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Yes, there were many text errors, but I believe we have corrected most of the mistakes. I will try and upload a fixed alpha sometime soon. What exactly is wrong with the interior tilesets? I don't see anything wrong with them except that their palette doesn't match the exterior. Could you please tell me whats wrong? Also, "You're grammar is poor," sorry couldn't help but to lol at that one. :P Thanks for your feedback. |
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He means you didn't put that little ding noise before the ! over the persons head.
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Excuse my statement about the interior tilesets, I had a faulty rom that I patched it with, and hence the messed up interior tilesets. And to help you out with the 'ding' (which is sound 0x15) noise, take a tip from me, a expert from my peers evaluation. To get the closest and most accurate anatomy of nintendo movement scripting, set it up like this: If just a using #raw 0x62 (exclamtion point), i.e.: #org @move #raw 0x62 #raw 0xFE then set up the whole thing like this: ... sound 0x15 applymovement 0x__ @move waitmovement 0x0 pause 0x32 if there is movement before, such as this: #org @move #raw 0x10 #raw 0x10 #raw 0x62 #raw 0xFE then set it up like this ... applymovement 0x__ @move waitmovement 0x0 sound 0x15 pause 0x32 Hope this helped you out. Good luck on your future endeavors. |
First, I'll point out some of the bad things.
There are some grammatical and spelling errors which really bugged me. In addition to that, the text boxes often run too long during some dialogue bits. The first scene on the beach with your grandpa talking takes too long, and it feels too much like forced exposition. Remember that more isn't always better. A few of the lines seem rather stilted. Additionally, end text boxes and start new ones more often. At the very least, you should do this every time the character responds to something the Hero has 'said. Do that and a lot of the dialogue would flow better in my mind, and not feel like it was running on too much. I do like the premise, and I give you props for the interesting way the game starts out. I like how the beginning is a bit more slow paced and it takes longer to get your first Pokemon. It gives more time to just take things and it sets it apart somewhat. |
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"recking" should be "wreaking" (you wreak havoc) In front of the Mart on the Beach; the person standing there says "ran", but the grammatically correct word would be "run" Nadia says "did't" when you first encounter her; it should be "didn't" There's nothing atrociously bad or anything, but there are some minor errors here and there could use some touching up. |
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I will have a look at this hack now :)
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Congrats, Josh! You're won the HotW! You should put it on the first page A.S.A.P. Anyway, nice scripting you've got there. |
Thanks for the banner H20, and I did :D. And thanks, it's nice to hear that someone likes the scripts, it motivates me :D.
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well how about you show off some of the new sprites we've been working on ;) |
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Good story bro. Sadly it ended to fast, but good luck.
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@ Trainer Ninja - Thanks, and hopefully the next release will be long enough for you. :D
Update time: Here are some screens from the next couple of events. Spoiler:
While this update may not seem exciting, it is leading up to the next big event we have planned for the cave at the bottom of the last couple of screens. Tell me what you think! :D |
well, i find it great!
its the first time that we see the enemies who are not against the main player, the boss just gives the pass as if you where on their side, it's the first time i see this^^ its really a good idea, I can't wait playing th next release^^ |
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Nitpicking aside, I like the looks of what you're showing there. I think it's interesting how the boss just goes and gives you a pass. That's definitely different. |
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Thanks for pointing those out KTM. I don't think it's nitpicking at all. I appreciate it when people take the time and tell me what I need to fix. And the boss doesn't have a reason not to give you the pass.....yet. ;) |
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And howcome you never told me we had updates *feels left out* EDIT: I think you should do the next one with the new OWs ;) |
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I agree, but I'm just referring from what i seen in the beta so far, to me it seems it's getting better everytime. |
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Wow it's been a while since we've updated. Well to let everyone know what is going on we are getting some tiles inserted and getting overworld sprites done. Now for some eye candy:
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That is the new hero OW. Credits to NiKaNoRu. What do you think? |
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