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Pokémon Neon [ALPHA 1 RELEASED]
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:t385:POKéMON NEON:t385: Alpha 1 Released! Hello everyone! I am proud to present my first Fire Red hack! http://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/2RandomStudios/Untitled-1.png STORY Spoiler:
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this hack looks like it could be ok so i 'll give you some tips
instead of having ... which makes big dots you can do [.] which will make it small 3 dots. |
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This is actually pretty decent for a first time hack. :3
care to elaborate on the "Darkness Pokémon"? |
This looks good and all, but why the heck are there 9 starters. o.o
Anyways, the combined PC and mart doesn't really look good. And the map on the 11th screenshot is a bit bare. Good luck! (b'-')b |
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Hm... I do understand this is your first ROM Hack that you've made, however I do actually recommend that you should insert a different tileset, so that way... it won't look so much like Pokémon FireRed. :P
Over all, I'd say the name of this hack sounds pretty interesting, and it's nice to see that you've got a title screen inserted. But yeah... it really does need a different tileset, that way... it won't make the ROM Hack look very generic. ;) Oh yeah, and also... hasn't there been a ROM Hack called Pokémon Neon before? Anyways, good luck on your ROM Hack! (b'-') |
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Triple Post merged.
2RandomStudios, please don't post consecutively unless you have significant updates on the hack. Try to make use of the Multi-Quote function, when replying to multiple people. |
Looks ok so far. Maybe its just me but the story is a bit short and so nintendo like, you could try to improve this. Oh and.. the mixed pokecenter/market looks a bit.. weird. Anyway, I'll try the upcoming beta, keep it up dude.
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6,8,11 (Screens) I dont really like
6-Straight 8-Not sure 11-Baren, and shold try something else.. This is a pretty good hack, and I wish you luck sinces its #1 :P And the pc/mart. Try purple? Red+Blue=Purple :D Also you can just a have a one door building (still purple) sign: I guess "pm"? And you can still map both of them in one. Juist bc its too. dosent mean you have to do 2 doors o.o |
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The hack looks OK IMO. Although a few more screenshots showing various other features, such as the IV Pokemon in play would have been good :D
Anyway, I wish you good luck with this hack and I look very forward to playing it. |
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Well, I played the alpha and it was actually pretty good, but I've got a suggestion:
Instead of using shiny sprites for darkness pokemon, you should probably replace other sprites. It'll give you more freedom in editing darkness pokemon, you could add different moves, or stats, to make them harder. also, what would happen if you accidentally ran into a wild shiny pokemon? :/ |
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Thanks for the feedback! |
POLL Should the Poképorium be Purple or Teal? Purple http://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/2RandomStudios/PokemonNeonPoll1.png Teal http://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/2RandomStudios/PokemonNeonPoll2.png Please respond by quoting this message! |
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-pokecenter's color- and blue -pokemarts color- and since the pokecenter and mart are combined like in b/w it's a good choice for purple. |
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I like the overall appearance of the hack. It's just that in some of the screenshots, (precisely, the PokeCenter one) seems too blank.
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I'll also have trees next to it so it doesnt look so bare! Thanks for all your opinions! |
To my point of view, the hack looks good so far. You'll keep improving while the hack progresses. Good luck! And, I agree with others, Teal looks good. :>
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Its update time!
Update Updating powers... ACTIVATE!
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cool hopefully i will be able to finish this alpha as fast as the first one!
Also,good luck on the hack dude i love it! |
Hmm can i post the darkness sprites here instead of in a pm?
And it won't let me play what emulator do you use? |
try visual boy with the most recent version
it should work |
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I use VBA-M. It supports pretty much every game. Make sure the save type is set to Flash 128k so you don't get the 1-m sub circuit-board error. |
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Well after all those updates, I hope you are looking forward to alpha 2! |
Well guys, alpha 2 is around the corner. It will end after the Berry Woods (north from Paprika City), but berry woods won't be the only addition. I have been spending some time revamping most of the mapping from alpha 1 because I had improved my mapping skills since then. I have also inserted a new hero sprite, and new hero OW's (they are just re-colors, but they still look nice). The main delay however, has been due to some annoying debugging, and a heck of a lot of brainstorming to make the story as interesting as possible. Thanks everyone for you patience, and see you at Alpha 2!
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Guess who's back......is t the guy who fails at makng maps......that is correct it is Light!
Glad to see the hack s making progress now remember me still beta tester. |
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I'm just wondering how far the game is so far and how soon the next update is (approximate date). I just don't want to play a game through the first town just to get to the end and have the next update come out when I do
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Well guys sorry for a lack of updates recently, the hack has gone on a short hiatus until I can get more time to work on it. Don't worry though because I'm definitely not quiting on it!
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This hack has very interesting screens it caught my attention =D
As since Jirachi is in titlescreen does it mean that Jirachi is going to be main legendary? |
is electivire and magmortar in this game?? that would be epic!!
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Yes, Jirachi is the main legendary, and magmortar and electrive might be in it. If you quote my last post though,
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Well guys, I'm finally picking the hack up again! It's been a while but I finally have some more time to spend on it so I hope to be releasing some updates soon!
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http://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/2RandomStudios/Untitled-1.pnghttp://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/2RandomStudios/PokemonNeon.png Okay, first question: Which titlescreen is the right one? I'm guessing the first is the one you want to insert, as that Pokémon logo looks like it's raising the palette way over 256, and the second is the one you have inserted. Anyway, that text's gradient doesn't help at all, is hard to read (especially that text in the bottom-left corner of the first screen (I actually can't read it)). It's also been resized improperly in the first screen which looks really tacky - as does the Jirachi, which not only looks bad stretched, but has large white spaces which should be transparent. As for the second screen, well, it's essentially a recolour of the FR titlescreen with some tacky text and a Jirachi sprite thrown in there. I'd probably get a spriter to sprite a larger version of Jirachi for your titlescreen.http://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/2RandomStudios/PokemonNeon2.png http://i1126.photobucket.com/albums/l615/2RandomStudios/PokemonNeon3.png Isn't it "Punch-Out!!!"? Anyway, average screens. It doesn't really tell me much about the hack though, does it? Except the fact that the carpet in the second screen is just empty. I doubted it was possible to have too much empty space in a house map, but you've managed to. Bring back that table!Okay, there're two tile errors at the mountain part going to the right - it's missing two "tops". I'm not really a fan of making the player walk on that mountain tile, or walk down a one-tile-wide path, so this screen doesn't really help I'm afraid. Try to always give the player at the very least two tiles to walk, though generally spaces should be about four tiles wide. Like I've said, I'd rather have only three choices, and then have all the others available throughout the hack through other means of getting them (sidequests, game corner, trades, etc.). Okay, it seems a bit odd receiving your Pokédex in a cave, but I'm not sure how you want your hack to go so I guess it's near the beginning of the game anyway. The maps not too great though, there are one-tile-wide paths again and it could do with a bit more detail (craters, sand, water, different rocks, rock smash/strentgh boulders (they don't always need a purpose), etc.). Text colour would be nice - it's a male talking, so make it blue coloured text. The entrance doesn't seem to connect to the cave properly though that could be fixed with three simple block edits, though you probably should have noticed that before screenshotting it. The turquoise palette could be mellowed a little. This looks more like a Pokécenter to me. You should probably stick with the Mart's tiles and add in the staircase. Also, I don't really think I'd be a happy clerk having to be squashed in like that. Give it more space (though, again, this would look better in the Mart's tiles) and put only one of those statues - and move it out of the way. I don't know if this is the first dialogue that the characters say, but if not it'd probably nice to put something like "GRUNT: I didn't realize we had visitors!" (yeah, that "that" isn't really needed). The map looks pretty mundane and is symmetrical, which is a big no-no when mapping. Try and make it a bit more curvy etc., and more like an island. Even Game Freak maps aren't this square. cool story bro. Anyway, good luck with this hack. |
This looks like a great hack, I will play it just for Chuggaaconroy, but you should incorporate SSoHPKC as a trainer with his team (TrollDrill included!).
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...Sorry, SphericalIce, but it's actually not spelled preceeding. The spelling he used, preceding, is correct. The word you were thinking of is proceeding, which is not appropriate here. This would be why the forum applies the little red squiggly spell check line thing to the word 'preceeding' and not to 'preceding'.
If you're going to go to the effort of attempting to point out grammar and spelling errors in someone else's work, please make sure what you are pointing out is actually incorrect, okay? ;) |
Well, it sounds nice, but I don't get the point of telling us when you update if you don't put up any screenshots of it. Even a bitmap of the OW sprites your inserting would be nice. As for the images you do have up, I can't really tell much besides where you get stuff like running shoes. Also Ace Trainer grunts for some reason.
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I'm not the greatest at making titlescreens, however in my opinion, I think sticking to pretty much the basics of FireRed's titlescreen (ie the position of the Press Start, the top and bottom bars (not the really thick black ones), the location of the Pokémon: FireRed Version text, etc.) looks best, and more professional. But whatever, do what you like. :D Quote:
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XD. Nicely played, sir. Nicely played.
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Wow!Good luck whit all!Very interiesing game!But that means you can catch Jirachi in this game?But Jirachi isnt from Hoenn?The main character are exploring Kanto region not Hoenn...
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lol chuggaconroy?! I can't wait to see that :)
Good job with the hack :) |
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Okay, I will give you some thoughts about the hack.
The story is good but it's pretty short for hack, so if you make it more long it will be more interesting to play. And the text on the titlescreen is bad and not going well but the rest of the screenshot is good like the background just wanna say about the colors of the text.About the feature, it's so good but it looks pretty overused by other hackers, I always seen that on other hacks, so I think add more feature that the other hack doesn't have. |
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Well guys this hack is pretty much dead. Because of this, I will be giving out all the project files and such to someone who wants to continue the project for me. Please PM me to request this.
Thank you |
Well then, no sense in keeping this open.
Closed |
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