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aquadan November 11th, 2009 1:33 AM

STEEL REACTIONS by Team Swift
 



H A C K | I S | O V E R | D U E | T O | L A C K | O F | I N T E R E S T




Specifications
Hack Of: http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x218/foullump/badge-firered.png
Previously Known As: Pokémon: Aqua Steel
Team: Team Swift - we never miss ! >>Go
Vacancies: Scripter and Tile Editor. >>Apply
Tools: MewHackToolBox >>go, Advance Map >>go, Yet Another Pokemon Editor >>go.
Last Update: November 25th 2009


Introduction
Howdy guys! its Aqua Dan chances are only a few recall me as the guy who made a cool layout for Sacred Fire, Rainy Days or Mythic Legends.
well i have returned with my hack, now its fleshed out heaps!


Storyline
Spoiler:

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Return to an aged Kanto, 50 years in the future. terraformed by an amass of crazy events and reactions. You play as Steel a young boy from a new estate in Kanto: Easel Estate.
Will you be able to catch all 250 pokemon, defeat your 3 rivals(Aqua and 2 others), collect 13 badges all whilst trying to stop a team of dangerous pokemon poachers?

Now lets go back 50 years to find out what happened...


50 years ago...
Red has just been named champion of the indigo plateau.

http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/6/6a/045Vileplume.png

10 Years Later:
Erica, Gym Leader Of Celedon City is trying to get her Vileplume to create a new move called: PsySeed. by fusing together, Confusion and Leach seed, however the experiment goes wary and thousands of leach seeds end up covering the entire city and the confusion causes chaos and madness amongst the people and Pokemon.
The Owners of the Celedon Hotel, give there Dugtrio to there nephew, Blaze and tell her to escape to Cinnabar Island.

11 Years Later:
Celedon City is now known as: Celedon Jungle and is extremely dangerous.
the only people inside are dangerous bikers and even more dangerous pokemon.
Squritle's are now endangered, due to high poaching rates.


http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/4/4e/144Articuno.png

37 Years Later..
On your(steel) third birthday you receive an antique Pokéball from your aging grand father: Falkner. Then your parents; 2 flying type breeders: Iron and Carbon. come out with the cake. as you blow out the candles, you wish for a Pokemon.

Suddenly there is a loud crash outside, so you
all run out side.
and see all your parents pigdey's flying around and squawking and from amongst all the rubble from the fallen shed, you see a massive blue creature covered in feathers. its the Freeze Pokemon: Articuno.

You and your parents take the dying monster to Prof. Oak's lab in Pallet City, where he is able to help him.
almost straight after Articuno has healed, she flies away
and leaves you all with a dying trail of beautiful snow.
As your parents are talking to the Professor you find a poster on the wall, for Prof. Oaks Trek. so decided to sneak the poster with you as you head back to Johto ....

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39 years later...

Professor Oak and Red's Mother take a trip a top of the Dark Tunnels, however whilst there a large tital wave hits them, and they are never found, the wave all falls into the gaps and the dark tunnel becomes a mass of islands.

The wave also filled the caverns, the natural habitat of many Pokemon.
Frightened and scared the Pokemon begin to attack the rising water with rock throws and earthquakes in pure desperation, however this causes a massive tectonic tremor, and a large earth quake hits the entire region...

Much of the region experienced changes, the safari zone sinks into the ground, the cycle path crashes. and the bikers become angry and begin attacking the city and band together to become a team of Pokemon poachers,

Mount Moon and Cerulean Cave's layouts change completely, also Mana Island becomes much closer to the kanto region and the cinnabar volcano collapses.

Squirtles are now extinct.

http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/2/28/Oakletter.PNG
50 Years Later
(Present Day)

Professor Oak has become incredibly famous, and now getting on his biyearly trek of Kanto is highly competitive, for one to even get the application form, you must have personal contact with Professor Oak.
Luckly for you, you already have.
Also since your 3rd Birthday your and your dad have moved to the new: Easel Estate, east of Vermillion City.

One day whilst checking the mail, you find a
letter of acceptance, however so did your best friend Aqua, so you both race home to get ready for your trip.

Once you get home you realize that you have to be in Pallet City in two hours!
So with the help of your Father's Pidgeot, and your speedy packing skills you get there just it time!

Once you get to Pallet and you are quickly scolded by one of Professor Blue Oak’s Assistant's: Sakai for being 3 seconds late, he then slaps a name sticker on Steel and tell him that the other applicant's are already here.


Six people stand inside the Pallet City Research Center as Prof. B. Oak walks out, to greet the new applicants.
As the Professor is talking you notice your rival on the other side of the room, as well as some other applicant's: a short shy silent boy with fiery red hair named Crimson, A girl with long hair and a short skirt: Geneevee, A tall older boy with multi-colored hair: Carpathian and Pallet born idol: Charcoal.

Suddenly Prof. B. Oak announces:
"There has been an error, and alas i only need 4 trainers for my trek.
to solve this we shall have a Pokemon quiz.
the winner will receive a choice of one of 4 Pokemon: Bulbasaur, Totodile, Charmander and --"
suddenly Sakai interrupts and tells Prof. B. Oak
he is running 20 seconds late and hands out the quizzes



Features
  1. New environments: Ash infested Path, An Extinct Volcano, A Hydroelectric Gym, A Ranch and more!
  2. Only 250 Pokemon to collect: but they range from Kanto to Sinnoh!
  3. 3 Rivals: Aqua, Charcole and (?)
  4. 4 Starter Pokémon: Charmander, Totodile, Bulbasaur and (?)
  5. 13 Gyms (5 are BRAND new)
  6. Access to Johto
  7. A collection of Bikers turned Pokemon Poachers
  8. Poached Item's; Mareep Wool, Blissy Egg, Cubone Skull, SlowKing Crown + more!
  9. Anime inspired events: Crimson City, The WhirlCup and Metallica Island.*
  10. 50 PokéAmulets to collect*
  11. Revive: Mew, Lugia & Ho-oh from Fossils.*
  12. 3 New HM’s: Blaze, Overload & Defrost.*
  13. The Pokécase, A case which holds; Badges, Awards & PokéAmulets*
*Conditional.

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cadgod120 November 11th, 2009 3:34 PM

Hooray for being the first post!

Couple questions, though. How can there be an earthquake? Second, why Squirtle? Third, Metallica Island?

Curt_09 November 11th, 2009 3:51 PM

Interesting ideas and storyline. I'm ready to visit Cerulean Jungle.

luke November 11th, 2009 4:27 PM

This hack's story is all over the place. I was really confused by the whole.

The Vileplume thing is really farfetched. As mentioned, the earthquake thing is confusing to. The whole story is confusing too..

I understand you take pride in your CSS work but the whole layout distracts from the hack itself. There's a difference between organization/professionalism and losing yourself in the layout when you're trying to read the story line or look at the screenshots.

It has potential - just needs a few changes/improvements.

Good luck :)

5qwerty November 11th, 2009 6:02 PM

Story sounds very interesting... It also fills the reader with suspense. But all the characters just confused me.

VGAura November 11th, 2009 9:50 PM

If there are 6 applicants including the Player and Rival, what will happen to the other two characters that dont get chosen by the Prof?

Will they still play a role in the story?

aquadan November 12th, 2009 7:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cadgod120 (Post 5312236)
Hooray for being the first post!

Couple questions, though. How can there be an earthquake? Second, why Squirtle? Third, Metallica Island?

The earthquake was caused by the pokemon attacking since most of the pokemon are rock or ground

i decided it would be more interesting to change the line up, but i wanted an actual reason for it!

Metallica island is from the anime :), what it will hold is not for you to know :)

Quote:

Originally Posted by curt_09
Interesting ideas and storyline. I'm ready to visit Cerulean Jungle.

Awesome! its tough to find jungle tiles in fr/lg style :|

Quote:

Originally Posted by Britney spears

This hack's story is all over the place. I was really confused by the whole.

The Vileplume thing is really farfetched. As mentioned, the earthquake thing is confusing to. The whole story is confusing too..

I understand you take pride in your CSS work but the whole layout distracts from the hack itself. There's a difference between organization/professionalism and losing yourself in the layout when you're trying to read the story line or look at the screenshots.

It has potential - just needs a few changes/improvements.

Good luck :)

thanks for all that criquing!
it made me realise that i need like a premise rather then just give you guys a timeline.
so i have edited it so it makes more sense =D


Quote:

Originally Posted by 5qwerty
Story sounds very interesting... It also fills the reader with suspense. But all the characters just confused me.

lol thanks :D
i have removed the character bios as the seem to take up lots of space. and are not very necessary


Quote:

Originally Posted by VGAura

If there are 6 applicants including the Player and Rival, what will happen to the other two characters that dont get chosen by the Prof?

Will they still play a role in the story?

smart kid! they will come back, one is a cameo the other will... well i wont ruin it for you guys!

im trying to keep a good level of mystery, without losing interest :X

Also guys, when the pokemon at the top changes it means there has been an update.
evolved pokemon mean its a BIG update.
well i gotta go!

Glitch. November 19th, 2009 12:45 PM

here is one of three of the requested banners:
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here is two of three of the requested banners:
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here is three of three of the requested banners:
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aquadan November 23rd, 2009 6:35 AM

More Screenshots kiddies :D
 

deeelove November 23rd, 2009 6:47 AM

i think this looks awesome! Thats my opinion

Glitch. November 23rd, 2009 2:26 PM

your second set of screen shots i've noticed a few tile errors.
i will be going from left to right.

screen shot 1 - ill let you find it, it's pretty obvious.
screen shot 2 - the mountain's second level is, well ill let you see it.
screen shot 3 - same as map 2.
screen shot 4 - change the mountain to grass transaction.
screen shot 5 - this one is good

nice work otherwise.

NatureKeeper November 23rd, 2009 8:38 PM

S...squirtles... are... extinct?

My favorite Pokémon....

*sniff*...*sniff* WAAAAAAH! *earthquake*

For real can I get squirtle or it is extinct.

aquadan November 24th, 2009 1:02 PM

thanks for your options guys!!

and naturekeeper, squirtles are extinct. but so are omanites :D

UPDATE: GRAPHICS FOR THE FIRST THREAD
Coming Soon: More Screenshots

Glitch. November 24th, 2009 2:17 PM

@ aquadan
so you are basically saying that squirtles will most likely be obtainable by a fossil right?

aquadan November 25th, 2009 1:01 AM


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REPLIES
@MrHaxMaster well i didnt say that did i hax? i want to be a bit of a surprise :D


SPOILERS
Some characters have died or gone missing:
  • Brock
  • Misty
  • Koga
  • Blaine
  • Lance
UPDATES!
Group Thread is now up here




batmon November 25th, 2009 5:28 PM

I will be eagerly awaiting this one :)

Oh and Blaine is a butthole, I say replace him with Flannery :)

aquadan November 27th, 2009 3:52 PM

Oh Blaines replacement is way cooler than a firey puzzle head.

Darkyaoifox December 10th, 2009 6:32 PM

Sounds interesting, I love the idea of reviving Mew from a fossil X3

/Circa December 11th, 2009 12:10 AM

This story had me hooked, honestly, I hope you can produce all this into a game, good luck!

barak302 December 13th, 2009 3:12 PM

i really liked the story
hope you will make it to the end

anugrah6 December 15th, 2009 5:40 AM

hey i read the stroy and i find it very good and by the way it is going to be released

aquadan December 19th, 2009 6:47 PM

Im thinking about giving up on steel reactions, because it seems that no one wants to help me with scripting, or rather they say they will and thenn ratt off somewhere.

so i think ill come back later, mean while im working on another hack


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