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Pokémon Lost Gold ( The next Chapter )
Name: Pokémon lost gold ( The Next Chapter )
Hack of: Pokémon Fire Red (UK) Creator: Nintendork15 THIS IS NOT A GSC REMAKE http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/BANNER.png Story: One day our hero [GOLD/KRIS] get to help Prof.ELM with a simple job in return they get to keep a pokémon when arriving at the Post office the child has a letter from there friend (BRENDAN) saying how he has moved to HOENN to impress your friend you decide to win the itcket to HOENN by deafteing the legendary league in EVERGRAND CITY ... But along your path to victory evil lurks and seeks to rule the region oh JOHTO Can you stop the evil mastermind from doing this evil deed! Features: New story(see above)(HOW COULD YOU MISS IT) New HOENN region Two battle towers Two regions New plot New ISLANDS (JANTO ISLANDS) NEW EVIL! NEW heroes(Losten & Lostelle) New rival ( Deken ) Old rivals(Blue,Silver) Old heroes(Brendan,may,wally,steven and wallace) Screenies: http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Fullpicture.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Morepictures.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/morepiccy.png Team: Nintendork15(mapper,scripter,tileinserter) Swift sign (mapper) Peregrinefig(Scripter) Muffintm (back up scripter) Banjora marxvile (Tile teacher ^^) Credit: Tiles from google if they were yours tell me and i give credit to you new OW found on google as well tell me if yours and you get the credit Critism of everyone ^^ |
I'll be a scripter if you want! ;D (I'm not adavnce, but intermenate!)
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Well, my current project is hit with a massive bug that I'm trying to figure out right now, so if you'd like, I can script for you. I'm not an excellent scripter yet, but I work hard to put nice levels of polish into my scripts. I've written from scratch some scripts for a starter and other stuff involving Oak in my hack, so I know all the basics and some slightly more advanced stuff. (Also, I hope you wouldn't be against me going through and correcting the English of your existing scripts; improper grammar/spelling really bothers me)
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Bleh, fix the tile connections with the paths between Route 27 (or whatever # it is) and New Bark Town, and, what's up with Elm's script? Looks good so far other than that, though. Also, PM me whenever you need more scripts, I'm interested in helping you out with this.
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Yh im working on tiles thing The part where he is sayin AA that was the player name i dont put much effort init to be honest |
I like the Idea, but, first take your time and do it as good as you can, so the first beta will catch the people's eye... but be sure to never give up :D
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PokéMon Lost gold THEN NEXT CHAPTER beta info
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i need a inserter first :/ and at the first gym and the first evil team encounter |
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Anyway, work on your grammar in your first post. Also, the path thing between the route ad New Bark Town looks weird. And a few too many bushes in Route... Whatever. |
those are replacements for headvutt bushes
they will be edited |
i like the idea of the idea of the hack but im hopin 2 see sum new tiles to make ur hack a bit more unique , even tho u cud work with the fire red tiles if u really want 2
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Im not sure but i have changed the palette is that cool enough i'll put pics on soooon |
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Since when was i able to i cant do it for life where does it say i can insert who ru O.o |
You know who I am. Wait, why does that matter?
Anyway, best thing is to learn instead of asking for help. Better in the long run. |
That New Bark map is almost a direct port from Shiny Gold. There's even space behind the Player's house, where Zel hid that Pikachu.
It's as if you just imported the map and kept the default tiles. (I'm not accusing you of theft, but that map is too similar to that of Shiny Gold (further proof is that Elm's lab uses Oak's Lab tiles, but with a Pokecenter door- as was in Shiny Gold). I'm not going to say anything else, but I'm beginning to wonder. It's likely you wouldn't have the connection problem if you edited an existing map yourself (or at least, you'd still see the map, just not connected correctly). Also, Banjora's right, learn stuff. Learn everything. It's good for you. |
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In other words, you need to point out what have you done to your hack in order to stand out. We currently have 3 good GSC Remakes, HGSS, and well, GSC. (Yes, I am currently viewing this as a GSC remake, nothing more, you don't prove that 'anything more' anyway). What makes yours special? Imo you should try out something innovative. I can't know exactly, but many new things will do. Good luck anyway. |
Yh i based my map on that one
but now i have done it by myself by lookin at the old maps from g/s/c games but yeah thanks for sppottin that out ^_^ THIS IS NOT A GSC REMAKE It is a Hack that happens to take place in the Johto and kanto region |
UPDATES (drum roll) ^^
This hack takes place in Johto and Hoenn ( to make it unique) As proof the entrance to hoenn is in cianwood city and leads to johto path Maps(i have finished) New bark town http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/NEWBARKTOWN.jpg Route 29 http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/ROUTE29-1.jpg Cianwood city http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/CIANWOODCITY.jpg Joenn Path http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/JOENNPATH.jpg |
I like the new tiles, but you should change the palettes around, the old colors of the rocks and water are blah. Also, tile error in New Bark Town, you should use the block editor and make a sign with a sand-path background.
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Critism Luv LUUUUUV IT !!!! thanks im doing that right now ;) |
3 criticisms: 1: You still haven't learnt tile inserting, despite my offer to teach you? Don't rely on that ROM Base, as the pallettes look kinda iffy on it. Especially the wild grass. It doesn't fit the overall theme of the rest of the tiles, no matter what you will replace them with.
2.http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/JOENNPATH.jpg The mountain edges here defy physics, especially the ones with the stairs. Look carefully at where they join at the North and South, it looks wrong, and is physically wrong. 3.http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/ROUTE29-1.jpg Wrong tree base on some of them (check all the green ones, you put the yellow base on them!) Oh, and TRY to add new things. You may say it isn't a GSC remake, but from the screenies at the tope, it is hard to see it NOT being a remake, so maybe update them with NEW things. This screenshot and description makes it seem like a GSC remake: Silver script(sprite needed) http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Silverscript.png |
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but then i realised it wouldnt be unique so its not a reamke No KANTO Just JOHTO AND HOENN |
Hey NEW UPDATES ABOVE
and Should i make it so you can battle Brendan at that part of the game? or just a friendly hello |
Right, firstly...
If this is not a remake, you still should try and stick to the Pokemon Story. RSE takes place at the same time as FRLG/RBY, therefore Brendan completed his journey three years before Gold started his. If this isn't a remake and you're going to include Brendan, you'd be better off making a new player/hero altogether. I don't think you should battle Brendan there, since he's moving to Hoenn, he shouldn't be battled until you go to Hoenn. (Obviously what you're trying to do to be original is replace Kanto with Hoenn, so as the "Epic Battle" of the game, you should battle Brendan at the end). Create new heros, and a new Johto Rival- let Brendan be a friend. Anyway, secondly... Above, you admitted to basing the New Bark map off the Shiny Gold one- and that you've now edited it. I now know why- sorry to say, but you really need to work on mapping. You're trying to impress everyone with what's included in the hack, but.. It's nothing that special, to be honest. (btw, that Cianwood map, and the Route next to New Bark, they're both from Shiny Gold, I'm pretty sure). There is a huge contrast in the mapping styles of the New Bark, Route, and Cianwood map, and Joenn Path's map- which is obviously the only map you've done yourself. 1. The Joenn Path map is too straight. Route's need to have a bit more.. Twists and such. Add some trees, too. But, read on... 2. As someone has said, the mountain placement is not physically possible- they're joining up incorrectly, you need to add more layers, etc. 3. Make the whole thing twice, if not three times as long. It's joining Johto and Hoenn, and it shouldn't be properly accessible until you've got the 8th badge. Look at Tojoh falls/the Kanto Route that leads to Johto. You can surf across to Kanto when you've got the fourth badge, but you can't go any further til you get Waterfall, and beat Claire. From you're map, Hoenn is fully accessible to the Player when they reach Cianwood. Ok, so what you need to do is.. 1. Make that map a lot longer. Seriously, go nuts here. 2. Add the need to use a few HMs, with perhaps a Waterfall at the end of the route or something, to stop the Player from being able to get too close to Hoenn early in the game. 3. Add some more trees, and fix up the mountain placement. (I highly recommend you read a mapping tutorial, and think before you map. You don't seem to understand how to use certain tiles, and that can result in bad, illogical maps like Joenn Path here). Sorry for the long post, and I hope I didn't offend you or your work here (but seriously... Ditch the Shiny Gold maps, man. Try harder to be original). |
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Like i said earlier i have NOT copied Shiny golds maps I have look at them and made them on my ROM i have a few changes and i made that CIANWOOD CITY and ROUTE 29 myself! 2. the goin to hoenn there will be a new map soon with waterfalls in and such and a gaurd not letting you through without CLAIRE's LETTER wich you cannot receive without defeating clair and goin to dragon's den 3. If you notice there are some differences between my maps and shiny golds maps Eg all me maps are goin to be connected shiny golds ARE NOT And last but not least HOW DO YOU KNOW THAT BRENDANS ADVENTURE TOOK PLACE AT THE SAME TIME AS RBY and cant i use imagination look around everyone uses imanation in thier hacks! apart from that thanks for critism |
New updates:
New bark http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/NEWBARKTOWN-1.jpg Cherry grove http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/CHERRYGROVECITY.jpg Route 30 http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/ROUTE30.jpg Route 31 http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Route31.jpg and voilet city!!! (based on hgss style) http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/voiletcitynew-1.jpg All made from scratch :D |
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