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Pokemon Legendary Conquerors: Hoenn Crisis
Pokemon Legendary Conquerors: Hoenn Crisis Hack of: http://members.optusnet.com.au/soanevalcke/famepublication/badge-firered.png Introduction: Pokemon Legendary Conquerors is a series about Team Legendary, a team with squads who's goals is to capture a legendary Pokemon/duo/trio. This hack is in Hoenn, where the Golem Squad in Team Legendary is studying the legendary Golems (Regis), and plans to summon Regigigas to destroy all of Hoenn, and capture Regigigas when it destroys Hoenn. The captain of this squad has a grudge against Hoenn for a reason... Story: 4 years later after Brendan/May defeated the Pokemon League, you, a kid in Littleroot Town decides to challenge the Pokemon League.You get a Pokemon From Prof. Birch, and travel throughout Hoenn to defeat the leaders, and run into the Golem Squad. You capture the Legendary Pokemon of Hoenn and all of that, and challenge the Champion... Who is it? Is it May? Is it Brendan? Is it Wallace? Is it Steven? Hmm... Features: -Updated region of Hoenn
Gym Leaders: Josh of Mauville City (Ground) Flannery of Lavaridge Town (Fire) Lanette of Fallabor Town (Eeveelutions) Roxanne of Rusboro City (Rock) Brendan of Slateport City (Misc) Brawly of Dewford Town (Fighting) Winona of Fortree City (Flying) Tate and Liza of Mossdeep City (Psychic) Screenshots: Spoiler:
Progress: 36% Percent 4 towns 4 route Bugs: None yet FAQ: None yet Awards: Hack of the Week #116 Team: Team Legendary vietazn654 (me): mapper, scripter, story maker Drakath569: mapper akito786: scripter, spriter 560cool: mapper MrgreenAnkle: mapper Click here if you want to join Credits/Tools: mitchel1, Kyledove, Saurav, Coronis: Mitchel1 rom base 2 LU-HO: Advance Map Hackmew: Hacked unLZ-GBA, Free Space Finder [FSF], Overworld Editor RE, eXtreme Script Editor [XSE], Advance Trainer Scizz: Advance Text diegoisawesome's MEGA-HUGE XSE Scripting Tutorial |
First post.
Good story,the screens look ok and i'd like to see some screens of the legendary pokemon too.Good luck with this. |
This looks ok so far, but why do the trees overlap? Is it trying to mirror the HG/SS tree style? Anyway, do you need help with anything right now?
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looks good Awesome story and the old guy lyin down cant you change his to a police or gaurd or trainer!!!! |
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you can move the script :3
to a alternitivw place and put a new sprite there :3 (SamSam67 idea of the day ) |
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Ok (you can ognore this if you wish) But instead of "you need a pokedex to pass" Have it all moved you square down and have a polic guy say "oh Hey this old guy has collapsed you cannot pass till the parmedics pick him up" ^.^ Simples -meerkat noise- |
This is off topic, but the Mew sprite in the banner has transparent eyes. On topic I don't like the color of the path. It is so drastically different than the grass, and is kind of an eye sore. But other than that it looks good.
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Your idea looks great, and some of your mapping has problems.
1. Third line, second picture, you need to edit the tile of the edges of the road to the new grass as along the edges (the corners especially) you can see the old FR grass. 2. From what i can see, the screenshots look a little spacious, you might need to fill in some of that space. Overall, i like your idea, it is original and good, your maps and tiles look quite nice and i agree with Conan, the path needs to be changed colour. This is pretty good, good luck! |
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Anyways, I edited the path in Pinewood Town: Is it better? |
Yep its better, btw what do u want me to do?
Also im not a scripter ^^ i meant text editor like changing the text of post signs, etc >.< ~Drak |
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UPDATE: I'm re-starting it, because the everything got messed up. The Ancient Descendants, it's time for all of us to work together!
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I like the story, but I would like to point some things that's wrong with it.
Arceus was born in his own dimension, not in any region and it created everything with the lake trio (Mesprit, Uzelf and last one I don't remember name on) and the dragon trio (Dialga, Palkia and Giratina). Mew have the DNA of all Pokémon, so Mew didn't create life, he/she is more like a placeholder. Other than that, it's all good. Your mapping needs a little work, try to insert other type of houses, maybe spice it up a lil' bit? Also, it's kinda empty to point it out. Also, the old man should be standing in my opinion. Good to see your re-starting your hack, hope you take in some of my suggestions. Best of luck! If it ever reach to a beta, I'll play it. :) |
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Uzelf Lol...Nice Update but when were going to start helping? ;)
~Drak |
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Now to point out all the bits that make little to no sense. Firstly 'Hadevil' (hahaha), is the 'ruler' of Death Universe, but then you said Arceus put them in yet another universe o.O so is this new one like... a holiday home or something? Then, how would 'Hadevil' (which I'm not sure if is a Pokémon or a Person at the moment) escape the universe that it had been put into in order to kill Arceus or get to ANOTHER universe with the Rielo region? Then there's the 'Guardians of Rielo' which you seem to have just thrown in - I take it they are Pokémon unless the people there are very eccentric - but we know nothing about Fakemon so explain them! Then you've added in the duo of light and dark just to confuse things even more, that bit is totally un-needed :\. THEN I come to, if these Guardians, created by Arceus, cannot protect Rielo then why would a random kid (after challenging 9 gyms, which is again unnecessary) go and beat this evil team... which don't really do anything in your 'Legend' or 'Story' so aren't of much interest. Basically I think you need to think through your Legend and Story a bit and make it more concise. P.S. Your maps have way too much space but you seem to be able to script a bit, which is good. |
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THEN, (the Death Universe is down below), it went above where "light" was, and was planning to attack the Guardians of Rielo. SO, there are 3 mentioned universes, Arceus's home universe, the Death Universe where Hadevil is, and the universe "we", and "Pokemon" live in. Arceus's favorite region was Rielo, and Hadevil plans to destroy it. Hadevil has the ability to escape the Death Universe if Arceus isn't watching. So Arceus knows that, and created the Guardians of Rielo to prevent Hadevil from doing that. They're all Fakemon. Besides Arceus >.< BUT, now that I see that, I guess I must make things less confusing, and explain the stuff more... In the Villainous Teams section, it explains that Team Legendary is a seperate problem in the story, and there are HMM...15 squads, (one squad capturing a legendary Duo, Trio, One Pokemon). They know nothing about the legend of Rielo. But yes, I will edit that legend to make it more sense :p And I restarted the hack, hoping that it'll have more stuff. :p |
Looks great :) far greater than mine.
anyways i would have to say the taking over option.... btw are the ledgendaries fusions because they sound like them... |
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no i mean mixes of two pokemon....
Hadevil, Angelash, Ivysture, Dicesnow, Oceablaze. Ivysture = Ivysaur/somthing and so on... just wondering |
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Angelash = angel, flash/light Ivysture = ivy (its a poison type) sture (...idk but i couldn't name a Pokemon ivy :p) Dicesnow = snow, ice, dice (dice reminds me of diamonds, and dicesnow is a diamond) Oceablaze = ocean, blaze |
ok because i was thinking Dice snow was one of the ice types can't remember name and blaze was blazeiken
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