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TheMarkCrafter April 24th, 2011 8:05 AM

RMXP - Pokemon Shiny Diamond (improved)
 
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr240/RavenRescueTeam/sd.png
Thanks for elaynii to give me the logo..
The legend of Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina is beginning..
Introduction
Finally!

After four grueling years, you -being either Dawn or Lucas- are going to graduate high school! The excitement is in the air as your mother and all of your new friends achieve most prominent things you've ever done. Well, aside from stopping a deranged man from destroying the world in order to create a new, pure one.. graduating high school is pretty close though! As the principle calls your name, you feel your heart thudding in your chest as your make your way up to the stage. As that simple, yet unimaginably important piece of paper is laid into your hands, you can hear the crowd, along with your friends going wild!

The ceremony is over, and now, all of the thrills of high school are as well. Now, all there is to do is go home and find a job. Right then and there, you decide that you are definitely not going to work. There's got to be something else you could do! You could always hand around the house, right? Wrong. Your mother would probably urge you to go out and get a job. As you lay in bed, deciding what to do, you hear a small purr. It was your mother's Glameow. At that moment, you knew what you had to do. Sinnoh wasn't the only region out there, right? There was Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Unova.. There had to be somewhere else! Wait, there is that newly discovered region of Ueno! That is where you will be going to Ueno to become a Pokémon Trainer once more and make some new friends and allies along with some new Pokémon!
Story
As you enter the new new region of Ueno, you will see many familier faces...
Team Plasma, now have a new boss, N, a crazed worshipper, of Giratina, who is determined, to put the world under his feet.
As he try's to perfect his new super weapon, the only way, which is to summon Arceus and absorb his powers, he releases an army of mutant Pokemon upon Ueno, to stall the military.
Then he sets out to the other regions and starts killing gym leaders. After awhile, he comes back, having been spoken to by Giratina, he is determined to capture you, for you hold the key to Ueno's fate.
In the end you will have to choose, will you join Team Plasma, and be a ruler of the world, or will you fight and resist, the choice is yours.
Screenies
Spoiler:


[CENTER]Credits
Poccil ~ Pokemon Essentials
venom12 ~ Pokemon Essentials DS & OWs
Neo-Spriteman ~ New BW Tiles
Neo-Spriteman ~ Resized Tiles and Trainer Sprites
~~~~~Pkmn essentials DS credits~~~~~
Luka ~ VS Seq. and mouse model and etc...
Cybersam and Astro ~ Mouse model
CNG ~ Battle moves select menu
Help14 ~ Pokedex
Wichu ~ Sprites
FL. ~ Eggs Change and Unova Pokemon
~~~~~Help with Neo-Spriteman~~~~~
Dewitty, Kymontian, Calis Project, Bulbapedia.net ~ Help
Dewitty, Bulbapedia.Bulbagarden.net, Nintendo, Chocosrawloid, Kymotonian, milomilotic11, and Neo-Spriteman ~ Pokemon BW Trainers
~~~~~Inner Tiles~~~~~
Thurpok ~ Inner tiles Lost to credit Thurpok cuz i lost his name.
-----Other-----
tebited15 from deviantart ~ Lucas' sprite! (He said no need for credit..)
Team
Me ~ Everything
None ~ Mapper (HIGHEST NEED) 3 places
None ~ Scripter (HIGHEST NEED) 3 places
Me ~ Spriter (HIGHEST NEED) 2 places
Me ~ Beta Tester 0 places
Elaynni ~ Introduction and Logo, hope you like them!
Flamemaster ~ Story
Support Bar:
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HTML Code:

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Pokemon Shiny Diamond: Playing means fun!

Here, visit this link to see new features!
http://pokemonshinydiamond.wordpress.com

Features
Archivements
iPhone instead of Pokegear
New Region
VS sequences
BW Tiles
A bridge that connects between Ueno and Miho regions

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Archivements
Name: Poke-Kick
HowToGet: Kick a Caterpie at Sunring Town
Prize: Potion

Name: Gimmie-A-Gift!
HowToGet: Get a Ditto from the Mystery gift man at Bigcorn's Pokecenter
Prize: Tiny Mushroom

Name: xD
HowToGet: Answer Vinertion's Man that ask questions all wrong
Prize: RageCandyBar and Galactic Key

Name: Eevee
HowToGet: Get back the Stolen Eevee from Team Plasma
Prize: All Eevee evolutions

clacla$$$ April 24th, 2011 11:00 AM

the 2nd gen starters for sure!

TheMarkCrafter April 24th, 2011 11:21 AM

Tell me, is my story okay now or still boring?

lx_theo April 24th, 2011 12:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6602351)
Tell me, is my story okay now or still boring?

Very boring. Its basically what you had before condensed into a few sentences.

Also, you credit them for their tiles, not their help unless they specifically told you how to do things.

And use image tags, please

ProdigyX April 24th, 2011 5:27 PM

WTh, your other thread was closed, because of not given the right credits... so you go make another one?

Atleast this time you have the right credits.
Although bit a of a improvement... with the tiles.. but mapping and grammar still need a massive improvement...

Your mapping style is very weird, try copy the style Nintendo, GAMEFREAK use..

Neo-Spriteman April 24th, 2011 7:11 PM

At least you gave credits now. Your maps look awkward and too spacious. The houses in games aren't that big. I suggest looking at some mapping tutorials, or hire a new mapper. Capitalization, grammar, and spelling are my main pet peeves. Fix those things and your game looks decent graphic-wise.

As for your story,
Code:

One day, you have finished the High School. Good for you. What about it?
and decided to go to an another adventure to an another region that is called Ueno. You've gone on previous adventures? Was this where the high school was?
and Team Galactic decided to stop Lucas and Dawn to protect the regionsLolwut? Where'd Lucas and Dawn come from?.
Will you defeat Team Galactic and save Ueno?What are their plans?



Yagerbomb April 24th, 2011 8:47 PM

Here is my opinion:

Your plot doesn't sound interesting. I agree with the others by saying your maps are too wide open. I suggest condensing your maps and either A) Add depth to your current plot( You have a starting point but you need to make it interesting)
B) Create a new and more interesting Plot or C) Recruit someone else to write a plot for you.

The Yagerbomb has been dropped.

TheMarkCrafter April 24th, 2011 11:02 PM

1 Attachment(s)
http://www.pokecommunity.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=60224&stc=1&d=1303714865
The 2nd leader, Drake, a Water Type!

ProdigyX April 24th, 2011 11:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6603689)

Do you take any thought about other peoples post to improve your much need improvement game?

TheMarkCrafter April 24th, 2011 11:06 PM

Here's the trainer maker i used:
<object width="450" height="386"><param name="movie" value="http://backend.deviantart.com/embed/view.swf" /><param name="flashvars" value="id=75399413&width=1337" /><param name="allowScriptAccess" value="always" /><embed src="http://backend.deviantart.com/embed/view.swf" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="450" flashvars="id=75399413&width=1337" height="386" allowscriptaccess="always"></embed></object><br /><a href="http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/75399413/">Pokemon Trainer Creator</a> by ~<a class="u" href="http://magicalgirlyossy.deviantart.com/">MagicalGirlYossy</a> on <a href="http://www.deviantart.com">deviant</a><a href="http://www.deviantart.com">ART</a>


Here's the trainer maker i used:
http://www.deviantart.com/download/75399413/Pokemon_Trainer_Creator_by_MagicalGirlYossy.swf

xCalierz April 25th, 2011 12:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ProdigyX (Post 6603693)
Do you take any thought about other peoples post to improve your much need improvement game?

It would seem not...

So I'm going to make a comment that's going to be wholly ignored, but what do I care.
The story is dull, boring and in no way make any sense, whatsoever.
PLEASE read these comments and improve, because it seems like you might have some ideas, but you're not presenting them.

TheMarkCrafter April 25th, 2011 1:02 AM

@lx theo
@ProdigyX
@xCalierz

I updated the story. What do you think guys?


Oh my! I forgot the Features!
New Region
New Attacks
Some Fakemon
Meet Trainers, Leadera, and Elite 4 from the other 4 regions!
And Progress!
UENO [||||________] 25% Releasing Beta soon!
BETA 1 [||||||||||||||___] 97% Editing things! Download link will be at first post or some posts!

xCalierz April 25th, 2011 1:09 AM

But still, where was the first adventure?
The story has more plot holes than the movie Devil.

TheMarkCrafter April 25th, 2011 1:16 AM

@xCalierz
The first adventure is at Sunring Town.

btw.
carmaniac didn't post here!

xCalierz April 25th, 2011 1:20 AM

Then what happened there?
explain

TheMarkCrafter April 25th, 2011 1:26 AM

You get to Mt. Gold and battle team Galactic and they escape. But that's not the last time, it's the first. And you go to an Adventure and go to the Victory Road and you see them the last time. and then they escape, and battle Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, the grunts, and Cyrus and then you see Mark, your rival. The last time. His sprite at my avatar.

xCalierz April 25th, 2011 1:41 AM

That's pretty much just splicing different official game stories together.
It still doesn't make much sense.

carmaniac April 25th, 2011 4:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6603860)
@xCalierz
The first adventure is at Sunring Town.

btw.
carmaniac didn't post here!

Cause I was writing a story line for your game until I saw this post so now you can keep the crappy storyline you're running.

Neo-Spriteman April 25th, 2011 12:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by carmaniac (Post 6604197)
Cause I was writing a story line for your game until I saw this post so now you can keep the crappy storyline you're running.

A little harsh, bro. He didn't ask you to do it, did he?

Cilerba April 25th, 2011 12:39 PM

KingSnivy, the only way you're going to improve your game, is by listening to other people's criticism. They're only trying to help you, and you ignore them.

DarkDoom3000 April 25th, 2011 1:26 PM

this whole thread is confusing.

storyline is probably less impressive than the official storylines. and that's saying something.

Quote:

One day, you have finished the High School. and decided to go to an another adventure to an another region that is called Ueno. Where you decided to live in Sunring Town. And Team Galactic revenges the 4 regions. Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, and Sinnoh. But there is only 1 way to stop them. Is to defeat Cyrus until he gives up. Will you defeat Cyrus and save the 4 regions? w/ Ueno.
You make it sound like this is a sequel to another game (is it?)

ProdigyX April 25th, 2011 5:25 PM

What happended to your post that said you were leaving the PC.. and making your own new pc lol?

lx_theo April 25th, 2011 6:25 PM

Beat Cyrus until he gives up? Lol, thats actually funny. No, its not any better now. A few more sentences that didn't help at all.

carmaniac April 26th, 2011 9:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ProdigyX (Post 6606204)
What happended to your post that said you were leaving the PC.. and making your own new pc lol?

It got deleted by a mod cause it contained a link to another forum.

Ęℓαчиıı April 26th, 2011 3:00 PM

Look, KingSnivy, you truly need to take the advice of those that offer it. They aren't being rude, per se, they're just giving your some constructive criticism; which is vital for a developing game to become successful. I've taken notice that you support my game, Pokémon: Ironed Heart, which I thank you for. Let me ask you this: how do you think it has gotten this far?

It's simple. I have taken the advice and criticism that the other members of this forum have given me to make it a semi-successful game! Now, let me too give you some advice. Just focus on one thing at a time. I can tell you're getting ahead of yourself by adding in features and exciting yourself. While that's all well and good, you haven't put in much thought on the story.

I'll help you all I can. You're eager to make a game, and I like that. First thing is first, I'll try and help you with your story. Send me a private message and we'll see if we can't clean this messy thread of yours up.

ProdigyX April 26th, 2011 10:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ęℓαчиıı (Post 6607869)
Look, KingSnivy, you truly need to take the advice of those that offer it. They aren't being rude, per se, they're just giving your some constructive criticism; which is vital for a developing game to become successful. I've taken notice that you support my game, Pokémon: Ironed Heart, which I thank you for. Let me ask you this: how do you think it has gotten this far?

It's simple. I have taken the advice and criticism that the other members of this forum have given me to make it a semi-successful game! Now, let me too give you some advice. Just focus on one thing at a time. I can tell you're getting ahead of yourself by adding in features and exciting yourself. While that's all well and good, you haven't put in much thought on the story.

I'll help you all I can. You're eager to make a game, and I like that. First thing is first, I'll try and help you with your story. Send me a private message and we'll see if we can't clean this messy thread of yours up.



Well said :D +1, lets hope he reads it!

Also kingshivy.. i think your rushing way to much, you got to take a lot of time to prepare for your game, which i don't think you have... maybe.. the plot you have now could be a draft, and your goal is to re-write this plot and try make it better, longer and more excitement... Read other peoples plots to get an idea, but ofc don't copy them.

Also, i don't think you've practiced your skills enough for this game, your mapping isn't perfect.. maybe thats how you like your maps to be but other people disagree, which you also have to take in hand, of what other people want your game to be like, because in the end if your releasing this to the audience you got to give them what they want! Thats why its always important to take critisism from the audience..

If you need mapping advice.. i say like I've said many time to you, look and the maps Nintendo makes, i try use there style on your maps, gives you a great idea!

Also please double check your grammar its terrible, people don't want to play a game with spelling mistakes, and don't go to far from what your capable of atm!

mustafa505 April 29th, 2011 6:30 AM

I have some questioning to do!
1st. Why is Prof Rowan in this new region (he shud be in Si(n)noh)
2nd. Why is Diamond in this region?
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You need to improve your Mapping and Grammar
(To be Honest i am also bad at both of them.)
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i like the inner tiles but in one event...
(the pokeballs are out of the table )
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Just like ProdigyX said Dont try to rush with the progress.
The Game will become Meaningless if it has no sense.
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TheMarkCrafter April 29th, 2011 9:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mustafa505 (Post 6613363)
I have some questioning to do!
1st. Why is Prof Rowan in this new region (he shud be in Si(n)noh)
2nd. Why is Diamond in this region?
----------------------------------
You need to improve your Mapping and Grammar
(To be Honest i am also bad at both of them.)
----------------------------------
i like the inner tiles but in one event...
(the pokeballs are out of the table )
----------------------------------
Just like ProdigyX said Dont try to rush with the progress.
The Game will become Meaningless if it has no sense.
----------------------------------


1st. No problem with that...
2nd. Check out Wesley FG's hack, Light Platinum.. It is Light PLATINUM
and haves a new region..
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Mapping, i am training.. Grammar.. what are the words that haves the wrong grammar.
-----------------------------------
Thanks.. i lost who's tiles are
(glitch with the balls)
-----------------------------------
Umm... okay
And yeah, the game will be mean if it has no sense..


Quote:

Originally Posted by Ęℓαчиıı (Post 6607869)
Look, KingSnivy, you truly need to take the advice of those that offer it. They aren't being rude, per se, they're just giving your some constructive criticism; which is vital for a developing game to become successful. I've taken notice that you support my game, Pokémon: Ironed Heart, which I thank you for. Let me ask you this: how do you think it has gotten this far?

It's simple. I have taken the advice and criticism that the other members of this forum have given me to make it a semi-successful game! Now, let me too give you some advice. Just focus on one thing at a time. I can tell you're getting ahead of yourself by adding in features and exciting yourself. While that's all well and good, you haven't put in much thought on the story.

I'll help you all I can. You're eager to make a game, and I like that. First thing is first, I'll try and help you with your story. Send me a private message and we'll see if we can't clean this messy thread of yours up.

Explaning..
Quote:

Originally Posted by Ęℓαчиıı (Post 6607869)
I can tell you're getting ahead by adding new features..

Okay, If someone could help, they can make a new script for umm.. do you guys want animated pokemon Like in bw?Okay,let a scripter someone join me to make a new script for animating..
And for the PM, that game will be SUPAH creative..
KingSnivy approves..

Ces soirees-la April 29th, 2011 10:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6614743)



Grammar.. what are the words that haves the wrong grammar.

Okay, If someone could help, they can make a new script for umm.. do you guys want animated pokemon Like in bw?Okay,let a scripter someone join me to make a new script for animating..
And for the PM, that game will be SUPAH creative..
KingSnivy approves..

Grammar is the way you structure you're sentences.

And you can find a tutorial to animate the battle sprites here.
Credit to Luka S.J.

TheMarkCrafter April 29th, 2011 10:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ces soirees-la (Post 6614807)


Grammar is the way you structure you're sentences.

And you can find a tutorial to animate the battle sprites here.
Credit to Luka S.J.

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/025/2/5/jalorda_animated_sprite_by_devinwarriors-d3801vc.gif

I want them to be like this!


HIRING a Storyline writer!

Ces soirees-la April 29th, 2011 11:20 PM

Follow that tutorial and it should work then.

TheMarkCrafter April 29th, 2011 11:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ces soirees-la (Post 6614848)
Follow that tutorial and it should work then.

That script is for the 2 frames!

Ces soirees-la April 30th, 2011 5:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6614814)

HIRING a Storyline writer!

BTW, getting someone to write you a story?
Seems like a pretty big cop out.

carmaniac April 30th, 2011 6:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6614814)

No one's going to script that for you... Learn to script yourself, find a few tutorials on how to use rects and you will be able to code it yourself.

venom12 April 30th, 2011 7:05 AM

Rects? I just used gifs , i added zoom to sprites and updates. Just 4 flags for updates and flag for when it start to update for player pokemon here, and thats all but you need to know h\where to puts all updates.

carmaniac April 30th, 2011 7:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by venom12 (Post 6615392)
Rects? I just used gifs , i added zoom to sprites and updates. Just 4 flags for updates and flag for when it start to update for player pokemon here, and thats all but you need to know h\where to puts all updates.

You've not heard of rects before? They're the same as .gifs just on an animation strip played by the code.

TheMarkCrafter April 30th, 2011 9:29 AM

How about the new story? Cool or boring?

NikNaks April 30th, 2011 9:52 AM

I don't see a story. It's a nicely written introduction, though!

Neo-Spriteman April 30th, 2011 9:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NikNaks (Post 6615679)
I don't see a story. It's a nicely written introduction, though!

I lol'd because it's true. No story or plot.

Ces soirees-la April 30th, 2011 3:38 PM

You really should expand the story to overview the plot, or at least leave it at a good cliffhanger.

Ęℓαчиıı April 30th, 2011 5:49 PM

It's only an introduction.

I would assume that flamemaster is writing the main plot, as that's what I have been told.

TheAngryPidove April 30th, 2011 5:49 PM

Nice introduction, no story...

I'm amusing this is a remake of Diamond, so the plot should have something to do with Team Galactic reemerging, in my opinion.

Yagerbomb April 30th, 2011 9:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6614814)

Do you still need a storyline writer?

TheMarkCrafter May 2nd, 2011 5:31 AM

The New Logo! How about it?
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr240/RavenRescueTeam/sd.png
Not by me, By elaynni


Asking about the new story? Cool?

Conception May 2nd, 2011 7:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6619847)
The New Logo! How about it?
Not by me, By eyanni

Dude, seriously, you are very, very annoying.

Elaynii, is nice enough to help you out so much, yet to don't even have the time or consideration to spell her name. It's not like it's just her, it's every single person who help's you out, you don't even look then advice. Please, sort it out.

Yagerbomb May 2nd, 2011 3:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6619847)
The New Logo! How about it?
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr240/RavenRescueTeam/sd.png
Not by me, By elaynni


Asking about the new story? Cool?

So the answer is....??

BTW the logo looks good.

Ęℓαчиıı May 2nd, 2011 5:49 PM

I think flamemaster and I have the section filled up, but, I could be wrong.

I think the story itself is decent at best, but, it's a good start. It still lacks a few details here and there, but, it's okay. :3

Blaziquaza May 2nd, 2011 11:14 PM

If you actually look at KingSnivy's past on this forum, I'd give up on him.
He's not listening at all.
Quote:

2nd. Check out Wesley FG's hack, Light Platinum.. It is Light PLATINUM
Don't you get it? For the love of god. What, just because somebody else did it you have to?
And hiring a storyline writer... Gah, you're not ready yet.

TheMarkCrafter May 5th, 2011 10:04 PM

UPDATE
The green color, bold and table have been removed.
_________
VS Mark that will make Pepsi get out of your nose


WARNING: LOUD SOUND THAT MAY CAUSE YOU EAR RAPE!
If it doesn't work, try here.

TheAngryPidove May 6th, 2011 3:15 AM

Did you just seriously post an update because you edited the first post? Really?

Because that video doesn't seem like much; it's progress, but nearly anyone could do that. It's not much of an update.

Rai Rai May 6th, 2011 6:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6626447)
UPDATE
The green color, bold and table have been removed.
_________
VS Mark that will make Pepsi get out of your nose


WARNING: LOUD SOUND THAT MAY CAUSE YOU EAR RAPE!
If it doesn't work, try here.

I don't get you what so ever. All you do is blank out everything negative people say and just see what you want to see. And that VS sprite is really shoddy and easy to do. It's just using a script everyone has access to...

PiaCRT May 6th, 2011 7:05 AM

You edited a vs screen with rainbow colors and did a cruddy edit of Blue from HGSS. Using Essentials DS, that's hardly an accomplishment.

TheMarkCrafter May 6th, 2011 9:50 AM

Lolz for today alot of new PMs and Pokemon Black at the league with alot of visitors xD

Neo-Spriteman May 6th, 2011 10:52 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6627057)
Lolz for today alot of new PMs and Pokemon Black at the league with alot of visitors xD

You just don't get it, do you?
People give you constructive criticism, and you just sit there, and ignore it.

So everyone, lets just ignore his thread. Who's with me?

Rai Rai May 6th, 2011 11:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neo-Spriteman (Post 6627119)
You just don't get it, do you?
People give you constructive criticism, and you just sit there, and ignore it.

So everyone, lets just ignore his thread. Who's with me?

Not like anyone will do it but we'll see.

TheMarkCrafter May 13th, 2011 9:56 PM

The game will take Essentials DS 5's scripts to Essential DS 4's

flamemaster May 14th, 2011 3:03 AM

i think he means, he's updating to the newer essentials ds.

Sero May 14th, 2011 4:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Martinixon (Post 6640523)
I believe he is from somewhere in the middle east, check his youtube channel, he has a video favorite with an Arabic title and with Arabic subs.
That would explain his bad grammar, he is probably using a translating software, or isn't that good with English.
That would also explain why he is not answering to most posts in his thread.
He also failed getting the name of his channel, he used "Tusutaja" instead of "Tsutarja" but that's off topic, well, in fact, all of this is off topic.
I might be wrong, but that's a little logic thinking.

I don't think he is in the middle east but he could be Arabic. He probably can speak Arabic as well. A translator would give a direct translation from another language so i doubt he's using one. And many native English speakers are bad with grammar.

To try and stay on topic, i'll comment on the game although I dont have much to say.

The story doesnt seem very intriguing but its more or less decent. But im curious as to why Leon needs to unleash mutant Pokemon to stall the military.
In the main games, the evil organizations were known to most people but,for example, Team Galactic never did anything to bother the citizens so the police etc. never had to get involved. But this is your game, so Ueno's police force may not consist of lazy bums like Kanto's or Sinnohs but I feel that stalling the military is unnecessary unless the mutant Pokemon play at least a sufficient role in the plot or at least as something to do like a side story/quest or just to make the game longer.
As for your screenshots, just looking at them make me not want to play this. You may have your own style of mapping or you might just be bad but your maps have A LOT of useless space. Try filling them up with things such as furniture in a house or plants, houses and people outside or just make the map smaller.

Ivysaur May 15th, 2011 2:12 AM

Okay, I deleted all the spammish posts and posts that made no sense whatsoever. Please don't go offtopic, this thread is about the game, not about the author nor about the thread itself.

TheMarkCrafter May 17th, 2011 12:51 AM

@Went Thanks Went..
btw..
Now I am not at my computer so I stopped developing for 3 days, so I dont want a mod to close the thread
-Snivy

kox9sxe May 17th, 2011 1:03 AM

Your maps are really big and empty. Try to make smaller maps with better details.

Miggs May 18th, 2011 12:52 PM

Your Room is WAY to big. I suggest you get better tiles, or improve your mapping.The tiles are ok, but you should use other peoples comments to improve your game.But, i wish you good luck with your game.

TheMarkCrafter May 18th, 2011 10:58 PM

@kox9sxe and @Miggs
Neo-Spriteman's deviantart account is posting examples of work to copy maps cause Neo-Spriteman is the Mapper and Eventer..


BACK TO DEVELOPING!! Actually i joked when i said 3 days!! It was 2 days. So, i will post a video for the Shiny Diamond opening due to Elaynii's introduction.

TheMarkCrafter May 20th, 2011 4:46 AM

The Shiny Diamond's Opening

READ!
Spoiler:
There are things that you must follow..
1. NEVER post spaming. Even Godslayerify.
2. Don't post: Your Game Sucks, Failed hack, etc..
3. That game is posted by RMXP and it's NOT a hack..
4. I am not a good mapper, though
5. I deleted Glitch Scenes, so that why the music is cutted.
6. Please, Please, and Please!! LOW YOUR SOUND CAUSE IT MAY GIVE YOU EAR-RAPE!
7. I didn't add music.

PiaCRT May 20th, 2011 5:09 AM

I can't say what's worse, the mapping or the grammar.

For one, why does mom a have pokemon center counter tiles in the house? Rowan: Good choice, Care it well. does not make any sense whatsoever. You need to get a translator for you game alone...To make it english.

gsorby May 20th, 2011 5:44 AM

Well I can see a lot of things wrong with this game. The grammar...did you go to school? You must know by the age of FIVE that "I" when you're talking about yourself it's a captial? The maps are just...sorry, scabby. They are WAY to spacey. The VS sequence is scabby and probably rushed on Paint. You need to clean uip this game.
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GSorby

TheMarkCrafter May 20th, 2011 7:10 AM

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@gsorby Well, how about your game Pokemon: The Nightmare? You stole the BAG, FIGHT, RUN, and POKEMON from O.G. Duke (omega groudon)'s Project "Pokemon Raptor"
And i have a new sprite for Lucas, it's made by this guy Tell me if it's good.
(pic at attachments)

Crazyninjaguy May 20th, 2011 7:38 AM

Although GSorby and Omega Groudon's fight scenes look a little alike, they are not the same, which means he has not stolen them.

Lashing out at someone because they gave you bad criticism really isn't the way to go.
Before flailing at someone and criticising their game for being similar to another game, remember you are making a Pokemon fan game, so your game bears resemblance to many others, including the official games.

GSorby is right on many points, like the mapping etc, it needs work, but i'm sure you know that. They are too spacious, maps seem to feel more alive if you cram them full of stuff, but leave room for the player to explore.

One turnoff for people playing your game, is spelling and grammar. People generally turn the game off if there's consistent bad spelling/grammar, so that's another issue to address.

Although GSorby may not have gone about criticising your game the right way, and suggesting how to improve things, you should listen to him. Ultimately, you're making this game for the public to play, so let the public have their input.

I'm not getting at you, I just thought it needed to be said.

flamemaster May 20th, 2011 8:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gsorby (Post 6649849)
Well I can see a lot of things wrong with this game. The grammar...did you go to school? You must know by the age of FIVE that "I" when you're talking about yourself it's a captial? The maps are just...sorry, scabby. They are WAY to spacey. The VS sequence is scabby and probably rushed on Paint. You need to clean uip this game.
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GSorby

if you looked at the previous posts, you'd learn that snivy, is arabaic, so thats why his grammar sucks.

Rai Rai May 20th, 2011 8:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crazyninjaguy (Post 6649992)
Although GSorby and Omega Groudon's fight scenes look a little alike, they are not the same, which means he has not stolen them.

Lashing out at someone because they gave you bad criticism really isn't the way to go.
Before flailing at someone and criticising their game for being similar to another game, remember you are making a Pokemon fan game, so your game bears resemblance to many others, including the official games.

GSorby is right on many points, like the mapping etc, it needs work, but i'm sure you know that. They are too spacious, maps seem to feel more alive if you cram them full of stuff, but leave room for the player to explore.

One turnoff for people playing your game, is spelling and grammar. People generally turn the game off if there's consistent bad spelling/grammar, so that's another issue to address.
Although GSorby may not have gone about criticising your game the right way, and suggesting how to improve things, you should listen to him. Ultimately, you're making this game for the public to play, so let the public have their input.

I'm not getting at you, I just thought it needed to be said.

Shouldn't of bothered with the massive post lol as he wont be able to comprehend it unless someone is able to translate it for him. By the way Kingsnivy irony is shown when you mention about stolen things every-time.

ProdigyX May 20th, 2011 4:28 PM

Don't think his arabic, tho this is a improvement snivy.. CBF going criticism because your just going to back it down, but a improvement.

TheMarkCrafter May 20th, 2011 9:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ProdigyX (Post 6650765)
Don't think his arabic, tho this is a improvement snivy.. CBF going criticism because your just going to back it down, but a improvement.

You have a wrong thing dude, you have posted
Quote:

Originally Posted by ProdigyX (Post 6650765)
a improvement

You must write
Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6650765)
an improvement


Crazyninjaguy May 21st, 2011 12:28 AM

Ok, i give up here.
You obviously just skipped past my last post which was trying to help, and decided to correct someone's grammar instead, getting some wrong yourself.

I'm gonna give a last comment, then leave this thread. But you probably won't read or listen to it anyway.

Scripts:

Try and not leave everything as default. Otherwise your game will turn out like everyone else's using Venom12's mod in terms of looks. Try learning scripting yourself, and expanding the features.

Mapping:

This has been said before, your maps are too big and empty. A house inside doesn't need a 25 x 25 map, just the default size is fine with the edges cut off. Try and fill your maps with tiles, not just the bare minimum.

You should try and listen to everyone who posts on this thread as they're trying to help. If you ignore them, well, they'll just get fed up and stop caring, like me :/

ProdigyX May 21st, 2011 1:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crazyninjaguy (Post 6651268)
Ok, i give up here.
You obviously just skipped past my last post which was trying to help, and decided to correct someone's grammar instead, getting some wrong yourself.

I'm gonna give a last comment, then leave this thread. But you probably won't read or listen to it anyway.

Scripts:

Try and not leave everything as default. Otherwise your game will turn out like everyone else's using Venom12's mod in terms of looks. Try learning scripting yourself, and expanding the features.

Mapping:

This has been said before, your maps are too big and empty. A house inside doesn't need a 25 x 25 map, just the default size is fine with the edges cut off. Try and fill your maps with tiles, not just the bare minimum.

You should try and listen to everyone who posts on this thread as they're trying to help. If you ignore them, well, they'll just get fed up and stop caring, like me :/

Its all a learning process, and your taking it to fast .. maybe you should show more maturity before creating a game ay?

Crazyninjaguy May 21st, 2011 1:29 AM

Sure, a learning process, i get that. But it just annoys me when people ignore their public and just bypass completely what they've said.

Anyway, before this thread gets more out of hand/off topic. Good luck with your project KingSnivy, hope it all goes well.

ProdigyX May 21st, 2011 5:41 AM

I was referring to Snivy silly :D

TheMarkCrafter May 24th, 2011 4:28 AM

New screenies
Spoiler:

marcc5m May 24th, 2011 5:12 AM

Awesome! I love your maps, so full and professional!
And the Pokeballs falling off the table is a nice touch.
Good job. :)

venom12 May 24th, 2011 5:18 AM

The maps are awesome? You didnt see awesome maps, the maps are empty, have mixed style etc they looks really bad.

NikNaks May 24th, 2011 6:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by venom12 (Post 6657289)
The maps are awesome? You didnt see awesome maps, the maps are empty, have mixed style etc they looks really bad.

I believe Fireworks was employing sarcasm there.

TheMarkCrafter May 24th, 2011 8:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireworks (Post 6657282)
Awesome! I love your maps, so full and professional!
And the Pokeballs falling off the table is a nice touch.
Good job. :)

Did you say to curry i have a crappy game? Then why the post?

Rai Rai May 24th, 2011 10:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6657531)
Did you say to curry i have a crappy game? Then why the post?

It's called sarcasm, meaning what they say is the opposite of what they mean.

TheMarkCrafter May 25th, 2011 8:03 AM

http://www.pokecommunity.com/customavatars/avatar250356_4.gif
New Mark's VS sprite! The game's OW will be to BW instead of HGSS if tebited15 finishes his Lucas sheet.

gsorby May 25th, 2011 1:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6649955)
@gsorby Well, how about your game Pokemon: The Nightmare? You stole the BAG, FIGHT, RUN, and POKEMON from O.G. Duke (omega groudon)'s Project "Pokemon Raptor"
And i have a new sprite for Lucas, it's made by this guy Tell me if it's good.
(pic at attachments)

Hypocrite. Just pure Hypocrite. How dare you say I stole something when: 1, I actually didn't they just look alike and 2) You claimed people were on your game team when they actually weren't, now that's sorta stealing. And listen, this was supposed to be constructive criticism. You not supposed to throw it back in my face and lash out at me ¬_¬ god some people...

ChaosLord May 25th, 2011 4:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireworks (Post 6657282)
Awesome! I love your maps, so full and professional!
And the Pokeballs falling off the table is a nice touch.
Good job. :)

You totally shouldn't have said that,he obviously doesn't know English well.A comment like that would just give him hope and more ignoring helpful posts.

And yeah KingSnivy,I've checked the game and the so called "new" screenshots that you posted.You probably won't understand this but,the "new" screens is just one added screenshot stacked upon the old ones who are still unchanged.The screenshot("New") is pretty much showing the event talking before you get the pokemon with bad mapping(Again.)

I really suggest you improve on your English before deciding to work on a game.I mean,come on! even Luka(Who apparently didn't know english well at first.) actually attempted to learn english and took into the constructive criticism.

(Of course,Luka obviously pretty much knew it at the right level at that time.KingSnivy's pretty lost in it,I pretty much like checking in this thread for the mistakes and ignoring he does.)

TheMarkCrafter May 27th, 2011 10:05 AM

Can someone lock this thread due to updating the whole game?

Cilerba May 29th, 2011 7:19 AM

Unlocking due to indecisive thread creator.

TheMarkCrafter May 29th, 2011 7:22 AM

And now guys, i have prepared a little thing.

http://i1084.photobucket.com/albums/j403/KingSnivy1/capture000.jpg
That's about the X-Transcriver thing i posted at Resource Center.
I'm not Gleer, that's just a simple Name-Type.

Miggs May 30th, 2011 5:14 AM

BigCorn Town? Can't you come up with a better Town name?

TheMarkCrafter May 30th, 2011 5:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miggs (Post 6667540)
BigCorn Town? Can't you come up with a better Town name?

Lol i ran outta ideas so i named it BigCorn Town. xD

zingzags May 30th, 2011 7:05 AM

Your maps are way too spaced out, just add a little more stuff in, or npc's like some pokemon or random people.

marcc5m May 30th, 2011 7:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Miggs (Post 6667540)
BigCorn Town? Can't you come up with a better Town name?

Personally I think BigCorn town is an amazing name. It reminds me of Green Giants and fat people happily eating sweetcorn, and farmers. Such an original and creative name.

Neo-Spriteman June 3rd, 2011 2:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6665973)
And now guys, i have prepared a little thing.

http://i1084.photobucket.com/albums/j403/KingSnivy1/capture000.jpg
That's about the X-Transcriver thing i posted at Resource Center.
I'm not Gleer, that's just a simple Name-Type.

Looks nice, dude. Keep it up.

And everyone else, please shut up about the maps. I'm remaking them on the 17th. So just bear with us.

TheMarkCrafter June 4th, 2011 9:10 AM

UPDATE!
Thanks 4 Neo-Spriteman cuz i added BW Tiles to the game!

ProdigyX June 4th, 2011 5:32 PM

Can you give us a pre-view?

TheMarkCrafter June 4th, 2011 11:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ProdigyX (Post 6677441)
Can you give us a pre-view?

http://i1084.photobucket.com/albums/j403/KingSnivy1/capture018.jpg
That's an example only.
Like it?
~KingSnivy

Neo-Spriteman June 5th, 2011 1:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6677821)
That's an example only.
Like it?
~KingSnivy

lolwut.


Just so you guys know, I'm confused as hell about if I'm the mapper or not D:
I didn't make that.

The maps will look something like this:

clickhereifyouwannalive

ChaosLord June 5th, 2011 7:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neo-Spriteman (Post 6677947)
lolwut.

Just so you guys know, I'm confused as hell about if I'm the mapper or not D:
I didn't make that.

The maps will look something like this:
clickhereifyouwannalive

That map you posted is what everybody wants to see.After looking at that map then back to King Snivy's,I keep on wondering and wondering if he's even doing anything to help with the project.

I mean,he obviously maps,events,and sprites a little but the maps are obviously messed up and empty(Which you have to fix.),events have confusing grammar(Someone fixes the grammar),and sprites from resources.

So is anyone actually on the team? because one,the first post containing info on the team isn't updated.And two,if Neo-Spriteman is on the team then where's the map he made? @King Snivy, Examples can show created maps you know,it doesn't have to be a quick placing of random tiles to show things off.

DarkDoom3000 June 5th, 2011 11:11 PM

This thread continues to be confusing.

That was a good map(neospriteman's one) Some of the paths are a bit small, but overall good.

Neo-Spriteman June 6th, 2011 12:25 PM

I am not helping you anymore. At first I felt sorry for you, but now that I'm reading more carefully, I see this:


Quote:

Originally Posted by KingSnivy (Post 6602030)
Archivements
Name: Poke-Kick
HowToGet: Kick a Caterpie at Sunring Town
Prize: Potion

Man, what the hell? You stole this from ME!
Click Here Skip to 1:50, and you'll see.

Man, no. Just no. Don't use the tiles I gave you. Get them yourself, jackass.
And, if I get banned, I get banned. So be it.

Man, I got a headache.


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