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Osha_say_wott?! May 1st, 2011 4:44 AM

A Quick Haiku
 
I can't find you, friend
Search and search, you're not around
I have lost... myself

TJgamer May 1st, 2011 5:47 AM

Very nice. Good work.
The pauses may be a flaw, but no huge deal.
Also, I just love haiku! I don't know why. I just do.

Skara May 2nd, 2011 5:45 AM

Brilliant.
The commas show how scared the narrator is, and talking to him/herself shows loneliness.
That's what I get from it anyway.


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