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pokemongarnet February 5th, 2010 2:53 PM

MY sprites
 
I require constructive critism towards my sprites, because as you will soon see they require some work. Don't steal concepts or ideas or sprites.

Scratches:


http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/700/armadilleaf.png armadilleaf my Idea for a grass starter.
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/8201/falcoal.giffalcoal my old idea for a fire starter
http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/636/dragood.png an awful attempt at a legendary
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/7707/jokid.pngJokid little joker hat bell, and my first scratch.






My edits:







My Fusions:

Route February 5th, 2010 2:59 PM

They need shading severely. You need to work on that trainer sprite more, "sizowak" is your best, and "togeflora" is not very good. You have potential, and you should get better over time. Good luck spriting.

pokemongarnet February 5th, 2010 6:37 PM

Thanks, but I keep trying at improving the shading, it's just hard for me. But where does the trainer need editing?

Syphr February 5th, 2010 6:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pokemongarnet (Post 5526607)
Thanks, but I keep trying at improving the shading, it's just hard for me. But where does the trainer need editing?

The Trainer is good, but colors are just kind of bright imo. Sizowak is cool, and just darken outlines on your fusions. As for scratching, dont make so many straight lines, and never make outlines 2 pixels thick unless you really intend it.

pokemongarnet February 6th, 2010 3:08 PM

Thanks for your advice I've been recently been re working the shading on armadilleaf. I would do the same with falcoal but I'm dropping the idea of falcoal and rethinking a different starter.

This is my slightly improved version of armadilleaf, it's not very much of an improvement if it is at all but I gave it a shot
How did I do? please provide feedback because that's the only way I'll get better.
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3167/armidilleafimproved.png

Another update of a sprite I forgot to add origanally.

TheRichar February 8th, 2010 2:45 PM

well, the fire starter, maybe if you made it facing a little bit more to the frontand more separeted wings it'll look better, now with the grass starter, i think it is okay but maybe if you but him bigger eyes or a plant on it, or even recoloring, it'll look nicer, about the legendary, no offense but it sucks, :( maybe if you use a rayquaza's sprtie like a base you'll have something, and the pokemon fusions are really great, keep the nice work up! :)

pokemongarnet February 8th, 2010 5:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheRichar (Post 5534813)
well, the fire starter, maybe if you made it facing a little bit more to the frontand more separeted wings it'll look better, now with the grass starter, i think it is okay but maybe if you but him bigger eyes or a plant on it, or even recoloring, it'll look nicer, about the legendary, no offense but it sucks, :( maybe if you use a rayquaza's sprtie like a base you'll have something, and the pokemon fusions are really great, keep the nice work up! :)

His shell is composed entirely of leaves...
But thanks for the critique

does anyone have advice how to sprite eyes?
I also made an edit under EDITS on the top page.

pokemongarnet February 10th, 2010 4:36 PM

http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/4159/jokid2.png I gave Jokid a hat, Is it better with the hat? I know the hat isn't shaded yet.


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