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ReyRey-Pyon December 29th, 2009 7:41 PM

I Can't Think Of A Good Title For My Art Gallery :C
 
Art Gallery dawgs
Constructive Critique is ALWAYS welcome

I'll start off by posting these i guess



Spoiler:


http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff343/reyreypyon/momoko.png
I messed up the legs on her a little :C


{Swan} December 29th, 2009 7:51 PM

Spoiler:
http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff343/reyreypyon/djfhklsdhf.png
I can see nothing wrong with this picture. Actually I really love it, it's sweet and nicely coloured.


http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff343/reyreypyon/NOZOMUSKETCHI1.png
I know that's a Chibi, but the head's simply /too/ big. It's larger than the body! the detailing of the body is really well done, but it lacks in the head. I would have liked to see more detail and better shading on the hair.

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff343/reyreypyon/momoko.png
As you said, the legs are too short, but that's the only thing I can spot in this picture, apart from that the colours are killing my eyes xD Great job.


http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff343/reyreypyon/HIKARUCHIBI.png
Again, too big a head and more details on the hair, but at least this time there's is proper shading and the lack of details doesn't contrast with the reast of the body, because you didn't give him that many to begin with. so I like this one better than the first one.

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff343/reyreypyon/reychibi.png
Big head his big, non-shaded hair has no shading aaand the overall lineart is very thick and messy, contrasting with the other beautifully thin lines up there.




^^ Click the spoiler.

Trent_Jayir December 30th, 2009 11:36 AM

haha nice, it was good to click the spoiler and see Zetsubo Sensei up there xD~ made me chuckle~ ¦¬D
The amount of detail you put into that one is immense! the overall shading looks really sweet too, super job on that! (especially the expression he wears x3~)
These looks really nice, you have a really fun style and everything looks unique too, like, you experiment with different ways of doing things, which is neat. It nice to see someone who isn't afraid to push at their own boundaries or go out of their safety zone, especially in the name of improvement <3.
ALSO i really like your chibis<3 (i am so fail at chibis) but yours all look so great and cute, just like they should do D':
Now that I've rambled a load of balls at you, here, have something useful:
The one with the legs are a bit too short, but i don't think it so bad, i mean, they look a better shape of leg than most people seem to pull off. i think if you had juuust pulled the leg thats up over the other one a bit more, and maybe if we could see a tad of the calf of that leg peeping out too, the fact they look 'too short' wouldn't have occurred so much... But yeah, you probably know, a hip is about level with the bellybutton and a thigh should be about 1-1.5 headsize(s), same with a calf, depending on the build you're going for... so these could have done with being a bit longer if you're going to be so fussy.
you probably know this, since you seem quite advanced, but if you find a way of mirroring or flipping the picture, the things you've got 'wrong' will be more apparent to you, it's useful when you think you've done sketching to do that, it helps fix stuff.

D'; i hope this has helped you!

ReyRey-Pyon December 31st, 2009 6:40 PM

Thanks

I think the chibis look cute with their massive heads
Your Mileage May vary i guess o3o

I've never been good with drawing full body picturs kasd;ljakd

http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff343/reyreypyon/Hikaru-2.png

Update

just practice, im aware of the sloppy lines

Brad Ketchum January 4th, 2010 1:56 AM

These are pretty good. I like the chibis most


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