now has all the stuff you suggested but trainers will be only in the water since you can go there before you get pokemon ( unless i make all their scri- nvm) for map 6.... ill change it since its kinda random.

UPDATE: map 6 will have a shrine or statue to raikou (hence the name of the city.)

PEPITO1O1O November 9th, 2009 5:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mrhaxmaster (Post 5307042)
thanks for the critique.
as for all the pokeballs and trainers, they are there but i save map picture not the event picture. for the desert there is a sandstorm and the route 3 thing, thats why i put the house there. the beach now has all the stuff you suggested but trainers will be only in the water since you can go there before you get pokemon ( unless i make all their scri- nvm) for map 6.... ill change it since its kinda random.

ok, glad i could help :)
And if you have anything is for me just let me know.

-Omega- November 10th, 2009 9:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mrhaxmaster (Post 5306524)
The reason they are surrounded in a rock wall is because the people who live there need protection against the constant, brutal sandstorm. So they build around their houses.
P.S. though i may change it so the houses are in the ground. not above.

So be sure to add the sandstorm.
BY the way, the rock wall won't help the people much since there isn't a rock "roof".

agel November 10th, 2009 12:24 PM

Mrhax, i like your ideas. Don't get down from other peoples harsh-ish criticism. Keep working on this, I know it will be a nice finished product and so does everyone else. Dont obsess over minor things that people point out; it is YOUR hack, make it yours then 'proofread' it after, and let it out to us only when you think its ready. But yeah your hack is gonna look nice when your done, so keep working on it :P

Glitch. November 10th, 2009 2:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by agel (Post 5308878)
Mrhax, i like your ideas. Don't get down from other peoples harsh-ish criticism. Keep working on this, I know it will be a nice finished product and so does everyone else. Dont obsess over minor things that people point out; it is YOUR hack, make it yours then 'proofread' it after, and let it out to us only when you think its ready. But yeah your hack is gonna look nice when your done, so keep working on it :P

Thanks I'm glad you like it.
And unlike some hacks i will be seeing this through to the end, even if it turns out bad.
Be expecting a BETA in 2010, most likely January or February.

@ -omega-. i cant see why it wouldn't help much... sandstorms don't usually come downwards...

Glitch. November 11th, 2009 5:02 PM

i just want to put this out there lol, What was going to be a single hack has quickly found its way being a Team hack.... i just found that weird.

wertykilla November 13th, 2009 12:00 PM

i dont get it either. the mountain does look natural 2 me.

Sini November 15th, 2009 1:36 PM

I like the idea that you came up with, will we get to challenge ash?

Glitch. November 15th, 2009 4:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sini (Post 5324023)
I like the idea that you came up with, will we get to challenge ash?

yes you will but you can only battle him after you beat the other 7 gyms.

aquadan November 20th, 2009 12:11 AM




















Base: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png

Storyline

Recently Ash has won the Sinnoh League and he decide's decides to settle down in a 3 island region named Triono. He quickly becomes the strongest gym leader in the whole region. You play as a 14 year old boy, Son of Ash and you live in Rainy Beach.

One day you fall down the stairs to your room and you wake up to see your dad. He starts to ask you questions to make sure you don't have amnesia. When he finds out you don't he reminds you to go see him in his gym. When you go upstairs your mom says bye and hands you a Poképhone for your journey. as you walk to gym you notice that its the 4th day of weird weather, you arrive at the gym you see your sister and your dad standing there. He tells you to treat your Pokémon with love and care as he points to a table which has three pokéballs containing: Cyndaquil, Chikorita, Totodile, and tell you to choose one.

As you are heading to the next town you stop when you see a white and blue pokémon flying over you. Suddenly a unknown man comes running in asking you several questions, you answer them and he tells you about himself, he turns out to be a legendary pokémon photographer.

It's revealed that the odd weather is turns out that the weather has something to do with legendary Pokemon. He then shows you a photo of a black and red blur, he tells you that its a Lugia and tells you how is have been really annoyed the every time he gets close to it for a good photograph, it flies away.

the unknown man then runs away...

Features

Have a Girlfriend (You'll find out about her in the beta)
New gyms
New O/W sprites
Your father is a 4 time champion and gym leader
New Region Triono
New Pokemon
New Evil team - Team Inferno
2 Outfits!
2 Rivals(your sister and your best mate)

Screen Shots

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Maps

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/RainyBeach.png http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/RainyLake.png http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/Roue1.png http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/FoggyTown.png http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/RouteTwo.png http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/ThunderStruckCity.png http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/RouteThree.png http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e128/hamhamhunter/Sandstone.png

Progress

Beta : 1.0
Progress: 50% till release
Specs
Spoiler:

rainy beach = (75% mapping) (10% scripting)
route 1 = (100% mapping) (25% scripting)
mist ??? town = (75% mapping) (0% scripting)
route 2 = (50% mapping) (0% scripting)
thunderstruck city = (50% mapping) (0% scripting)
route 3 = (80% mapping) (0% scripting)
Sandstone Desert (80% mapping) (0% scripting.)
Murky Path (0% mapping) (0% scripting)
Triono Boat Station (0% mapping) (0%Scripting)
----------------END OF BETA 1------------------[/LIST]


Current Members

mrhaxmaster: all around hacker and owner.
wertykilla: all around hacker and co-owner.
masterman321: main scripter.
shellhacker: Idea's.
PEPITO1O1O: Beta Tester

Credits

foullump for his scripting tutorial on youtube.
Kyledove for his tiles.
PHO for resources.
Zel for making pokemon shiny gold and getting me interested in rom hacking.

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Glitch. November 20th, 2009 9:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by aquadan (Post 5335579)

























Storyline

Recently Ash has won the Sinnoh League and he decide's decides to settle down in a 3 island region named Triono. He quickly becomes the strongest gym leader in the whole region. You play as a 14 year old boy, Son of Ash and you live in Rainy Beach.



One day you fall down the stairs to your room and you wake up to see your dad. He starts to ask you questions to make sure you don't have amnesia. When he finds out you don't he reminds you to go see him in his gym. When you go upstairs your mom says bye and hands you a Poképhone for your journey. as you walk to gym you notice that its the 4th day of weird weather, you arrive at the gym you see your sister and your dad standing there. He tells you to treat your Pokémon with love and care as he points to a table which has three pokéballs containing: Cyndaquil, Chikorita, Totodile, and tell you to choose one.



As you are heading to the next town you stop when you see a white and blue pokémon flying over you. Suddenly a unknown man comes running in asking you several questions, you answer them and he tells you about himself, he turns out to be a legendary pokémon photographer.



It's revealed that the odd weather is turns out that the weather has something to do with legendary Pokemon. He then shows you a photo of a black and red blur, he tells you that its a Lugia and tells you how is have been really annoyed the every time he gets close to it for a good photograph, it flies away.



the unknown man then runs away...



Features
Have a Girlfriend (You'll find out about her in the beta)
New gyms
New O/W sprites
Your father is a 4 time champion and gym leader
New Region Triono
New Pokemon
New Evil team - Team Inferno
2 Outfits!
2 Rivals(your sister and your best mate)









Progress
Beta : 1.0
Progress: 50% till release
Specs


Spoiler:


rainy beach = (75% mapping) (10% scripting)

route 1 = (100% mapping) (25% scripting)
mist ??? town = (75% mapping) (0% scripting)
route 2 = (50% mapping) (0% scripting)
thunderstruck city = (50% mapping) (0% scripting)
route 3 = (80% mapping) (0% scripting)
Sandstone Desert (80% mapping) (0% scripting.)
Murky Path (0% mapping) (0% scripting)
Triono Boat Station (0% mapping) (0%Scripting)
----------------END OF BETA 1------------------[/LIST]





Current Members

mrhaxmaster: all around hacker and owner.
wertykilla: all around hacker and co-owner.
masterman321: main scripter.
shellhacker: Idea's.
PEPITO1O1O: Beta Tester



Credits
foullump for his scripting tutorial on youtube.
Kyledove for his tiles.
PHO for resources.
Zel for making pokemon shiny gold and getting me interested in rom hacking.



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THANKS SOOOO MUCH..... now how do i put that in the first post????

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