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[PG-13] Sinking Of Hoenn
SINKING OF HOENN "Based on the novel: Japan Sinks by Sakyo Komatsu, then adapted into two films" CH 1 VOLUME 1: It came as it began Spoiler:
CH 1 VOLUME 2: Faults at hand Spoiler:
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nice, like the idea of Mount Chimney erupting. And the part about the flames. But how can a tsunami occur when a volcano erupts? no sense there
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It generated an earthquake and a tsunami.... ANYWAY, here is information on how Mt. Chimney would effect Lilycove: O)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))Lilycove - Mossdeep ((((((((((Tsunami<<< ^ ^ Mount Chimney Blast Wave Well...In this story or background I could say... Mount Chimney is the rim of giant caldera with Lilycove being in the middle of it so the other half is underwater. |
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And, yeah, I did hear about Krakatoa, but didnt hear about the tsunami. Will you write more? I would like to see it develop! |
I loved this! Very interesting plot an I'd like to see more. I wish you were a bit more descriptive though. I'd like to know how exactly the Ivysaur was hurt. Where were the bruises? What caused the Explosion? Also if the explosion was only a couple metres away, why didn't the person picking up the Wurmple notice the man? Other than that, I love the idea. Just be a bit more descriptive.
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Volume 2 of Chapter 1 is now finished so Chap. 1 is completed!
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Kinda bleak, dont you think? Not that bad, but you might want to think about more descriptive stuff next, like ChrisTom said. How the man really felt about the Ivasaur, why did the Bellosom die, stuff like that. And where is Solana here?
Otherwise, I think you are doing great!!! I hope to see more next time, and am pretty much ready to read it all! |
For you mentioned about the Bellossom part, well an earthquake has happened...so...the Pokemon died from that...
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