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Ben. September 19th, 2009 3:35 PM

~BZumas Fakemon
 
Hey i'm ~BZuma or Ben and i just want to release some fakemon i made.
Public Use:
Fire Starters:
http://i38.*.com/2jds2ee.png
http://i36.*.com/2vvqtf5.png
http://i37.*.com/15cbity.png
Personal Use !:
Shuckle pre-evo
Shuci:
http://i34.*.com/qz0ohv.jpg To be edited
Jpg to prevent theft

~Kian~ September 19th, 2009 3:38 PM

i like the fakes but the third one looks more like a psychic but o well

the shuckle looks ok but it looks too similer

~kian

Ben. September 19th, 2009 3:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokekingkian (Post 5133693)
i like the fakes but the third one looks more like a psychic but o well

the shuckle looks ok but it looks too similer

~kian

It's a Fire/Psychic type pokemon
And Shuci? it's to slimier to shuckle?
thanks for the c&c

Kotone September 19th, 2009 3:45 PM

oh those are amazing
way better than i could ever do!

~Kian~ September 19th, 2009 3:46 PM

no prob glad 2 help :)

just too help maybe make an evo maybe have an evo of it shell and eyes looking out then final evo it hatches!!!! out and looks cool

~kian

Ben. September 19th, 2009 3:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xxkaylabby (Post 5133724)
oh those are amazing
way better than i could ever do!

Thanks these are quite old, i have improved since then ^_^

NarutoActor September 19th, 2009 4:14 PM

your shadowing is backwards light comes from the left not the right and you make there eyes to big my rating B- You have talent you just need some practice

Ben. September 22nd, 2009 11:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 5137136)
I kinda agree with Pokekingkian with it just looking like a psychic type but other than that pretty good job with the coloring


:t354:TG

Thanks it means alot form someone aswell respected as you

Spherical Ice September 22nd, 2009 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~BZuma (Post 5133684)
Hey i'm ~BZuma or Ben and i just want to release some fakemon i made.
Public Use:
Fire Starters:
http://i38.*.com/2jds2ee.png
http://i36.*.com/2vvqtf5.png
http://i37.*.com/15cbity.png
Personal Use !:
Shuckle pre-evo
Shuci:
http://i34.*.com/qz0ohv.jpg To be edited
Jpg to prevent theft

Okay...

First, I swear that red sprite is an edited sprite of a sprite I've seen in a tutorial... I'll find it and check.

Anyway, the Shuci looks deformed, and saving it as .JPG to prevent theft is absolutely pathetic. Now no-body can easily comment on your shading and colour choice. Anyway, it has too small a shell and has nothing to do with what Shuckle is based one which seems to have escaped my mind. Anyway it's just a yellow.. 'snake' with a red lump on it. Oh, and it's head it huge, too.

Ben. September 23rd, 2009 10:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spherical Ice (Post 5143240)
Okay...

First, I swear that red sprite is an edited sprite of a sprite I've seen in a tutorial... I'll find it and check.

Anyway, the Shuci looks deformed, and saving it as .JPG to prevent theft is absolutely pathetic. Now no-body can easily comment on your shading and colour choice. Anyway, it has too small a shell and has nothing to do with what Shuckle is based one which seems to have escaped my mind. Anyway it's just a yellow.. 'snake' with a red lump on it. Oh, and it's head it huge, too.

Okay first you have seen them before they were my first sprites, a tutorial by skeedles and we have spoke of it, He said i could use a edited version. Thanks for the C&C i will improve all of them and re upload them so i will not save them as .jpg That was my first backsprite and as every i will try to improve thanks alot for the help :)

Ben. September 27th, 2009 12:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neo-Wolf (Post 5160322)
The fakes are good enough. I am waiting for more!

thanks i'm better than that now.
These are old so i wupload some new ones when i can.

Blaziquaza October 10th, 2009 2:16 AM

Nice,but,I think the Shucki is a bit too small,and long.Don't worry though.

Crosell October 10th, 2009 5:33 AM

Your getting there, I can see the way you shade.
The way you shade is with detail.
Even though it doesn't look great your trying to make it look great.

I wait for some newer sprites to give a good review on those...

Ben. October 10th, 2009 11:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crosell (Post 5202603)
Your getting there, I can see the way you shade.
The way you shade is with detail.
Even though it doesn't look great your trying to make it look great.

I wait for some newer sprites to give a good review on those...

Thanks, so what you are basically saying is the shape and design of the fakemon isn't that good, But i'm a good spriter?


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