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O...k Right, where to start?...Ok, anatomy, your anatomy on both pieces leaves A LOT to be desired, the legs, arms, fingers etc. of Squirlte all need re doing, the shading and palette are quite horrid to say the least, you've used two inconsistant lightsources, you've put very little shading in and you've used the circle tool to no end, I suggest you get yourself a referance picture and the palette from Squitle's FR/LG sprite. |
I aslo suggest clearing up the lines.
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Ok, I will just take it, I stink at scratch sprites. I won't do anymore, they will just embarrass me. lol :)
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http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/7879/fakiepumpknot4di.png
pumpknot v.2^ http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8288/fakiepumpgoth4rr.png pumpgoth^ http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5456/fakiepumpking7hi.png pumpking^ and: http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/171/fakiedolfice4jz.png dolfice^ thes are all my fake pokemon |
The T-card needs to be in the T-card lounge.
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The shading is horrible. You need some major outlining fixing too. The squirtle is too round.
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here are my trainer edits to james from the anime http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/193/jamestrainersprite9ra.png
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Here's a pre-evo of Tigafyr I made. (Basically just small with a more different S. Or head. Whatever.)
http://www.maj.com/gallery/cireguy/bab/edit_copy.png |
hey i did a bit of an update to my sprite http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/4712/jamestrainersprite6fc.png and the tigrfyare whatever is quite ok but the head looks squashed and i think you can make a baby without shrinking it and di you get any permission to use tigga... w/e
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Actually, I was asked to make it by a guy in my shop, and then the guy who made Tigafyr PMed me because I had accidentaly given credit to the wrong person for the sprite. So yeah, I guess that's permission.
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its kinda good but the squirtle looks flat |
Maxxa steals sprites. He didn't make that Jesse sprite. He got it made in a shop.
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I made a new Fakemon, Koponymf. I'm going to make an evolution for it. The final evo is in my sig, Kopometh.
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f104/Karasu06/Fakemon/Koponymfv2.gif |
yes!!!!!
my revmaps done http://i1.*.com/mvi8tu.png oh people im still working on the black foot, i just dont know what to replace that one with. |
Hi! I like spriting and was thinking of opening a thread. But I'm not sure I'm good enough. I'll show you a sprite I made. Please comment on it, suggest things, and tell me if I'm good enough. Here is my Wartortle-Charizard Recolour:http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d75/Shadowumbreoncat/WartortleRevampCharizard.jpg Hope it's good! You can also visit my site, if you'd like (Sprite Site, that is)
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that recoler good but its a recolor,7/10 or 8/10
*EDIT* i just went to your site, its actully good, not bad i like it *esdit* hey i just went to your my animation site and how did you do that with the evolving bulbasaur to ivysaur |
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http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/5535/bubbal7nn.png
bubbal ^ http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/4954/bublow6cz.png bublow ^ i'm making the third stage later. |
hey i didnt steal it compare it to yours and youll see i did that one myself
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ok guys can you rate my recolor
this isnt one of those 2,4 minute recololers http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/revmap.png yes can you guys and gurls also rate my revmap (dont rate this one!!-->) http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/rstrainer29.png this guy to this guy http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/rstrainer55.png (<---dont rate this one) (rate this one!!!)--> http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/abstrainer.png |
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Vaati, how come you are very feirce with your criticism. I mean Come on, New spriters are probably scared to show things that they took forever to do (and they may be the most beautiful things on earth) because of the *harsh* (not the best word to use) criticism you (uncommonly) use. Vaati seems to be correct that it's a recolour. It looks as though it took you 11mins 20 sec to do at least. The shading is good, three shades is always enough for sprites of that size. There are a few problems though, the outlining needs to be slightly edited to make it look even better. Try using a slightly less darker colour for the outlines where the light hits the sprite. Other than those it looks very nice, I give it a 7.8/10. If you had changed the outlines a bit I would have given it a higher mark. |
hey can i jst say if you would like a request done privatly pm me ill be happy to make scratches of a good description :)
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Who do you guys think is the best fusions spriters? Like the new ones, not ho-roudon or anyone , but peopel who haven't been here for a long time.
Like a list of 5... not really sure how many new spriters hve been here but i know i am one |
People, i had made a custom sprite just now, i'm planning to add it somewhere =O Do not use it >>
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y109/PKMN_TRN_Red/Sprites/Roy.gif It was based on an Fire Emblem character, but i edited a bit to make it look a bit like a Pokémon character... |
yes im done wiht a little of my walking sheet for my trainer, im still working on it thoe
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/abstrainersheet.png |
hey you stole that from c2 and bbs shop!!!
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@eagle165: Actually, no he didn't. The Overworlds requested in that shop are not the same as the ones he posted here.
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a made a crappy devmap http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/devmap.png |
Is anyone here good at making FakeMon backpics? If so, could I have some help with the following; They need backpics:
*http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/kougawolf/Gryfeonfullcolor.jpg *http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/kougawolf/Pedgwynfullcolor.jpg (Tail is suppose to be like a fin) *http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/kougawolf/Syntourfullcolor.jpg *http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/kougawolf/Xyawhonfullcolor.jpg (doesn't have a tail) Please help (and/or rate my sprites) |
well guys dont go harsh on me this is my first custom
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/firstcustom.png |
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But some on the outlines specially on the "eyes" need a wee bit redoing, as I said before for your recolour, use light shades of the colours that you are using for the parts where the light touches the sprite and darker shade for the shadowed outlines. Also try to stay clear from the default paint colours and black. |
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Maybe if it were a bit more... striking then he would of got a review (it seems so hard to please Vaati these days XD) @Maxxi: you already seem to have a few threads open, if people wish to request sprites from you, then turn of your threads in to a request shop, no need to request for someone to request (made sence in my head O_o) well i think im done in here for now. |
here is my newest sprite a moogle MOG http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2217/mog1zc.png
comment KUPO |
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n1dker 8.6/10 n1dl6o 9.9/10 or jst a simple 10/10 n1dmhs 8.4/10 n1dmqd 8/10 |
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I Like It, But It's Only A Recolor. Revamp Is Adding More Shades To GBC Pokémon Sprite. You Just Took Colors From GBA Pokémon Sprite And Recolorled It. But Cause It Is Your First, I Think It's Pretty Good ^^
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Clickie! <== My first fusion ever! XD
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Anyway, can somebody rate my Avatar? I made if for the Sprite Contest. I've fallen in love with it. XD |
guys i finished my evolve form!!!
this ->http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/customsomeedit.png to this --> http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/craxy_teenloser/evolveformofcustom.png |
it acrually looks like a repose of it better than the oringinal
dont use it as an evo use it as the actual pokemon!! |
W00T! I just finished making pixel art of Misty, my second favourite anime girl of all time and my favourite Pokémon character http://i1.*.com/n4va4h.png what do you think of it?
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wow thats great how long did that take you??
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1. The left hand (To us, not to her) is a little odd. It looks more like a blob than a hand. 2. There are a few jogs in the border. Try to straighten them out. 3. The bottom of the shoes is too flat. It looks a bit unnatural. Other than that, it's okay! Again, I say: It's much better than anything I can do. |
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Its good, but get rid of the black outlines on it |
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I'm looking for the item sprite for Brick Piece from FR/LG... does anybody have it? I need it for a sprite comic. Thanks!
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But as I said before, you can make pixel art if you really want to ^_^ Just get yourself a good reference pic and remember, the zoom system and the straight line tool are your friends. Your art doesn't need to be perfect at first, as long as you practice, you'll just keep on improving ^_~ Quote:
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Thanks for the tips^^I'll see how I do |
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tighyt i give it a 9.7/10 |
Just something I whipped up in my spare time, a bug type eon
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/198/bugeevee1jy.png |
Cool.
Shadow, what would i need to improve to get full out ten |
Ok i started doing my pokemon's second form have yet to do the first its a dragon based pokemon, i'm starting to think the head was a bad choice, but i did two arm versions.
1st Version: http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/Pokemon/MyDragon.jpg 2nd Version: http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/Pokemon/MyDragonArmsVer2.jpg |
Head looks fine, it may be just a little big for the body. And i actually liek the 1st version arems better. It makes it look more feirce
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^_^, its kinda for someone's game whos letting me help out ^_^.
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thanks pokexproduction! You want a preevo of something?, also i will need to have that one rated.
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Bottom was changed alittle from togepei(sp?) and the top was scratch
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how bout' a preevo of eevee?? |
Could i have a pre evo of...Mewtwo?
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well the top of the egg ends with straight line and the bottom doesnt, so if you can make the top end like the bottom , it will be a full ten, |
Ok guys i'll try. ONce i finish my one guys request i will post in my shop.
You may get your stuff before then thoug.h. Check back tomorrow at MY SHOP, not here. Shadow, yeah i saw that hmm i might do a similar concept for the feb. contest. |
Shadow could you rate my kawaii sprites on my request page?
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Kakashi Hatake~ 8/10, very cute. I would've given it a higher rating, but I kinda hold a grudge against Naruto. So don't count my opinion. XD
Anyways, I whipped up a tutorial on Pokemon-style flame. Enjoy! Click here |
Heh, i couldn't help myself lol.
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i just got back from the store.... witch im an idiot for asking where is the reqeust page? |
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all of these r cool
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/MySpace/SakuraWithHair.gif http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/MySpace/SasukeCompleteChidori.gif http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/MySpace/LinkClothesDone.gif http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c160/perfect128/OrochimaruCrazyHair.gif http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/Naruto/PokeSprite.gif http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/Naruto/WithPokeballandRope.gif http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/Naruto/NarutoClothed.gif http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/Naruto/NarutoFinished.gif each 10/10 thats what i think they should be. on the second one thoe i cant see his eyes, only a little bit |
I'm actually working on a Pokemon Fire Red styled Kakashi ^^
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its good, hey this misty doesnt have a nose. lol, |
AHHHHH!!!! Misty id deformed!!! *runs away with horror*
LOL! That is good besided the fact she doesn't ahve nose |
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Whatcha all think of my Pkmn Fire Red styled Kakashi ^^
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a235/EchidnaKnuckles/Naruto/KakashiTrainer.jpg |
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Can anyone make me over heads of my guy on my trainer and if you can my pokemon?
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http://i1.*.com/n66ssn.png Yes It's A Gulpin. So What? XD
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Can anyone help me with names for these guys?
http://www.dragonflycave.com/images/fish.png http://www.dragonflycave.com/images/flounder.png http://www.dragonflycave.com/images/snake.png |
Quillad
Quilland Quillflash *Shot* Awesome sprites aswell though ^^ |
I think more of...
Quillan Quillanae Quillasyke Dunno just off the top of my head, nice spriting though. |
Pkmn fusion
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This is my first poke-fusion ever, i used bayleef, jumpluff, roselia and tropius. This pkmn is called Bayjuzius. Please tell me wht u think about it :D
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not bad for a first poke-fuse,but there is black outlines. |
i didn't know if i was suposed to erase them (i was in doubt)
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Salphin - Salmon Fin(Phin) Salphish - Salmon Fish (Phish) Sanacon - Salmon Anaconda |
i was soooo bored so i just went ahead and made this Espeon/Dragonair mix
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b115/Crescent_beam/fdzihateu.png can anyone comment/criticize? |
Hey, that looks amazing! :)
* Thanks for the comment on my badges * |
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