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/Circa December 23rd, 2009 12:08 AM

My Custom Pokemon
 
Cirnos Servant's Fakemon Thread

These are my first attempts at making Pokemon, and I would really appreciate some constructive criticism so I can really make some good ones.

They need to be good because I'm including them in my Hack.

#1 Baleaf GRASS
#2 Balloeaf GRASS/FLYING
#3 Ballonleaf GRASS/FLYING
#4 Amelf FIRE
#5 Amefelm FIRE/DARK
#6 Amefleam FIRE/DARK
#7 Tado WATER
#8 Tadopul WATER
#9 Taderpulch WATER
#10 Psypod PYSCHIC
#11 Psychshell PYSCHIC
#12 Pysleptir PYSCHIC/FLYING
#13 Turtmoss GRASS/WATER
#14 Poisbeetle BUG/POISON
#15 Mofis GROUND
#16 Mofistle GROUND/FIGHTING
#17 Cricketel ELECTRIC/BUG
#18 Icible ICE
#19 Elecion ELECTRIC/PYSCHIC
#20 Iophin WATER
#21 Dragophin WATER/DRAGON
#22 Trefist GRASS
#23 Puncoak GRASS/FIGHTING
#24 Sheetly GHOST
#25 Ghosheet GHOST
#26 Unnamed GHOST
#27 Crocofire FIRE
#150 Darkreloss DARK

UPDATE Saturday, December 26
#28 ??? DARK
#29 ??? DARK
#30 ??? DARK
#31 Grunchlax NORMAL - Evolution of Snorlax
#32 ??? GROUND
#33 ??? GROUND/STEEL
#34 ??? POISON
#35 ??? POISON
#36 ??? POISON
#37 ??? ELECTRIC
#38 Embikarp FIRE
#39 Embivod FIRE/WATER
#40 Tangamoss GRASS - Evolution of Tangela (Night-Time lv up)
#41 ??? ICE

I'm letting the public choose some names!


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Trent_Jayir December 23rd, 2009 4:09 AM

hmm, if i were you i'd make them more detailed. ALOT more detailed, give them something that makes them unique.
look for a weird, obscure animal, and base it on that if you need ideas, like, the ayeaye lemur could be a cool dark-type, for example.
Spend some time looking at animal physiology too, your fakemon don't look particularly believable right now because the biology is bad.
its a good start, i hope you continue.

Altair. December 24th, 2009 6:27 AM

Your Fakemon Look...Well....Fake.

BR25 December 24th, 2009 8:52 AM

They look good but could be better (i dont know how they just could)

Vriksha December 25th, 2009 5:59 AM

humnmn.......they all seem vry good!

but i think that u shud try some attractive poses for them.....!

keep up.....!

:-)

/Circa December 26th, 2009 2:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Trent_Jayir (Post 5414889)
hmm, if i were you i'd make them more detailed. ALOT more detailed, give them something that makes them unique.
look for a weird, obscure animal, and base it on that if you need ideas, like, the ayeaye lemur could be a cool dark-type, for example.
Spend some time looking at animal physiology too, your fakemon don't look particularly believable right now because the biology is bad.
its a good start, i hope you continue.

It's not the biology, i'm just not that experienced haha.

Anyways, adding an update to the first post.

Vendour December 27th, 2009 1:11 AM

I think your drawing are adorable. They're really cute.

I have no criticism though, constructive or otherwise, lol.

Trent_Jayir December 27th, 2009 2:04 AM

:p, riiight. experience? okay.
what i was getting at was that you should probably look at animals anatomy to be able to make your pokemon anatomy look more convincing. it would help you alot, i feel.

your newest lot are an improvement! I'd be interested to see some dex information/stats maybe if you had them
I like the Last one, the ice typed bird one. It looks pretty cool.

OM3GA Umbr30n December 29th, 2009 3:39 PM

good!
They would look awsome in a game sprited.

EDIT: hundred and third post fTW!

B_B December 30th, 2009 8:38 AM

they look quite good :3 and i think it would be better with some more details

Pika_Pika_Chu January 2nd, 2010 7:00 PM

They look all good.
They are fake!
But they look kind of ugly!

KotovSyndrome_ January 2nd, 2010 9:59 PM

I think you should base them more around actual animals, rather than them being completely made up.
Pokemon are usually based on animals.

Pika_Pika_Chu January 3rd, 2010 11:55 AM

Are you making the sprites properly? Here is a small help of the two first Pokémons.
http://bmail.uol.com.br/main/download?msg_id=NjY4OA&ctype=falsemon.jpg&disposition=inline&force_folder=SENT

Youji January 6th, 2010 12:43 PM

Mhh the base is quite good but it's more a base for the final versions :D They are all quite plain and their pose is kinda boring (all have overall the same) and the coloring/shading should be improved. Also you should think over your fire evo line (#004-#006) again.

Good Luck ;)

RedBaron474 January 7th, 2010 10:43 AM

No offense whatsoever but, to me they look, well, kinda boring. They are all so simple, (which is somewhat a good thing ), but I'd like too see some more complicated fakemon. But anyways not bad. :)

AmayaTsuki09 January 7th, 2010 3:52 PM

You some good ideas, but they need a little 'umph'. Maybe some poses and a little more detail to them.


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