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.safety September 20th, 2009 2:02 PM

Pokemon girls at the beach!! and some other anime artworks too
 
Made within the past 50 days:



Comments are greatly welcomed here or on dA.

Thanks in advance! <333

ShinjisLover September 20th, 2009 2:16 PM

Spoiler:


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/RankaLP.png
What I see wrong is the bottle behind the glass jug. Instead of making it look bigger (because of the glass), you made it look smaller and disproportionate. Her hands are also too small and should be roughly the size of her face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/poikemoncouple.png
Without proper shading around the stomach, Kasumi/Misty looks pregnant. And, for the background, the ocean looks unrealistic. Usually, there's some kind of small tide rushing in. But you don't have anything except for different layers of blue. But it's understandable, considering water is incredibly difficult to draw.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/risetiedoutline.png
She doesn't look as distressed as she should look. Because she is crying, her eyes should be glistening and closing. When was the last time you cried without having your eyes glisten and slant? And because she's not wearing a bra, her breasts should look less perky.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/yamiLP.png
The water looks wonderful in this picture. But her hands are still too small. Like I said: Size of face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Hitsugayasexay.png
*gasm* >///<

The only thing I don't like is the little indent just an inch above his pants. It makes him seem rather malnourished.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Lalc-drawingfinished.png
This looks wonderful; you did an amazing job on it. But may I say something? When drawing the chin, it shouldn't come inwards like you have it on the right of the face. It should stay a straight line. Of course, that's anatomically-correct speaking. You can have it any way you want.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Nonodrawingfinished.png
The top of her head looks rather large in comparison to the cheeks. They should probably have been brought out just a tad more as not to remind me of a potato.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/fukuzawa-yumi.png
This is beautifully done and there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. Excellent job.




↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

You are an amazing artist and you've only gotten better from the last time I've seen you. Keep up the excellent job. (Hey, you may be able to draw a manga series. XD).


~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ September 20th, 2009 3:17 PM

I'm really loving all of these drawings that you've done, my favorite one is Captain Hitsugaya one the most, great job with the drawings


:t354:TG

.safety September 20th, 2009 8:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ShinjisLover (Post 5136834)
Spoiler:


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/RankaLP.png
What I see wrong is the bottle behind the glass jug. Instead of making it look bigger (because of the glass), you made it look smaller and disproportionate. Her hands are also too small and should be roughly the size of her face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/poikemoncouple.png
Without proper shading around the stomach, Kasumi/Misty looks pregnant. And, for the background, the ocean looks unrealistic. Usually, there's some kind of small tide rushing in. But you don't have anything except for different layers of blue. But it's understandable, considering water is incredibly difficult to draw.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/risetiedoutline.png
She doesn't look as distressed as she should look. Because she is crying, her eyes should be glistening and closing. When was the last time you cried without having your eyes glisten and slant? And because she's not wearing a bra, her breasts should look less perky.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/yamiLP.png
The water looks wonderful in this picture. But her hands are still too small. Like I said: Size of face.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Hitsugayasexay.png
*gasm* >///<

The only thing I don't like is the little indent just an inch above his pants. It makes him seem rather malnourished.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Lalc-drawingfinished.png
This looks wonderful; you did an amazing job on it. But may I say something? When drawing the chin, it shouldn't come inwards like you have it on the right of the face. It should stay a straight line. Of course, that's anatomically-correct speaking. You can have it any way you want.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/Nonodrawingfinished.png
The top of her head looks rather large in comparison to the cheeks. They should probably have been brought out just a tad more as not to remind me of a potato.

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt174/Hikayuri/fukuzawa-yumi.png
This is beautifully done and there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. Excellent job.




↑ My Review ↓ My Opinions

You are an amazing artist and you've only gotten better from the last time I've seen you. Keep up the excellent job. (Hey, you may be able to draw a manga series. XD).


Once again, I am in your debt. I'll try to improve from the comments you made and make stuff without so many mistakes.
Thank you <3

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~*!*~Tatsujin Gosuto~*!*~ (Post 5137022)
I'm really loving all of these drawings that you've done, my favorite one is Captain Hitsugaya one the most, great job with the drawings


:t354:TG

Thank you very much! <333

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More comments please?

Hamilton September 21st, 2009 5:42 PM

these are all awesomeness :) my favorite is the last one

Kotone September 24th, 2009 12:40 PM

amazing.
im jealous x]
x]

Vriksha September 26th, 2009 2:46 AM

the drawing of a boy headed down is really very cool!!!


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