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I really like your concepts but your shading is off. Remember to have a specific light source. If your making them for a hack or game then the light source is in the top left.
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Even imperfect shading can't detract from the fact that these are very well done sprites. The coloring is fantastic, though overall lacking in warmer tones, and your lines are almost flawlessly smooth. You have some impressive talent.
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This has got to be the first time I've been bugged so much in such a short amount of time. Nobody can use my sprites (except for a few people to whom I already gave permission), and I'm not some kind of slave for anyone to be putting to work.
I generally try to emulate the Gen 4 style, which isn't as perfectly light-sourced as the previous generations. Besides shading what's away from the top left corner, it shades what's lower down and what's farther away, giving a cheap illusion of depth. Of course I don't do everything perfectly, but it's not like I'm shading "wrong" because I'm some kind of n00b. |
Ive seen some of your work on DA and I have to say Im quite impressed how well you do the fakemon. The outlines seem to really impress me the most though.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/traplure.gif this for example is in my mind perfectly emulating the gen 4 style of pokemon. For one it has an pose that shows some kind of action which is what most official Pokemon sprites show. The idea itself seems to be passable for an official Pokemon. The use of some kind of pattern or design is a must when making fakemon and you seem to have made a believable design for the sprite, which is great. Basing it off of a real life animal is a great thing to have too. There are some minor errors in this sprite though. On the upper part of the jaw it probably should have some lighting there, but like I said its minor the sprite may look better like this. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/helminthon.gif Here's another sprite that really interested me in your gallery. The shading is the first thing I notice in the sprite. The fur shading style has been emulated wonderfully which stands out alot in most sprites. The pattern / design is pretty good. Though Im not sure what you might have based this off of. Looks like a parasite in my opinion. Because of how it looks people might not believe its official which you usually want to aim for. It's a good sprite dont get me wrong but its kind of hard to make out what it is. Its a great gallery of sprites you have though. I hope to see you put more of your work up here. |
Thanks :D Helminthon and Nematon are some of my favorite designs because of their vagueness. They are based on colonies of Tubifex Worms: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SQmFWYWqTZA with faces similar to leeches and tapeworms. Heminthon's body shape is inspired by Raremon (of Digimon, of course)
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These designs are great.
Quality wise, I like the emphasis you give to the lineart on mostly all of these. Even if the shading contains irregularities here and there, or even if the colors may be slightly off in places, the good lineart makes them seem invisible at first glance.. It's the most defining aspect in making a pokemon sprite look good, and you seem to know that well. (Unlike 90% of the people here) I would crit, but most of what there is to crit here are small scale details on all sprites. Once I get free time, I might go inspect these closely for in-depth critique. |
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I would be doing that....why?
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These are some really original designs! You also have a good eye for color, but there is one small problem... The Tuthuid line and Ventherm aside, they don't really look like Pokemon. Helminthon especially looks like something from Final Fantasy. Pokemon tend to have large heads, or at the very least memorable faces. I'm not saying that you should change the designs, but it's something you might want to keep in mind in the future.
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These are some delicious concepts. Like others have said, there are minor issues with the shading, but nothing big. I love the first stage lure pokemon, it's a really clever design, and it kinda looks like he's trying to grab his own lure, which really adds a quirky character to the design. I hope to see more of your work around here in the future :)
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i dont know if these are really yours aviculor is the one who made these heres the link to his/her gallery
http://aviculor.deviantart.com/gallery/#Fakemon |
Yes, I'm a thief that knows everything about his stolen fakes and who advertises his victim's site. Good job, Sherlock.
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. . .it's quite obvious that his URL in PC and in DeviantArt is the same, please check his profile first before you say that his work isn't his
and, I just saw your sprites in PC and I've got to say that these are some smexy sprites I say! it's so sophisticated and well designed with good color combinations and terrific designs |
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some of these fakemon aren't that bad
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is that supposed to be a compliment?
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aww , taroset is cute >.<
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Wow! These are some of the best fakes I've seen on here in a long while. I can't see the issue with your shading that others have mentioned, and it's a lot less of a hard and fast rule in the latest games anyhow. The only criticism I have is that on the darker sprites, like Tsaraphosa and Waruphosa, it's a little hard to see the anatomy because the lines blend with the dark fill colour. Spectrum also doesn't seem like very Pokémon-y, and I'm not really sure what it's supposed to represent (other than a generic ghost). I think your names could use a little work, too, but that's not relevant to the quiality of the art. ;)
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Can I use them please ? [The Crickid & the evolv]
With credits of course ^_^ |
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/taroset.gif http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/tarankey.gif Anyways... I think you did a very great job on both of these fakemon. May not be very pokemon like but it is certainly done well. But I see some lighting issues on the evo. Your suppose to use the lighter hue on the limb that is closer to the sun otherwise you shouldn't use it. Though on that monkey like pokemon I can see that you used lighting on both the belly and the left knee. It's nothing major really just some things you might want to take out. Im also kind of wondering how does a pig-ish like sprite evolves into a monkey. Unless it originates from another one of those rare species of animals I never heard of. But overall these are some great sprites. Outline is smooth. Nice colors. Maybe not so much it would be seen in pokemon but still it looks great. Hope you can get in some more sprites for us at PC~ |
Spectrum is made of pure light, so its body is blinding white with an outline that shimmers like the rainbow. I made its sprite like this, with nothing but default colors, simply because I could.
Taroset is just a heavily stylized monkey. Tarankey's arm doesn't have the highlight on it because we're seeing the inside of its arm, the exact opposite of where the light is hitting it..If a backsprite were to be made, the highlight would be there. Since I've had so much experience, I tend to deviate from the training wheels. Whether or not my bike's crashed is a matter of opinion. As for the names...that really is my fault. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ViewersAreGeniuses |
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However, it's less the fact that I don't understand their origins (which I don't, for what it's worth, but I could make educated guesses), it's that they all follow the same repetitive pattern. The Araphosa line all end in -phosa, which is a similar trend to those of all your evolution lines (with the exception of Crickid). I just think that you could vary them a little more. Come to think of it, though, a few names don't really roll off the tongue. Abulay... Abuleeeoo... Abulooco? In that case, not knowing the root causes my small mind an issue. Still, they're your designs, and therefore your call, but I hope I've helped in some small way. Have you ever tried doing other things, like OWs or trainer sprites? |
Slowpoke, Slowbro/Slowking
Charmander, Charmeleon, Charizard Bulbasaur, Ivysaur, Venusaur Nidoran, Nidorino/Nidorina, Nidoking/Nidoqueen Onix, Steelix Poliwag, Poliwhirl, Poliwrath/Politoed Kabuto, Kabutops Omanyte, Omastar Azurill, Marill, Azumarill Houndour, Houndoom Staryu, Starmie Tentacool, Tentacruel Paras, Parasect Natu, Xatu Dusknoir Misdreavus, Mismagius Masquerain Kangaskhan Regigigas Makuhita, Hariyama Tyrogue Kyogre Abomasnow Honchkrow Carvanha Hippopotas Rayquaza Vespiquen Deoxys Arceus I'm sorry, but I don't quite understand the problem. I made a few lines with matching names? I made some names that people unfamiliar with certain subjects may find difficult? Actually, looking back, most of the ones I posted are the second one, so I guess I can't blame you that much. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/hagnez.gif (Not really looking for crit on these. Some are old, some are on my revamp list already)Hagnez http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/fluine-1.gif http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/pestula-2.gif Fluine, Pestula http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/fetos.gif Fetos http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/traplure.gif http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/axelure.gif Traplure, Axelure http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/apple.gif Chompple http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/bombillo.gif http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/explodillo.gif Bombillo, Explodillo http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/cadeep-3.gif Cadeep http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/pupatty-1.gif http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/poofly-1.gif Pupatty, Poofly http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/docteria1.gif Docteria http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/circat.gif Circat http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/hyester-1.gif http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/hylarius.gif Hyester, Hylarius http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/sicaris.gif http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/sicarisand.gif Sicaris, Sicarisand http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/lordifer.gif Lordifer http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/angale.gif Angale There's more, but I don't know exactly what'd be too difficult for you. It's really all a matter of perspective, you know. The same way you trip over Abuleuco, I had to read Adnokana twice. In other words, Your Mileage May Vary. Similarly, I guess you're not familiar with the idea of using Light as an element. |
Your sprites are very very nice, keep it up! =)
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Ok, I think you went a little OTT there, but yes, I see your point. It just struck me that they all followed the xxxx-ending pattern, and it seemed a little dull. However, with the new ones, I'm happy to back down on that one :)
I still maintain that your spriting is superb and near faultless, so keep up the good work. However, I'll reiterate my question of whether there are other strings to your bow, or if this is your speciality. Either way, it'd be great to see your talents put to use in a game or a hack. |
Fakemon are my specialty. I've made a few things for my friend's project, badges and a trainer or two, but I'm not really that hot on them.
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/pestula-2.gif
that looks like utter filth, and is truely one of the most disgusting things i've set eyes upon, very nice job :P It's quite obvious that you've worked hard on this and all the rest. |
Ya, there are several i like. I like Tuthuid Giguid the best i think. But not Archthuid.
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/angale.gif
..Its so cute it makes want to stab myself in the face..... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/hylarius.gif Gah! A gay clown!....(I'm gonna see this in my nightmares).... Good work though.I like the shading on this one especially: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/absolattacker/shaduana/explodillo.gif |
AMAZING
looking at your DA and the ones posted here, your origionality and skill are out of this world! can't wait for more. |
Nice Fakemon. I like you work. Can you make me some. I you want please pm me. I will give creadite for fakemon. I realy need some for my hack.
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