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Pokemon Starlight
Closed this thread, I am no longer working on it.
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The story seems to be pretty good. I must say that the D/P/Pt hero always looks out of place in GBA games, although not so much here. Is that a sprite error in the last screenshot?
Work on your grammar. Good luck. |
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thank for the feeback |
update need to start over and i will have new pokecenter tile and mountain tile and that it ..nothing else or my game glitch
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You already have a plan for how many betas you're going to release.:cheeky: |
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Screenshots look good (but could be smaller...) and the tiles fit, except that Mart... Perhaps a more elaborate story would help you? Please add a more detailed story, instead of the generic (this has happened, don't know why he is a scientist, and someone has a Pokemon), and then I will give it more praise, but already looks good! (Also, grammar... That needs fixing!) |
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i have update my story,intro,and backstory
also can anybody make a banner |
Nice tilesets. Haha, I see you use Windows 7, too, huh? ;p
You can take normal-sized VBA screenshots more easily than pressing PrntScrn. Just go to File > Screen Capture on VBA's menu. Then you can save the screenshot as a .bmp or .png. And the one thing that seems amiss is that there's no explanation behind why Lugia has a Steel Form. Did someone do something to it? |
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can anyone help me well you know the cave entrance i never figure how to go in and go out
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you need just to add a warp at the entrance tile with AM, it's easy^^
then of course you need to write to which map and second warp it needs to bring to........ |
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i got it |
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Okay, Ryan, you need to fix your Grammar, and I can help you
with that. As for tiles, is it really THAT important? I rather have normal tiles than having new tiles that make the Hack glitch up. |
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edit:check out my thread now! |
I like the storyline but, in the first screen, there's a pixel error at the down left corner, maybe a flying Jiriachi would be better, and a title to this Rom hack will make it more interesting :D
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Okay. Your titlescreen is pretty good.
Before the beta is released, you should send me a copy of your Beta so that I could correct it. Any glitches I've found will be fixed automactically if I can fix it. If not, I give you screens of it. |
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and i will send you it when i release beta 1 and i would love screen shot |
I could make a banner, or perhaps more than 1 if you'd like. :classic:
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Just pm or vm me when the banner done ! |
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I made two banners! :D
Don't know if the last ones turned out that good, but here they are: Attachment 52737Attachment 52739 EDIT: Here's another one Attachment 52751 Sorry if don't like the styles I used for the banners, I was just trying to be creative!^^ So, if you want some banners with the "usual" style (you know, like most banners have), then tell me! ~.YAS.~ |
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I've edited them, so now they're looking a bit more Horizon Seaier Well that's my opinion anyway Attachment 52767Attachment 52771Attachment 52782 |
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New screen included next town rival battle http://i46.*.com/2rhb9sp.pnghttp://i48.*.com/2w5vifc.png http://i50.*.com/1604wsp.pnghttp://i47.*.com/30tib6q.png http://i49.*.com/jj8jup.pnghttp://i48.*.com/2zemc1h.png http://i45.*.com/1088ke8.png Yeah that all for now next time i will show new battle background and much more like a sewar area only accessible after meeting the first gym leader update new title screen http://i50.*.com/2dcbwk6.png better titlescreen = http://i40.*.com/fa60zc.png |
sounds good , write when it,s going to be ready. but you need to fix the grammer
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I now need a Overworld spriter ! If you good at it pm or vm with proof of work and we discuss the overworld
Edit: new beta 1 screen still in progress http://i42.*.com/2i0etdx.pnghttp://i41.*.com/2z86ikz.pnghttp://i44.*.com/2hrmxxv.png http://i40.*.com/2hq8mz7.pnghttp://i42.*.com/i6b95w.pnghttp://i44.*.com/2ed7815.png http://i44.*.com/24czbxf.png all tile you see here are wesly fg credit to him |
sorry for no update to busy be back next monday
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I have a suggestion, when using step-tile scripts that involve a character talking, before the msgbox use textcolor 0x0 if the character is a male and textcolor 0x1 if they're a female. That way the character won't be speaking in black text. Also, your grammar could use quite a bit of work. You do seem to be a decent scripter and mapper, however, and the story isn't that bad either.
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Nice updates and whatever but just one thing :P
http://i44.*.com/2hrmxxv.png Is that someone's OW there randomly? |
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new tile http://i44.*.com/29nf7v8.png credit to zein |
I have decided to make the main legendary ho oh because it was originally my idea
and so i will change the story line |
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4b2_VGNimQ
here a video guy lol and the new starter that replace seedot and poliwag is budew and azurill |
@DuoRyan
Seems to be an error in the text/script where the rival says: "'See you later' Also the door of the Pokémon Center door looks bad with that black outline so would be good to fix/change that :) |
It's a nice script, but...
there are some errors. I'll list 'em out one by one. 1. Grammar errors. I can help you fix 'em. 2. The Oak text is still there. Either change it to "Rival:", or remove it. 3. When your Rival is defeated, the text is still the same. You have to change it, this Hack is not Fire Red. That's all. Apart from that, it's a pretty nice video. |
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new screen beta 1 will be release in the next 2 week april 23 [maybe] if not may 10 0r something
http://i39.*.com/345be5j.jpghttp://i39.*.com/28b5ua0.pnghttp://i42.*.com/2nid6vl.png http://i39.*.com/15q9li8.pnghttp://i40.*.com/1zlqgas.pnghttp://i40.*.com/rjo9oy.png http://i43.*.com/119xztg.pnghttp://i44.*.com/npq64n.pnghttp://i39.*.com/30vkdno.png http://i39.*.com/eqbmeu.pnghttp://i43.*.com/az8bpc.png also credit to fanking omega for tile |
MY CRITIQUE Lol, only joking. Anyway...The starters, they're a bit odd. You may as well switch Starly with a fire type, it'll be a proper type-triangle then. (By the way, you may also want to change Azurill's type to Water, as it's actually a Normal type- although that doesn't really matter, as it evolves into a Water type, so it's your call). Next, your scripts. Not the scripts themselves, but the text in them- you seem to do this alot, which looks pretty bad, and gets annoying after a while. Ease up on that, is my advice. Next is that grass tile (not the Wild Pokemon one, the normal land/grass tile that you inserted). It looks a bit "hairy" to me. I know that Fire Red has multiple land tiles, which get's really confusing and awkward, so replacing them with just one is a fine idea, but try a more plain one- you could even use the RSE one. And... That Murkrow sprite is a bit low- use Wichu's "Advance Sprite Position Editor" to raise it up- it can be found in the Toolbox, or search Wichu, and there should be a link in his signature. OK, that's it. Sorry if it seems I'm criticising literally everything, I don't mean to do that. Keep up the good work :) |
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I will fix script and other minor stuff thank for the criticism |
had remap map so beta 1 will be coming a liitle bit late [been busy ,test etc]
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I liked the idea and the tiles and the colors are amazing
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well I been busy so update will go slow, sorry!
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http://i40.*.com/w05jb4.png
sorry for no update at this time I have Region and so I did n;t update at all ,also hope you like the new tile credit to WeslyFg |
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I am actually ready to release beta 1 in a week |
sorry guy but my computer screw up and in result I must restart
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Either Way this hack is looking Promising, Although i really want to see some of the FAkemon |
Can someone sprite and insert fakemon for me please and i mean professional type. show proof by pm\vming ok.
Edit: new tile http://i50.*.com/ebekpd.png Edit2: http://i49.*.com/r7jh8k.png credit to weslyfg 875421 and zeikaro from deviantart |
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By the way, I can help you OW Sprite, if that's what you want. I only need the 1st frame, and then I can do everything else. |
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i needed a new hero sprite ok i send the first frame. Major Update http://i50.*.com/jhqwbs.pnghttp://i49.*.com/15gyxso.png The intro for getting the running shoe. http://i50.*.com/idf5up.pnghttp://i47.*.com/20aw67c.png Rival talk to you when you get out of your house. http://i49.*.com/1671p50.pnghttp://i47.*.com/5w9rgx.png New house tile and people to talk to. http://i50.*.com/35kpguo.pnghttp://i50.*.com/2sagd5l.png More communication. http://i45.*.com/20rmpeh.pnghttp://i46.*.com/ivkcg0.png Professor Luke [sprite will change] http://i47.*.com/20b0qqg.pnghttp://i47.*.com/15znibl.png Temporary Starter until I get a good spriter. |
Ryan, you don't need a good spriter to change the Starters.
You're keeping the original Pokemon, right? Then be it. Anyways, I think you should make a new event of obainting the Starter, 'cause I hate it when you pick your Pokemon in an old fansioned and boring way. That would be pathectic. Do you happen to need OWs for the Rival and Prof. aswell? Well, same as before, send the 1st Frame in .bmp format. |
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Progress is going well for me I insert new tile and did new script I truly am getting excited. so tomorrow new image. |
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Wow can't wait This is my first time seeing this hack I liek the story The tiles Its all amazing Can't wait for betas |
http://i50.*.com/2hf5iz4.pnghttp://i49.*.com/w2ke9t.png
new script also i staying with old fashion sorry sacrastic prince but I put the real Pokemon sprite not Pokeball also new city LUNAR CITY http://i47.*.com/2h2mdqv.pnghttp://i46.*.com/2wftzs3.png Yup Team Rocket just took over a beautiful City and what this Ruby what he doing here?Rival or Championl |
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New screen http://i45.*.com/ehfcb7.pnghttp://i45.*.com/2yxhsll.png http://i45.*.com/34zxgz5.pnghttp://i50.*.com/2dlk9kz.png Video this is the only Gym that I show a guide to the gym leader and yes the other gym will only show some part not all the way to the gym leader http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rMvS1qVuQnU&feature=player_embedded |
New tile
[this was a test map or say some of the 3 rd town\city you can go to] http://i46.*.com/160v97n.png |
Criticism time from me!
http://i50.*.com/2hf5iz4.png The only real issue is the bench the guy is on at the top. Seems a bit... Weird, perhaps a bit too low (needs moving up a bit? Dunno really) Only real complaint from them screenies. Your newer tiles look good (love the mart and PC), however one type of house bugs me. The striped roofed houses are kinda... Well, something seems off with them. I love the other houses, and the striped one will work, but it just needs something else. Also, remember to use all the styles of the FR grass (if you have them all), and I think the tree shadows could be wrong (not really my area, nor do I care too much, but others may).. (Heh, test map. Forgot to read, so I'm sure you'll fix that!) The stairs look great! |
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horizon sea eh, good hacking skillz I wish to join your team... cause I want to gain experience then make my own thread...(cause I already am working on something...)
if you want to see my skills test me.. send me via VM or PM of what my demo OW or battle sprite to look like... THanks!!! :D |
starlight gym re made and is epic with new leader
credit to Pokemon emerald and leachim_paloyz15 for sprite and overworld +Gamefreak http://i48.*.com/bjg3tu.png http://i46.*.com/v7h7go.png http://i46.*.com/16ggwmt.png http://i45.*.com/ic4gmx.png http://i45.*.com/35m34np.png |
Hey nice updates
Is the LEaders OW suppose to have a white outline? |
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Here the Gym Leader dum dum dum Screen http://i49.*.com/339iyj7.pnghttp://i46.*.com/345kaa9.png http://i47.*.com/2hzj24x.pnghttp://i49.*.com/5oin9.png thank to leachim_paloyz15 for making the sprite also I was testing without a Pokemon I will do a video soon |
gud luck on this hack looks haaaaaaard :P and its awsum :D
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New Tile update this will tower here will have a cool event find out to see what it is in the next update credit cuddlethefatcat from devianart and weslyfg |
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my first attempt in spriting also it jpeg |
Oh very interesting three starter types. I am super excite
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this game looks fun can't wait for it
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Hey can anyone want to apply as another scripter and a spriter for fakemon pmand vm me
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http://i27.*.com/2wna0ax.pnghttp://i31.*.com/2vl9sew.pnghttp://i28.*.com/2zygcvp.png
The water starter for my hack I might need some help on name? |
Cute starter=)He's resembles a totodile=)
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I have decided to restarte plus I didn't get to far in progress so It good I have patch the fr hacked engine by Jpan. |
Umm... If u be a girl
The gym leader will say "hey i see a i have a cute trainer today" o.O (gay ? ) |
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http://i32.*.com/116mj3q.png= tadpole
the fire starter and the grass starter http://i27.*.com/2v3n1mr.png= lion cub second evolution of the grass starter http://i28.*.com/2djp63k.png final evolution of the grass starter http://i31.*.com/12228mx.png water starter and evolution name serladile serlanaw serplagtr grass starter and evolution name grocub growtan growagen fire starter and evolution name frochar blastefrog infernooad |
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New screen in the first post! Check it out! |
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This is Kudo City the second city which contain the gym credit to Laidjon and weslyfg |
I be taking a 1 week break when that over I will maybe make an update
well see ya |
Last update until 1 week break is over.
New gym layout I was inspire by frostBite from his new gym. http://i32.*.com/68gcd1.png |
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I had script a new event You see soon. here is the new grass starter final form + the evolution before Updated sprite http://i30.*.com/dmvf48.pnghttp://i25.*.com/15ed7cn.png give comment? also can anyone do back sprite |
There a poll
Should I add Fakemon? or should I just go original and add some d\p Pokemon? |
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Some new thing! I had decided that some gym won't be based of type like the traditional way but some will be based of best stat. |
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So What you write means a ~speed~ Type gym :) If so awesome :) I love that idea *love ur hack btw* by the way no fakemon i dont think they would work |
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What I meant [wasn't thinking it through was] His team will have pokemon with the quickest based speed. I think I show you my fakemon http://i29.*.com/k48pd4.png |
I came to a decision I won't be included fakemon for 2 reason
I think I save for my next hack and I think by time I done with this hack I be a better spriter. The starter are well Kanto. Also here the area and amount of gym in beta 1 Gym for Beta 1 Fire Flying\Psychic Area for Beta 1 Chople vine Town Route 225 Granite Suburb Imphasis Path Shoal Cave Icy Forest Frozen Lime Town Icy Forest Continue... Arctic Flow City Desert Hill Desert Red Town Beta 1 complete Edit: I added new screen and a supporter banner. |
You know what I using fakemon and that it.
I try my best effort to sprite them. Another question is my tile good or should I used new tile like hgss. |
http://i28.*.com/kcx8cw.png Well these tiles dont look good
But then earlier in ur post u have some HGSS tiles and they look really good so i suggest u try HGSS |
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lol I think mix will be cool? new screen http://i37.*.com/30nezo7.png Credit to Nintendo\Gamefreak princelegendario for his hoenn revamp 87451 for tile me for spriting the cloud tile |
still outdated or not
They dont look Pokemon ish D: |
New screen
[note: you will never know the item you get in return muhahahahahaha....lol] also credit to dewitty! http://i38.*.com/rtnxvc.png |
Update with new tile give some comment
also credit to TB PRO and PRINELEGENDARIO nd LALO101 http://i36.*.com/efmmag.png |
I like the new tiles, but the city paths are really weird and look like jigsaws.
The fakemon are.....bad. but, you seem to be improving them. I'll be keeping an eye on this hack, good luck :) |
Trust me the HGSS tiles work so much better! Fakemons are obviously improving, but for the time being I don't think you should add them! Work on them a bit more and they will be EPIC!
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