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I'd definitely enlarge the head if I were spriting this as a fakemon, and you might want to make the mask more like markings to give it a natural feel. Quote:
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First, color the outlines (especially at the place where the hair meets the head) and you'll notice a drastic change in the quality of the sprite. I've noticed that from the way you shade, you seem to think a lot about it that it doesn't flow naturally anymore. Relax a little and just shade it the way you think the light source would reflect on it. Quote:
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You forgot to mention that I helped you with the shading/outline on pigmite and razoboar ;D
But anyways nice sprites the only one I would worry about is proton. http://i46.*.com/mkvjeu.png Now lets look at the outline on this. First of all its pretty rough, which we don't want we want some smooth lineart so it looks more appealing and not so scratchy. I found a tutorial on lineart that should help you on it. link I would also take away the lines that hold the little atom balls. It seems to get in the way of the sprite and in my opinion it would look much better without it. Lets get on with the shading, You have literally the shading and the lighting literally all over the place. On the upper portion of the body it should have more lighting less shading and on the lower portion more shading and little to no lighting. Remember the sun is always facing in the top left hand corner and if any body parts get in the way of it, there should be shading in the shadow of the body part. Now I like the overall design I just feel its missing arms :/ Otherwise its fairly nice. Anyways some things you might want to work on Haroun otherwise its a fairly decent sprite <: |
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Anyway, thought I'd might has well post this. It came third in the MPC, so it must be relatively good. XD http://i47.*.com/avhgm8.png |
Nice work.
http://i48.*.com/zlfa6r.png I like the coloring on this one. Must have took some time to make it. |
I think you could work on the anatomy of the boar-evolution line (maybe use a base of another Pokemon?) as they are lacking, slightly.
The other Fakemon are really nice and I think you should make much more like them. :) |
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Furrboi. Not a Pokémon. An enemy for a platforming project I'm doing. Crit appreciated. Pretty simple fur thing. Takes a jump on the head to kill :D. |
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Fixed left leg. Fixed the eye shadows highlights. Added some fur things to give a more... furry feel, including a sort of eyebrow covering the top eye. I actually didn't realise the similarities with Tangrowth and Tangela, so he's not related to them in any way. And yeah, the eyes are meant to be looking in slightly different directions. I'm trying out different palettes as we speak, but I don't think they're working tbh. |
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http://a.imageshack.us/img697/6383/furrboinew.png Anyway, I've (finally) tried to redo Proton to look slightly better. I might need to revisit the hair, as it doesn't look much like hair atm. http://a.imageshack.us/img837/3969/proton.pnghttp://a.imageshack.us/img826/8197/protonshiny.png |
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For the WPC. It's a badly-done Kakunashkan (Generation Four's Kangaskhan x Kakuna). Blame tCoD's random generator. :D |
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Proton's hair reminds me of NiGHTS from NiGHTS into Dreams. Are you trying to make the hair look like a ponytail shape? |
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As for Proton, I think the design is mean to be ponytails (or is it pigtails in that style? idek), so yeah. Haha, it does remind me of NiGHTS, actually. :D |
Yes, that's the one. It just short of sticks out and... ugh I don't know.
And oh gosh, I just noticed the red star on Proton's chest! TOTALLY A NiGHTS PRE-EVOLUTION. Also you're right, pigtails. If you want to make it look like pigtails, I'd... uh... well, make the dark part of the head outline come further up the head, to make the 'pigtail' parts look like they're behind the head instead of extending from it. Right now you have some shadows there, but they're not quite enough to make the shape pop. |
I've tried to tweak said plate on Kakunaskhan: http://i32.*.com/29uw1es.png
I've also emphasised the head's outline with Proton, here: http://i28.*.com/33p3mdc.png |
These are pretty unusual, and unique, in a good way.
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Anyway, I've made a few new fusions, because I don't like Kakunaskhan, to be honest. For now, Wobbufloon is my entry. http://i37.*.com/2j289it.png I am also considering Shuckloach and Scizoxys: http://i38.*.com/n33w5c.pnghttp://i35.*.com/qzhpx4.png |
I'm quite fond of Wobbufloon. It's adorable. :3
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I like the improvements you made to Kakunaskhan and Proton.
Scizoxys looks amazing, and Wobbuffloon makes my heart melt with cute. |
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http://i35.*.com/ndplrs.png Two new fusions alongside the other ones in this thread. |
I saw no noticeable flaws. The Cherubinny is cute too, though the little cherry thing is kind of hard to see.
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Critisism on this tile would be greatly appreciated. Suggestions and ideas on how to make the bottom half (i.e. not the roof) more interesting also gladly accepted. :D |
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Well, one simple idea that comes to me is rounded windows. That would only be a small change in the details, I know. Maybe looking at random pictures of houses, like this, might inspire you. You can find interesting things people have on their walls. Drain pipes, window shutters, water meters, etc. |
Go with a satellite dish.
You don't see those in Pokémon houses everyday. |
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