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Pokémon Itzsu Region Sage
Hack info
Fire Red (UK) Name Pokémon Itzsu Region Saga Story Spoiler:
Features: *NEw region *New fakemon (Around 50 - 70) *New heroes *SIlver as rival *Return of Team rocket (COntrolling region resources) *Battle old heroes (Red Gold Brendon and Dawn) * Meet many people around the world Screens: http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed7-1.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed6-1.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed5-1.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed4-1.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed3-1.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed2-1.png http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed-1.png Videos: Kanto PAst (No events) http://romhacktube.com/video/5YXYBONK1BN7/Pokemon-IRS-Past-KANTO-Route-1-added Starters : Spoiler:
To be done Make and insert Fakemon Ow to be made and inserted World map TO be made and inserted Music to be inserted Credit SSKD's Rom base Team Apllying sheet: :P Places availible anything? Name: Position wanted Back up postition Proof 1 Proof 2 The end |
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Itzsu sounds a lot like Isshu, at first I thought that's what you meant but obviously not XD. The story is boring and doesn't actually say anything about what the games about, I got more from your features list. Also how come team rocket were defeated 6 years ago but "Its been 3 years since any thing bad has been reported". Is there NO normal crime in this place? o_o Finally your mapping looks a bit stale, the mountains around the cave are boring and the houses in your town are far too close. (Also how come your Signature shows something completely different...) |
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1. Itszu is a region slighlty east of Isshu therefore i made them sound the same (as Pokemon B&W progress i made add some maps ;) ) 2.The first part of story is the sayin of Giovanni in HGSS How he promised silver he will one day return with team rocket Producing A big spread of evil Hence why silver will be rival 3. Those words are from 3 years before team rocket did the radio tower shizzle there fore its three eyars after HGSS MEaning 3 years with no team rocket 4.I agree my mapping skills meak |
Another hack... So you're done with that Mario one? And Itzsu sounds like Isshu.
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I don't understand the 1st part of your story. Your map is kinda weird.
http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed4-1.png The mountain don't really look like mountain. http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed6-1.png the sand\muddy path is too much used. http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed-1.png why did you place houses too close each other. Please improve the map. give more info of your hack. Good Luck |
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As i said to swift sign Itszu is a region eat of Isshu Therefore they sound the same @darkerm i'm fixing the map stuf :/ |
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NEW UPDATES
Due to queries about my maps
here are some NEW screenies http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed12.png Mt crudge entrance redone http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed11.png Tishun town path Redone http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed10-1.png More spcae in Triboot http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed9-1.png Your home http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/Pokemon-FireRed8-1.png Home town now has beach :) Quote:
The both have the TO in them and share the same number of letters in title :) And a alpha should be realeased before summer hols (Or even beta) |
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...Looking at his profile, you've even confronted him about it there. Have you ever thought to take a step back for once, just to give one of them a go, to actually see how far he can get with it? I don't know if you're trying to motivate him in to proving you wrong, but I really doubt that'd work, for Nintendork. Hell, it probably wouldn't work for me. We all know how annoying it is to see someone start hack after hack after hack, but even for cases like this (and let me say it clearly- You've overdone it big time, Nintendork), give him a sliver of a chance. Personally, I'm sceptical of your dedication to hacking in general, Nintendork, but I'm willing to see how far you'll go with this one, at least. However, I don't really get a feeling that you've thought this through fully. Like many other hacks in Progressing Hacks recently, you're recycling a load of elements from the existing games, such as re-battling older protagonists. That's ok, but bear in mind that there was a reason for that in GSCHGSS- It was to become the world's strongest trainer. Beating Red grants you that title. Too many people do this because it's 'cool', but often completely random, otherwise. Also, I hate re-using previous Rivals, myself. Silver was the rival of Gold/Crystal/Lyra- he travelled at the same time as them, he grew stronger as they did, and becomes far too strong a Trainer to be re-used as a Rival. Realistically, they wouldn't just drop all of their high levelled Pokemon for the sake of a new adventure. Also, the Fakemon... My advice? Don't. Trust me, you may actually get further without them. Anyway, I like the choice of tiles. Even though you didn't insert them, at least you have a good taste in graphics. Good luck with this, Nintendork- I really will be keeping an eye on this, and as a fellow hacker I urge you to really make an effort with it. |
Well, You Improve them a lot. Btw, I am not making fun of you asking this but will you work on this hack or get another one to work?
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To be honest i have something wrong with me I'm am a guy who is picky but full of ideas at the sametime therefore i have a hard time sticking with one thing But this hack will trimuph :rambo: Quote:
I Will Keep It Up With This One :) P.S new story/Updated Spoiler:
@Gira (Agian) I plan to use silver because this hack is mainly about Giovanni's Come back as Team .R LEader I may make a diffo rival but for now it will be him WARNING BIG GIVE AWAY IN SPOILER Spoiler:
That is all For now |
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You need to map out more trees in the Hero's hometown.
Other than that, the maps are slightly improved. But like what Vietazn said, the beach looks weird. Try to make it like... I don't know, more like "normal" beaches? |
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Another Nintendork Productions :P Looks good I <3 the story Anyway dont give up I know you can do it hunni ;) x |
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Thanks Quite the "hunni ;) x" part for the love of god and :..:UPDATE:..: http://i647.photobucket.com/albums/uu191/Nintendork15/MtCrudgeValley321.jpg Mt crudge valley The other side of mt crudge and next to Crudge CIty Home of APollo The normal type gym leader |
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What I would do to make your beach "normal" is to make it smaller, it seems to 'tall', perhaps have the sand end at the top of the first tree and have a bit of grass in front of the house. Also, the beach is too square, water erodes the sand so you wouldn't see a beach that is 'straight' per sé, perhaps add some shape to the beach and a couple of boulders on the beach maybe? Anyway I hope my advice helped, good luck with this =) |
One advice, You must improve first before making an hack. Getting inspirations from the works of other is probably one way. As well as being willing to achieve what you want to achieve. Yes, I know through hacks you can improve everything by the criticisms given by others. But as what as I have seen, It's just all over the same getting a base from your previous hacks/projects.
Either way, Best of lucks. |
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Story : Old story but this added Giovanni realised RED was the cause of his Failure SO he travelled back in time to kidnapp him before RED could stop team rocket ... Due to too much time travel the Regions Itzsu and Kanto Fused toegther in space and time ... But Team rocket rule the Itzsu region Due to Red's Kidnapping Video of time travel: http://romhacktube.com/video/2ADKBMHMR8Y7/Pokémon-Itzsu-Saga-GO-to-past-KANTO My linking embedding doesnt work so There is the link |
YAY! Nice update! ^^ I really like this hack... :D
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Thanks :P Its going well then my other ones |
OK... Nintendo Dork, I know it's awesome that there's a time travelling function, but something just seem.... not right. How in the world is there a time travel warp without a proper event? How in the world did it suddenly appear? That's weird. What I see in that event is that you created a random warp, and it goes to the past. That's... not really good.... ya know. Shouldn't you try making an event on why that weird warp appeared?
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gud luck on this hack looks awsum hmmm wish u could put the fakemons on the post so people can see them :D and kool hack
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Anyway, nice work Nintendork. I believe you will make a fine hack, despite the past... Few. I hope that you won't be just using a ROM Base, instead adding a variety of unique talent to the hack (for instance, tiles, as I know you have scripts that are unique... Hopefully). |
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