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Sgt Shock May 24th, 2010 4:07 PM

All in all I think it was a solid chapter. I think you stayed true to Brock's character more than the first write of the story. I feel like your character, Paul, has protagonist potential that you could definitely tap into at any time. I would love to see more interactions between Josephine and Paul in the future. :) I think you know what I want from that.

See you in the future, LM.

Fuyu May 24th, 2010 4:14 PM

Dang SS stop beating me to the punch. As he said, the rewrite is much better than the first. I hope you stick with this rewrite and keep on developing your story as much as you can. Keep it up.


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