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Keoni's, My Work
1.http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/5505/pufferfish.png
2.http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5118/venomhungry.png 3.http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/4184/momemtummori.png 4.http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/5331/spideywhere2ami.png 5.http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/7029/skateboardingstock.jpg 6.http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/897/supermans.png Those are only 6 of my recent. CnC, Discuss. And No....I don't follow tutorials. |
Well I decided to come online for once.... and I saw that the revival thing is for 2 months now.. I'm right under that.. so here is my first and second verical signatures that I just made.
First http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/8652/firstvertical.png http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/9144/firstverticalbw.png http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/9144/firstverticalbw.png Second Secound, Text http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2758/secoundvertical.png No Text http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/2758/secoundvertical.png |
I really like your work, but I have a few person itches about it all. You seem to overuse blur in a lot of your works, blur isn't the only way of creating a focal point. You also seem to use a sort of fog like cover in a lot of your work, I really think it would work better if you could remove the bits covering the focal point and blend it in with the bits not covering it, then the focal's would stand out more.
For instance, this one works so well with everything. http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/3631/c4dbased12.png Compared to the two below, which seem to really smother the focal points. http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9004/cure4karma.png http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/2466/johndillanger.png Overall though, I'm a fan of the work you've shown. I'm very surprised this thread hasn't received more attention considering how long it's been up for. |
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Dude, your graphics are so awesome :3
I liked these two the best http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/9576/medusas.pnghttp://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2758/secoundvertical.png Those are really good. |
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Wow, I really like your work, especially these two:
http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/9576/medusas.png http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9008/kumaregsigv3.png The smudging and coloration in the first one is great, and the effects in the second one make it look really nice. However, there's only one problem I have with your work - On certain tags, you seem to blur them a lot. I know it's to add depth and make the focal stand out, but on the two tags that monkeyandhead posted, it's taking it a bit too far. However, you seem to be kind of growing away from that, looking at your latest work, so it doesn't even really matter. Overall, your work is fabulous. Keep it up! |
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Deadspace.
http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4300/deadspacel.png http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/2073/deadspaceflip.png God Of War http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5516/1godofwar.png Sig Size: http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/535/1godofwarsigsize.png. V2 http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/6711/1godofwa2rsigsize.png http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/4439/1godofwar2.png |
You have improved a ridiculous amount....
First of all, it is good to see you are over the times of topaz spam. :P It really didn't add anything positive to your tags, just made them all look similar and I don't think the topaz effect looks that good abused. deadspacel.png 1godofwarsigsize.png These are amazing. The effects and composition are quite impressive to say the least. The colours and adjustments and everything are incredible, particularly the deadspace tag. Anyways, besides the God of War art, your text really lets you down. It is way too simple, and doing the same, "small, clipping mask, similar font" in all your tags will rarely work. Try experimenting with typo and adding really big text, and really decorative and stuff like that. Also lighting, be careful not to go overboard and make one side completely black. It always better to fade out softly, it may not be as noticeable, but if you put it in it will be noticed. That comment may not be relevant cause it seems that in your latest update you've got all that under control and in practise, so take it for what you will... |
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/4820/fractalspace.png
http://gfxf.net/images/tronngn.png http://gfxf.net/images/1timeshift.png I have a sprite one that I will post later, but currently I'm using it for a battle. |
WHY DO YOU MAKE ME DOUBLE POST? WHYYYYYYY?
I'm trying to stop using those C4D's so much and... I messed up... Especially with my lighting... I'm experimenting with styles... http://gfxf.net/images/experiment.png Colour: http://gfxf.net/images/experiqvq.png And it's too messy.. I know that much. http://gfxf.net/images/afrosam.png Flip: http://gfxf.net/images/afrosawjw.png I kinda had to crop it, due to a comment on a previous thing I made that I had TOO MUCH empty space... And I accidentally did the same kind of thing... So I cropped it... I know... The size's strange. That's the sound I imagine his hair would make in reality. http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/3693/afrosamuri.png Flip: http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/4527/afrosamuriflip.png I didn't really care for the backround. http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/9619/gabbercopy.png My collab with Mute... The leader of Manga Mania. http://gfxf.net/images/collab1.png |
I like your art it is very good. Would love to see some more. My only question is a personal thing in the god of war image how did you do the flames?
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I love the Medusa one C:
But I dunno but some of the text in your work seems kinda plain ;A; |
http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/1083/3411truecrime.png
http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/1996/3411deadspace.png http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9334/3411graphscollab.png I really want to make something I like.... but I can't do it :( I kinda like the top one... These are posted in reverse order in which they were made today. |
You've improved a lot since I've last rated here.
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and I also like the nice use of flow in your graphics too. You've done a really good job with your graphics. |
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This one is almost really good! :P The colours and placements and stuff is really good, but I think it just feels a bit empty and could go with some like some particles or like a dust texture on lighten just to add some more elements to it, especially for like foreground effects. Secondly, unless that is a game image or something, I don't think the topaz was necessary... Also the lighting could've been put onto the C4Ds more to make it more interesting. The C4Ds themselves feel a bit flat. Nice concept though! Just needs some minor tweaking. 3411graphscollab.png This one needs quite a bit of work, but I can see where you were going. Firstly, there are parts that are way too sharp, and that C4D directly to his left is too blurry / the smudging over it makes it feel really low quality. Lastly, the colour scheme is way too purple and almost monotonous. Could use some changes so the blacks are not quite as black, and there are more yellow tones in there. Really it is just how the colours blend together which doesn't work, because they don't really blend. There is too much contrast. Gradient maps will help blend them in. Cool stuff, but yeah, few tweaks for all of them really. |
I won't really go in-depth today (night time o'er here), but my piece of advise to you would be to try and use c4ds more. You tend to rely heavily on fractals. I can see that you've tried using c4ds in some of your recent works but...I think you need to try harder. They don't really add much to the tags you've done. You have to practice more and get the hang of using them. Going for textures won't hurt either. Textures are easier to work with many a times. But yeah, depends on what kind of tag/work you are going for, really. So yeah, for now, my advise to you would be to try using c4ds and textures a little more. In order to make the effects more...effective. XD;
I'll try to elaborate tomorrow. Will try my best to, surely. If I get time. :x |
I've changed in styles a few more times, and done a few extra things.
Typographys. 1.http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/075/9/d/democracy_by_keonifx-d3bt4if.png -Robert Byrne 2.http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/077/5/d/inner_demons_by_keonifx-d3bwnap.png 3.http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/086/7/2/manson__by_keonifx-d3clceg.png Gift For Mute on GFXF - Light Barrier. http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/077/3/e/gift_for_mute___light_barrier_by_keonifx-d3bybbk.png Ichigo Tag http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/4894/31311vfxchain.png First Vector: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/076/e/e/first_vector_by_keonifx-d3bvqgo.png Original Image: http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/9462/91201703.jpg Let's Go. http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/075/0/5/let__s_go_by_keonifx-d3br1u6.png Set me Aflame. http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/075/f/d/set_me_aflame_by_keonifx-d3br41l.png Tech Warrior. http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/082/3/f/tech_soldier__by_keonifx-d3cbyea.png Black Rock Shooter. http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/086/6/9/brs_by_keonifx-d3cn6xg.png I'ma post everything I made this month soon on a tag wall of sorts. |
love your smudge tags, those have a lot of depth in 'em man, typography is also pretty sweet.
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Dood! They're amazing. I love them all. Kudos buddy!
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I was having insane thoughts when I made this... I was even thinking about how I would commit suicide, but don't worry, it was just a strange reaction from something I'd written down earlier(yea I know... it still sounds crazy to you).
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/091/4/5/save_me__by_keonifx-d3d03mk.png |
Wow, nice artwork. My favorite ones are 3,4,5 and 6. I've seen a lot of good art, but you sir, top my list.
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http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/095/b/5/who_needs_actions__by_keonifx-d3dbf6j.png Tried using textures.... I know the splatters make it pretty messy, but it got mostly what I wanted.... Though I did kinda over do it...
The quote's from a Plan B song... |
It does seem like you've overdone that last LP of yours. Maybe you ought to try not being so heavy on the splatter in the text, and a little more adding to the background, which seems to be lacking in any sort. I think what you've done to the text is nice, but you've made it to that point where it's the fine line of looking really good, and being unreadable, which is something you never really want with text in a graphic.
I'll rate one other as well. Black Rock Shooter~ I see that you've been using a lot of blue in your tags, and for this, it doesn't seem all that overpowering, which is probably a good thing. I like those effects surrounding the girl as well, which is different in my eyes. One thing that I find a little iffy is that it seems a little too monotone, which kinda kills it. I know Blue is meant to be the primary focus of the Black Rock Shooter, but it's just blue, and there really isn't a variation of colours which I can see. Another thing that bothers me, but isn't really a huge problem, just a peeve, is that there lots of negative space caused by the effects surrounding her, so it looks very empty. Maybe you could fix that up by overlapping those effects on top of each other using different shades to get more space filled up. One more thing. Anything that stretches the page, like the LP above, would be wise to put into spoiler tags. |
Update:
On another forum (gfxforums) I have been accepted into a group called "Element". They are a resourcing group, so expect to see some resources shared. =] thank you. |
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