The PokéCommunity Forums

The PokéCommunity Forums (https://www.pokecommunity.com/index.php)
-   Art Studio (https://www.pokecommunity.com/forumdisplay.php?f=21)
-   -   Keoni's, My Work (https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=225415)

keoni April 6th, 2011 3:48 PM

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/095/b/5/who_needs_actions__by_keonifx-d3dbf6j.png Tried using textures.... I know the splatters make it pretty messy, but it got mostly what I wanted.... Though I did kinda over do it...

The quote's from a Plan B song...

Alternative April 6th, 2011 9:11 PM

It does seem like you've overdone that last LP of yours. Maybe you ought to try not being so heavy on the splatter in the text, and a little more adding to the background, which seems to be lacking in any sort. I think what you've done to the text is nice, but you've made it to that point where it's the fine line of looking really good, and being unreadable, which is something you never really want with text in a graphic.

I'll rate one other as well.

Black Rock Shooter~

I see that you've been using a lot of blue in your tags, and for this, it doesn't seem all that overpowering, which is probably a good thing. I like those effects surrounding the girl as well, which is different in my eyes. One thing that I find a little iffy is that it seems a little too monotone, which kinda kills it. I know Blue is meant to be the primary focus of the Black Rock Shooter, but it's just blue, and there really isn't a variation of colours which I can see. Another thing that bothers me, but isn't really a huge problem, just a peeve, is that there lots of negative space caused by the effects surrounding her, so it looks very empty. Maybe you could fix that up by overlapping those effects on top of each other using different shades to get more space filled up.

One more thing. Anything that stretches the page, like the LP above, would be wise to put into spoiler tags.

keoni April 22nd, 2011 7:55 PM

Update:

On another forum (gfxforums) I have been accepted into a group called "Element". They are a resourcing group, so expect to see some resources shared. =] thank you.


All times are GMT -8. The time now is 9:36 PM.


Like our Facebook Page Follow us on Twitter © 2002 - 2018 The PokéCommunity™, pokecommunity.com.
Pokémon characters and images belong to The Pokémon Company International and Nintendo. This website is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Nintendo, Creatures, GAMEFREAK, The Pokémon Company or The Pokémon Company International. We just love Pokémon.
All forum styles, their images (unless noted otherwise) and site designs are © 2002 - 2016 The PokéCommunity / PokéCommunity.com.
PokéCommunity™ is a trademark of The PokéCommunity. All rights reserved. Sponsor advertisements do not imply our endorsement of that product or service. User generated content remains the property of its creator.

Acknowledgements
Use of PokéCommunity Assets
vB Optimise by DragonByte Technologies Ltd © 2023.