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torterra10 February 7th, 2010 9:45 AM

Torterra10's sprite thread V2
 
hi everyone! i would like to show you my newest sprites since i came here.
Please c+c. NO SPAMMING! I'd take any critique, but pease mention that i dont have to take it seriously.

Here are my sprites:

Neon Leaders:
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/2813/neongymleaders322792694.png
From Left to Right: 1.Damon 2.Keilani 3.Alora 4.Staven 5.Wanda 6.Syann 7.Baron 8.Gregory

Neon Elite 4:
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/8278/neonelite46271924598iaz.png
From left to right: 1.Fisten 2.Nicki 3.Stephen 4.Electra 5.Champion Hiroshi

VS Intros:

Damon:
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/9870/damonvsintro1137071160i.png

Keilani:
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/1891/keilanivsintro337741634.png

Headshots:

Damon:
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/3354/vsdamon7038883869iazad.png

Keilani:
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/1515/vskeilani6889380155iaza.png

please c+c!

anyone??????????????????????????????????

V0RT3X February 7th, 2010 2:30 PM

gregory looks like tintin from hergé :D
the vs-banners are graet, keep up the work

Syphr February 7th, 2010 2:36 PM

They look great :] Keep up the good work, love the neon leaders

torterra10 February 7th, 2010 2:46 PM

thanks! if anyone has a hack and they need a spriter, they can pm me!
current activity:working on the neon region map HG/SS style

bump:
http://i49.*.com/2crtt7o.png
The Neon Region Map! Please C+C!

V0RT3X February 7th, 2010 3:24 PM

ahhh, to many routes.
You got no structure on that map.

torterra10 February 8th, 2010 12:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by torterra10 (Post 5532230)
thanks! if anyone has a hack and they need a spriter, they can pm me!
current activity:working on the neon region map HG/SS style

bump:
http://i49.*.com/2crtt7o.png
The Neon Region Map! Please C+C!

I reworked it! Here it is again:
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/4642/newneonmap8356918358iaz.png
The Neon Region Map! Please C+C!

TheRichar February 8th, 2010 2:22 PM

i really liked the elite four hehe, but wanda looks... weird, even so they are great, keep it up!

BurstX February 9th, 2010 4:15 PM

hi, i dont remember giving you permission to use my silver sprite or edit it in any way possible. could you please take it down or i will have to contact the mods.

torterra10 February 10th, 2010 12:00 PM

sorry!! i changed now:
here they are:
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/2813/neongymleaders322792694.png
Please C+C

BurstX February 10th, 2010 2:29 PM

dont say sorry, just dont do it in the first place.

The Cynic February 10th, 2010 2:44 PM

Very good. I'm pretty sure they are scratches. If not, they are damn good splices! I like the excentricity of the 8th gym leader. Not sure about the name "Fisten" though. Sounds painful.

Your region map is a good start but lacks topographical detail.

Good luck.

Team Rocket's Raichu February 10th, 2010 2:53 PM

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/2813/neongymleaders322792694.png

First person: The arms look a bit skinny, but everything else looks nice.
Second person: The arm blends into the hair.
Third person: The skirt and legs shading looks off.
Fourth person: The shoes look weird, and the hair looks a little to straight.
Fifth person: This one is pretty good, but I don't really like the position.
Sixth person: The shading in the clothes are weird, and it doesn't look like there is a neck.
Seventh person: The pants shading looks weird, also a bug catcher as the seventh leader... weird. :P
Eighth person: This guys shading NEEDS a complete overhaul. It's terrible!

Overall the sprites are good, but the shading needs work.

BlankPoints February 11th, 2010 5:59 PM

you are really good at making sprites. 5/5:)

PastaPen February 12th, 2010 7:47 AM

The champion is awesome, looks a bit like the two-face guy from Batman. (Forgive me if that's not his name.)


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