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My Song Book
Hi! I write a lot of songs, more than I have paper for! I always get good feedback from my friends, but I sometimes think they might be bias. So I've decided to show other people my songs, for I plan to (Somehow or another) get my songs out there for the world to hear. I can only write lyrics momentarily, for I have yet to learn the cords to a simple guitar, or the keys to the piano. Now enough of my rambling, here is my first, and most recent song.
My Insanity There was nothing I ever really knew There was nothing I cared about Passing Strangers Calling out my name I don't care They knew nothing of the pain I was going through Everyday Watching you all over her Everyday Killing me a little more Everyday Feeding me an ounce of suffer And you don't care You're killing me and you don't even see it Can't look up to see the blood and tears i'm wasting On you Nothings ever seemed so wrong To want someone so much To the point of insanity For you For you It's all for you, For you How can I breathe When I'm up to my neck in pain When a secret burden lies inside How can you Say you didn't notice at all When I'm standing here Laying it all out I can't take it anymore I need you out of the door Take away my pain won't you please I just don't care If you live or die It's out of my league You're killing me and you don't even see it Can't look up to see the blood and tears i'm wasting On you Nothings ever seemed so wrong To want someone so much To the point of insanity For you Why can I do what I do for you When all you give to me in return Is telling me how you want her I see Shut your eyes Shut your mouth I don't wanna hear it Don't look my way It's hard enough to walk away But I can't watch you Wanting her anymore Everyday Watching you all over her Everyday Killing me a little more Everyday Feeding me an ounce of suffer And I don't care You're killing me and you don't even see it Can't look up to see the blood and tears i'm wasting On you Nothings ever seemed so wrong To want someone so much To the point of insanity For you For you It's all for you, For you - - - - - - Alright. Comment on it. I do realize that some of the I's are not capitalized where they should be, but i've always been bad at that. Anyway, I am open to all critisism good or bad. And do feel free to tell me if you didn't like it at all, just give me a reason, please! Well I think that's all so. . . I'll be waiting. |
Aww... i can relate to that song in every way. :'( I really loved the lyrics. They sure did hit home.
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Second Song
I know this one is up pretty quick after the old one, but I wrote a new song today. I'm going to try to put a song a day. So here is song number two:
You're Sick You want me to forget You want me to forgive You want me to only think of you You don't think of me Of what you tried to do Over and over again It won't escape my mind anymore I'm not a little girl anymore I can't let you do it anymore. I'm not a toy I'm not a doll Something you can move around to do whatever you want I've seen the wrong of your ways I've seen that your not gonna pay And I'm gonna make sure that you never forget Cuz I'll never forget What you did to me I was young and naive Something you could easily see Didn't give a second thought Convinced me it wasn't wrong But I can see now All the things you were about Said "We Are family, It's normal you see." I can tell you now I'm tired of this Everyone found out Everyone knows what you're about I'm not a toy I'm not a doll Something you can move around to do whatever you want I've seen the wrong of your ways I've seen that your not gonna pay And I'm gonna make sure that you never forget Cuz I'll never forget What you did to me I said I'll forgive you Just as long as these games are through You will not feel bad I know that from the past I will not let you in Though you are forgiven I never want to see you again I want you out of my head I'm not a toy I'm not a doll Something you can move around to do whatever you want I've seen the wrong of your ways I've seen that your not gonna pay And I'm gonna make sure that you never forget Cuz I'll never forget No I'll never forget What you did to me ------- - ----- - - Alright there it is. My second song! |
Wow... That was such a touching song. I could hear unwritten cords to it in my head. Not common for me, but i ♥ it.
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Hmm...a song a day. That's going to put a lot of pressure on your backside.
So far, your songs are great. But like most songs, I can't really tell if I like it until I actually hear it. |
Update!
I say I'll put one up and as soon as I say it I don't. I apologize for not posting in so long but I had Tcaps. Here is my newest song.
Cowgirl Boots Cowgirl boots don't make the girl But they make up a memory in her world Of an old man sitting cross the sofa on a chair Singing a song and his boots on there My grandpa used to sing me a song About being his sunshine all day long And that if anyone ever took me away They'd have a pretty hefty price to pay And I miss him every day of my life Found myself crying inside Don't take my sunshine away Is the song that makes me cry to this day Cowgirl boots don't make this girl But they keep his memory alive in my world Cowgirl boots don't make the girl but they sure put her mind in a whirl Memories flying from left to right Walls caving in on either side He calls me over and I sit on his knee I start laughing as I play horsy But that was a long time ago And I still need to reap the seeds that I sow And I miss him every day of my life Found myself crying inside Don't take my sunshine away Is a song that makes me cry to this day Cowgirl boots don't make this girl But they keep his memory alive in my world Nothing's gonna change the dreadful fact That no power in the world could bring him back But I know I'll see him one day All I have to do is pray and wait I'm a country girl now thanks to him Took me this long to find who I am Too bad he never got to see But in my mind I do believe That in the beginning he always knew Who I would be and he knew what to do And I miss him every day of my life Found myself crying inside Don't take my sunshine away Is the song that makes me cry to this day Cowgirl boots don't make this girl But they keep his memory alive in my world And I miss him every day of my life Found myself crying inside Don't take my sunshine away Is the song that makes me cry to this day Cowgirl boots don't make this girl But they keep his memory alive in my world Cowgirl boots don't make this girl But they remind me I'm not alone in this world - - - - - - - - - Well what do ya think? |
Wow girl. That's sad. I totally love it though. :) I could feel the emotion behind the words.
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Alright Fearless. Let's see what we have.
My Insanity- It's got a nice concept. But I don't sense the emotion in the song. It just sounds a littl dry. It's got good lyrics, I just don't see the power in it. My favorite line was: Can't look up to see the blood and tears i'm wasting You're Sick- I've gotta say, you took mad to a new level on that one. It's easy to tell that you really have a deep scar with the peson descibed in the song. My favorite line: I was young and naive Something you could easily see Didn't give a second thought Convinced me it wasn't wrong Cowgirl Boots- That was very deep. Not much to say. It's very touching. My favorite line: And I still need to reap the seeds that I sow Nice job Fearless! |
New Song
Alright I'm back, I would like to send a big thanks to: Angel Protection, Krystallyn, and TJgamer for giving me feedback on my songs. After a long enough wait, here is my new song!
Red Ribbon She cried when he tied that ribbon in her hair, Knew it was the final goodbye, She didn't beg She didn't plead They could both keep their pride She knew better Than to tie him to this fate So when he turned around for one more word This is what she had to say "Keep your head and heart together Don't let them stray far Let your memories go black Let your heart tell you who you are If you remember one thing 'bout me Remember You saved me" It was eight years and into high school When she read all the signs The flag upon her doorstep Leavin her behind She could grab unto his arm Tell him he was wrong Instead she said the one thing That got him along "Keep your head and heart together Don't let them stray far Let your memories go black Let your heart tell you who you are If you remember one thing 'bout me Remember You saved me" It was late into October When he was ordered home The news had yet to reach him Graved in the stone An angel's cry from heaven It lasted one night Wrote in the gray dark grave stone Made him feel far from alright "Keep your head and heart together. Don't let them stray far. When you let your memories go black Who you are, defines your heart. Please rememer one thing My dear friend. . . " I cried when you tied that ribbon in my hair This is our final goodbye |
Awww, how sweet and sad, although, like TJgamer, I would like to hear them first before I actually give my opinion.
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This Way
Well, it's officially the next day! I am now going to put up my new song. I hope you like it!
This Way People will tell me I don't fit in People will tell me My being here is a sin People will tell me I'm not right People will tell me I don't have the right To what they do To what they say That my right to live is not bigger than theirs But just for today I wanna breathe I don't wanna talk to anyone I wanna close down and think To myself I wanna remind me That I am not the only And that they don't know what their saying I wanna say That I'm perfect this way People will tell you Get out of my sight People will tell you Come out at night People will break you down People will shut you out People will break your heart If you let them Just for today You wanna breathe You don't wanna talk to anyone You wanna close down and think To yourself You wanna remind you That you are not so lonely And that they don't know what their saying And I wanna say You are perfect this way People will tear you from either side People will claw their way into a fight Taking you down inch by inch Making you feel alone in this But you're not But you're not I'm here I'm in your presence now Just give me your hand And we will make them disappear Just for today We wanna breathe We don't wanna talk to anyone We wanna close down and think To ourselves Just for today We wanna breathe We don't wanna talk to anyone We wanna close down and think To ourselves We wanna remind each other That we should never surrender And that what they have to say doesn't matter And we wanna say We are perfect this way I am perfect this way You are perfect this way We are perfect this way |
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great job! all of these are great!! i was the first to read Red Ribbon wasn't i? that's my fave!! |
Aww... I love both songs. They both caught me by surprise, though I should know better than that. You have such a unique lyric style, and I can't wait to hear these songs on the radio. ♥
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Yay
Aright I have my new one ready! Finally. I would have had it up sooner but school's been kinda demanding. I wanna say thank you to everyone that replied to my songs! Now I present the next song:
The Strongest Love Your heart breaks With every move he's making Cause you know No matter how hard you try You can never Love him the way he loves you More than a brother Cuz that's what you've felt all of your life So you'll cry here Hoping to ease all of his pain Tasting your tears And everything inside you fades He says he'll love you Even if you break his heart He'll forgive you Cuz it's all he's known from the start He'll do anything to stop those tears from falling From your face Even if it means him losing all his faith He would do anything for you Take a bullet Run in front into road Coming straight for you He couldn't care less If you ever look his way Cause he will always know By his side you'll always stay He says he'll love you Even if you break his heart He'll forgive you Cuz it's all he's known from the start He'll do anything to stop those tears from falling From your face Even if it means him losing all his faith Burry yourself inside this rain Consuming you with all the pain Of what you can't give him And you know that it's too late To change the outcome And yourself is who you blame He will tell you That love is only what you make It will continue After death it will never break He says he'll love you Even if you break his heart He'll forgive you Cuz it's all he's known from the start He'll do anything to stop those tears from falling From your face Even if it means him losing all his faith He says he'll love you Even if you break his heart He'll forgive you Cuz it's all he's known from the start He'll do anything to stop those tears from falling From your face Even if it means him losing all his faith |
Haha. I love that song soo.... much. :D I actually posted part of it as my facebook status.
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Brand New Song!!
Me and my best friend Lexy wrote a song!! I'd like to share it with you all!! Hope you like!!
Kiss Me Goodnight By: Lexy Rosa & Jesse Marie Everytime you take me home You only walk me to the door A shake of hands, a short goodbye Why not a kiss this time I said, "What's wrong love bug Kiss me goodnight please, baby" He turned to me then turned away Walked down the stairs Turned back halfway and said, "Maybe next time." I stomped and to my room I ran For I had the perfect plan Chorus You always leave me waiting alone Just to find your way back home Why don't you come back tonight Try me, baby, I won't fight Just this one little thing Can make it alright Why not kiss me goodnight Just a kiss goodnight Everything I've tried to do Is always about you And I meeting in the middle I different kind of goodbye Even though I've dinied it There is no way to hide it There is something true I'm kinda obsessed with you That one little thing I've been longing for Just walked out the door But this little note I leave Baby it'll make you see repeat chorus You knock down my dream Things are never as they seem You turn back around Take a guess at what I found Things are finally looking up You have turned my mind to mush Everything seems okay Even though you're walking away Maybe this was your plan Be mad at you, don't think I can repeat chorus You didn't leave me here alone I followed you back home I'll try to get you back tonight Baby we laugh even if we fight You made it all right With that one kiss goodnight Oh Oh Baby Oh Oh Baby Oh Oh Whoa |
No Comments? Ah well, here is the next one.
Falling Apart Daddy's always sick Getting worse by the day When one day we get lucky One problem out of the way Mommy's heart is in the right place But her tears keep coming out The pain and loss she's suffered I say it's allowed It breaks my heart to watch them everyday Not a word spoken and I wonder one day Will we all separate? Chorus I cry for them I pray for me To have the heart that we all need To make it through one more day Let God be my witness to what I have to say "With all the love in my heart I will make us through Without falling apart." Daddy loves with all his heart He's breaking and bending and I start To cry inside cuz I can't stop Everything I must leave up to God Mommy tries so hard to be strong I get that it's hard with my sister gone It even makes me want to cry When I think that her pain is the same as mine It breaks my heart to watch them everyday Not a word spoken and I wonder one day Will we all separate? repeat chorus I am not as strong as i'd like to be I can only do so much I don't let them see That being strong for them is breaking me But I'd do anything if we could just be the way we used to be My heart breaks everyday They do not communicate And in my heart I know They will not separate for me repeat chorus x2 |
All I Am
Hey Guys! Sorry I took so long to put up a new song, my apologies! But I got one and hope you like it.
All I Am (Beautiful Girl) Five o'clock don't know when Almost died but now she's doing fine She's doing fine Almost unbelievable blue eyes Turned out to be a surprise A surprise She can close her eyes and turn back now Who she was then and who she is now I know who I have to be grateful for and I see everything I didn't before Got a long road left ahead of me Can be anything do anything I love all I am Who I will be Is me Light like the oak wood tree Now black as the sky at midnight Grew up on the beach sand between her feet Now the water is all she can see The passion for the thrill Fire she used to feel Is hidden in her eyes I know who I have to be grateful for and I see everything I didn't before Got a long road left ahead of me Can be anything do anything I love all I am Who I will be Is me Show the world her hidden smile Everything that she can be Maybe the world would like to see She can breathe in the world Beautiful girl Oh-whoa Her eyes show What she hides No one cared Enough to look inside Maybe now is the time I know who I have to be grateful for and I see everything I didn't before Got a long road left ahead of me Can be anything do anything I love all I am Who I will be I love all I am All I am All I am I love all I am All I am All I am Is me To hear an acapella version of this song: All I Am (Beautiful Girl) Jesse Marie Original |
You should someday go on stage and practice your singing skills. Who knows what it could lead to.
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Your song "Kiss Me Goodnight" Was INCREDIBLY sweet. :D I can somewhat relate, yet not entirely. :D It was PRETTY kewl. ♥
Even though I've dinied it There is no way to hide it There is something true I'm kinda obsessed with you That excerpt is actually my favorite out of the song. It completely reminds me of the way I feel about a few guys. *stares off dreamily* "Falling Apart" was also really deep. I am not as strong as i'd like to be I can only do so much I don't let them see That being strong for them is breaking me But I'd do anything if we could just be the way we used to be That part reminds me 100% of the way I've felt in the past.... I could totally relate, sadly... :( "All I Am (Beautiful Girl)" is the song I felt was written just for me. :) I just adore it!!! Show the world her hidden smile Everything that she can be Maybe the world would like to see She can breathe in the world Beautiful girl Oh-whoa Her eyes show What she hides No one cared Enough to look inside Maybe now is the time I know who I have to be grateful for and I see everything I didn't before Got a long road left ahead of me Can be anything do anything I love all I am Who I will be That would have to be my FAVORITE section of the song. It really touches me and I love it. I can totally relate. ♥ |
Thank you Krys! and TJgamer! I'm glad to have your reviews. I'll have a new song up soon! I'm sorry I've taken so long!
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you know you can always add lyrics into my songs :)
my songs are shorter and easier xD |
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