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Pokemon Master N December 16th, 2011 12:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Taposa (Post 6968091)
I hope there is like a meeting of that Pokémon and they find that they are brothers.....)

Maybe they find a shiny Riolu! Or they go into the Mystery Dungeon world! I would countinue on with the story now but my B'Day party starts soon.

Fenrir Reki December 17th, 2011 12:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Pokemon Master N (Post 6968626)
Maybe they find a shiny Riolu! Or they go into the Mystery Dungeon world! I would countinue on with the story now but my B'Day party starts soon.

Oh, happy (late) birthday! I would have posted yesterday, but I had to do something else.

Here is a christmas themed question for the club!
If you could have anything Lucario/Riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
I'm not sure, but it would probably be a life sized Lucario figure or plushie that I could place somewhere in my room. :)

olih December 17th, 2011 12:46 PM

Happy late birthday as well! ^_^;
If you could have anything Lucario/Riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
The Lucario movie (DVD) :3

Masterge77 December 17th, 2011 4:21 PM

If you could have anything Lucario/Riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?

A real life Lucario and/or Riolu, naturally, what else?

johnny18 December 17th, 2011 6:08 PM

Gender: I am a guy :P Activeness: as much as I can possibly be Pokemon Partner: Lucario Why: Lucario is my fav in 4th gen ever since I watch pokemon movie 8 "Lucario and the Mystery of Mew" Password: Wave-guiding Riolu

zevarius kerensky December 17th, 2011 10:07 PM

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If you could have anything Lucario/Riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
a real lucario, if not possable, a statue of 1 :3

ikaroschase December 18th, 2011 7:42 AM

gender: female
activeness: i'm socially awkward so i don't know how active i'll be :/ but i have been trying my best (:
pokemon partner: raiden the riolu <3 male. the third sprite please (:
why: great fan of the riolu-lucario duo ><
password: wave-guiding riolu

if you could have anything lucario/riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
plushies(: i love plushies >< preferably a riolu plushie. it sounds kind of dumb i know. ._.

Klave December 18th, 2011 8:32 AM

Gender: Male
Activeness: I'll try to be as active as I can; I have no friends here. D:
Pokemon partner: Lucario - 1st sprite please. :D
Why: Lucario and Riolu are awesome - I made a Lucario banner and I'll show it once I reach 15 posts. :D
Password: Wave-Guiding Riolu

If you could have anything Lucario/Riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
A Lucario or Riolu plush because they are so awesome. Either that or a keychain zipper charm whatever-they-are-called. :3

Fenrir Reki December 18th, 2011 2:07 PM

Klave, ikaroschase and johnny18, your applications have been accepted!

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6971031)

if you could have anything lucario/riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
plushies(: i love plushies >< preferably a riolu plushie. it sounds kind of dumb i know. ._.

Not really. Your not the only one who likes plushies. I have one Lucario plushie and three Riolu plushies. ;)

I never really thought of wanting a real life Lucario and Riolu for Christmas. I should have thought of that. xD

ikaroschase December 18th, 2011 5:14 PM

(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ riolu and lucario plushies. i begged my mom to get me one for christmas but she said its too childish (╥_╥)

Fenrir Reki December 18th, 2011 5:39 PM

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6971601)
(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ riolu and lucario plushies. i begged my mom to get me one for christmas but she said its too childish (╥_╥)

Aww. You should tell her to reconsider because nothing is too childish, especially if it's a Lucario or Riolu plushie! :D

Jarred0809 December 18th, 2011 8:10 PM

[SIZE="a"]I would want a real Lucario or aura powers.[/SIZE]

Pokemon Master N December 18th, 2011 10:33 PM

Thnks guys, but its actually not my B'day 'till the 21st!

Avishka December 19th, 2011 4:55 AM

If you could have anything Lucario/Riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
I would like a real lucario and/or Riolu

PokemonLady December 19th, 2011 7:43 AM

Gender: Are you a boy or a girl? GIRL

Activeness: How active will you be in this group? As much as I can

Pokemon Partner: Both

Password: Wave-guiding Riolu

Taposa December 19th, 2011 8:46 AM

Welcome Pokemon Lady!!!

If you could have anything Lucario/Riolu related for christmas, what would it be and why?
Definitely a real Riolu or a real Lucario to help me. If that was not possible,I will get an animated Riolu and Lucario Plushie or Robot!!! I want to have it but I want the Robot or Plushie have the same fur/hair as Riolu or Lucario.

Klave December 19th, 2011 9:48 AM

I would buy one, but it would be so embarassing if my brothers or sisters saw it. o.o//

Fenrir Reki December 19th, 2011 10:14 AM

Pokemon Lady, your application has been accepted. Welcome to the club!

Well, since no one else decided to write anything else on the story topic, i'll continue it:
(Just to refresh the story, it was restarted by Pokemon Master N, and the story is being told from the perspective of a Riolu who is the main character, Luca's pokemon. They recieved mysterious stones from Luca's father, Richard and are on a journey to find out the secret behind them. Their first adventure takes them to Regi Town, a mining town.)
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We arrived in Regi Town after a few hours of walking from our village. The town was a lot bigger than I expected! From the outside, it looks like a very small town with only a few houses, but once your actually inside, there is lots of activity going on everywhere!

"Wow! So this is Regi Town! It's a lot different from what I thought it would be!" Luca said

"Remember, we need to find more information about the shards we were given." I quickly replied.

"Yeah I know. Let's see..." Luca looked at a billboard that had the map of the town on it along with various markers showing the locations of various shops, attractions, and directions to people's houses. "We can try the museum first. Maybe someone there can help us."

Luca started walking in the direction of the museum and I followed directly behind him.

When we finally arrived at the museum, we went inside, and saw statues of giant pokemon and what looked like a skeleton of a large dinosaur pokemon.

"Hello. May I help you?" An Archeologist asked.

"Is there anyone here who can appraise artifacts? Like gems or stones." Luca answered.

"Well, we only look at fossils, but our head researcher might be able to help you with any kind of gem related appraisal." The Archeologist replied.

"Oh. All right then, is he available?" Luca asked.

"Well, he has a busy schedule today, so he is off doing errands and should be back later on. Why don't you come back later, unless you want to browse our museum?" The Archeologist answered.

"Okay. We will be back then. Come on Riolu." Luca said

We went outside, and sat outside the stairs to the museum.

"So, what are we going to do while waiting?" Luca asked me.

"Well, we could always just walk around the town and go sightseeing." I answered.

"We could do that but, this is a mining town, and a giant one too. There isn't exactly much we could do here but..." Luca's words were interrupted by a man screaming.

A miner came running down the road shouting, "We need help! One of our machines in the mines malfunctioned and it's not transporting any of the things we mined from inside the cave! We also lost contact with the workers inside, and we can't go too far in because a thick smoke is emitting from the cave!"

"That doesn't sound good, come on Riolu, let's see if we can help!" Luca said as he got up and started running towards the miner.

"Which way is the cave?" Luca quickly asked.

"Keep going forward and make a right, then a left and you should see some stairs that take you to the lower section of the town. Wait, your not going to go inside are you? Your crazy! You can't handle the situation down there!" The miner answered.

"Don't worry I can handle it. I'm an EX pokemon ranger." Luca replied as he ran to the mines.

I followed him near the entrance of the mines, and by the time we got there, there was a thick fog covering the whole bottom portion of the town.

"I don't remember this ever being here before... Something isn't right. That fog is too thick to see through. I can't even see the bottom of these stairs!" Luca said.

"We have to get in somehow!" I shouted.

Luca looked around, and saw a lantern in the corner. He picked it up and lit it.

"We can use this to try to see through the fog. This can help us in the mines too but since the fog is also in the mines, I don't know how effective that will be." Luca said.

"I'll just stick close to you Luca." I said as I looked up at the shining lantern.

"Let's hurry, we need to find out what's happening down there!" Luca replied.

We slowly walked down the steps and traveled closer to the entrance of the mines, and when we got there, the fog seemed even thicker than before. But we continued forward inside, where we soon found ourselves shrouded in darkness and in the mist.

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Now that I look back at the beginning of the story, I think I might have told it wrong. Was Luca supposed to be Riolu and Richard was it's owner? If I got the characters mixed up, and have been telling the story incorrectly, feel free to correct me, because I just confused myself.

Pokemon Master N December 20th, 2011 2:55 AM

That was great @OokamiReki. And Rickard was the mai character for the first story and Luca is the Riolus owner. Also, Riolu doesn't have a nickname, although when your writing feel free to give him one!

Avishka December 20th, 2011 4:09 AM

Welcome Pokemon Lady!!!
awesome story, OokamiReki.

johnny18 December 20th, 2011 9:16 AM

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Originally Posted by OokamiReki (Post 6972510)
Pokemon Lady, your application has been accepted. Welcome to the club!

Well, since no one else decided to write anything else on the story topic, i'll continue it:
(Just to refresh the story, it was restarted by Pokemon Master N, and the story is being told from the perspective of a Riolu who is the main character, Luca's pokemon. They recieved mysterious stones from Luca's father, Richard and are on a journey to find out the secret behind them. Their first adventure takes them to Regi Town, a mining town.)
-------------
We arrived in Regi Town after a few hours of walking from our village. The town was a lot bigger than I expected! From the outside, it looks like a very small town with only a few houses, but once your actually inside, there is lots of activity going on everywhere!

"Wow! So this is Regi Town! It's a lot different from what I thought it would be!" Luca said

"Remember, we need to find more information about the shards we were given." I quickly replied.

"Yeah I know. Let's see..." Luca looked at a billboard that had the map of the town on it along with various markers showing the locations of various shops, attractions, and directions to people's houses. "We can try the museum first. Maybe someone there can help us."

Luca started walking in the direction of the museum and I followed directly behind him.

When we finally arrived at the museum, we went inside, and saw statues of giant pokemon and what looked like a skeleton of a large dinosaur pokemon.

"Hello. May I help you?" An Archeologist asked.

"Is there anyone here who can appraise artifacts? Like gems or stones." Luca answered.

"Well, we only look at fossils, but our head researcher might be able to help you with any kind of gem related appraisal." The Archeologist replied.

"Oh. All right then, is he available?" Luca asked.

"Well, he has a busy schedule today, so he is off doing errands and should be back later on. Why don't you come back later, unless you want to browse our museum?" The Archeologist answered.

"Okay. We will be back then. Come on Riolu." Luca said

We went outside, and sat outside the stairs to the museum.

"So, what are we going to do while waiting?" Luca asked me.

"Well, we could always just walk around the town and go sightseeing." I answered.

"We could do that but, this is a mining town, and a giant one too. There isn't exactly much we could do here but..." Luca's words were interrupted by a man screaming.

A miner came running down the road shouting, "We need help! One of our machines in the mines malfunctioned and it's not transporting any of the things we mined from inside the cave! We also lost contact with the workers inside, and we can't go too far in because a thick smoke is emitting from the cave!"

"That doesn't sound good, come on Riolu, let's see if we can help!" Luca said as he got up and started running towards the miner.

"Which way is the cave?" Luca quickly asked.

"Keep going forward and make a right, then a left and you should see some stairs that take you to the lower section of the town. Wait, your not going to go inside are you? Your crazy! You can't handle the situation down there!" The miner answered.

"Don't worry I can handle it. I'm an EX pokemon ranger." Luca replied as he ran to the mines.

I followed him near the entrance of the mines, and by the time we got there, there was a thick fog covering the whole bottom portion of the town.

"I don't remember this ever being here before... Something isn't right. That fog is too thick to see through. I can't even see the bottom of these stairs!" Luca said.

"We have to get in somehow!" I shouted.

Luca looked around, and saw a lantern in the corner. He picked it up and lit it.

"We can use this to try to see through the fog. This can help us in the mines too but since the fog is also in the mines, I don't know how effective that will be." Luca said.

"I'll just stick close to you Luca." I said as I looked up at the shining lantern.

"Let's hurry, we need to find out what's happening down there!" Luca replied.

We slowly walked down the steps and traveled closer to the entrance of the mines, and when we got there, the fog seemed even thicker than before. But we continued forward inside, where we soon found ourselves shrouded in darkness and in the mist.

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Now that I look back at the beginning of the story, I think I might have told it wrong. Was Luca supposed to be Riolu and Richard was it's owner? If I got the characters mixed up, and have been telling the story incorrectly, feel free to correct me, because I just confused myself.

I wish I can write a story like this.......but I am not too good at writing :P

Fenrir Reki December 20th, 2011 10:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Pokemon Master N (Post 6973618)
That was great @OokamiReki. And Rickard was the mai character for the first story and Luca is the Riolus owner. Also, Riolu doesn't have a nickname, although when your writing feel free to give him one!

Oh all right then. It's good to know that I did not get the characters mixed up and I actually didn't confuse myself. :P

Thanks to everyone who likes the story so far! Don't forget that even if you are not good at writing stories, or writing in general, but you still want to contribute, you can. Just because your not good at something, it doesn't mean you can't try to do it, and if you want to contribute to the story, then go ahead!

Time for a Riolu trivia question! Don't worry, they are always easy:
What is Riolu's base and max stats for stamina in the
Pokéathlon?

zevarius kerensky December 20th, 2011 12:20 PM

base is 2, max is 5 (@ the trivia question)

ikaroschase December 20th, 2011 5:34 PM

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Originally Posted by OokamiReki (Post 6974068)
Time for a Riolu trivia question! Don't worry, they are always easy:
What is Riolu's base and max stats for stamina in the Pokéathlon?

base stamina is 2, max is 3. i think :\

Pokemon Master N December 20th, 2011 6:57 PM

I think that the base is 2, max is 5.

Fenrir Reki December 20th, 2011 7:01 PM

2/3 is the correct stats for Riolu's base and max stamina in its Pokeathlon stat. Congrats to ikaroschase to getting it correct! ;)

ikaroschase December 21st, 2011 7:36 AM

picture post!

http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/450ja4e1zc/riolu3.png
-fanart- awww ;A;

Masterge77 December 21st, 2011 7:54 AM

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6975631)

That's just aborable, he looks so sad...

Fenrir Reki December 21st, 2011 10:37 AM

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6975631)

I feel sorry for him! I agree that's adorable, but why would you draw something so sad? D:

zevarius kerensky December 21st, 2011 12:02 PM

so kwaii! i wish i culd cuddle w/ him 2 make him happier, hes rly cute

Pokemon Master N December 21st, 2011 1:00 PM

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6975631)

Hmm... could I hve perrmission to use that picture in the story?

ikaroschase December 21st, 2011 5:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Pokemon Master N (Post 6976151)
Hmm... could I hve perrmission to use that picture in the story?

this picture isn't mine, but i left credits there (: i linked the origin to the words fanart. i'm sure you could use it if you left credits somewhere ^^

Pokemon Master N December 21st, 2011 11:03 PM

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6976609)
this picture isn't mine, but i left credits there (: i linked the origin to the words fanart. i'm sure you could use it if you left credits somewhere ^^

Thanks - and don't worry, when I close the story (or part 2) their will be credits.

Avishka December 22nd, 2011 1:44 AM

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6975631)

that pic is so kawaii ^^ , he looks so sad.....

Pokemon Master N December 23rd, 2011 9:36 PM

C'mon guys, get active again! I don't want this clan to die. :(

Fenrir Reki December 24th, 2011 12:31 AM

Well just because we are not posting for a day or two, it does not necessarily mean that the club is inactive or dead. It's the holidays, and everyone is spending time with their family and friends, and i'm sure people would not want to go on especially during Christmas since they have better things to do. That's partially my reasons anyways for not posting anything since a few days ago at least. By the way, i'll continue the story later when i'm not tired. No one else contributed to the story yet, and it has only been me so far, but I don't really care much anyways, although it would be nice if others at least contributed something to the story if they want to write something. I know lots of people wanted to write another story and they have their chance to anytime.

johnny18 December 24th, 2011 11:25 AM

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Originally Posted by ikaroschase (Post 6975631)

XD it is so adorable........x.x
I normally do not like shiny Riolu a lot but you make me love it now :)

ikaroschase December 24th, 2011 7:55 PM

merry christmas people! ^^ let's spread the christmas spirit (:

http://k002.kiwi6.com/hotlink/486hs787cb/lucario.png

miltankRancher December 25th, 2011 5:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Pokemon Master N (Post 6976151)
Hmm... could I hve perrmission to use that picture in the story?

O my god. This pic of Riolu certainly is cute! I love the golden coloration, and teh fact that he is crying! Wait, why did you make him cry?

I want to cuddle him to cheer him up.

15israellai December 26th, 2011 2:52 AM

Of course we should cheer him up. It's Christmas!
A late Merry Christmas to all of you!

Pokemon Master N December 26th, 2011 3:16 AM

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Originally Posted by miltankRancher (Post 6982240)
O my god. This pic of Riolu certainly is cute! I love the golden coloration, and teh fact that he is crying! Wait, why did you make him cry?

I want to cuddle him to cheer him up.

I might have a dramitic ending planned... Corrupted Arceus killes Luca...

ikaroschase December 26th, 2011 4:12 AM

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Originally Posted by Pokemon Master N (Post 6982837)
I might have a dramitic ending planned... Corrupted Arceus killes Luca...

noooooooooooooooo ;A;
please don't let that be true ;A;

johnny18 December 26th, 2011 8:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Pokemon Master N (Post 6982837)
I might have a dramitic ending planned... Corrupted Arceus killes Luca...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO but it does make Lucario a hero XD

Pokemon Master N December 26th, 2011 2:10 PM

I'm not going to give another hint but Arceus might also destroy something even closer to him than Luca...

Fenrir Reki December 26th, 2011 2:21 PM

lol whatever you do, try not to end the story too early. There are still people who want to contribute. ;)

Pokemon Master N December 26th, 2011 11:14 PM

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Originally Posted by OokamiReki (Post 6983413)
lol whatever you do, try not to end the story too early. There are still people who want to contribute. ;)

Definantly! Expect this to be going on 'till late Jan/early Feb!

Rio448 December 27th, 2011 4:57 AM

Sorry for being so inactive, didn't really have a lot of time for PC because of christmas ^^; I hope everyone had a wonderfull christmas though =)

PokemonLady December 27th, 2011 10:44 AM

So, whats gonna be the new/current topic now?

olih December 27th, 2011 10:25 PM

Gah DX Sorry I haven't been adding to the story; I was planning to, but never really got around to it. So here, I finally wrote some~

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"Riolu! Riolu! Where are you!" Luca shouted, then coughed as the haze thickened. It pricked at his eyes, and he rubbed them, blinked, and squinted. The dim, vague circle of light provided by the lantern didn't help much, and he crouched lower to the ground when he felt his head brush against the ceiling. "Sure is narrow in here..."

"It is." Riolu fought his way through the darkness, feeling with his mind's psychic abilities around him, and laid a comforting paw on Luca's leg.

"Riolu!"

"Don't worry, I wouldn't let myself get lost." Sparing a smile, even though he knew Luca couldn't see it, Riolu stepped ahead cautiously. "Be careful. There are several rocks in the way."

"What do you—" His foot jerked backwards, and the sickening feeling of weightlessness hit Luca as he toppled forward, into the dirt.

"Are you okay?"

"Yeah." Grimacing, Luca got back up, rubbing his chin where it had hit the ground. "I can see barely anything."

"Let me guide you." Walking out ahead of him, Riolu observed the tunnels of the mines closely, seeing the picture in his mind.

"What do you see?"

"There is a fork in the road, which way should we go?"

"I'm not sure."

"Maybe we should have asked that man for more information before we went rushing into this."

"Maybe we should have..." Luca said ruefully.

Shaking his head, Riolu advanced along the path, Luca following behind him. "We could... No, never mind."

"What?"

"Never mind."

Feeling the prickle of annoyance at not being able to satisfy his curiosity, Luca stopped and crossed his arms, lantern dangling from his finger. "What is it?"

"No need to be so impatient," Riolu sighed. "I was only going to suggest that we split up, I take one of the paths and you take the other, but I realized—"

"That wouldn't be smart."

"That was what I was going to say. It would be impractical. You wouldn't be able to find your way so easily in this dark, and if something attacks either of us we would be in much danger."

"We're still in danger here," Luca pointed out.

"No need to remind me. Besides, it was you who wanted to rush in here in the first place."

"Are you saying you wouldn't have wanted to save these trapped miners?"

"Who said they were trapped?"

"That guy told me—"

"He only said they lost communication—"

"That still means they're in danger, so we should—"

"Look. Listen," Riolu said, crossing his arms and trying to keep the anger out of his voice.

"What?"

Sighing, he said, "You should have thought about this before—"

"Oh, so now I'm the one to blame!"

"I never said that, it's just—"

"We don't only have to find out the meaning of these shards—!"

"—careless—"

"—have to protect people too—"

"Oh, because it's part of your ranger duties—"

"I'm not a ranger anymore!"

"Exactly!"

"Look, why are we arguing?"

At this, the tumultuous raising of their voices suddenly crashed down into quietness, and they shut up, the only sound their loud and angry breathing. Riolu slowly turned around to face Luca.

"Why?"

"I... don't know," Luca admitted.

"We're supposed to be friends, friends hold strong together."

"And though arguments make us stronger..."

"It is, in the end, friendship that holds us together," Riolu completed, holding out his paw. Crouching down, Luca clasped it firmly, and cracked a grin.

"Awesome that you can still remember it."

"But of course. You and I were the strongest ranger team around, not only in battles, but in soul. I wouldn't forget the ranger chant for anything."

"It's been a long time, though."

"We're still together here, aren't we?" Riolu smiled as well. "Friends again?"

"Friends, and may that argument be behind us."

Starting to walk along again, Luca remarked, "It's cold."

"Unusually so."

"Yeah. I'd have thought it'd be warmer, considering it's farther down in the earth."

Realizing this, Riolu took a closer look at the mine tunnel they were now walking along in. Haven chosen the right-hand path at the junction earlier, they had noticed that the tunnel gradually sloped down. Because of this the temperature should have been increasing, but instead...

And then the Onix burst from the ground.

Pokemon Master N December 27th, 2011 10:56 PM

That is good, really, really good. But remember, your meant to be telling the story from the Riolus point of view!

olih December 28th, 2011 11:40 AM

Ah, thanks ^_^ And sorry 'bout that; I'm just used to writing these sorts of things in third person. I'll write in first from now on :)

Pokemon Master N December 28th, 2011 10:35 PM

Thanks, your peice was written just before I was about to writ mine untill I saw yours! I was amazed at how good it was! :D

olih December 29th, 2011 9:57 AM

You could still write your piece though :D And thanks so much ^_^ I like writing, and this is really fun so far~

Masterge77 December 31st, 2011 7:09 AM

I really hope our love of Lucario continues into the next year!

miltankRancher December 31st, 2011 7:26 AM

happy new year my co-guardians! May the aura be with us.

Pokemon Master N December 31st, 2011 1:59 PM

Lol, may the aura be with us in the grave year of 2012

Fenrir Reki December 31st, 2011 3:51 PM

I hope everyone has a happy New Year! May this club last a very long time, and I have some interesting events planned for the club in 2012!

Also, I apologize for my absence, I had to do lots of family related things since it was Christmas and what not, but i'm back again.

I was trying to post more about the story, and to my surprise I ended up spending 30+ minutes on writing only to hit post and have my modem die... and all of the things I wrote was gone. I'll have to rewrite it now, but that won't be too hard considering I remember what I write. If it sounds a little strange, it's because it is not as exact as it was yesterday when I wrote it and I tried to make it as close as possible to the original one. I also just woke up at the time of this post so i'm not really thinking clearly. :sleeping:

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The Onix roared, and slowly approached us. It's eyes were red, and it started to attack Luca, but it missed him.

"Luca run! I'll try to distract it, i'll meet up with you later!" I shouted.


Luca ran forward, and I stayed behind to make sure that Luca was able to escape. The Onix then tried to attack me, but I avoided it and retaliated with an Aura Sphere, only to have Onix dodge it. The Aura Sphere hit the side of the cave, and a few rocks fell on the ground and almost blocked the path.


"Darn! I can't just wildly shoot Aura Spheres everywhere! The Onix will just dodge it and they will hit the sides of the cave and block our only way out! I can't just attack it directly either... Let's see." I said to myself as I closed my eyes and used my Aura to examine my surroundings.


I saw Luca run into a giant chamber that processed ore and in the middle of the room on the ceiling, was a giant stalagmite.


"There! I'll use that!" I said as I turned around and started running.


The Onix then started to chase me, and attack. I managed to dodge it's attacks, but I had to contact Luca quickly and tell him the plan.


"Luca. The Onix is chasing me now, and I have a plan that can knock it out. In the room you are currently in, is a stalagmite on the ceiling. I am going to use an Aura Sphere on it so it drops on the Onix."
I telepathically said to Luca.

"I'll help you with your plan, it's too dangerous to do it alone! Lure it to the center of the room and i'll act as a decoy."
Luca telepathically replied to me.

I then knew what I had to do, and as soon as I arrived in the ore processing room, I jumped down and hid behind a mining cart.


"Riolu! I'll signal you when to use your Aura Sphere!" Luca shouted.


Luca then ran to the middle of the room and then Onix rushed out of the corridor that I was in and landed on the ground in front of Luca. The plan seemed to work, and the Onix was going after Luca. Luca then turned around, signaled me, and that was my cue to hit the stalagmite. I used Aura Sphere on the stalagmite, and it started to crumble, and it fell.


"Luca watch out!" I shouted, trying to run up to Luca.


Luckily, Luca managed to jump away in time, and he was not injured by the stalagmite. However, the Onix was unaware and was hit in the head by it, and it collapsed on the ground.


"Good job Riolu!" Luca said, trying to catch his breath.


We looked at the now defeated Onix, and as we did, I wondered why this room had no fog in it. So I looked around and saw that there were actually vents with fans that were ventilating the room on the ceiling. The Onix then got up, and I went in front of Luca.


"Stay back Luca!" I shouted as I watched Onix get up.


"My head... What have I been doing that made my head hurt so much?" The Onix said to itself.


"Wait... You're not trying to chase after us or hurt us?" Luca asked.


"Chase after you or hurt you? Why would I ever want to do that?" The Onix said.


"Well, you were chasing after us only a few minutes ago..." I replied.


"My apologies. I do not know what was I was doing, my memory is foggy at the moment. May I ask, what a human and their pokemon is doing in this tunnel? Are you here to help with the mining?" Onix asked.


"No, we are not here for that. We are here to investigate the strange fog that has been emitting from this mine, and we heard reports of strange activity going on here." Luca answered.


"I'm sorry, I cannot help you right now. I don't even know where I am or how I got here. But if you are going to go deeper into the cave, I can guide you because I know these caves well." Onix said.


"That would be of great help to us. Thanks." Luca replied.


Onix walked forward and went down the slope into another corridor.


"Come on now, let's not waste any time. I don't feel like staying here forever!" Onix shouted.


We followed behind him, and I heard Luca speaking to me.


"This is getting strange. Keep your guard up Riolu. I remember his eyes were red, but he seems normal now. Maybe he was possessed, I don't know."
Luca telepathically said to me.

The deeper we got into the cave, the thicker the fog got, so we knew we headed in the right direction. Little did we know what really took place in this cave.

miltankRancher December 31st, 2011 7:12 PM

the story is looking good but you made some few minor errors though. It is Onix and not Onyx. (but there is a real life Onyx stone, where Onix' name is patterned after, so honest mistake there). Yup yup.

Fenrir Reki December 31st, 2011 11:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by miltankRancher (Post 6991291)
the story is looking good but you made some few minor errors though. It is Onux and not Onyx. (but there is a real life Onyx stone, where Onix' name is patterned after, so honest mistake there). Yup yup.

Hah, like I said, I wrote it when I just woke up, and I can never think clearly when I do so there was going to be a couple of errors. I also didn't go over it to make sure there was no spelling errors but oh well. Everyone makes mistakes, and i'm glad you like it so far! :D

Where I live, it is close to New Years! Just 50 more minutes at the time of this post!

EDIT: I have corrected the story and fixed "Onux" wherever it was necessary. If I missed one, tell me so I can fix it. ;)

Avishka December 31st, 2011 11:22 PM

the story is good!!
Happy New Year Everyone!!! :)

Fenrir Reki January 1st, 2012 12:54 AM

Happy (late) New Years everyone!

I was going to post exactly at 12, but I was too busy celebrating that I realized 50 minutes passed by...

miltankRancher January 1st, 2012 1:29 AM

sorr for my mistake there, but I meant Onix, not Onux. Sorry about that. LOL. really?

olih January 1st, 2012 10:47 AM

Yeah, it's Onix, actually ^_^; And happy new year everybody!

Fenrir Reki January 1st, 2012 2:49 PM

So my corrections were wrong? Oh great... Time to fix it again...

EDIT: I fixed it, hopefully now I won't have to go edit it a third time.

Here is a question for the club:
How would you want to start your New Years off with your Lucario/Riolu partner? (Assuming everyone lived in a world of Pokemon)
I would want to start off the New Years with my Lucario and Riolu by going out on an adventure. I think it would be fun and an interesting experience. I probably would not want to battle anyone unless I absolutely had to, but if one of my friends wanted to have a battle, then I guess I would not mind a friendly battle.

Pokemon Master N January 1st, 2012 4:54 PM

Set out in the new year with my riolu with one goal in mind, become the best trainer in the world!

zevarius kerensky January 1st, 2012 5:03 PM

Quote:

How would you want to start your New Years off with your Lucario/Riolu partner? (Assuming everyone lived in a world of Pokemon)
by havin fun ^_^ playin our new games, celebrating, rock out 2 music, eat noms, party more, pass out XD

but honestly, play games and rock out 2 music

miltankRancher January 1st, 2012 6:55 PM

Explode some fireworks! Wahoo!

Fenrir Reki January 1st, 2012 7:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by miltankRancher (Post 6992855)
Explode some fireworks! Wahoo!

Don't go hurting yourself in the process. :P

11wildy January 2nd, 2012 1:38 AM

Gender: Male
Activeness: As active as I can ;D
Pokemon Partner: Riolu, named Fate. Gender female.
Why: Well it seems only logical to join since Riolu is my all time favorite pokemon. It has a special place in my heart. <3
Password: Wave-guiding Riolu

olih January 2nd, 2012 1:12 PM

How would you want to start your New Years off with your Lucario/Riolu partner? (Assuming everyone lived in a world of Pokemon.)

Going around, going outside more, and pretty much doing a bunch of fun stuff~

Fenrir Reki January 2nd, 2012 1:33 PM

11wildy, your application has been accepted. Welcome to the club!

ikaroschase January 3rd, 2012 6:41 AM

i'm sorry i can't help much because i'm no good in writing stories ;A;
the most i can do is, oh well, *virtual hug* and pictures! :P\

http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/05g0ngy93m/39.png

11wildy January 3rd, 2012 11:53 AM

Thanks for accepting my application! And nice picture :o

Jarred0809 January 3rd, 2012 4:51 PM

How would you want to start your New Years off with your Lucario/Riolu partner? (Assuming everyone lived in a world of Pokemon.)

I would enter a tournament, and if I won I would have a huge New Year's party.

Tails05 January 3rd, 2012 7:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by OokamiReki (Post 6992606)
So my corrections were wrong? Oh great... Time to fix it again...

EDIT: I fixed it, hopefully now I won't have to go edit it a third time.

Here is a question for the club:
How would you want to start your New Years off with your Lucario/Riolu partner? (Assuming everyone lived in a world of Pokemon)
I would want to start off the New Years with my Lucario and Riolu by going out on an adventure. I think it would be fun and an interesting experience. I probably would not want to battle anyone unless I absolutely had to, but if one of my friends wanted to have a battle, then I guess I would not mind a friendly battle.

I would like to go out and have fun with my Lucario, maybe on a small adventure but noting too huge :D

Sorry I haven't been very active here, I'll try to post more!

Fenrir Reki January 3rd, 2012 8:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tails05 (Post 6995546)
I would like to go out and have fun with my Lucario, maybe on a small adventure but noting too huge :D

Sorry I haven't been very active here, I'll try to post more!

No worries. It's not like i'm tracking people down and figuring out whether they are actually active or not anyways. :P

johnny18 January 5th, 2012 10:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by olih (Post 6994012)
How would you want to start your New Years off with your Lucario/Riolu partner? (Assuming everyone lived in a world of Pokemon.)

I would go with Lucario to an empty field and tell it to use Aura Sphere aiming at the sky and consider it to be fireworks ;)

PocketWatch January 6th, 2012 7:36 PM

Gender: Female
Activeness: as active as possible with my school schedule
Pokemon Partner: http://media.pldh.net/pokemon/gen4/dp_action/448.png
Why: I have always been a fan of Lucario and even developed a character from one, as seen in my Avi. :)
Password: Wave-guiding Riolu

Fenrir Reki January 6th, 2012 10:06 PM

PocketWatch, your application has been accepted. Welcome to the club!
That is an interesting character in your avatar by the way. I think it looks nice. ;)

Avishka January 7th, 2012 3:03 AM

welcome to the club, PocketWatch!!

PocketWatch January 7th, 2012 9:07 AM

Thank you very much! The image I had earlier was done by a friend, the current image I did last night. Her name is Vira, I could go into detail about her but Im sure it would bore you guys haha ^^

Fenrir Reki January 7th, 2012 1:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PocketWatch (Post 7000149)
Thank you very much! The image I had earlier was done by a friend, the current image I did last night. Her name is Vira, I could go into detail about her but Im sure it would bore you guys haha ^^

You could explain in detail if you want, I don't mind, and i'm sure the rest of the club doesn't either, so go ahead. :D

Pokemon Master N January 8th, 2012 2:25 AM

Hey @OokamiReki, change my Lucario to:
http://img.pokemondb.net/sprites/black-white/shiny/lucario.png

Its name will be: Sprlucario
Its got alot of history and if youve been on Neoseeker before for at least 5 weeks all will be revealed ;)

PokemonLady January 8th, 2012 6:38 AM

Whats the new current topic going to be now?

Fenrir Reki January 8th, 2012 10:47 AM

@ Pokemon Master N
I updated your sprite. I never go on Neoseeker, so I wouldn't know.

@ PokemonLady
The last topic was "
How would you want to start your New Years off with your Lucario/Riolu partner? (Assuming everyone lived in a world of Pokemon)". I have not decided on a new topic yet, but i'll get to it.

On another note, i'm thinking of adding a "Current Topics" list to the main page, that way everyone can easily see what the topics are without browsing through the pages looking for them. Should I?

PocketWatch January 9th, 2012 2:52 AM

I think that would be a lovely idea :)

Right then, for all those intrested Ill do a quick version of her story:

Vira was born into captivity as a normal looking Riolu. She was one of the many pokemon that were being bred to be put under a series of tests and alterations in a Team Rocket lab that was designed to create ultimate pokemon of superior strength, speed, agility and stamina. Many of these tests failed with disasterous results but for a select few, Vira included, they managed to pull through and survive the testings though not left unaltered. Due to the changes she had gone through in the test tubes and during her forced evolution her body had been stained by the green liquids she floated in. The main wire system that was hooked into her body left a mark as well, directly on the back of her neck which remains hidden by her team scarf. Vira has known nothing else but her home in the lab and feels the people and pokemon here are her family, she has been sent on multiple missions since her final series of tests and all have been successful.
~ end

Fenrir Reki January 9th, 2012 3:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PocketWatch (Post 7002529)
I think that would be a lovely idea :)

Right then, for all those intrested Ill do a quick version of her story:

Vira was born into captivity as a normal looking Riolu. She was one of the many pokemon that were being bred to be put under a series of tests and alterations in a Team Rocket lab that was designed to create ultimate pokemon of superior strength, speed, agility and stamina. Many of these tests failed with disasterous results but for a select few, Vira included, they managed to pull through and survive the testings though not left unaltered. Due to the changes she had gone through in the test tubes and during her forced evolution her body had been stained by the green liquids she floated in. The main wire system that was hooked into her body left a mark as well, directly on the back of her neck which remains hidden by her team scarf. Vira has known nothing else but her home in the lab and feels the people and pokemon here are her family, she has been sent on multiple missions since her final series of tests and all have been successful.
~ end

That is actually really interesting. Thanks for bringing that up with the club! That could also make a great story too by the way. ;)

PocketWatch January 9th, 2012 4:22 PM

Haha really? Thank you so much! ^^

Avishka January 11th, 2012 5:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PocketWatch (Post 7002529)
I think that would be a lovely idea :)

Right then, for all those intrested Ill do a quick version of her story:

Vira was born into captivity as a normal looking Riolu. She was one of the many pokemon that were being bred to be put under a series of tests and alterations in a Team Rocket lab that was designed to create ultimate pokemon of superior strength, speed, agility and stamina. Many of these tests failed with disasterous results but for a select few, Vira included, they managed to pull through and survive the testings though not left unaltered. Due to the changes she had gone through in the test tubes and during her forced evolution her body had been stained by the green liquids she floated in. The main wire system that was hooked into her body left a mark as well, directly on the back of her neck which remains hidden by her team scarf. Vira has known nothing else but her home in the lab and feels the people and pokemon here are her family, she has been sent on multiple missions since her final series of tests and all have been successful.
~ end

it is really interesting!! :)


http://static.zerochan.net/full/05/40/357005.jpg

Cosmotone8 January 11th, 2012 2:22 PM

Could I join?

Gender: Male
Activity: I will try to post a reply at least twice a week
Partner: Anubis the Lucario
Why: I have loved Lucario since I first saw him in my first gym battle with Maylene
Password- Wave-guiding Riolu

Fenrir Reki January 11th, 2012 6:19 PM

Of course you can join! Anyone can as long as they submit an application.

Cosmoton8 your application has been accepted, welcome to the club!

If you could travel to any region with your Lucario/Riolu, where would you go and why? (EX: Sinnoh, etc)

I would probably go visit Johto (I think I spelled it correctly) just because it's where the classic pokemon series takes place at, and I think it would be an interesting place to travel to.

Masterge77 January 12th, 2012 10:19 AM

If you could travel to any region with your Lucario/Riolu, where would you go and why? (EX: Sinnoh, etc)

Sinnoh, because it's my favorite region and has most of my favorite Pokemon in it.

Jarred0809 January 12th, 2012 10:34 AM

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Originally Posted by OokamiReki (Post 7005597)
If you could travel to any region with your Lucario/Riolu, where would you go and why? (EX: Sinnoh, etc)

I would go to Kanto, just because Red was the first game I played. Plus, I could practically navigate that place blindfolded.

Cosmotone8 January 12th, 2012 12:42 PM

Thanks for letting me in the club.

And I would go to Hoenn because it's my favorite region and I think it would be fun.

Pokemon Master N January 12th, 2012 2:27 PM

I would go to Johto since its my favourite region.

Fenrir Reki January 12th, 2012 3:29 PM

Well, no one added to the story yet. So far it's only been me, and I had to figure out where I last left off at... But anyways, i'll continue the story:
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Luca and I followed Onix deeper into the cave, and as we were walking, the cave started to shake.

"Is something after us again? Why is the cave shaking?" Luca shouted.

"The guardian of this cave is aware of our presence, and is merely trying to scare us away. Do not worry, we will continue forward." Onix said.

"Guardian? What are you talking about?" Luca asked.

"You mean you have not heard of the legendary tale of this cave? Well, allow me to explain, but please stay close, this fog is thick now and I don't want anyone getting lost. Anyways, there was a tale of a legendary Pokemon that used to guard this town, and all of it's inhabitants. In order for the town to be protected, the villagers had to offer food and other valuables to the shrine to please the guardian, and every week there would be a ceremony in the town to worship the legendary Pokemon and offer goods. Well, one day the village was threatened, and needed assistance from their town's guardian, so on the day of the ceremony, they offered all of the best goods the town had, but the guardian never appeared. Then the next day, the village was attacked and burned down, and all that was left, was the remains of the cave, that was destroyed during the invasion. Many years later, a entrepreneur stumbled upon the destroyed town and decided to rebuild it, thus turning it into the town it is now, Regi Town." Onix answered.

"Why is it called Regi town?" Luca asked again.

"It was because the guardian was one of the legendary Regi pokemon, Regirock. Still to this day, no one knows exactly why it disappeared, but the legendary Pokemon in this cave is not Regirock, if you are wondering." Onix answered.

"Then who is it?" I asked.

"That, I cannot answer for you. I have not seen the guardian before, but I have felt it's presence whenever I entered the cave. You see, I used to be an assistant in carrying out ore and other materials, but every time I entered the cave, I sensed a powerful Pokemon dwelling deep within the ground." Onix answered.

We continued forward and entered an area that looked like an abandoned mine.

"I am sorry, but I cannot go any farther, you will have to go on your own from here. My head still hurts, and I had enough trouble trying to walk forward..." Onix said.

"Don't worry, we understand. Thanks for the help earlier, we would have gotten lost if you didn't guide us. The fog is still around, but it is not as thick, so we can see clearly enough." Reki answered.

"Be careful, the guardian of this cave does not like trespassers, and good luck to the both of you, I will meet you outside the cave when you are done." Onix said, turning around and slowly going to the exit of the cave.

"I guess it's just us now again. Come on let's continue forward." Luca said

I followed behind Luca, and we walked forward until we saw the ground end into the abyss, with only the railings of the mine carts extending forward into the mist.

"Great... It's too far to jump, and walking on the railings is too dangerous. There has to be some other way we can get across!" Luca said, looking around for a way to get through.

I stopped to examine our surroundings again, and I found a room with mine carts that were activated by a switch.

"Luca! There is a room behind us that has some mine carts in it. I think there is a switch that activates them too, and we can use that to get across!" I replied.

"Okay, that sounds like it will work." Luca said.

We ran to the back room, where we saw lots of dusty mine carts on what appeared to be rotating platforms, and near them was a switch that appeared to operate them.

Luca ran up to the switch and tried to use it, but there was no power supplied to it.

"How are we supposed to use this if there is no power? Can you check to see if there is a power switch laying around anywhere?" Luca asked as I checked the cave to see if there was any power switch nearby.

I saw a small room on the upper floor that had a power switch, but the stairs used to get there was broken, and my only option was to jump on the platforms to the second floor to turn on the power.

"Luca. I found the power switch on the second floor but there is one problem... The stairs used to get there is broken, and my only way to the switch is if I jump on the platforms to the top." I said.

"I guess that's our only option right now isn't it? Okay, go for it, just be careful all right?" Luca said.

I proceeded to jump on the first platform, making sure I did not look down into the dark pit below me, I then jumped on the next platform, going on top of the mining cart to get a better jump, then I jumped on the next one. As I jumped on the last platform, I almost slipped and fell, but I managed to prevent myself from slipping.

"Careful! Take it easy Riolu there is no need to rush! I don't want you to get hurt!" Luca shouted.

I then jumped onto the metal railings, and then through the broken window and walked towards the power outlet. I opened the box and flipped the switch, and I saw the room light up, and I heard the platforms starting to move.

"Hey! It's working! Try to come down here now!" Luca shouted.

I jumped out the window and landed on the metal railing on the side, and I saw the platforms moving in a circular motion, occasionally stopping to load or unload a cart or materials. I tried to go down using the staircase, but it was broken, and there was no way I would be able to use it without falling down. That left me with one option, to jump on the platforms and carefully navigate to the bottom without getting hit by anything, whether it's the carts or the materials being loaded onto the cart.

I saw a platform move and stand still, and that was my cue to jump, so I did, and landed safely inside the mining cart full of ore. I jumped out, and jumped on the second platform that did not have a cart. I looked down and jumped inside the next platform with a cart, and just as I was about to get out, I heard something and when I looked up, I saw a conveyor belt dropping ore on me. I tried to get out, but the ore piled down against me and I was almost trapped on the bottom of the mining cart.

"Riolu!" Luca said as he jumped on a platform.

I managed to get out, but by the time I tried to move again, the cart tipped over, and I fell out of it. Luca jumped on the platform below me, and managed to catch me just in time before I fell. Then he jumped on the ground and looked at me.

"Please don't scare me like that. I didn't want you getting hurt remember?" Luca said, hugging me as I did the same.

"I'm sorry. I tried to get down but I kind of got stuck. I'll be more careful next time." I replied.

"It's not your fault, it this stupid mineshaft that did it, don't worry. Now, let's get a cart moving so we can get to the other side to where that guardian Pokemon is probably at." Luca said, pressing a switch and placing me on the floor.

I saw a mine cart come down from a smaller platform, and it was empty. Luca then pressed another button, and the cart moved to where we were and stood in place.

"It looks like this cart will only move if we press this green button. Let's get in the cart, and i'll press it, but make sure you hold on to the sides of the cart okay?" Luca said as we both got into the mining cart and he pressed the green button.

The cart started to move forward, and slowly started picking up speed. We eventually went over the hole in the ground that we were at earlier without any problems, but then as we got to the other side, the cart started picking up speed, and we found ourselves literally in for a roller coaster ride. The cart twisted and turned and went in all sorts of directions, going deeper inside the cave. We both held on to the cart, and eventually we entered a giant room with waterfalls, but the railing in front of us was cut off, and we were suspended a good few feet in the air. The room had no fog in it, and everything was clear, the main sound you heard was the waterfalls, and it was surprising how all of this was inside a cave, a mining cave! Down below was a lake that seemed to sparkle and glisten in the dark, but there was a hole in the ceiling, that illuminated the area and shined brightly on the small ground below us that seemed to have a spring surrounded by water, and a giant door in front of it. The place seemed to have a sort of magical feeling to it.

"This isn't going to end well... Hey! There is a lake below us! Hold on to the cart Riolu!" Luca shouted as the cart fell off the railings. We both tried to hold on to the cart, but we couldn't and we both fell into the lake below...

olih January 12th, 2012 6:31 PM

*gasp* Cliffhanger! Anyways, sorry for not continuing the story; I've been somewhat busy lately ^_^;

By the way, your writing is good! I really enjoy reading it :)

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Air whooshed past us in the indomitable rush of freefall. Squeezing my eyes shut, I gripped the sides of the cart with all I had, gritting my teeth as my paws began to ache. Luca's tense form beside me was shaking.

"We're going to be all right..."

"How do you know?! We're falling!" He screamed at me.

"I have an idea." Saying those words even before I could think of anything, I was starting to get panicked. It hadn't really hit me before that we were falling. We were going to... to... "I have an idea!" Shouting to myself as well as to Luca, and grimacing at what I was going to have to do, I carefully went over the plan that had flashed to me at just the right moment. Opening my eyes, I saw the lake far below, churning and boiling like a massive pool of black. It didn't look so magical now, but that would definitely depend on the viewpoint. The gravity heaving me down was pulling at my stomach, and I swallowed a dizzying wave of nausea back.

"Ehh..."

Looking at him, I realized that Luca was shaking, badly. His fingers clenched the sides of the cart so hard I feared they would fall off, and his eyes were closed so tightly I doubted he could see anything but stars.

"Luca... I can save us!"

Without opening his eyes, still, Luca turned to me. His mouth moved silently, then he managed to croak out a simple, "Please."

Unsettled by the obvious fear of my master—no, friend—I stared determinedly at the edge of the cart. Falling to one's doom could reduce even the strongest to a quivering wreck of fear... But I couldn't let it get to me. I had to be certain, had to convince myself, that this would work. Otherwise, I wouldn't have the fortitude to go on. And that would be the only failure.

Not even a simple 'Luca, you're my best friend' could do. Saying something like that would be accepting the possibility that all would not go well. Not at all.

Clenching the rim even harder with my paws, I found focus in the pain. Somewhere deep inside of me, I called up an ancient power, one that ran loose in the back of my mind, but still held behind walls. If that was not so, these psychic powers would have invaded and controlled my entire being a long time ago.

Flashing my eyes open once more, not having realized that I had closed them, I saw the lake much closer than I liked. This sudden shock jolted through me and made the powers surge. Excruciating... To shape this amount mental power into one massive blob of energy took so much will... So... much...

But... I couldn't give up! Ever... Letting out a short, high pitched yelp that I didn't even have the strength to feel embarrassed for, I directed my psychic powers around the cart. What looked like a pink cloud from what I could see in my mind wrapped itself around the object, testing it, feeling it.

"I don't have time for this!" I growled. Even though I wasn't a psychic, I still had some psychic powers; all Riolu and Lucario did. It was what enabled me to talk to Luca.

Heaving my head upwards for emphasis, and to help, or something—it didn't matter, nothing did now except for...

Forces far beyond my comprehension yanked the cart upwards, and I flew out. Managing to snap my jaws onto the side of the cart, I slowly opened my eyes, panting fiercely. Yes. A dark pink cloud hovered around the cart, holding it up. I thought it had yanked it upwards, because the cart had stopped so suddenly. I was... holding it aloft. With my mind.

The sheer awesomeness of it astounded me. Feeling a heavy thump beside me, I snapped my head around to look, but had to spend extra effort to do so. My entire body was extremely heavy, and I strained to move.

Luca was slumped beside me; he instantaneously shot up once he had landed back in the cart (he had also flew out, due to the sudden stop), scanned around rapidly, and exclaimed, "What... what... happened?" His voice was dry, as if it had been rasped over rocks.

Grinning wearily, I merely stared at him, not even having the power to say to him what was going on.

For a few minutes, the sound of my panting resonated through the air. Finally, I wheezed, "I can't... keep this up... much lo... nger..." Surprised at the unusual deepness of my voice, I merely slumped down, only paying attention to the pink cloud. That was all I could focus on.

"R... Riolu! No... Lucario!"

Eyes widening, I managed to gasp out, "Lucario..."

I had evolved.

"I'm so proud of you... We've come all this way... And now you've saved our life!" A truly heartfelt grin broke across Luca's face, and I smiled back weakly in return.

"Thank... you. But... can't hold on... much longer."

"Oh." Luca looked like he thought himself an idiot. "I'm so sorry!" He almost squeaked. Frantically looking around, he grasped the sides of the cart, as if he could lift it up himself. Then, he peered over the edge. "We're inches from the water," he informed me. The only land was the high cliff walls on either side, and I did not have enough strength to lift us up that far. "No... We've come all this way..."

I was so tired; every limb felt dead, even my brain felt sleepy; I couldn't comprehend what that meant, and I didn't try to.

A warm, calm feeling enveloped me, and I could feel the weight of the massive strain gently being eased off of me. Letting out a content sigh, I was about to close my eyes and lose myself to the blackness when a voice of immediate, unbowing power boomed out.

"Welcome."

Snapping up, I sat up straight, lifting my chin in a gesture of respect. It was what this voice commanded, and its assuring tone showed that all was good.

Hearing an astonished gasp from my side, I glanced to Luca to see him staring, openmouthed, at... something. His eyes seemed to grow round, then he quickly snapped his jaw shut, bowing his head. Following where he had been looking, my jaw almost dropped open as well.

There, floating before me, and with a great aura of simple authority, hovered a massive, white creature. Its graceful wings spread out to either side, but they were not flapping; it was holding itself up through psychic powers, which also displayed their worth by enveloping the cart, as I now noticed. This was a real psychic. Its tail was poised in precise curls behind it. Deep, rich blue colored its stomach, and I saw a pair of huge legs. Its neck arched elegantly into a a sharp head. This creature, complete with a calm smile and watching with serene eyes, was a—the

"I am Lugia, Guardian of this place. I grant you passage."


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Heh, long~ So, Lucario evolved, and the guardian of the cave is Lugia. If anyone does not agree with these events, or had something else in mind, just tell me, and I'll change it ^_^

Fenrir Reki January 12th, 2012 7:09 PM

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Originally Posted by olih (Post 7006951)
*gasp* Cliffhanger! Anyways, sorry for not continuing the story; I've been somewhat busy lately ^_^;

By the way, your writing is good! I really enjoy reading it :)

Heh, long~ So, Lucario evolved, and the guardian of the cave is Lugia. If anyone does not agree with these events, or had something else in mind, just tell me, and I'll change it ^_^


It's fine to me, I think it goes well with the original story, and besides, I couldn't think of which legendary Pokemon to use as the cave's guardian anyways.

By the way, thanks for the compliment! I don't know why, but i've started writing stories a little more often ever since we started writing stories in this club. I'm not a writer, and I don't like writing, but somehow whenever I write a story, I really get into it, and i'm able to create very wild and creative stories for some reason.

olih January 12th, 2012 7:15 PM

Alright, thanks ^_^ And yeah, story writing is really fun. I never thought I would get into it, but I randomly decided to start writing a story about my favorite Pokemon characters... And now I write a lot. Writing is an awesome way to let creativity loose~

Oh, also, as for the question of which region I would like to go to with my Lucario... Probably Johto, since it is my favorite region, and I think I would enjoy it there. A lot of Pokemon I find awesome are native to it, and it's a green, peaceful place, which I like.

Taposa January 13th, 2012 11:16 PM

What topic is it?
Is it the region or a new one?


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