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Unknown writing story
I'm going to write this story,their this girl thats nine years old and going to a pokemon school.She's studying unknown writing in one of her classes.One day team galactic broke into the school the girl is going to.They break into the class she's in,and she "just happened" to be in the class studying unknown writing,and they pick a kid (her) to kidnap,the night before they had broke into the teachers house,secretly and looked at the grades to see who was the best at it,and she had had a nametag on her desk.They kidnap her,blindfold her and take her to the secreat hide out there group is staying at.They show her a carving in a cave wall of the unknown writing and tell her to translate.Thats about as far as I got.Heres what I need help with
1:I need a name for the girl.he story 2:I need idea's for the story such as what the writing might say things that happen which boss I should use where the cave should be at one other thing I have is one Idea for what the writing might say I belive a war will come with in the next 500 years between pokemon and and man I have many resorces,but you will have to find and translate my other unknown writings to know them I have a hidden one in a grave yard at snow point city but not a normal one.It will say where the next one is and more.Heres your riddle/clue: Where do u make berry (I know I spelt that wrong) something you can't show your face?This place has so many coverings little snow can get threw. Trikal year 1500 P.S. My name is Trikal and I am a girl they want to find the other writings so that they can learn about the war to win it,but turn against the other humans to,she hates that she has to help them. |
Before we get far, I'm curious. Why do they kidnap a nine-year-old girl who's only studying the Unown alphabet instead of the teacher or an expert at Unown carvings? I mean, I know you're trying to create a story where you can relate to the main character, but it just seems weird that Team Galactic would rely on the skills of a child who's just learning the alphabet instead of an adult who's been studying it for years.
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However, looking over the idea you've got already (the Pokémon vs. human war), that might work with a bit more planning. For example, how do they know that this particular year is the year that the war will happen? What leads up to the war? Are there minor fights that get worse between Pokémon and people? How does Team Galactic attempt to turn the war against the humans, and how do they manage to get Pokémon on their side? Basically speaking, whenever you try to come up with a plot, try to ask yourself a lot of questions about absolutely everything you come up with for an idea. That'll help you build more around what you've got until you eventually produce something you can work with. Hope that helps a little! |
thanks,well they figure that there will be less fuss if its only a 9 year old girl,and they find out all experts are heavly gaurded,so they deside to go with the less gaurded.
As for the pokemon/man war,when they have some of the same questions.They understand more every time they find a new writing.I just want some idea's,cause when I read other people's idea's it gives me diffrent idea's.I'm not very good at writing or coming up with full idea's and this is just face one:getting the plot found oeut.Trikal doesn't know who's ganna read the writings but was supposingly hoping that somebody on the good side would read it.Well trikal noticed a war long ago that was only stopped by Ho-oh,after a year of fighting,and yes minnor fights will be done.They may or may not get pokemon on there side its still at the first stage like I said. |
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With an adult, you might actually find it's a little bit easier, depending on who the adult is. Most professors don't really have body guards or security hovering around them at all times, and in the Pokémon canon, it's not unusual to have an adult nutcase Pokémon expert living by himself, away from other people. (*walks away, whistling at the fangirl reference*) So, with some experts in that world, it might not be all that unusual if people don't hear from them for a long time, and sometimes, it doesn't take much to ambush them, take out their defenses, and drag them off. (This goes especially if Team Galactic plans things out well, which they usually do.) As for the part about not being able to come up with ideas that well, I wouldn't underestimate yourself that much. It looks like you've got the root of one that could work (if you can figure out a really good reason for why they decided to use a nine-year-old) already. (Though I have to ask, if they don't know about the war before deciphering the writing, why are they looking at it?) Considering that, I'd say go with the "ask yourself a lot of questions" strategy. The way you fix any weakness you have is just by facing it head-on. In this case, that would mean not only realizing what you can improve on (creativity) but also doing creative exercises whenever you can. That way, you can build up your skills and eventually get to the point where you can think of ways to come up with ideas when you're in the third chapter of your story. Know what I'm saying? |
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Also, as to what boss to use, you might want to consider a few things first: 1. The personality that the boss has compared to how you want them to treat the girl/hostage 2. Which boss themselves would have the most or have the probability of having the most understanding of the language themselves. That is, so that they will know if their hostage tries to lie to them and say that it means something completely different. Also, by "unknown" do you mean the pokemon? Because if so, it spelled "unown" |
If you would like a hint as to which boss you could use, look up the characters of Team Galactic. Off the top of my head, there's Mars, Jupiter, and Saturn. Check out their personalities and maybe one of them is the kind to steal small children. This topic... :(
Also, think about Team Galactic's goals, and how the powers of the Unown will help them achieve those goals. I mean, the Unown have the power of creating alternate "realities". How could that help Team Galactic's plans? Isn't there a cave where you can catch the Unown in Sinnoh? It's been a long time since I've looked at a map of Sinnoh, but I swear there are ruins there where you can catch the Unown. Makes sense to have the cave there, since you want to keep the story in Sinnoh (with Snowpoint City and Team Galactic). |
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well valentine I think that I might have something for u.I'm posting a part of my first chapter to help cause my computer messed up and it erased my original reply.
(place:The unown cave in the sinnoh) Please note that if the boss (Mars) seems out of its cause I don't know much about her (or anybody from team galactic) and please tell me if I make her to diffrent) Hey boss I think I found something!Said one girl team galactic grunt. The red haired team galactic boss Mars walked near the girl grunt.Perfect,unown writing,how are we supost to use this?Said Mars. Well maybe we could kidnap someone who knows how to read unown writing?Sudjusted the girl grunt.Quiet I'm thanking!Said Mars.We can kidnap someone who knows how to read unown writing!Your brilliant!Said one of the boy grunts.The girl grunt looked at him.But....Lewis!What Mranda?Mranda looked at Lewis then Mars who was looking at the unown writing.Ugg never mind!One more girl grunt stepped out of the darkness.How are we supost to find out who knows itr?She asked.Well I know theres a pokemon school over in veilstone city (I know there isn't just pretend like there is) that teaches unknown writing,all the big people who know it are probley heavaly gaurded.Said Lewis.Maybe we should cause some cayaus for good measure,u know,to get the police busy.Said Mranda.Perfect.Said Mars. In veilstone city: 9 year old Aleka was getting on her laptop chatting with her friends Maryann and Oliver on her laptop threw video chat.I found something strange ingraved in the ground today.I took a picture of it.It looks like unown writing.Aleka your the best at it,why don't u try to crack the code.Said Maryann.Okay.Replyed Aleka,show me the picture.Maryann held up a picture that showed a bunch of unown ingraved in a sidewalk.Thats unown writing all right it looks like it says.....beware,the time to fight will be a hard time.U must get as much pokemon on your side before time runs out.Said Aleka.I wonder what that means,said Oliver.Then Marryann said "The time fight,aleka r u sure ur reading that right right?Positive.Said Aleka,Well its 5 minuites till 12 I better get to bed. On Monday: Team Galactic was invading City hall,grabing anything and everything that might be valubale.Well part of team galactic.Another part was waiting quietly in the nearby woods,waiting and listening.Then when they saw 30 police motercycles pass by,they snuck there way to the path from Aleka's house to the school.Then Aleka,Oliver,and Maryann walked down the path.Did u hear thoes police sirens?Asked Maryann.Who didn't hear them?.Replyed Aleka.All of the suden sleeping powder filled the path.Once the kids fell to the ground,team galactic jumped out from the tops of trees and grabed them,than ran towards the woods. Last night: (place:Unown writing teachers house) Team galactic picked the lock on the door and snuck into the teachers house.They found a desk in a spare room made to look like a office.they looked threw a binder which had been marked Student grades,flipped to a random page,and found a strait A student and left the house,and relocked the door.One have them had stole the picture of Aleka. Present time: When team galactic had found the mean place,a air craft desised as tree tops landed and all the team galactic grunts (the ones from city hall went there unnoticed) got on the aircraft and they flew away back to a secret hideout.You better have plesent news.Said Mars when they got off the ship,not seeing the kids.Then three grunts carelessly draged the kids out of the air craft and laid them on the floor.We succeded,said one girl grunt,and managed to get some loot from city hall,as well as the kids.Kids?!Excalmed Mars,I told u to get me one kid,the one kid,the strait A student!Well there were to kids with her,and we were afraid they might know how to affect our plans.Said Lewis.Well,I guess we'll keep the two of the hostage as well,use them to make the girl talk. I hope that helped if not than tell me what I left out.Thanks!:) I hope you enjoyed the story! |
Uhm, not to be rude, that is kind of an eyesore. In between paragraphs double tap enter, because their is no indent function on PC.
Also, don't forget to use quotes around dialog. Another thing is that you have to make a new line if another person talks. The first word in someone's line of speech is always capitalized. Quote:
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Never ever use "text talk" in your story. Don't shorten words like "through" to "threw" because they denote two different things. Don't use "U" in place of "you" or "R" in place of "are/our". The only time this is acceptable is when they are actually texting or using some for communication other than talking. |
It also still doesn't quite resolve the problem about why Galactic went for a nine-year-old instead of an adult expert. ._. I mean, Galactic broke into the teacher's house, so it doesn't seem like they have any problems getting around any defenses that teacher might have had. Considering this, it might've been easier just to kidnap the teacher himself. Sure, they'd be dealing with the authorities at that point, but then again, the police would probably launch an even bigger hunt for them if they kidnapped a child. (I mean, it's a defenseless child, so they'd probably use everything they've got to get that kid back. With an adult, they'll devote time and energy, sure, but they'll still assume that the teacher can fight back.)
Other than that, I have to agree with Narcissus Secret. Not to offend you, but it's just really difficult to get through your work because there's so many errors. We do have the Beta Thread for beta readers, but since it's so active, it might be a good idea to just ask anyone who writes well to see if they'll take you on as a client and help you get your work cleaned up. Once you do that, it'll be easier to figure out what you're trying to say and imagine what's going on. As for Mars, she wasn't that bad, but it's hard to really tell if she's in-character because you don't really have her doing much that would separate her from a generic villain. If you're ever a little unsure about how to use some of the canon characters, though, don't be afraid to look things up. Maybe even rewatch some gameplay or even Galactic-related episodes. It's always a good idea to brush up a little, if only to get yourself a little more confident about writing canon characters. Also... Quote:
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For that matter, don't be afraid to let the narration tell some of the story. A lot of your fic is heavily reliant on what people are saying to each other, so you don't have much action or backstory. (One line of action does not sufficient narration make.) Try to remember that you'll want to describe enough so that a reader can go through your work and visualize what's going on -- as in, you'll want to describe the slightest hand gesture, how characters are sitting, what they might be hearing, that sort of thing. On top of that, narration can also let you give the reader facts that you might not be able to get across via the dialogue. (For example, you could describe the school this way -- what it's for and any other important things to know about it, namely.) As for the second quote, it just points out a plot hole. How did a bunch of Galactic members who were stirring up trouble in the city hall in broad daylight (assuming this from the fact that nine-year-olds are still walking home) get back to the aircraft unnoticed? Be careful and think through what's going on in your story with as much attention to detail as possible. Do not just sit down and write a story in five minutes on the board. Take your time and think about all of the details you're adding to the story. I'm not sure if that helps, but hopefully, it should point you in the right direction. Basically, all you need to take away from this post is that you should work a little bit slower, think things through carefully, and check your work. Yeah, sounds a lot like homework, but you'll definitely produce better writing if you go through a process like this. |
Sorry guys I would have replied sooner but...I sorta forgot about pc,I had some person problems to deal with.Okay......When you read this keep in mind I don't mean ANY of this in a bad way.I think I'll start with Narcissus Secret.I am still having problems with grammer and stuff so the a/an stuff is included in that.Keep in mind I am 11 years old and still have trouble with things like that.The only person I know who could proof read it for me and stuff is a little lazy but I'll try to get her to do it for me.I usully try to remember to capatlize but it must have slipped my mind a few times.I've ALWAYS had trouble rembering "'s so I'm sorry please bear with me.I don't mean to use "text talk" but its a force of habit.By the way the girl's name is Aleka,like u said,thank god its spelled right.I don't usuly change through to threw,did I this time?I think that covers everything on your post,if not tell me in ur next,if not tell me in your next and I'll cover it all.Now to JX Valentine's post.I've tried every way to explain why they chose a 9 year old girl instide of someone else.I decided when they broke into the teacher's house,the teacher herself wasn't there.Nobody was.If you read my reply to Narciss I explained about the proof reading.I'll look at thoes links in a bit,I'm sure they'll help.I didn't know about the () marks so thank you.I'll just metion the school then,I just was trying to escape people saying that,but I guess thats something a writer has to take,people questioning them.I'll try to have more action and backstory in it,I'm a writer in training,not a good one at that so its hard to remember.Also about the kiddnaping,if what I said doen't help,do you have any idea's on how that could happen?I know it seems like I'm letting you write the story there,I just need some ideas.I can
visualize what I write just fine but I guess thats because I'm the one with the idea in the first place. All the police were worried about the ones still inside,I forgot to mention that sorry.They don't notice the ones escaping and such,and some are in discises.I think that covers everything,if not please do what I asked Narcissus to do.Thanks for the info and everything :) and I hope your not getting mad at me or anything.If you are sorry. Don't worry readers,not that there seems to be but one or two,the next part of my story will soon be on its way. |
If you want someone to help you go over your story, I'd be willing to help you a bit. Or you could ask for a beta reader in the thread we have here, and hopefully someone will help you out.
Don't worry about being a "writer in training". We all were (and are!), and we're willing to help you out. So don't be afraid to ask questions. As for the grammar rules, take your time writing. When you've finished writing the chapter, read it over a few times to spot the mistakes that you might have made. After that, your beta reader can help you out with whatever mistakes you might have made. Quick note, but you should hit the space bar after every your punctuation marks (full stops, question marks, things of that nature). I had a problem reading your post because your sentences were beginning to run together. |
Okay thanks Astinus I'll run them by you then.I'm working on getting it out but I have so many ideas for the next part it is hard to deside what happens next. I'll try to work on the spacebar thing when I get my next story out.:)
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Sorry everybody I' having trouble staying conected on the story,I'm getting dicouraged.Heres a sneak peak,I need something new posted I feel like.
*MIley wakes up* Oliver?Maryann?Said Aleka. *big black flash* Maybe I should trick them,probley would work out well.Thought Miley. *big black flash* What do we do,about this war?What about our old project?Said Mars. *big black flash* Where is this place supost to be?*quotes from letters* Said Mars to Aleka* I don't know,I didn't study clues,just ruins.Replied Miley. I think your lieing.Said Lewis. I think she's not.Said Mranda. Defending the enemy are you?Asked Lewis. No,I just think shes a 9 year old,probley doesn't know too much about that stuff.Replied Mranda. Mranda and Lewis start fighting. Quiet!I think I heard foot steps!Said Mars quietly/yellingly. What do you guys think? |
I'm going to give quick advice right now that's not too focused on grammar. (After going over grammar for an hour at work, I'm kind of done for the night.)
First, what's a "big black flash"? I thought that it was part of the story, like a big black flash happened around the characters. But after reading over the part again, it's almost as if the big black flash is a screen wipe like in movies. You're missing quotation marks. Quotation marks go around dialogue. So this Quote:
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I don't want to go through everything I could for this part. The reason is that you are improving, and taking time to go through things slow instead of expecting you to fix everything at once would definitely make you feel discouraged. So take your time writing, keep asking question, keep practicing. Because as I said, you are getting better. |
Dang it I did for get the " marks again!The flashes,the last one is around the charecters,the others are just like you'd see on cemercials,Idk why I added them.I have word pad,but my computer doesn't copy and paste well,its a slow computer some times,and it like freezes for two minuites when I copy and paste.I think I should use diaglog tags,I knew there was something else to put where I put "quietly/yellingly" so thanks.If you've been doing grammer for that long,I don't blame you.I'll get my next version up soon,I just don't want them to close it,like has happened alot.
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Asty's covered grammar pretty well, but all I have to say is switch to Microsoft Word, Open Office, something better than Wordpad. That way, it's easier to do things like spell check if you need to.
You also really, really need to put spaces between your punctuation marks. Most marks, like the period and comma, actually need spaces after them to separate one word from another. (Yes, you are technically merging words together if you don't put a space between the mark and the next word.) I'd hate to be blunt, but I know this is something that the author has to do themselves. Wordpad has a lot of quirks when it comes to copying and pasting, but removing spaces between words isn't one of them. Additionally, again, I'd hate to be blunt, but it's extremely difficult for me to read writing that isn't spaced properly. That includes responses. With that said... Quote:
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With kidnapping a nine-year-old, they're kidnapping someone who isn't even an expert in the subject. Sure, she's the highest scoring student, but that doesn't mean she knows everything. Considering she's nine, this could mean she's good at easier exercises. (For example, the math you'd teach to a nine-year-old is usually simpler than the math a nineteen-year-old would learn.) So, she might be able to translate things like "My name is Aleka," but Team Galactic has no way of knowing whether or not she can translate long, complicated passages. They have better chances with the teacher or someone who's actually more of an expert in the field (like a college professor or an ancient linguist). Quote:
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With that being said, Team Galactic is extremely organized when it comes to their evil plans and whatnot. They would have had things planned carefully so that they can grab what they need with as little fuss and commotion as possible. While they might use distractions, they probably wouldn't want people to connect disturbances with them. So, they'd probably have someone watching the teacher, first off, to scout out important information so they don't end up breaking into her home whenever she's not there. Second, they'd send only enough people to get her -- no more and no less. There probably wouldn't need to be a distraction, depending on how it's done. (She's only one person, after all. They could very well send a handful of people armed to the teeth with Pokémon and have just that do the job. Alternatively, also remember that they're a rather high-tech and violent organization, so perhaps a solution is there.) Keep asking yourself questions about your characters and plotlines, and you should be able to add more and more to your plot. If you can ask yourself a question about the plot itself (like "Why would they need a huge distraction?"), chances are, you've got a plot hole. Quote:
As for your next part... I'm not sure what you mean by the black flashes either. I've never seen any commercials with something like that, so I'm still in the dark, no pun intended. Point is, be very careful. If something is too vague, this will just confuse the reader, not prompt them to figure it out themselves. Quote:
Also, remember that once you choose a tense (past tense, present, whatever), you'll want to stick with that same tense. For example, you use past tense in some sentences (like when you say "Mars said"), but in others, you use present (like when you say "Mranda and Lewis start fighting"). It's neater and makes the timeline clearer to the reader if you just remember to read over your work and stick to one tense or the other. And yes, even if you think you're terrible at grammar, you've got to read over your work yourself before you even send it to your beta reader. The reason why is because you can fix some of the simpler mistakes right off the bat. For example, if you knew that you're supposed to add quotation marks, reading over your work yourself (a few hours after you finish writing a chapter) can help you fix things like that. Quote:
Overall, here's a tip: put your work on pause and read a lot. Pick up a bunch of books, a bunch of fics, anything you can get your hands on. Look at how they do things, how they describe actions and treat characters. Someone else's writing can be a valuable learning tool for you, and it seems like you're the kind of person who would find it easier if you had a few good examples to help you figure things out. |
Well,I forgot the spaces again sorry.I'm also sorry about the age being brought up,I was frustrainted. I believe Astinus is my proof reader now,he seems to do a good job.My "lazy reader" will still get it, cause shes my couson, she'll be able to help also.I'm trying to break that habit of using "text talk" its sometime hard though. Team Galactic did not think about going back okay! It there boss's orders just to get it done as soon as possible! I know I forgot to mention a few things in the story, I'm re-looking over the story. Now,in the next part of the story,I promise you should find a explation for the whole "kiddnaping a 9 year old girl" problem , which includes the expert problem and stuff. I'm going to try to do a lot of pokemon stuff today,where I can refresh my memory on things. Now ,the whole breaking into the house thing, it will be explaned in the new version, but they disabled the security alarm,the teacher doesn't have the best one. They had everything going on at city hall so they'd have no extra police around the school. Make sence now? The flashes, just forget them, exept the last one, which realy happens in the story, I can't tell you why, cause it would ruin the story, but you'll soon fine out why. It wasn't broad day light, it was getting darkish, they took the long way home, plus there path was kind of foresty. The new version will be much more detailed, so you'll understand better. I think I get what you mean. When I put "quietly/yellingly I ment it more like hissed. I do read alot, I don't have that many books availble, I wish I did, I try to read a lot. I'm not a big fan fic reader, just a big fan fic writer,but I'll try.I think I covered everything, and if I didn't told you I would have your awnsers in the fic, I'm positive I"ll get you some awnsers this time.I hope you continue to help me,and thanks for what you have done.
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As for city hall, sure, they're using that as a distraction, but the whole point was that the Team Galactic members who were at city hall probably wouldn't be able to escape because they'd be captured. This means Galactic would waste more resources and manpower to create a decoy while another group follows orders that weren't really backed up by a lot of planning. More than that, I can't imagine why they would expect police to be at the school itself, considering the fact that they struck the teacher's home instead. Besides, schools don't generally need a lot of actual police on campus unless they're a college campus or in a particularly bad neighborhood. So... the attack on city hall wouldn't probably be necessary. So, yeah. Basically, what I'm saying is a lot of the problem here hinges on the fact that Team Galactic didn't quite seem to plan things out all the way. They're using a lot of resources, but they made the basic mistake of striking when their target wasn't even in the location she should have been. This creates what's known as a plot hole, or a part of a story that seems to need a lot of explanation to a reader because it just doesn't really make that much sense. It does this because Team Galactic -- in the anime, games, and everything else -- would have planned things thoroughly enough to know when and where to strike in order to kidnap the teacher herself and not a nine-year-old substitute. Now, as I've said, there's just a lot of problems with kidnapping a nine-year-old. There's, for example, the fact that the police would be more concerned with finding her than with finding an adult. There's the fact that she just wouldn't know as much as an expert. She might even be harder to handle than an adult because she might be a little more unpredictable. If you can find a good reason for why she's your main character, you can have a nine-year-old main character. I just don't think she'd work as Team Galactic's target. (As in, if she was accidentally picked up or picked up for any other reason besides being Galactic's key translator, that's one thing, but I really don't think they would go out of their way to kidnap her to force her to serve as the key expert in their plans.) Quote:
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Okay,I'm ganna make sepret parts of them message, like your appered,where you understand what is what
The boss thought it was a good idea back then,he planned it out, but didn't see problem with it. If you remember right, the had some top secret stuff going on, so they had a lot of there memebers scouting other places. You haven't seen the whole plan of team galactic yet though, you'll understand when I get the next part out, which I believe should be either later today, or sometime tommarow. Okay, I'll explain more detailed about the teacher now,the best I can without giving the whole thing away. The teacher didn't plan to be away ,and team galactic thought she would be there, but when she disappered, they didn't want to put off the whole opperation, so they did it a diffrent way, you'll know more in the next part of my story. Okay,fine,you win,the ones at city hall get captured.They have back up people though,so there not too worried about that. Sorry,I was getting confused in my own story,so many idea's in my head.They wanted the police destacted,so when they went to the road the kids were at,there was no chance the police could be doing there daily rounds around there,cause in real life police go around town patroling. I can't give any better awnser on why they attacked city hall,they did it where the police would be too distracted trying to keep everything and body there safe intid of patroling,they didn't want police popping up when they were kidnapping. They thought they planned things threwly enogh,but things didn't turn out exactly how they planned. The teacher wasn't home,they had planned to kidnap a student and kid,the kid helping and being like a brivery,they would do something to the kid if the teacher didn't do as planned,so they have the kid try to translate while they plan what to do about not having someone more taught on the subject of unown writing.I would have made her older,but I need her to be younger than the age of a pokemon trainer,where she can't fight back,theres more to it than that,but I'm not giving the whole story yet. The sun was starting to set,there road is foresty,so I put them up in the trees,so it would be harder to see them. Sorry I acedently hit post earlyer than I ment to,I am cerrently reading the "Anne of" serise,and I don't like reading to books at once,I don't want to get what happened in what book mixed up. |
A good name could be Alice, Or perhaps Suzy.
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I actuly finished the "Anne of" book I was on,and started the next.I am still working on names,I'm consetering Julie,but Alice or Suzy might work too.Did you find anything in what I have put down that still needed to be awnsered that I didn't say would be awnsered in the story Astinus?Btw love the Mijimuru pics.I have to put my idea's on email,cause the computer I have to use I'm not allowed to save anything on,don't ask why
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On the aspect of a name, how about Fiona. Just a suggestion cous! I do like the idea, and I'll help in anyway I can, even if I am a bit lazy. I'm not exactly sure how to help you right now, but I'll keep my brain on high alert, and I'll be here if you need me!
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Okay,I guess your figered out who I ment when I said I had a lazy helper,lol,I like that name,I'll probley use that,and I have quite a big of time on my hands so I think I'll finish the new version tonight.Fiona would be good,cause I was looking for a fancy name.Thanks!
Update! Sorry everybody,I was in the middle of writing the cave sceen,when my computer gliched and erased it all,so I'm sorry readers and helpers,but I'll have to delay it a little longer.Thanks for reading! |
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