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Bolens March 16th, 2010 3:15 PM

No, don't go putting yourself down. That never solves anything.

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Originally Posted by SwiftSign (Post 5626756)
Sounds pretty good, however could do with some refining as to explain why they are freezing a town rather than invading and murdering people-

*announcer's cough*

Perhaps the city is large and is home to the police force (Which would be a necessity with such an evil team around - Police headquarters could even have a jail where defeated Raven members are taken too XD) - Therefore they cannot simply attack, once everyone is frozen they can reunite with their captured team mates to build their strengths [motive]. Of course the player would stop them by taking out the leader of the group and then the police could burst in, giving an egg they found in Team Raven's possession to you as a reward.

Not a bad idea, pretty good actually, nothing like refining a storyline till it is almost perfect. :)

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BlueShadow V 2.0 March 16th, 2010 5:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwiftSign (Post 5626756)
Sounds pretty good, however could do with some refining as to explain why they are freezing a town rather than invading and murdering people-

*announcer's cough*

Perhaps the city is large and is home to the police force (Which would be a necessity with such an evil team around - Police headquarters could even have a jail where defeated Raven members are taken too XD) - Therefore they cannot simply attack, once everyone is frozen they can reunite with their captured team mates to build their strengths [motive]. Of course the player would stop them by taking out the leader of the group and then the police could burst in, giving an egg they found in Team Raven's possession to you as a reward.

well we can add that too! lol but what about if instead of police officers there is a group called something like JPT (Justice Pokemon Trainers). These group of Pokemon Trainer or Pokemon Officers could be a group against team raven and their HQ is in WindyFrost City and maybe one of the main commanders (maybe a commander that you beat before) of team raven is captured by the JPT so other commander and some grunts of team raven used the machine to frost everybody in the city and rescue the other commander.when the player enters to the HQ, he sees a lot of team raven members in the building so the player battle the grunts but when he went to the cell where the commander was, he discovered that both commanders escape and then a grunt says that the player will never defeat them and that they went to the Ice cavern (it can be called something Ice Palace or Ice Maze or something like that) to get the ancient pokemon egg of the Mystical Icy Queen that lived there before. The player then goes to the Ice carvern (there can be a few more grunts) and battles both commanders in a double battle... They are defeated and they escape, then the player turns off the machine or destroy it to defrost all the people then some important JPT member appears and says that if you would like to join them because you would be a great addition to their team. The player rejects the offer because he thinks that he must find his mom first and to become the league champion. Then a elder appears and tells him that the egg will only open if a trainer with a pure heart takes care of it and the elder says that the player must keep the egg and then overtime, it will hatch in a smoochum with 2 unique moves or egg moves...

So what do you think about this?

Bolens March 16th, 2010 5:14 PM

Pretty awesome man, what does everyone else think, I'm for it.

KhaosMonsterEnergy March 16th, 2010 5:19 PM

i think that its a awesome storyline but maybe a differnt pokemon in the egg like an articuno and then there will be another city where you can get a motress agg and then a zapdoes egg i think that would be cool

Esp1222 March 16th, 2010 5:23 PM

On an added note, I can help you plan the Gym Leaders' team. If you don't have them planned out already...

BlueShadow V 2.0 March 16th, 2010 5:39 PM

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Originally Posted by KhaosMonsterEnergy (Post 5627112)
i think that its a awesome storyline but maybe a differnt pokemon in the egg like an articuno and then there will be another city where you can get a motress agg and then a zapdoes egg i think that would be cool

mmm.... Good idea but I think that we can think in something better in how to get the legendary birds, but still it's a good idea

DaBomb137 March 16th, 2010 6:30 PM

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Originally Posted by BlueShadow V 2.0 (Post 5627074)
well we can add that too! lol but what about if instead of police officers there is a group called something like JPT (Justice Pokemon Trainers). These group of Pokemon Trainer or Pokemon Officers could be a group against team raven and their HQ is in WindyFrost City and maybe one of the main commanders (maybe a commander that you beat before) of team raven is captured by the JPT so other commander and some grunts of team raven used the machine to frost everybody in the city and rescue the other commander.when the player enters to the HQ, he sees a lot of team raven members in the building so the player battle the grunts but when he went to the cell where the commander was, he discovered that both commanders escape and then a grunt says that the player will never defeat them and that they went to the Ice cavern (it can be called something Ice Palace or Ice Maze or something like that) to get the ancient pokemon egg of the Mystical Icy Queen that lived there before. The player then goes to the Ice carvern (there can be a few more grunts) and battles both commanders in a double battle... They are defeated and they escape, then the player turns off the machine or destroy it to defrost all the people then some important JPT member appears and says that if you would like to join them because you would be a great addition to their team. The player rejects the offer because he thinks that he must find his mom first and to become the league champion. Then a elder appears and tells him that the egg will only open if a trainer with a pure heart takes care of it and the elder says that the player must keep the egg and then overtime, it will hatch in a smoochum with 2 unique moves or egg moves...

So what do you think about this?

It sounds awesome, but I have a question: would the elder actually tell you that the egg will hatch into a smoochum with unique moves? Because I think that should be a suprise, like the togepi egg in Silver and Gold. But it's an awesome idea

BlueShadow V 2.0 March 16th, 2010 7:21 PM

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Originally Posted by DaBomb137 (Post 5627328)
It sounds awesome, but I have a question: would the elder actually tell you that the egg will hatch into a smoochum with unique moves? Because I think that should be a suprise, like the togepi egg in Silver and Gold. But it's an awesome idea

That' sounds good. The elder won't tell you what pokemon is inside...It will only tell you that is an egg from the Mystical Icy Queen (jynx) and obviously the elder won't tell that the Mystical Icy Queen is really a special jynx. It will only refer to jynx as the Mystical Icy(or Ice) Queen.

DaBomb137 March 16th, 2010 7:30 PM

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BlueShadow V 2.0 March 16th, 2010 7:35 PM

Other thing that I was thinking is that maybe we make a local legend in WindyFrost City... the legend:
The Mystical Icy Queen was a pokemon that kept the peace in WindyFrost City 500 years ago but one day a pokemon appear and it was trying to destroy the city but this pokemon was the strongest pokemon ever seen before and the Mystical Icy Queen had to sacrifice her own life to destroy that pokemon but before that she left a pokemon egg in the Ice cavern and it hasn't hatched for 500 years and it will only hatched if a trainer of pure heart decides to take care of it

KhaosMonsterEnergy March 16th, 2010 7:40 PM

Thats cool. I think The lady shoud tell you that before you get the egg.

DaBomb137 March 16th, 2010 7:46 PM

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Originally Posted by BlueShadow V 2.0 (Post 5627474)
Other thing that I was thinking is that maybe we make a local legend in WyndyFrost City... the legend:
The Mystical Icy Queen was a pokemon that kept the peace in WindyFrost City 500 years ago but one day a pokemon appear and it was trying to destroy the city but this pokemon was the strongest pokemon ever seen before and the Mystical Icy Queen had to sacrifice her own life to destroy that pokemon but before that she left a pokemon egg in the Ice cavern and it hasn't hatched for 500 years and it will only hatched if a trainer of pure heart decides to take care of it

It's a good idea. It wouldn't be a Pokemon game/hack without a legend

BlueShadow V 2.0 March 16th, 2010 8:06 PM

I want to try another city lol!!
Sorry but I got inspired

Town Name: Dusky Town(or City)
Town Number: 3 (2nd gym can be here... I was thinking in a Dark Type gym)
Tiles Used: This town is a dark or shadowy town so it needs a little more darker tiles than normal tiles... maybe the houses can be dark colors such as brown, gray and a little bit of black... and if it is raining, it would be better. It should give a moody feeling

Personal Notes:In this town is the famous Dark type gym leader Scott. Scott is Karen's(johto elite four member) little brother. Since childhood Karen was always better than Scott. She got higher grades, she was more popular, and a better pokemon trainer. Scott got tired of living this way. When Scott found out that Karen was a new member of the Johto Elite four, he abandoned johto feeling frustrated and he promised that someday he would be a better trainer than his sister and came to this region(There is not a name for this region yet). He trained hard with his Dark type pokemon, specially with his sneasel. Then he got so strong that he was offer the position of gym leader in Dusky Town. When he accepted, he was only thinking that this was his first step to beat his sister!

Cdub399 March 16th, 2010 9:32 PM

Town Name: Coalhill Village
Town Number: 6/7 Rock or Fire Gym town
Tiles Used: Lavaridge Town/Mountainous
Personal Notes: I was thinking if Windyfrost City is icy town, perhaps it could be located at the peak of a mountain and Coalhill could be located at said mountain's base.

Mana March 17th, 2010 5:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlueShadow V 2.0 (Post 5627074)
well we can add that too! lol but what about if instead of police officers there is a group called something like JPT (Justice Pokemon Trainers). These group of Pokemon Trainer or Pokemon Officers could be a group against team raven and their HQ is in WindyFrost City and maybe one of the main commanders (maybe a commander that you beat before) of team raven is captured by the JPT so other commander and some grunts of team raven used the machine to frost everybody in the city and rescue the other commander.when the player enters to the HQ, he sees a lot of team raven members in the building so the player battle the grunts but when he went to the cell where the commander was, he discovered that both commanders escape and then a grunt says that the player will never defeat them and that they went to the Ice cavern (it can be called something Ice Palace or Ice Maze or something like that) to get the ancient pokemon egg of the Mystical Icy Queen that lived there before. The player then goes to the Ice carvern (there can be a few more grunts) and battles both commanders in a double battle... They are defeated and they escape, then the player turns off the machine or destroy it to defrost all the people then some important JPT member appears and says that if you would like to join them because you would be a great addition to their team. The player rejects the offer because he thinks that he must find his mom first and to become the league champion. Then a elder appears and tells him that the egg will only open if a trainer with a pure heart takes care of it and the elder says that the player must keep the egg and then overtime, it will hatch in a smoochum with 2 unique moves or egg moves...

So what do you think about this?

I think it's a good idea but the opposing teams is kind of cliché of R/S/FR/LG.

Also I'm reaaallly against the 'pure of heart' idea - another cliché (though normally people say 'best trainer' or whatever' - surely in 500 years there has been another 'pure of heart' trainer around for this Elder to give the egg too. I think it would be better for the Elder to describe the legend (without the Egg bit) and the player being able to find the egg in a secret room in the cave, kind of like a temple thing.

This temple idea could also be repeated for Elekid and Magby or something too.

Of course once you get the Egg the Elder could then be "You found that Egg in <Cavename>? Could it be the legendary egg of the Ice Princess?"

I suggest the term Ice Princess because 'Ice Queen' is a character in many movies and is always associated with evil, which we don't want, and 'Mystical -' makes the name far too long to be repeated often XD.

Anyway >< Just my 2 cents.

Bolens March 17th, 2010 12:41 PM

I was thinking. Team Raven, I wonder what they should look like. Any ideas?

This is the logo I made for Team Raven. It is in the beginning stages, but looks pretty good in my opinion.

Chaos190 March 17th, 2010 2:49 PM

Eh
It's been a while since I've been hacking but hey I'll go at it again

Skills: Mapping, sprite inserting, (like Pokemon sprites) and OW Inserting
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BlueShadow V 2.0 March 17th, 2010 3:01 PM

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Originally Posted by SwiftSign (Post 5628412)
I think it's a good idea but the opposing teams is kind of cliché of R/S/FR/LG.

Also I'm reaaallly against the 'pure of heart' idea - another cliché (though normally people say 'best trainer' or whatever' - surely in 500 years there has been another 'pure of heart' trainer around for this Elder to give the egg too. I think it would be better for the Elder to describe the legend (without the Egg bit) and the player being able to find the egg in a secret room in the cave, kind of like a temple thing.

This temple idea could also be repeated for Elekid and Magby or something too.

Of course once you get the Egg the Elder could then be "You found that Egg in <Cavename>? Could it be the legendary egg of the Ice Princess?"

I suggest the term Ice Princess because 'Ice Queen' is a character in many movies and is always associated with evil, which we don't want, and 'Mystical -' makes the name far too long to be repeated often XD.

Anyway >< Just my 2 cents.

Good Idea! Well we can make those little changes then

DaBomb137 March 18th, 2010 2:15 PM

Town name: Condrag City
City number: 9 or 10 (I want it to host the 8th gym)
Tileset: Cave
Personal note: If we use this, I want the gym to be a dragon gym. I also think the city should be inside a cave, and you should access the gym by entering another cave from the city. I'll add some concept art later for the way I picture it.

Bolens March 18th, 2010 2:21 PM

OK, lalo0101 has gotten new tile makers to help him, so with the recent change, lalo0101 is going to give us a temporary ROM base, but that is good. We can then proceed to map the first town, add the scripts, and go from there. If anyone wants to add suggestions to the starter town's script, I'm open.

DaBomb137 March 18th, 2010 2:27 PM

"The ravaged remains of the town sign remains...You can't read it."

That could be what it says when you click on the town's sign.

Mana March 18th, 2010 2:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaBomb137 (Post 5632540)
"The ravaged remains of the town sign remains...You can't read it."

That could be what it says when you click on the town's sign.

I like that :) perfect sign for the town.

DaBomb137 March 18th, 2010 2:56 PM

Thanks but now that I look at at it, I shouldn't have put "remains" twice :/

Mana March 18th, 2010 3:01 PM

How about:

"The ravaged remnant of the town sign remains...You can't read it."

"What's left of a ravaged town sign... you can't read it."


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