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Hmm... Yeah, I see. Okay, I'll tweak it in the morning (it's 4 am lol)
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It looks so cute! <3 The design is perfect, and it's exactly what i meant. Like almost everyone said, i just think you could improve the eyes and some other parts a bit, but otherwise it's great. Also, i think the feathers could be just a bit lighter. |
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http://i51.*.com/307nbco.png Yes, it looks wierd. |
im submiting this
http://i799.photobucket.com/albums/yy272/flameking_2010/sfsfrs.png Name: Furnary Class: Burning Pokemon Type: Flying/Fire PokeDex: Furnary live in barren, rocky regions and never migrate, as in the past this has lead to the ignition of swamp gasses and the burning of dry plains. Description: A large fiery bird. (evolution of Kilnary) Concept/Sprite: Chesu/ |
I think you should light its wings on fire, to emphasize the fire typing.
Also, it would look cool. |
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The feet need to contrast with the body. Maybe make it yellow?
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It looks... Awesome!
And Kilnary's wings were on fire too, after all. |
The body looks a little odd to me. And the wings look kind of flat. Maybe use Pidgeotto as a reference?
I reworked Chicari a bit. Does it look better? http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn269/blackmoonflower/Chicari2copy.png |
Good, you used the shading tip. See what i mean? But now it looks like a robot :/. Work on the beak, its to fat, and the eyes seem to lack... Life.
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..The eyes look way better than before in my opinion. The whole sprite has improved nicely, but I think the only problem now is the wing on the right looks a bit jagged and detached. Are the wings suppose to function like arms and hands like Pidgeot or is it similar to Salamence's wings?
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@ Nimblethumbs: The beak was fashioned similar to that of Swablu's. And I used Yooteri as a reference for the eyes. I wasn't really sure how to attach wings to something made of clouds. The original concept description wasn't specific in that regard, but I did try to place them in a somewhat realistic manner (well, as realistic as you can get with a bird made of clouds. Also, I think I realized I suck at wings ._.'). I was assuming this was a bird that can just float and the wings are for show. That's what I envisioned, anyway. xoax will have to clear that part up for me. And I suppose that's why Scarf thinks the body looks funny, since I just made it look like one big cloud with only a (very) vague shape of a bird body. |
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I think it looks very good and balanced now, but i agree that the left wing looks like it wasn't angled properly. |
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Why does it feel like I'm making it worse.... >_>' |
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Well i changed the top and eyes color, looks cool to me. I pointed out what bothers me. the feet is ok I guess, i see nothing wrong now xD And the wing. it just looks off. |
xoax stated in the description that the eyes are supposed to be green.
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ok i made two versions of furnary. which one do you guys want?
v1:http://i799.photobucket.com/albums/yy272/flameking_2010/sfsfrs.png v2:http://i799.photobucket.com/albums/yy272/flameking_2010/funary.png |
Second one, but the wing alignment and angling is way off.
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You should also work on the shape of the body, and maybe alter the head since it's too simillar to the first stage. Give it some feature that makes it different e.g. Pidgey -> Pidgeotto gets a purple helmet thing. Or Spearow -> Fearow has a long beak and slender neck. Maybe make the head bigger and body smaller? Also work on way the wings are meant to be posed. So far the concept seems good, just work on it. ^^ |
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Shiny http://www.iaza.com/work/110129C/iaza15231989140300.png Name: Potripus Class: Octopus Pokemon Type: Water PokeDex: Potripus secrete an adhesive substance to anchor themselves inside of pottery, allowing them to both ambush prey and hide from predators. Description: A small octopus hiding in a takotsubo (Japanese octopus-catching pot) with a few arms protruding from the pot's mouth, and an eye looking out through a cracked hole. Concept/Sprite: Chesu/ which looks better? I like the name Croktapus better, as it's in a pot, and crock pots are used to cook etc... [EDIT]Dang didn't see scarf's version...I'll just work on the evolved form, the list in the 1st post really needs to be updated...[/edit] [DOUBLE EDIT] http://www.iaza.com/work/110129C/iaza19739410397600.png |
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So I've got a smaller hummingbird (I'm calling it 'Kolibud') to add as well as some changes to other sprites. Hopefully they're good changes. The red dinosaur now has racing stripes - everyone knows stripes make things go faster - and a tail like a spoiler. The flamingo has some awful bandages or something on its legs now because I couldn't come up with anything better. D: http://i54.*.com/mtv8ee.png http://i56.*.com/2q2iv5y.png http://i55.*.com/flaqfa.png |
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Wow, that's some great stuff! I especially like the evolution, looks really intimidating! ^.^ @Scarf Love Kolibud. The Dino also looks great. As for the flamingo, I like it, but I don't like the bandages, it looks somewhat - weird. xD |
Wow, the octupuses/octopi/octopeople look real awesome.
I like kolibud, and [strike]dino-dude[/strike] the dino looks swell, but the bandages on flamincula look akward. Like it's actually covering the legs itself, giving flamincula a sense of 'the inability to balance'. If you want bandages, maybe you could wrap mummy bandages on the shin, all the way to the ankle. |
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http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff112/Taimato/tanlare.png (Obviously WIP) I haven't done a lot of spriting before so I thought it might be best to get some opinions on what I have already, before going further. |
Hmm, looks good, except the teeth are off, and the bottom left corner of the mask is amgled wrong.
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changed the tentacle placement. I also think Octopot would be a better name for the first stage. |
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(I reuploaded it in Pokecommunity. For some resaons, imageshack somehow didn't work :O) Name: Furnary Class: Burning Pokemon Type: Flying/Fire PokeDex: Furnary live in barren, rocky regions and never migrate, as in the past this has lead to the ignition of swamp gasses and the burning of dry plains. Description: A large fiery bird. (evolution of Kilnary) Concept/Sprite: Chesu/ I wanna give it a try ;) It was a good practice as I never really drew birds :) Criticisms appreciated~ |
sorry i had already made furnary and it was kinda excepted we just need to work on it.
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Also, octopus don't have tentacles. :P |
It's got it in it's tentacle's grip, ready to slip on like a boxing glove.
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I kind of like Poke-A-Dialga's Furnary more. The wings and tail need some work, and it's a little chubby, but it's less plain. That's just my opinion.
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We could have a vote in which Furnary is more preferred like Scarf's Octopot and Metalflygon's.
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I noticed a suggestion list mentioned SnapDragons, and I know we arn't supposed to submit new Ideas atm but...
http://www.iaza.com/work/110131C/iaza19739449181900.gif a clever take on a snapdragon design puns on snap, dragon, plants, and the flower. |
For the furnary, i'd vote for poke_a_dialga, though it needs to be curved at the wings.
Also, I already did a tanlare, so mebbe we could vote me and dreamer? |
I knew my flamingo had problems. I don't have a new sprite for it, but I'm working on it.
If we're voting then I'll vote for metalflygon's octopus since it's already got an evolution that matches it in style and it looks more polished than mine. |
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Metalflygon's sprites could use a highlight or two, but that's not a problem. I'm putting my vote on Metalflygon's Octopot, although I do love the colours in Scarf's.
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I will when this time!
http://www.iaza.com/work/110201C/iaza19739485941800.gif backsprite both frame 1's are done, just icons and frame 2's left to do, and mabye OW's. Snapgon/Snaplegon Snapdragon Pokemon Grass/Dragon SD often hide in overgrown medows, alluring prey with Sweet Scent, it then snaps down on it's prey with it's powerful fangs, if the prey fights SD will strike the foe with thorns hidden in it's petals, any fleeing prey are captured with vines. The bark on it's mid-section is divided into scales, each capable of standing on edge, acting like a thorny armor. Abilities-Solar Power/Own Tempo, DW-Iron Thorns Attacks Biting attacks, needle/pin/thorn attacks, claw attacks, beam/pulse attacks, and many grass-status attacks. Quote:
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i no im no good at spriting... but can i credit someones artwork and convert it into a sprite?? For example my classmate did a drawing and i sprited it... I WILL NOT STEAL but only convert it into a sprite... full credit will be given to the "creator" ..... so... u see... can i do tht... i mean... can i get the permission? :(
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=82781 --> Source. Sprite http://i1117.photobucket.com/albums/k592/keshavkd/da-2.png yes i no its c**p.. but i tried... :( Plz make it better.. |
For now, I'm just tending to posts which have sprites that I'm accepting. Everything else won't be responded to, I'm afraid.
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Oh wow, I somehow hadn't seen Scarf's new sprites! :D
Also, anything made from the "basic ideas for Pokemon" list doesn't need to show me as co-creator, since I didn't actually come up with the concept for the Pokemon the spriter made, just a suggestion of what one could be based on. Snapgon is a great example; all I did was suggest using a snapdragon. I don't want to take credit for something I did absolutely no work on. ;) |
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shiny form up and fully operational captain! Next on Agenda, Pistol Shrimp, t's going to be a 2-stage evolution, water->water/fire, expect beta sprite up tonight for critique. |
I don't think you need to worry about shiny forms or backsprites... Not until we have enough ideas to start finalizing them, anyway.
What's the rationale for making the evolution water/fire? I'm not criticizing, just curious. |
the bubbles Pistol Shrimp shoot momentarily hit the temperature of the sun, that's the part I plan to run with in the design, as well as a lone-ranger style Shrimp.
Shrimp's 1st stage http://www.iaza.com/work/110202C/iaza19739414841600.gif Shreso (Peso/pedro and shrimp) Water Abilities-Technician/Sniper, DW-Adaptability Preso shoot high powered bubbles with excellent accuracy, usually found living in coral communities. It chooses not to live with others of it's species, and instead protects it's home from Pokemon that would do it harm. Whith 2 claws capable of shooting bubbles, the right claw is more powerful, but less accurate, the left claw has a sight, but trades power for accuracy. The Bandana is actually part of it's 1st segment, in evolution, it will become a poncho, and the evolution will be based on Poncho Vila! Evolves into http://www.iaza.com/work/110202C/iaza19739418513900.gif Shriperado Water/Fire Abilities-Flash Fire/Sniper, DW-Adaptability These ruthless pokemon shoot super-heated bubbles at weak or wounded pokemon for their own amusement, usually never with their own kind, they will occasionally team up with Gouybe's to attack coral communities. It adjusts the power of it's shots by widening it's pinsers before firering. It can also hold it's shot in to cause a massive explosion. The only pokemon brave enough to face this pokemon is Shreso. |
can i claim to do squidink and squiddle, or are they already taken?
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We're not really doing a claiming thing, at least not at the moment... You can make them if you want, but you might want to do it fairly quickly if possible.
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I just wanted to say the [left] and [right] are switched with Potripus and Kroctopus. ^^
<- this is left -> this is right :P This is for the first page, BTW. |
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And if you checked my post neither were accepted.
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??What??? And logi, yeah, well, it did say something about a boomerang... I snowballed from there =M=. |
I tried my hand at Permask; I haven't sprited in over a year, so it might not be perfect.
http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/9536/permask.png I added a tail because I thought it looked a bit plain without it. I also coloured it half blue-half green so it looks even more like a theatre mask. |
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Here's my edit, in my opinion, the name Perimask (Pronounced like: PAIR-RIM-ASK) sounds better than Permask. |
Well it's been incredibly long since I last sprited so for now I'll just leave a here if anyone want's to tackle it.
Name: Maitomb [Maye-tüm] Etymology: Maiden + Tomb (or Phantom) Species: Based off of an Iron Maiden; either meant to be an evolution of Cofagrigus or a split evolution of Yamask Class: Torturous Pokemon Type/s: Ghost/Steel Pokédex Entry: It is said that Maitomb have once captured souls of whoever stumbled across it's resting area. Some say that you can hear the faint screams of it's victims coming from it's interior. Ability/ies: Iron Thorns/ Mummy Description: I'll just leave this quick sketch-up I did, of course its suspected to change: http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/4264/ironmaidenfakemon.png There other on I had in mind was a Brazen Bull but I'll get that idea together and finalized before posting it. |
I was under the impression we were striving for Pokémon that aren't related to currently existing ones.
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Oh very sorry then. I guess I'll go on with the Brazen Bull and just table that for the moment. Again my apologies for the misunderstanding.
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i finished squidink, but i couldn't get the highlight on the head right..
http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg543/scaled.php?server=543&filename=squidink.png&res=gal edit: still need to fix it. heres the version w/ the bio-luminescence http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg703/scaled.php?server=703&filename=squidink.png&res=gal |
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hopefully not stepping on any toes, but I made an edit of my own to it...
http://www.iaza.com/work/110206C/iaza19739448845200.gif or http://www.iaza.com/work/110206C/iaza19739431760700.gif |
I like the first version, the highlights seem more even.
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Thanks for improving my sprite guys, it looks much better now.
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The first one without a doubt
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i like the second one better, its a more creative seperation than the first one's.
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EDIT: I was bothered by some parts of the outline on the sprites, so I went ahead and changed it: http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/2048/perimaskf.png http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9606/perimaskm.png |
i think i finally figured out what the mask is missing: two different expressions (=(
one side comedy, other side tragedy. also, i think it would probably highlight the "drama mask" look more if there are some accented features above the 'mouth' to look like cheeks. perhaps you can do something interesting like make the cheeks have gill-like grooves. |
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Shouldn't Tanlare and Perimask be somewhat related? Like Solrock/Lunatone or Nidoqueen/Nidoking? Since they both seem to be based off of theatre masks. Tanlare could be comedy and Perimask could be tragedy. idk, just stating my opinion. :nervous:
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oh i didn't even know about 'tanlare'.
but yeah, if Perimask (Perish + mask?) is tragedy, what is Tanlare? o.O |
Why would it need two different faces if it only has the aspect of 'perish'?
I think the outline was fine when I edited it, it looked quite smooth in my opinion. Plus the eyes look less anti-aliased now. :c.. |
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With the new style in Black and White, there is a ton of anti-aliasing I believe.
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from what i've seen myself, there are a lot of dark outlines and coarse edges, so i'd have to disagree on there being more anti-aliasing in BW.
besides, BW uses animation and generally anti-aliasing animated sprites is rather difficult to implement. |
It is in Pokémon's style where markings and such are anti-aliased to make it look smooth such as Electivire's body markings.
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A few pages back, I had a WIP tanlare.
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They're partner Pokemon, like Solrock and Lunatone or Plusle and Minun.
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is sprites still accepted here?
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I'm going to assume yes, sprites with ideas are accepted, just not the spriteless ideas.
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Anyways, i really like all of the sprites you made for my descriptions. Thank you all! ^^ |
Keep the 'dex alive!
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I hope this is sufficiently water/steel looking. I wasn't really thinking about the types as I was making this. Wait. Tails? Totally missed that. Oh, well. |
Yay! It's not dead! :D
It's cute. Maybe you could add additional highlighting to make it look more like a steel type? Or maybe some plating on the legs and head or something... And one more tail couldn't hurt. ;) |
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I give you LEPIPE :) LEPIPE Type: Grass Class: Panda Pkmn Pokedex info: It climbs trees and waits for yanma to fly by, it then hits them with its bamboo and climbs down to eat them. It uses its leaf to cling on to trees while it feasts. hope you like it :) change it if you want, i know it isnt great as im only a beginer with scratch... |
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I don't know about two tails though. That reminds me too much of Buizel. |
The concept actually predates D/P. :D
It's fine with one tail; the base form has two, and Pokemon is, naturally, all about changes in physiology. :D |
scarf, i really really like the sprite, but i feel that it needs some adjustments to the design to meet the typing and description. perhaps try making the legs less realistic and go for some flat, round shapes... in this instance, i would look at the deoxys forms and the various limbs as inspiration.
or hell, maybe even just leave the sprite as it is with a different typing. |
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leave the sprite, it sounds more like a real pokemon if it gains a steel type when it evolves such as the pokemon starters, they always start of as just water/fire/grass type and then as they evolve they gain a type, such as Charizerd is a fire/flying or venusaur is a Grass/poison
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It does look more steel-ish with those colors.
http://i51.*.com/2iut1ja.png>http://i52.*.com/15cng36.png But if retyping is an option I did originally make it with different colors: http://i54.*.com/2rohqpz.png Which could work with some other concept. But I think we can go with Nimblethumbs' colors. |
Nimblethumbs one looks cool, the yellow one looks more like cheecub? or whichever it was.
The evo should have some sort of steel plates :P |
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http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/2/21/Spr_5b_094.png Pay close attention to the shading on his body. http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/0/03/Spr_5b_348.png Quite a bit around the shading and outlines. http://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/c/c5/Spr_5b_512.png Plenty on the face, hands, body and shoulders. They can't do it all the time because the sprites still have a 15 colour limit, but I hope nobody here is strictly sticking to a limit that's down to outdated DS hardware. |
hey, i still sprite to GBA limits so back up son! lol
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